ROSID FF: The Love Journey Chapter 1 = Love at First sight

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Friends!
I am not great FF writer. Just trying to write this. Please provide your valuable comments.

Situation:
Bharatwaj family has come to Simar & Roli house with Sid & Prem for seeing Simar for Sid. All reached Simar's house 1 fine day evening and they were offered with sweets & snacks. SID eyes was searching for Simar here & there. Simar & Roli were in the next room and Roli being enthu girl was trying to see the Boy through the windows. At the same time, SID eyes too noticed the windows where Roli was standing and he mistook Roli as the Girl.

Simar's parents took Simar to hall where Roli too came with her. Both were dressed up very well and came together. Till SID was mistaking Roli only as the Girl. Similarly, Prem saw Simar & was just got attract immediately by Simar. Prem saw SID who was seeing Roli only & hence prem thought Simar as sister of the Girl.

Love initiated in both SID & Prem heart for Roli & Simar whereas both their families were talking on marriage between SID & Simar. ,,,

Please provide your comments to continue.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really nice start plz continue and promise us next part is very long
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BW family return home & was discussing about. Simar. They asked sid whether he likes the girl. Sid said "yes". The whole family was very happy. They called simar family & gave their acceptance. Simar family who already decided to accept this being good family, also gave their acceptance.

Both family members were happy. They called pundit to fix date of engagement. The day fixed the immediate Sunday.

All were busy in purchases & arrangement of function. Sid & prem were in their own dream world.

The day came and all gathered to celebrate. Mataji & sujatha gave the new saree which they purchased for simar & she was very happy.

The time came to put rings on figures where sid&prem both shocked on seeing simar as bride.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheetal1979

its really nice start plz continue and promise us next part is very long



Dear

I will make small small updates then & there which will make you interesting. Pardon me as posting from mobile.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really like it 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sid&prem got shocked as well as simar & roli. They too were thinking prem as boy as sid & prem were sitting together prem was looking at simar.

The family members wonder why all 4 looking shocked. They insist sid to put ring on sim fingers

Sid & prem looked at each other. Sid after few mins of thinking came with some decision.

Sid moved towards roli, took her finger and put the ring.

All were shocked other than prem & sim.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dear i really like it 😃 thanx for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow superb going.
Continue soon.
Pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All the family members were shocked seeing this. Roli was not expecting this as she got no idea of her marriage this time. She was only excited for Simar. But in some corner she was happy that Simar is not engaged with Sid instead of Prem as she was aware that Simar loves Prem.
Mataji got very angry on Sid and asked "Sid! How dare you can do this? We never expect this from you. How can you put ring in Roli's fingers when you are getting engaged with Simar"

Sid Replied "No Mataji. I have not done anything wrong. There is some misunderstand here. I saw Roli only on that day & was interpretting her as the girl. I never seen Simar with love and can never accept her as my love"

Mataji said " No Sid. Simar is elder to Roli and how come you can imagine Roli as the girl instead of Simar"

Sid said " i never know who is elder or who is younger. I only know that i loved Roli only on my first sight and can accept Roli only as my wife. I cannot imagine anyone in that place."

Mataji was unable to digest this and was not able to face Simar & Roli family because of Sid act.
She asked pardon to thier family. Mataji went to Simar & said " I am sorry Simar. We never know about this misunderstand of Roli in your place by Sid. I know it has hurt you a lot. Pardon me"

Simar said " No Mataji. You are elder and you should not ask pardon to us. It is ok if Sidji like Roli and wants to marry her. I do not mind."

Mataji got tears in her eyes on Simar reply and turned towards Prem " Prem i want to talk to you"

Prem & Mataji went to a room and started their conversation.

Mataji : "Prem you are aware of all that happend. I cannot see Simar hurt. Can you do a favor for me. Can you marry Simar. If you are ready, we can do the engagement of you both today and can arrange Marriage also together. I cannot compel you for this. But need your opinion on acceptance"

Prem was very happy on hearing Mataji. But he hide his happiness a bit and replied " Mataji, you are elder to all of us and we believe your decision will be correct. I am ready to do as you wish. You can proceed with this"

Mataji was very happy and with broad smile on her face took Prem to hall where everyone was eagerly waiting to know what is going on.

Mataji went to Simar directly & asked " Simar are you interested to join hands with our Prem"

Simar was extremely shocked by this question and nod her head as acceptance.

Prem put the ring on Simar's fingures and everybody were happy that both the marriage got through at same time without any misunderstands anymore.

Sid and prem smiled at each other. Simar was also very happy on getting her dream come true. But Roli the one who was not having any marriage idea till now for in little shock and looked at Sid with puzzle on her face.

Sid understood the state of mind of Roli and told her " Roli! I know your mind. I can understand this was not expected by you. It is even my mistake that i loved you on my first sight instead of Simar and put ring on your fingures without your confirmation on acceptance. I am Sorry"

Roli replied " Yes i was shocked. But Simar di too was under impression that Prem was the boy and on seeing you we too were shocked. So i am happy only now that my Sister's love is protected. Otherwise both will be unhappy. I only need some time from you to ready my mind & heart for this relationship as husband & wife as I got no idea so near."

Sid said " I am sure will give you enough time and will wait for your acceptance of this relation."

Both smiled at each other...

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