SuShaan FF :I'll Be There For U !! [PART 2-Pg:8] - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Rubaldhillon


AM i Not in Ur PM List???😭 😲 💔 🥺



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Excellent FF.. Wonderful Vips... Too good.. Nice characterisation, I like all of them...Suhana and Sanaya combination with Ishaan in the college .. is too good.. It was like i am seeing again RKB serial again.. Hope to see next FF soon..
Keep writing Vips , you surely have good writting skills👏... Do try to write for serials it is much much better than some junk SPserials .
Edited by abhi786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Heyya Guys..
i m back with the second part of my FF..
hope u guys like it as much as u likes the first one...😳

But please look upon this banner first..
it is made by one and only Shounak.. isn't it FAB.???
thanks to him...



Chalo let me get back to the 2nd part now..

BeforE starting let me tell u..SORRY if it turns boring after some time coz i m going to take u to everyone's bedroom..😆😆
Everyone as in Ishaan,Suhana,Mohit and Sanaya 😛

One thing that is unreal in this part as well as my FF is that all four of them live in super stylish rooms[spcly Suhana and Mohit as they are both spoilt brats whereas Ishaan anD Sanaya like to keep it simple]and houses and no one belongs to a GAREEB parivaar...😆😉


**I'll be there for U**
Part 2



Late at night @ Suhana's bedroom..





Suhana is not able to sleep..so she decides to read a book...

While reading..her mobile phone rings..
she sees the num. and picks up the phone quickly...

Its Rishabh on the other side..


Suhana:
Hello..

Rishabh : heyy..tum soyi nahi abhi tak..??? Maine toh aise hi call kar diya tha..i thought u must be sleepin..

Suhana:Do u think i wud sleep without talkin to u..aisa hua hai kabhi.?

Rishabh : Na...i was kiddin..

Suhana: achha Rishi [Rishabh]tell me how was ur day.???

Rishabh:umm..it was OK...working under dad is a huge responsibilty..
pata nahi kab mera training period khatam hoga..i m soo tired..🤢
i can't even call u cozz as he is always on my head...


Suhana: aww kuch nhi hota..work cums first...

Rishi : No for me Suhana cums first..

Suhana: zyada maska matt maaro..

Rishi : mera pyaar ab tumhe maska lagta hai.???

Suhana: umm haan [jockingly 😆😆..]

Rishi :achha toh mere phone ka intezaar kyun karti ho roz raat ko.??

Suhana: woh toh aise hi...

Suddenly she hears a knock on the door...

Suhana:
iska answer tumhe baad mein milega..
byee..someone's at the door..

Rishi : ohk..byee..Love ya..take care..
aur ab please soo jao..


Suhana: haan theek hai...

Suhana puts her phone under the pillow and shouts..
Aa rahi hoon...mom aap ho kya..???

Suhana's mom : haan main hun..khol jaldi darwaza...

...


Simran Bajpai :Suhana's mom...very understanding,jovial,at times fuuny,very close to Suhana[obviously].Was a working woman before being a motherr..but left working to take good care of Suhana..

Suhana's dad Mr. Anand Bajpai calls her Simi and Suhana's friends call her Simi aunty..

Knows about Suhana' and Rishabh's relationship

...


Suhana opens the door'

Simi : kya kar rahi hai.??

Soyi kyun nahi abhi tak.??

Suhana : bass sone lagi hun..app bolo kya kaam hai..??

Simi comes in the room and locks the door from inside.. soo that nobody sees or hears what happens inside'

Suhana : kya hua..kya kar rahe ho maa'

Simi : tu yahan aa ke baith mere paas'

Suhana sits besides her on the bed..

Simi : Mujhe pata hai..tu Rishabh se baat kar rahi thi na..???

Suhana : Shyly😳..haan'aapko kaise pata??

Simi :beta main teri maa hoon..mijhe ni pata hoga toh kise pata hoga'

Suhana smiles..

Simi : ye bata..tum dono ne socha hai aage ke baare mein.???

