premar & rosid ff 'DESTINY' part 8 updt - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
i havent read the last part before, but i like it ...
and you should definitly continue this ff
i like this sid😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
i liked ur ff please continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago
do continue ur ff yaar really missed it 😊
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its superb plss continue dont stop.. we also lyk it...
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Anu and Radhu... Please do continue ur ff.. I like it so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks all of you. You guys support me. So here is the next part.

Part 4

Sim: you broke my belief. I believe that you are very strong. You are very brave but you...you are unable to express your feelings also? I thought I am your best friend and you will share with me everything and you hide such a big matter from me. I didn't expected this from you prem, I didn't.

Prem: then...let me do it now.

He goes on knees.

Prem: I love you simar. Will you marry me?

Sim: Yes Prem I will marry you and I love you too Prem.

Prem: Really????? I am not in any dream naa!!!!!!!

Simar pinch him.

Prem: aauuch!!!!

Sim: you are not at all in any dream...

Prem: I am so happy... so...so...so happy simar.

Simar blushes.

Prem: simar you know I was waiting for this moment from a long time.

Sim: I know it.

Prem: how?

Sim: that's a secret. but I have one problem...

Prem: what?

Sim: Prem my father doesn't like this all. And he will...

Prem: don't worry simar we will think about it later on. You only say that you love me naa?

Sim: yes.

Prem: so there will be no problem.

Sim: but...

Prem:

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

Coming close, he holds her hand.

tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

When you're with me, what use have I forthe world?

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa

May your love annihilate me.

Simar smiles.

Sim:

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

He kisses her hand.

tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

When you're with me, what use have I forthe world?

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa

May your love annihilate me!

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

Prem:

tere dil mein meri saanson ko panaah miljaaye

May my sighs find a shelter in your heart;

tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye

may your love annihilate my life.

jitne paas hai khushbu saans ke

As close as fragrance is to breath,

jitne paas honthon ke sargam

as close as melody is to lips,

jaise saath hai karwat yaad ke

as close as the twists and turns of thought,

jaise saath baahon ke sangam

as close as arms entwined,

jitne paas paas khwaabon ke nazar

as close to me as my dreams,

utne paas tu rahana hamsafar

stay that close to me, my life's companion.

Simar:

Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

When you're tu with me, what use have I forthe world?

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa

May your love annihilate me.

Prem:

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

Sim leaves his hand and w+as about to go w+hen prem holds her hand and drags her to him.

Prem:

jitne paas paas dharkan ke hai raaz

As close as my secrets are to my heart,

jitne paas buundon ke baadal

as close as raindrops are to the clouds,

jaise saath saath chanda ke hai raat

as close as the moon is to the night,

jitne paas nazaron ke kaajal

as close as kohl is to the eyes,

jitne paas paas saagar ke lahar

as close as the waves are to the sea,

utne paas tu rahana hamsafar

stay that close to me, my life's companion.

tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

When you're with me, what use have I forthe world?

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa

May your love annihilate me.

Simar:(keeping her one hand around his shoulder and holding his hand w+ith the other)
mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

adhuuri saans thi

My breath was incomplete;

dharkan adhuuri thi

my heartbeat was incomplete;

adhuure ham

I was incomplete.

(Showing prem the moon.)
magar ab chaand puura hai falak pe

But now the moon is full in the sky,

aur ab puure hain ham

and we are made whole.

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

mere haath mein tera haath ho

When my hand is in yours,

saari jannatein mere saath ho

all of paradise is mine.

tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan

When you're with me, what use have I forthe world?

tere pyaar mein ho jaayuun fanaa

May your love annihilate me.

Both hugs each other tightly.

****************************************************

Kolkata guest house

Siddhant is sitting at the lawn and reading some file. Roli comes.

Roli: what are you doing?

Sid: can't you see? I am working.

Roli: but we just came from work.

Sid: so?

Roli: so... you come with me and show me Kolkata.

Sid: we haven't come for picnic.

Roli: I know. But I want to see this place.

Sid: (getting up) I don't have time.

Roli: siddhant... do you know? How to swim?

Sid: why?

Roli: because... I am going to push you to the water.

