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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritujohn

pls continue soon dear

yes dear. Will try my best.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks fr pm .,sorry fr late reply.u explaind so good..vry nice part this is..waitng fr rosid romantic frst ni8
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anamika waiting for ur update pls update it soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasuresh

waiting 4r the next part

thnx. Will try 2 update it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nityagor

Thanks fr pm .,sorry fr late reply.u explaind so good..vry nice part this is..waitng fr rosid romantic frst ni8

ah thnx 2 u 2. Wil try 2 update son.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitralekha1990

Anamika waiting for ur update pls update it soon.

will try 2 update soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 19

THE MARRIAGE RITUALS COMPLETED PEACEFULLY. ROSID AND PREMAR TOOK THEIR ELDERS BLESSINGS. MATAJI THEN TELL JAMNALAL THAT THEY HV 2 LEAVE NOW. AND JAMNALLA UNDERSTOOD THAT MATAJI IS TELLING 4 ROSIM BIDAAI. HE THEN INFRMS MEENA AND BUAJI. THEY BOTH GOES 2 PREMAR AND ROSID AND THEY TAKE ROSIM WID THEM. SID LOOK CONFUSED.

Sid: aan prem we r married no right?

Prem: right

Sid: then y dey r taking our wives wid them?

Prem: I dnt knw perhaps they ll keep them here today.

Sid: wht?

Prem: ya perhaps..

Sankalp,sailu and sattu came near them. And laughs.

Prem: why r u laughing bhaiya?

Sailu: coz u r fools.

Sid: wht we r fools?

Sattu: yes. U stupids they r taking ur wives 2 complete the bidaai rasham so that they can leave their maayka and starts a new life in sasural.

Presid: oh!

Sailu: and they ll cry also.

Sid: they ll cry why? Now we became their husband frm lovers and why ll they cry?

Prem: they love us.

Sailu: oh god u r really fools. They ll cry coz they ll leave their maayka. Hvnt u saw in tv serials how the brides cry while their bidaai.

Presid: ofcourse we hv seen it.

Sid: it means roli ll also cry..(thinking)

Rosim then comes they completes the bidaai rituals. Rosim were trying 2 control their emotions but they cnt. They cried hugging their mother. Then they goes 2 buaji and cried a lot. Jamnalal come 2 break d hug. He does it but his daughters hugged him so tightly and cried he also cant control now and cried. After all his daughters r now going leaving him whom he has save frm all hurdles. He is confirm that his son in law ll also protect his daughter bt a father is a father na. he then break d hugs. Rosim were searching someone. Jamnalal say rahul has already gone and he take rosim 2 presid. He keep sim's han on prem and roli's hand on sid and then folded his hand wid a namaskar as if saying 2 keep his daughters safe and happy. Mataji tells him nt 2 worry as his daughters wil treated as daughter instead daughter in laws. Rosid and premar then goes 2 d car. They sit inside. The car starts moving. Rosim looking through d window 2 their parents whom they r leaving. Roli is constantly looking and thinking that this was my maayka where I hv every rights 2 do wht ever I wanted bt how is my sasural whether I can adjust wid them or not? Will I b able 2 make all happy or not? This all thinking r moving in her mind when she feel someone hand on her. She saw him and smile. And again she thinks. Yes my siddhantji. My siddhantji is wid me.in every moment he ll support me.

Sid: roli I knw wht going on ur mind bt u dnt worry I m wid u na.

Roli: I knw siddhantji. U ll always b wid me and forever also.

Both then smiles. Car is moving so speed. After a while it reaches d bhardwaj house.

Sid: roli. Come.

Roli: where?

Sid: (smiling) roli we hv reached.

Roli look around

Roli: hmm.

Sid knw wht she is feeling and he hold roli's hand and take out her frm d car.

Both couples goes and stands at the entrance of the bw house. Sujata welcome her daughter in law wid a aarti. Rosim enters their sasural.

