Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Vipu .... awesome work... its one of my favourite Dhanno/Sweetu write up.... fab fab stuff 👏👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Vipu .... awesome work... its one of my favourite Dhanno/Sweetu write up.... fab fab stuff 👏👏👏👏
@ Vipra:
Awesome work dear, it is one of the best script that i have seen so far in this whole carnival event.
This is now one of my personal favourite😊
If it is ur first ever experience of script writing then You made a century in your first match , what a debut dear👏👏
I had lot of fun reading each one of it , and ALL of you have been really creative 👍🏼.
Similar to the previous task, this is how I have evaluated the entries.....
Creative and neat work
Nice caption
Good selection of pictures
Suggestion - Since the task question says 'women of SGP' and not just Kashyaps, you missed out on Sanjana and Panna's MIL 😳 (Sudi-Suli would also have been an added advantage 😆!)
Excellent effort 👏 !
Good presentation & good use of emoticons
Inclusion of a poster at the start of the conversation was a good addition 👍🏼.
Very good dialogues
Really good situation created for Dhanno-Sweetu conversation
Suggestion - Maybe you could have included one pic of Suhana and Ishaan on scooter, but since the task was only about conversation between Dhanno & Sweetu, am not cutting any marks here 😆.
Very beautiful and creative, a neat work
Nice caption
Good selection of pictures
I liked the way you guys started off the task with a poetry on 'Aurat' , quite unique and very well presented 👍🏼!
Suggestion - Since the task question says 'women of SGP' and not just Kashyaps, you missed out on Sanjana and Panna's MIL 😳 (Sudi-Suli would also have been an added advantage 😆!)
Fabulous attempt 👏 !
Excellent concept!
Very creative and neat work - perfect execution.
Very good concept and story idea. Nice idea for a surprise birthday party for Suhana. Very realistic with simple ideas suitable for and affordable by the middle class family, like terrace party, simple cake, flowers, etc.Very good use of pictures
Essence of SGP and the character sketch of each character has been maintained well
Entertaining conversations
Good conversation....I liked the way you guys gave Dhanno & Sweetu Ishaan's and Suhana's respective personalities 😆.
Good pictures used
Suggestion - It would have been better if Sweetu-Dhanno conversation was longer than Ishaan-Suhana's as the main task is Sweetu-Dhanno conversation na 😳.
Awsome story and concept 👏!Good dialogues
The character sketch of Suhana as Ishaan and vice versa has been very well maintained.
Entertaining conversation
Suggestion - Would have been nicer if you had included pictures as well, and the presentation could also have been better 😳, but on the whole the story creativity was really awsome 👏!
Good attempt
Good dialogues
Suggestion - Presentation of the poster could have been more better, with consistency in the presentation of dialogues (like Sweetu's name starts with a small 's' and Dhanno's with capital 'D', etc)
Very good attempt!
Good flow and effects
Very good captions
Good selection of scenes
Suggestion - Just a slight problem in audio editing and adjusting, apart from that, really good work 👍🏼.
Very good concept
Very good creation
Neat work
Good picture selection of Sweetu and Khatara
Suggestion - Just a small suggestion, the conversation bubble could have been more clear and uniform as one is sharp and the other is blurred. Apart from that, a perfect job 👍🏼!
Good attempt
You have included all the important women in SGP (including Suhana's mom 😆)
Suggestion - You could have also included a caption in the siggy 😳.
Really good!
Nice concept and story
Entertaining conversations and cute dialogues
Maintained character sketch very well
Good presentation with inclusion of a poster of Dhanno and Sweetu
Hello Contestants!!! Thanks for accepting me as a judge!!! 🤗We all three judges used the same criteria for judging each task. We had a different set of criteria for Siggy, Poster, VM and writing.
For the fairness to all contestants, I tried to go by team names rathan than individuals in a team to remove any bias. It wasn't easy to judge as all were too good!!! If I were you, I am not sure I would have done any better than you guys!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
PS: As much as would have loved to use the emoticons to express myself better, I could not as this is my new laptop and I am yet to download all those links. So, sorry... this plain text is so boring!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡
Rapchik Ragzfanaticz
TASK 1
The task was to make the women of Sasural genda Phool and they have only women of Kashyap Parivar. Missed Panna's MIL, Sanjana, Meena, and Dolly didi, Suli-Sudi.
But the pictures you chose are fantastic. I love those pictures!!! Hands down for great choice!!!
Mandatory task
Sweetu dhanno convo was very creative. I could,'t help laughing reading it.
DANCE FREAKS
mandatory task poster
it is Good. It's a basic poster. You should have done a small poem or a small write-up to enhance it. A poster can always have small write up unlike a siggy. It is a very clean poster and was very soothing to the eyes!!! So, That's a Hands down!!!
Task 1
VM Trailer
That was a fantastic VM. Mindblowing. Thoda transition ka problem dikha but that's no big deal!!! Hands down for your VM!!! The VM was very professional!!!
Masakallis Madatory Task
Ishaan's Dhanno & Suhana's Sweetu with caption'
Excellent!!! That was totally creative. I could not find a flaw. Hands down guys!!!
Task 1
Aurat Shayari was Fantastic!!! The task was to make the women of Sasural genda Phool and you missed Sanjana, Panna's Mil, Meena, Dolly didi '
Dancing Divas
TASK 1
Beautiful.. very original' Flawless!! Hands down guys!!!
Manadatory task
Scooter-sweetu conversation' very good' original ' your creativity was too good'The flow was excellent! Hands down!!!
SGPianLovers
Mandatory Task (Sweetu-khatara convo) Really fantastic!!! Hands down for your creativity!!!
Poster Women of Sasural Genda Phool (covered all the women including suli sidi) You guys covered pretty much everyone on SGP. Manju aunty ko kyon chod diya?? Lolol Behthareen poster banaya tum logon ne' The clors were soothing. The picture selection was simply too good! Hands Down!!!!
Sushaanomania
Task 1 Crazy situation
Nothing original in the scenario' the convo is the repeat of whatever has happened' You should have come up with totally a different scenario we have not seen on the screen. Had it been little more creative, it would have done wonders for your team b/c your writing style is very original!! But you still kept the convo very funny. The flow was very good!!!
Mandatory task -
Poster - It was Very Good. But I think you could have done much better. Lekin, I loved the colors you used. The colors were very refreshing!!! Brings out the mood!!! Hands down for that.