She pushes him and he falls on the swimming pool. Sid starts shouting for help.

Sid: you crazy girl. What have you done? Save me...

Roli: shut! You don't know swimming!!!!!

After a little confusion Roli jumps to the pool. And she starts drowning.

Roli: help! Help!

Sid looks this and takes her out from the pool.

Sid: you are really crazy. If you don't know swimming then why did you jump to the pool?

Roli: if you know how to swim then why were you acting?

Sid: I was just kidding.

Roli: kidding? What do you mean by kidding? Listen siddhant. For your this attitude naa... A day will come when your life will be a joke. You never understand other feelings. You always underestimate others. You...

Sid: one second! One second! Why are you lecturing me like this? It was just a joke. What's a big deal?

Roli: of course it's a big deal. Do you like to play with others feeling? I know you don't like girls that don't mean that you will...

Sid: I didn't tell you to jump for me. You did it at your wish. And now you are blaming me. Why?

Roli: you are just unbelievable. I am with you so long and you even don't realize that I love you.

Roli realizes what she said now and leaves from there leaving Siddhant in a state of shock as well as confusion.

Rosid are in car. Sid w+hile recalling the moment w+hen roli said I love u:

Sochenge Tumhe Pyaar Karein Ke Nahin

i will think whether to love you or not
ye Dil Beqaraar Karein Ke Nahin whether to leave my heart
Roli recalling all the moments she spend with siddhant:

yaadon Mein Basaaya Tumko, Khwaabon Mein Chhupaaya Tumko

I have resided you in my memories...& hid you in my dreams or fantasies
miloge Hamein Tum Jaanam, Kahin Na Kahin

you will meet me dear somewhere... or other place
Sid's eyes automatically goes to the car mirror w+here roli's face was visible :

sochenge Tumhe Pyaar Karein Ke Nahin
i will think whether to love you or not
jis Din Tum Ko Dekhegi Nazar
jaane Dil Pe Hoga Kya Asar

The day when i get to see you
dunno what impact or affect will it have on my heart
Roli looking to the mirror realizing sid looking at her :

rakhenge Tumko Nigaahon Meikn, Bhar Lenge Tumhe Baahon Mein

I can pierce myself & store you, and fill you in my arms
Sid, when roli's hair flows by air and falls on his face and roli adjusts :

zulfon Ko Ham Suljhayenge, Ishq Mein Duniya Bhula Denge

I will resolve your hairs...n forget the world in love
Roli with a mixed expression:

Ye Beqaraari Ab To, Hogi Na Kum, Hogi Na Kum

And this desire will not get reduced, will not get reduced
Sid:
sochenge Tumhe Pyaar Karein Ke Nahin...

i will think whether to love you or not...

****************************************************

Next day, morning.

Simar is on her way to the market in an auto when suddenly Prem enters while the auto was on the traffic.

Sim: Prem!!!!!!

Prem: hi!!!

Sim: what are you doing here?

Prem: came to give you company.

Sim: but I don't need

Prem: but I want to give. Now leave this auto and come with me.

Sim: but...

Prem: not a single word.

He gives money to the auto driver and drag simar with him.

chashme badur mere yaar,ho gaya mein bekarar (2)
My beautiful friend, I have become restless,
pyaar mein tere tere tere (4)
In your love.

simar leaving him walks on the road and borrows a taxi but the taxi driver is Prem.

Dil se na jana door
Don't go away from my heart
kar ke dil ko majboor
Making my heart weak
Simar sees and gets surprised she then tell to stop the taxi and again walks on the road.

chasme badoor ho gaya,dil choor choor
Beautiful, my heart is in pieces.
Pyar mein tere tere tere (4)
In your love

Simar goes to a flower shop and ask for white roses. the seller gives her red roses she looks at him and finds prem. She leaves from there.

chasme badoor tera yaar, ho gaya hai bekara.
Beautiful, your friend is restless.
pyar mein mere (4)
In my love.

She smiles. simar then sits on a bench aside the road Prem comes and sit near her.

Din raat meri aakhon mein kya hai, kya hai, kya hai, kya hai?
What's in my eyes, day and night?

ek chehra ek chehra ek chehra tera chehra.
a face, a face, a face, your face.