Mataji: pari uma u take rosim 2 their rooms.

Uma: mataji they hv 2 play d game.

Mataji: oh yes.

Rosim look at presid and they smiles looking at rosim.

Uma: roli,simar u hv 2 play a game.

Rosim shook their head.

Pari: look u hv 2 win d game if u want 2 spend 2 days night wid ur husbands'.

Rosim look surprise hearing it'..

Uma: yes and if u ll loose it then'

Pari: then u and ur husband cant see each other face till morning.

Presid: wht?

Uma: yes devarji..

Prem: no bhabi its nt fair.

Pari: mmhmm. It depends on ur wives. Wht they want?

Rosim: aan can we say something?

Mataji: tell beta u hv d rights.

Sim: mataji we dnt want 2 play d game.

Uma: y? u want 2 spend d night wid ur hubby?

Roli: no actually if we ll play then we ll loose it and if we ll loose it then they cnt see us na. so we dnt want 2 hurt them '.

Pari: no u hv 2 play it.

Rosim: bt?

Presid: u hv 2 play it and win also understand'

Rosim: aan?

Presid: yes'

Rosim look at each other and give a ear 2 ear smile.

Uma: so lets start d game

All sits.

Uma: so we ll ask u some questions and u hv 2 answer it correctly.

Pari: lets see how much u know ur hubby?

Uma: so u tell whom ur hubby love d most in our family except u?

Rosim: mataji

Pari: are wah u knw it well. Hmm second question. Wht is similar in both of them?

Presid look at rosim.

Rosim: their similarity is that they love each other a lot.

Uma: hmm. Nice. Now say wht siddhant dislike 2 do bt prem always do it.

Simar: prem ji always interfere when siddhantji is busy wid someone

Roli: and especially it happens so much when siddhantji is wid me..

Pari: k now last and final. U tell whom presid hates a lot in our house?

All got shock hearing it.. mataji tell them wht they r doing then they say mataji like us they hv d rights 2 knw it. Then all stop interfering in it.

Pari: say whom they hate the most?

Rosim: no bhabi they don't hate their sister bt it is their love 4 her that they r angry wid her as she didn't care of her brother.

All were surprised 2 hear it frm rosim. Presid look at them surprisedly

Uma: o god. Prem,sid hv u told them everythin haan?

Presid: no bhabi.we hvnt said them these all we r confused how they know it as we hvnt talk about these things.

Uma: nice roli and simar. Hw well u knw ur hubby. I m so much impressed wid u.

Sattu: yes uma ji y dnt u take some tips frm them?

Uma look at him and he bow down his head. Mataji then tell uma and pari 2 take rosim 2 their rooms. Uma take roli 2 sid rooms and pari take sim 2 prem's room.

Sid room

Roli see d room everywhere sid has kept roli's photo. She is surprised 2 look all these.





Uma: wht u r looking roli?

Roli: bhabi these all?

Uma: roli. Siddhant has done all these he himself has designs all ur photos.

Roli: siddhantji ?

Uma: yes.

Sid: uhhu uhhu.

Uma: look ur lover come.

Sid: bhabi nt love I m her hubby now.

Uma: oh yes yes. M now going.

Roli: bhabi..

Uma: dnt wry roli. He love u na. so why 2 fear?

Roli blushes.

Sid: k u ll completes ur gupshup tomorrow now u go.

Uma: yes m going.

Sid: go naa.

Uma: going naa.

Sid: bhabi door is ther and u r still standing here and teling going naa going naa..

Uma: oh sry(smiling) going going.

Uma then leaves. Sid locked d door. Roli was looking at him and she turn back. Sid see her. He come 2 roli. Roli's heart is beating so fast. Sid is so closed 2 roli. He holds roli frm back. Roli's heart is beating so fast.

Sid: so my lovely wife. Wht now?

Roli: wht?(nervous)

She move forward putting out sid hand. Sid amiles. Goes near her.

