ROSID FF: Love of Souls Chapter 1 = Introduction Completed FF

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Friends,
Banu again with the 2nd FF on ROSID. Hope you all enjoying my 1st FF the ROSID The Love Journey and I seek your support always.

I request all silent viewers too to come with their valuable comments whether it is positive or negative.

This FF starts with the college days of ROSID. ROSID entering the same college.

We are going to see how this two strange college students meet each other & get into love and start their beautiful life together in this FF.

I seek my dear friend's comments to start this FF.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue banu excited for this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Banu, I am happy that you have started a new ff. My humble request is that you should prolonged each chapter and make it lengthy. In the first ff everything happened fast like love, marriage and children. I would suggest that in this new one, give some light twist and turns so that it will be interesting, rather then everything turn out smoothly perfect.
I am sorry if I have offended you as this is your ff, and you may do it your way, but anyways thanks for giving such lovely rosid ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srdevi

Banu, I am happy that you have started a new ff. My humble request is that you should prolonged each chapter and make it lengthy. In the first ff everything happened fast like love, marriage and children. I would suggest that in this new one, give some light twist and turns so that it will be interesting, rather then everything turn out smoothly perfect.
I am sorry if I have offended you as this is your ff, and you may do it your way, but anyways thanks for giving such lovely rosid ff.


Thanks Dear. Thanks for your valuable comments. I only requested for such comments which can make me understand the Viewers point of view.

Anyway that was my first FF & was thinking of giving it very smooth without much negativity. But i will make it sure that required twists will be there in this FF.

Also the flow of story will be slow as you said.

Thanks again for your comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Friends,
I request all other viewers of my ff also to provide your point of view to implement in this new FF.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Banu Thanks for 2nd ff I very much enjoyed the 1st ff and looking forward for the 2nd one. And I promise to give my honest opinion on it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey..very nice ...plz update it asap😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I liked your first ff very thank you so much for the love journey of ROSID i liked it very much. And i am sorry for not commenting early, but i read every chapter and i am looking forward to read your new ff and comment everytime honestly on them like i did on your previous ff
Waiting eagerly on your new ff.All the best Banu for your new ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Friends,

Thanks for all your comments & encouragement you gave for this new ff. I hope i will not upset you & try to meet your expectation. Lets see how this FF goes. Hope you all like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bharatwaj House. One of the big bunglow on that area in Delhi. Beautifully built & attracts the people. 3 Big cars were standing in its shed outside the bunglow & latest design motorbike as well.

Inside the house in the Sofa put on the Hall was the Old lady Nirmala Devi Bharatwaj. Nirmala Devi lost her husband when his son Rajendar was in school days. There was a Sweet shop owned by them which is one of the big sweet shop in the city which was since 3 generations and after her husband's unexpected death was taken care by Nirmala all alone with great difficulty until Rajendar taken the responsibility on him after finishing his studies. Nirmala Devi was still holding his grip on the family as well as the shop. Shop is now having 2 additional branches in the town.

Rajendar the only son of Nirmal devi who lost his father in his school days was under the control of his mother Nirmala devi have seen the difficulties faced by his mother after father's death. He respects his mother a lot & honours her each & every word.

Sujatha married to Rajendar was from normal middle class family & later fit to the Bharatwaj family is the only daughter-in-law of Nirmala Devi. Nirmala Devi sees her like her own daughter.

Sattu, Shailu, Prem & Siddhant are four sons of Rajendar & Sujatha.

Sattu & Shailu are married to Uma & Pari. Sattu & Shailu take care of the 2 branches of the Sweet shop.

Prem who just completed his degree this year was told by Rajendar to take care of the Sweet shop together with him until he get the grip of the business. Prem goes with Rajendar to the Sweet shop daily and starts learning the business. Mataji has idea to arrange for Prem's marriage to some family girl.

Siddhant who is the last son of the family is favorite to all the family members and just entering the college now. He is stylish and take it easy boy. Siddhant is not aware of any of the pains or difficulties of life which is never seen or felt by him. Siddhant gets all the things he wants from the family being last son.

Today is Siddhant's first day to his college. Rajendar have presented the latest model bike to Siddhant which was standing outside the bunglow. Siddhant was eager to drive the bike for 1st time which he planned to take to his 1st day of college.

Siddhant was getting ready to go to college in his room. He was looking fair & stylish with his Blue color Jeans & Black color stylish Tshift.

Siddhant got ready & was getting down from the stairs with a small notebook on hand with which he was playing while getting down.

Mataji: Sujatha, Siddhant got ready for college & going to college for 1st day. Give his Dhahi & Shakkar.

Sujatha: Yes. Mataji.

Sujatha went to kitchen & brought the same in a cup & came near Siddhant.

Siddhant: Maaji, What is this old believes? I dont have faith in all these.

Sujatha: Dont tell like that Siddhant. These are all believes from ages & you should not deny that.

Siddhant: Ok. I will take this for you eventhough i dont believe in all these.

Sujatha gave the Dhahi & Shakkar in a spoon to Siddhant.

Sujatha: Take blessings of Mataji.

Siddhant took blessings of Mataji, Rajendar & Sujatha.

Siddhant rushing towards his new latest model bike & started it.

Siddhant felt like achieving something by getting this new bike & started his journey towards his college.

Siddhant was driving very rash & reached College in minimum minutes and entered the gate of the college...
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