Sim: why are you following me?

Prem: where, where Simar there, there Prem.


har waqt meri dhadkan mein kya hai, kya hai, kya hai, kya hai?
What's in my heart-beat all the time?
ek pehra ek pehra ek pehra tera pehra
a presence, a presence, a presence, your presence.

Simar is waiting in the bus stop. Prem comes following her. She picks the Bus followed by Prem.

meri duniya ke noor, chahoo tujko bharpoor.
Light of my world, I totally love you.

Conductor scolds them because they have no tickets w+ith them and drops them at the next stoppage.

Prem: why didn't you tell me that you have no tickets?

Sim: travelling without tickets gives a unique pleasure.

chasme badoor ho gaya, choor choor choor
Beautiful, I'm in pieces.
pyar mein tere, tere, tere (2)
In your love.

Both then laugh.

****************************************************

Roli calls one of her friend.

Roli: Geeta. Can you find a job for me?

Geeta: what? Job. Roli you are working in Bhardwaj industries naa?

Roli: yes.

Geeta: you want to resign it? People die to work there. And you are leaving such an opportunity.

Roli: ya I know but I have some personal problems. Please help me.

Geeta: ok. I will talk to my Boss.

Sid reaches Bhardwaj house.

Sujata: Get fresh Siddhant beta breakfast is ready.

Presid Room

Prem is chatting with his sister Janvi.

Prem: do you know what happened yesterday?

Janvi: what?

Prem: I was with simar and she danced with me.

Janvi: but how, when?

Prem: thanks to my diary. Simar got it and knew everything.

Janvi: what happened next?

Prem: then I proposed her and she says yes to me.

Janvi: Really it's good news.

Prem: yes and you know today also I enjoyed a lot with her, in fact we travel in a bus without tickets.

Janvi: oh God! Prem bhaiya. You travel in bus without tickets.

Prem: yes. First time I have feel such experience.

Both were laughing when Sid enters.

Prem: look sid too came. Come come I am talking with janvi.

Prem gets a call so he leaves.

Sid: hey sis!!!

Janvi: what happened? You look tense.

Sid: I knew you will know. I need your help.

Janvi: I am always there. Tell me what happened?

Siddhant tells her everything, what happened at Kolkata.

Janvi: so... now you are in confusion

Sid: exactly.

Janvi: listen. You don't like girls. And she knows it. Then also she loves you. From this you should know, how brave she is. She dared to love a young angry man like you. And whatever you said about her I think you should give her a chance.

Sid: I didn't get you.

Janvi: I mean to say. Don't ask me or anyone else just asks your heart that she is of your choice or not.

Sid: but janvi... How can she be my choice as I...

Both: Hate girls.

Janvi: I know you don't like girls this doesn't means that you hate girls. She jumped to the pool for saving your life even if she doesn't know swimming what more you want from her to prove her love. Believe me she is the one made for you.

Prem arrives.

Prem: what are you talking about?

Janvi: actually we were...

Sid: talking about you.

Prem: me?? What?

Sid: that you are very bad. You are being naughty day by day. And you...

Prem: what a liar you are? In fact you are being bad now a day. You started scolding me more and you slap me at night.

Sid: that's because you...

Janvi: k stop stop! Stop fighting otherwise I will go.

Presid: sorry! Sorry! We will not fight again.

****************************************************
Next morning

Siddhant is at office. He enters his cabin and looks at the letter kept on his table. He opened it and shocked to see Roli's resignation letter. An employee enters and informs him about his new PA.

Sid at the deal

Dealer: can we see the presentation once?

Sid: ya of course. My secretary Roli will explain you.

Sec: sir, I am Rosy not Roli.

Sid: oh Ya! Confusion in name. Rosy of course!!

Siddhant working at some files when the lunch time alarm rings he looks at the clock and remembers the first day of Roli at his office and forcing him to take lunch with her. He smiles recalling all and then gets his senses back.

Sid: what's happening to me? Why am I thinking of her every time? Why is she coming in front of me even if she is not here?

