NEW SSK FF ON ROLI-VEERU TRACK PART 2 UPDATED * COMPLETED*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI ALL. MY NAME IS SHILPA. I WAS ACTIVE IN SSK FORUM BEFORE JHANAVI'S ENTRY IN MY OLD USERNAME SINAM1KANA.
AFTER THAT I LEFT THIS FORUM, AS I COULDN'T TOLERATE ROSID'S SUFFERING ALOT.
MY REASON WON'T BE VALID. BUT STILL I AM A ROSID FAN.
I HAVE WRITTEN THIS FF LONG BACK AND I FORGOT ABOUT IT.
THAT THREAD GOT CLOSED.
SO I AM POSTING IT AGAIN.
IF ALL LIKE IT, WANT TO READ MORE , I WILL CONTINUE IT.
PLEASE SHARE YOUR OPINIONS.
FOR PMS BUDDY ME AND LEAVE A COMMENT.

INDEX:
PART 1: below
PART 2: CLICK HERE (LAST PART)
PART 1:
Its starts with roli saying I love u to veeru, infront of bharadwaj parivaar and sid just enters the house.
After hearing this, he drops his bag.
With tat sound, everyone turns around.
They are shocked to see sid.
Veeru puts his hand on roli's shoulder.
Roli is uncomfortable but she cannt remove in front of any1.
Sid literally shatters.
He sees roli z uncomfortable.
Uma and pari taunts by saying roli tat u said u want money and 4 tat u go behind any1.No shame na.
Mataji, who is in shock, says tat v r leaving the house immediately and simar call ur parents nw.
Let them take roli, til she get divorce frm court, she belongs to our family. Til then she cnt stay with another man and nt even with us.
Simar, tries to say something, but veeru says, "mataji , how dare you? Roli dekh na, bcoz of u they are staying here for one week, and they dont show the courtesy to you. They are trying to separate u and me? U tried to do good things for them and nw i wnt let them stay here. I wil do anything to get my roli."
Saying so, he catches mataji's neck.
Sid shouts and give a punch to veeru.
They start fighting , prem and sankalp help sid.
So, veeru gets his goons.
Roli stops veeru.
She says, "tat no one can separate us. Let mataji cl my parents. Wat wil hpn nothing? After hearing this, sid breaks down more." Roli takes veeru inside.
Meanwhile, uma and pari calls sim's parents. They ask them to come to delhi.
They wnt say anything else.
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Next scene, sid standing alone in terrace thinking of roli.
He finds sim and mano waiting for sme1 on the road.
Sid sees sme1 coming there.
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Next scene, roli and veeru in his room.
He asks roli, y did she stopped him frm fighting wit sid?
She says, "its unnecessary. Anyways they are going to leave the home na. Veeru i have doubt, for me u throwed khushi and in future, wat is gurantee tat u wnt throw me for another girl? At tat tym, i wnt be urs, sid's or rahul. Bcoz of u i broke up with rahul. And also, i took divorce with sid. And in future, he'll nt accept me. So, wat wil hpn to me? Veeru says no roli, i wnt do lyk tat. Roli says hw cn i trust u?".
Veeru says, "wat should i do to make u believe?".
Roli says,"no, u wnt do it."
Veeru says, "say me wat ever u want? My life..".
Roli says, "kk i dnt want ur lyf, i just want ur property to be mine, so tat in future even if u betray me , i wil hv sme security."
Veeru doubts her .
He says,"ur behaving as if u want to only property and u dnt love me."
She says,"ya ofcourse, i want only property. I agreed to be wit u only 4 property. If u wnt give d property. I wil go back to sid."
Veeru says,"no roli😲 I wil give u d property. I want u to be with me. For tat i'l do anything."
He takes the property papers and signs it.
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Next scene, mano and sim tries to tel d truth to every1.
But no one listens. They move out.
Veeru and roli comes down. Roli signals sim and mano tat everything is done.
Meanwhile, rosim's parents arrive.
They are shockd to see bw family in poverty and to leaving the house.
Sid is nowhere to be seen.
Sim's dad greets mataji and asks y they are lyk this and wer are they going?
Mataji(😡 )says,"aap hamare baat chodiye aur apke beti roli ki zimedari aapka hoga. Matlaab hai ki ab roli aur bw parivaar ko kohi rishta nahi."
Sim's father: kya hua mataji aap aise kaise keha sakte ? Roli ne kya kiya?
Pari: aap ye sawal mataji ko kyun pochte hai. Apke beti ko puchiye.
Veeru shouts at bw parivaar for talking abt roli.
He immediately goes to rosim's parents and introduces himself as their son in law.
Sim's father slaps him.
Veeru shouts back at him, saying how dare u?
Roli stops veeru, saying he is her father.
veeru asks, "so what? U left every1 for me na, th y r u stoppin?"
Roli couldnt answer.
Roli was waiting for the call of the lawyer.Roli doesnt wat to do?
She texts sim tat lawyer didnt call yet so she dont knw whether the registration of the property is done r nt.
Sim's father shouts at roli asking her wat is happening there?
He goes to slap her.
Nw veeru stops him and about to hit him when roli catches his hand.
She couldnt control anymore.
She asks,"how dare u to raise ur hand on my dad? Nw , i cnt handle anymre. Get out of my house veeru."
Everyone shocked .
She says, "u urself wrote this property in my name. Dnt remember. I was lying to u. I am nt gonna marry u."
Veeru says,"i knw u 'l do lyk this one day, so i'm in my plan. U gave d papers to lawyer na. Call him and find out whether he has registered d property or nt."
Roli shocked.
She immediately calls him, but number is switched off.
Veeru calls his goons.
All the people their got house arrestd except roli. Bw men try to fight but couldnt. Veeru arranges for the marriage. He threatens roli saying that he'l kil her family.
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Wat happens next? Catch in my next update.
PLEASE LIKE AND COMMENT.
SHOULD I CONTIUE?