Suhana: kya maa'abhi abhi toh usne apne DAD ke saath business join kia hai..aur maine toh abhi college bhi katam nahi kiya..ye sab sochne ka time kahan hai humare paas'

Simi: huh !! abhi nahi sochoge toh kab sochoge apne future ke bare mein..

Aane do Rishabh ko ghar..main batati hun usse kyunki tu toh sunne waali nahi hai meri baat'

***Suhana in her mind " hmm I wish the same ki wo ghar aa jaye..kitne din ho ho gaye we haven't met " ***

Simi: kahan kho gayi.??

Suhana: kahin nahi..accha theek hi MAA jab wo ayega toh uski khabar lena...Abhi mujhe sona hai'

Simi : haan so jaa..subah tujhe neend se jagana aur bhi mushkil ho jayega nahi toh'

Suhana lies down on her bed..Simi switches off the light..closes the door and goes to her room'

~Ishaan's place~

Ishaan lives in a simple 3 bedroom apartment on rent coz his family i.e his mother lives in Delhi...

His DAD is no more but that doesn't affect his living standard as his father was very rich and every month Rs 1 lakh are transfered in his bank account by his mother..

However, he never liked the fact that he is born rich..he believes that one should become rich from his own hard work..

He wants to buy a house of his own in Mumbai after his graduation..


Ishaan is sitting on his study table and doing some work...

after his work finishes..he jumps on his bed..

He closes his eyes and the moment when he fell on Suhana cums in front of his eyes..

he smiles for a while and then suddenly opens his eyes..

he says

"Suhana.??

Ye kya ho raha hai mujhe..Suhana kyun dikh rahi hai.??😕 "

Iss Mohit ko toh main kal batata hun..usne aaj mujhe uss par dhakka kyun diya..na wo mujhe hakka seta..aur na hi Suhana mujhe apne khayalon mein dikhti...

Lies down again to sleep..




#Mohit's Room#


New IKEA 2010 Futuristic Bedroom Design Ideas

Mohit is sitting on his bed with Sanaya's photograph in his hand...
He is admiring her beauty and smile..and after some time decides to call her up..

He dials her number..
her phone is ringing but no one is picking it up....


He tries almost 10 times but she doesn't answer...
he gets upset and throws his phone in anger and goes to sleep...





--Sanaya's Room--




Sanaya's mobile phone is in her bedroom but she is ouside in her living room watching a late night daily soap on TV..😆😆

...




Soo this was PART 2...
i know its not as good as part 1..
and i hope it readable...

feel free to suggest something and criticise...

Edited by -MadRaginiFan- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by -MadRaginiFan- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Vipu...such a beautifullly presented update.. n haiii pulkit samrat.. ☺️ cutieee..!! Loved the update dear... n m so sorry..i m a bit late in commenting...forgive me..n also please add me to ur PM list 😃


Awesome dear... keep em coming...n nice banner.. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Vipu...such a beautifullly presented update.. n haiii pulkit samrat.. ☺️ cutieee..!! Loved the update dear... n m so sorry..i m a bit late in commenting...forgive me..n also please add me to ur PM list 😃



Awesome dear... keep em coming...n nice banner.. 👏



Thanks for commenting di..😃
i was waiting for ur comment since the last update..and today u finally did it 🥳

Thanks for the appreciation..
🤗
and u are already there in my PM list..don't worry..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-


Thanks for commenting di..😃
i was waiting for ur comment since the last update..and today u finally did it 🥳

Thanks for the appreciation..
🤗
and u are already there in my PM list..don't worry..


Aare i had made it a point to comment after the last update..but work took over..n i lost track.! Sowwiee...sweetiee 😳 n aap bulaye aur hum na aaye.. yeh to hamare liye gunah hoga..!

Hugs 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68


GOOD...👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Aare i had made it a point to comment after the last update..but work took over..n i lost track.! Sowwiee...sweetiee 😳 n aap bulaye aur hum na aaye.. yeh to hamare liye gunah hoga..!

Hugs 🤗


Don say SORRY di..
i can understand😃..even i m busy with my studies
can't find enough time to update this FF too..


Edited by -MadRaginiFan- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Again a good one vips...
u r a good writer dear...
loved it...
do continue soon sweets...

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