Sid: hmm. So u r trying 2 escape frm me?

Roli: aan.. me.. actually' aan'

Sid: no nt 2 day. U hv 2 do wht I want?

Roli: siddhantji..

Sid: yes roli. U tell me which of ur photo u like d most?

Roli: haan?

Sid: wht haan haan? Tell?

Roli touch sid forehead as if she wants 2 know whether he has fever or wht?

Roli: r u k naa?

Sid: yes m k. u tell naa?

Roli: aan siddhantji every photo r nice after all its me.

Sid; ya that's true after all its u.

He then goes 2 roli. Roli seeing this moves backward roli is moving backward when she bang on wall. Sid come close 2 her put his hand at one side of d wall roli trying 2 go frm otherside when he again put his other hand. Roli sees him.

Sid: no roli nt 2 day. M nt going 2 leave u 2 day. I waited for this day frm long time.

Roli: siddhantji'.

Sid putting his finger on her lips.

Sid: sshhh.. no I dnt want 2 to hear any excuses 2day.

Roli then push him and escape. Sid smiles goe 2 her. He then touch roli. Roli blushing. He slowly putout her jewelleries. Sid removes her earing and kissed on her ear. Roli about 2 go when he hold her hand and kiss. He then put out the bangles. Roli Is having the chunar he removes it and loosen her hair. Roli moves back. He make her hair forward and kissed on her neck. Roli blushes and move forward 2 d wall. Sid goes 2 him and move her toward him holding her waist in his arm. Both were so closed looking at each others eyes. Roli's heart beating so fast. She slowly closes her eyes. Sid kiss her in her forehead. Roli open her eyes and give a ear to ear smile and blushes. Sid then took her in arm and then put her on d bed. Bt suddenly they hear some cracking sound. They look hear and there. Ignoring it sid then sits on bed when again they hear the same sound.

Roli: siddhantji I think something is cracking.

Sid: yes roli. Bt wht?

Frm outside..

Uma/pari: papad'. Papad'.cracked or nt?

Rosid look each other. Sid then stands. And roli too. they then remove the bedsheet and see papads on their beds. Roli smiles looking at siddhant. Sid then goes and open d door. He look at pari and uma in anger.

Sid: wht is this bhabi?

Uma: sid this is d masti done by us.

Sid: bt bhabi..

Pari: no no sid u go and caryy on we r leaving.

Sid: r u sure of it?

Uma: ofcorse'

Sid: (little smile and little anger) k then leave'

Both leaves. Sid goes inside and locked d door. Roli laughs.

Sid: yes yes u laugh how much u want 2?

Roli: siddhantji wht 2 do I am jst..

Sid: k now lets remove these papads' god my bhabis.

Both then remove all the papads and throws it in dustbin.

Roli: now all k.

Sid: yes now all k.(he hold roli in his arm and take her 2 bed)

Roli: siddhantji?

Sid: (sitting) yes I knw u call me siddhantji.

He then goes 2 roli. She is blushing. Sid holds roli's hand and roli hugs him so tightly. Sid also hold her after a while he break the hug and kiss roli on her cheek. And lie her on bed. Roli has now given herself 2 her siddhant. She is now going 2 be only sidhant's. sid then kiss her on her forehead and cheek. Roli move her face side when sid again makes her face towards him and kiss her in her lip. Roli hugs sid. Then the room was darken...

2 be continued..

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Posted: 12 years ago
yipeee im first🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

but sry for delay...REALLY AWESOME AND ROMANTIC UPDATE👏👏👏
Edited by ...hema23... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so romantic 😊i have no words simply super anu awesome😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi anu. Ur back with ur updates. Really amazing. Kudos👏 to u for giving this great romantic update with little teasing of uma and pari. loved each and every line and more than that liked the innocence of Presid when rosim are taken for bidaai. Thnx for the pm. 😛

I liked avika's first photo which u have uploaded. 😊
Edited by diyasri - 12 years ago

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