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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome back🤗its really nice i hope our hero save our angel pls continue soon 😳
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Originally posted by: visanmathi

welcome back🤗its really nice i hope our hero save our angel pls continue soon 😳


THANKS. WILL CONTINUE SOON.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all wellcome here again 🤗 maybe we know each other maybe not. I cant remember, anyway I am Vildana. But here everyone call me Vildu.
And yes sure, you continue,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome back yaar...Nice update 👍🏼 Hope sid will save her...Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Shilpa m harry nice to see u againa 😊 Nd I loved ur story pls keep continues 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice dear plz to continue...😃
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Hi all,
here is the second part.
please read and leave your comments.

Part 2:
All the people their got house arrestd except roli. Bw men try to fight but couldnt. Veeru arranges for the marriage. He threatens roli saying that he'l kil her family.
He drags her to mandap and pandit starts the rituals.
When they started pheras, sid entered with police.
He asks the police to arrest the goons.
Veeru shouts at sid.
He asks,"siddhant, how dare you? since you came to this level of arresting me, you all leave my home immediately."
Sid: what? your house? whose said its your house.it is roli's. so, you leave from here.
veeru gives a evil laugh.
Veeru: sid, i already said and i am saying again. yes, i signed the papers, but i have not registered it.
Flashback:
when roli asked veeru to name the property in her name, he signed it.
when roli went to meet simar and mausi, veeru saw them and realised their plan.
so, he changes the paper.
roli,after that,came and gave the paper to lawyer to register it.
flashback ends

veeru: so, roli and siddhant, she didn't give the papers to lawyer.
saying this, he takes the papers from his pocket and shows it to roli.
surprising everyone, siddhant starts laughing.
sid: veeru, veeru, veeru... kitna bewakoof ho tum. check the papers.
veeru checks the papers.
He checks the papers and realizes that it is not property papers.
Then, sid takes some papers from his pocket and shows to everyone.
Sid: veeru, ye hai asli property papers.when roli, mausi aur simar ne mila mein terrace se un thinone dekha. meine tumko bhi dekha aur mujhe shak hua ki tum kya karoga. isliya mein tumara picha kiya. tum papers badlna dekhkar, meine papers tum se papers badal liya. aur register karne ke liye gaya.
sid: now, officially this house belongs to Ms. roli diwedi.
roli: no, siddhantji, its Mrs. Roli bharadwaj. i didn't submit the divorce papers to court. and also, I tore those papers.
Veeru: roli, siddhant how dare you? i won't allow you to live.
he take a gun and aims at rosid, but suddenly some one shoots him.
When they see who is it, they are shocked. it is none other than khushi.
Khushi: all of you, please forgive me. i did so many things to your family but everytime you forgave me. I came here to take revenge from your family. Before dieing, my sister called me and said simar's name before she spoke further she died. So,I thought you killed her. i am sorry for misunderstanding. today, i came to know about the truth from my sister's friend. please forgive me.
All the bharadwaj members, knowing the truth forgave her.
then, khushi gets arrested and gets prisoned for 5 years.
Rosid remarries.
After 5 years,
Khushi gets realesed, bw members accept her. In these five years, premar adopted a girl and a boy, who are 3 and 2 years respectively and they also have anjali.
Pari has a daughter named muskaan who is now 1 year old.
Uma's son came back from hostel and stays with them.
Roli completed her studies and started a business along with other ladies in the family. It is a restraunt under daduji's groups of businness.
And, Roli is 3 months pregnant.
And all, bw men establishes their business in foreign coutries.
Khushi is completely changed and is a good person.
She takes care of everyone now.
Mataji is now happy for giving khushi another chance.
So, mataji, mausiji leaves for pilgrims.
so, all in all, everyone happy.
***********************THE END******************************
Please leave your comments. I'll start new story soon.
Till then bye.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it, although ending was rushed...
overall good story ...👍🏼
awesome...
waiting for your next story
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara1990

loved it, although ending was rushed...

overall good story ...👍🏼
awesome...
waiting for your next story
thanks for the PM


thanks
i rushed it because i gave the name roli-veeru track.
i thought of writing a new story.
if you have any concept or storyline for my next story, please suggest i will start the story with it.

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