Roli is working at her new office. Someone comes and stand beside her. She looks and find Sid.

Roli: you? What are you doing here?

Sid: I have come to take my PA back to my office.

Roli: excuse me! I think I have resigned.

Sid takes out the resignation letter and tears it.

Sid: I don't have any resignation letter. So you are now also my PA.

Roli angrily walks outside. Sid follows her.

Sid: Roli stop! Listen to me once.

Roli: I don't want to listen anything better you leave from here.

Sid: Roli till today I was running far from girls but today I am running behind a girl. Don't you want to know why?

She stares at him.

Sid: there are only three women in my life whom I love and the rest in the world I hate all. But today I realized they are not three but four whom I love the most in the world. My mom, Grand mom, my sis and...

Roli: and????

Sid: and... you...

Roli: what? What did you said? Say again.

Sid: I ...i...

Roli: you what?

Sid: be patient yaar. Saying first time in my life.

Roli smiles.

Sid: i... I love you. I don't know how, when, where, but I love you. And will love till the end of my life.

Tears start rolling from Roli's eyes.

Sid: why are you crying?

Roli: this time you are not kidding naa?

Sid: seriously... may be.

Roli: what? If you are kidding naa... you don't know me.

She starts going angrily. She hears sid's voice.

saanvaalii sii ek laRkii

she turns to him

There's a girl who is golden as wheat;

saanvaalii sii ek laRkii dhaRkan jaisii dil kii...

she starts moving again.

there's a girl who is golden as wheat, who is like my heartbeat...

dekhke jiske vo sapne kahii.n voh mai.n to nahii.n

she waves her hand saying no.

her dreams couldn't be of me, could they?

saanvaalii sii ek laRkii dhaRkan jaisii dil kii

There's a girl who is golden as wheat;

dekhke jiske vo sapne kahii.n voh mai.n to nahii.n

he starts following her

her dreams couldn't be of me, could they?

saanwaalii sii ek laRkii

Caressing her hair. He says:

There's a girl who is golden as wheat;

uskii ghanii zulfo.n me.n kiskii taqdiir hai

looking at her beautiful eyes.

someone's destiny lies in her thick tresses of hair,

uskii hasiin aa.nkho.n me.n kiskii tasviir hai

pushing him she leaves

someone's picture is held in her beautiful eyes.

aata nahii.n mujhko yaqiin par kahii.n voh mai.n to nahii.n

I don't know for sure, but it couldn't be mine, could it?

saanvaalii sii ek laRkii

Roli looks back and not finding Sid, she looks here and there, when he comes.

There's a girl who is golden as wheat.

yahaa.n vahaa.n kahaa.n kahaa.n jaane ruktii hai uskii nazar

Here, there, who knows where her gaze rests!

vaise to mai.n huu.n bekhabar itnii to mujhko khabar

She again moves far from him.

I'm clueless, but I know this much:

koii bhii hai hai voh hai yahii.n

whoever he is, he's here;

par kahii.n voh mai.n to nahii.n

it couldn't be me, could it?

saa.nvaalii sii ek laRkii dhaRkan jaisii dil kii

there's a girl who is golden as wheat, who is like my heartbeat...

dekhke jiske vo sapne kahii.n voh mai.n to nahii.n

Roli vanishes from Sid's eyes so he becomes tense and searches here and there, then she comes from behind and keeps her hand on his shoulder.

her dreams couldn't be of me, could they?

saa.nvaalii sii ek laRkii dhaRkan jaisii dil kii

There's a girl who is golden as wheat;

dekhke jiske vo sapne kahii.n voh mai.n to nahii.n...

her dreams couldn't be of me, could they?

kahii.n voh mai.n to nahii.n

It couldn't be me, could it?

Nodding her head in yes she hugs him.

To be continued...

Hope you all like it...


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Posted: 11 years ago
im the fist awesome awesome dear super both premar and rosid scenes
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u so much anu and radhu for continuing the ff😃

About the update, wow outstanding...i cant believe angry man sid loves roli 😳 i loved everything in thie update...and premar r in love...waiting 4 ur next update...
Edited by rosidsakthi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
glad that you have decide to continue
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm

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