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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Vipu .... awesome work... its one of my favourite Dhanno/Sweetu write up.... fab fab stuff 👏👏👏👏

thanxx a ton for the lovely compliment di...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Vipra:
Awesome work dear, it is one of the best script that i have seen so far in this whole carnival event.
This is now one of my personal favourite😊

If it is ur first ever experience of script writing then You made a century in your first match , what a debut dear👏👏
Edited by Sinha18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sinha18

@ Vipra:
Awesome work dear, it is one of the best script that i have seen so far in this whole carnival event.
This is now one of my personal favourite😊

If it is ur first ever experience of script writing then You made a century in your first match , what a debut dear👏👏

Aww I m sooo glad that u liked the script Himanshu...😳
n thanxx for considering it as one of ur fav. thats the biggest compliment ...thank u thank u soo soo much..!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arre Tani partner..ermm I mean Vipu partner😆😆😆..Awesome job..and thnks a lot for posting the final task with ur account...Me loved to be a part of the Rapchik Ragzfanaticz along with u🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vipra, excellent excellentjob, one of the best so far, really enjoyed it.Good job.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful work vips...keep it up...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys .....I am back with my evaluation of entries for the final task by the participants 😃. I have already submitted the scores to Shweta, so thought of giving a detailed analysis of all the tasks here. So firslty I would like to personally congratulate each of the groups for their efforts!

I had lot of fun reading each one of it , and ALL of you have been really creative 👍🏼.

Similar to the previous task, this is how I have evaluated the entries.....

I have evaluated all the entries in comparison to each other. So even if someone gets comparatively low points please understand that its not because your attempt was bad, but its just that someone else might have been slightly better or have added more elements to enhace their work 😳.
So guys please mujhe maarna mat even if you don't like my judgement , I'm just doing my job 😳.


So here goes my evaluation of each group ....
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Rapchik Ragzfanatics :-

Optional Task

For the optional task, you guys have selected Siggy making on the women of SGP. Here goes my evaluation....

Creative and neat work

Nice caption

Good selection of pictures

Suggestion - Since the task question says 'women of SGP' and not just Kashyaps, you missed out on Sanjana and Panna's MIL 😳 (Sudi-Suli would also have been an added advantage 😆!)



Mandatory Task

For the mandatory task, you guys have selected 'Conversation between Dhanno & Sweetu'.
Here goes my evaluation....

Excellent effort 👏 !

Good presentation & good use of emoticons

Inclusion of a poster at the start of the conversation was a good addition 👍🏼.

Very good dialogues

Really good situation created for Dhanno-Sweetu conversation

Suggestion - Maybe you could have included one pic of Suhana and Ishaan on scooter, but since the task was only about conversation between Dhanno & Sweetu, am not cutting any marks here 😆.

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Masakallis :-

Optional Task

For the optional task, you guys have also selected Siggy making on the women of SGP. Here goes my evaluation....

Very beautiful and creative, a neat work

Nice caption

Good selection of pictures

I liked the way you guys started off the task with a poetry on 'Aurat' , quite unique and very well presented 👍🏼!

Suggestion - Since the task question says 'women of SGP' and not just Kashyaps, you missed out on Sanjana and Panna's MIL 😳 (Sudi-Suli would also have been an added advantage 😆!)



Mandatory Task

For the mandatory task, you guys have selected 'Poster on Dhanno & Sweetu'. Here goes my evaluation....

Fabulous attempt 👏 !

Excellent concept!

Very creative and neat work - perfect execution.

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Dazzling Divas :-


Optional Task


For the optional task, you guys have selected 'Suhana's B'day Bash'. Here goes my evaluation....
Very good concept and story idea. Nice idea for a surprise birthday party for Suhana. Very realistic with simple ideas suitable for and affordable by the middle class family, like terrace party, simple cake, flowers, etc.

Very good use of pictures

Essence of SGP and the character sketch of each character has been maintained well

Entertaining conversations


Mandatory Task

For the mandatory task, you guys have selected 'Conversation between Dhanno & Sweetu'. Here goes my evaluation....

Good conversation....I liked the way you guys gave Dhanno & Sweetu Ishaan's and Suhana's respective personalities 😆.

Good pictures used

Suggestion - It would have been better if Sweetu-Dhanno conversation was longer than Ishaan-Suhana's as the main task is Sweetu-Dhanno conversation na 😳.


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Sushaanomania :-

Optional Task

For the optional task, you guys have selected 'Crazy Situation'. Here goes my evaluation....
Awsome story and concept 👏!

Good dialogues

The character sketch of Suhana as Ishaan and vice versa has been very well maintained.

Entertaining conversation

Suggestion - Would have been nicer if you had included pictures as well, and the presentation could also have been better 😳, but on the whole the story creativity was really awsome 👏!


Mandatory Task

For the mandatory task, you guys have selected 'Poster on Dhanno & Sweetu'. Here goes my evaluation....

Good attempt

Good dialogues

Suggestion - Presentation of the poster could have been more better, with consistency in the presentation of dialogues (like Sweetu's name starts with a small 's' and Dhanno's with capital 'D', etc)

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Dance Freaks :-


Optional Task


For the optional task, you guys have selected 'Make a Trailer'. Here goes my evaluation....

Very good attempt!

Good flow and effects

Very good captions

Good selection of scenes

Suggestion - Just a slight problem in audio editing and adjusting, apart from that, really good work 👍🏼.


Mandatory Task

For the mandatory task, you guys have selected 'Poster on Dhanno & Sweetu'. Here goes my evaluation....

Very good concept

Very good creation

Neat work

Good picture selection of Sweetu and Khatara

Suggestion - Just a small suggestion, the conversation bubble could have been more clear and uniform as one is sharp and the other is blurred. Apart from that, a perfect job 👍🏼!

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SGPianLovers :-

Optional Task

For the optional task, you guys have selected Siggy making on the women of SGP. Here goes my evaluation....

Good attempt

You have included all the important women in SGP (including Suhana's mom 😆)

Suggestion - You could have also included a caption in the siggy 😳.


Mandatory Task

For the mandatory task, you guys have selected 'Conversation between Dhanno & Sweetu'. Here goes my evaluation....

Really good!

Nice concept and story

Entertaining conversations and cute dialogues

Maintained character sketch very well

Good presentation with inclusion of a poster of Dhanno and Sweetu

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So guys, that was my analysis and evaluation of your tasks 😳. I hope it was satisfactory, and in case of any errors do forgive me .


Edited by *dewdrop~pearl* - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello Contestants!!! Thanks for accepting me as a judge!!! 🤗We all three judges used the same criteria for judging each task. We had a different set of criteria for Siggy, Poster, VM and writing.

For the fairness to all contestants, I tried to go by team names rathan than individuals in a team to remove any bias. It wasn't easy to judge as all were too good!!! If I were you, I am not sure I would have done any better than you guys!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


PS: As much as would have loved to use the emoticons to express myself better, I could not as this is my new laptop and I am yet to download all those links. So, sorry... this plain text is so boring!!!😡😡😡😡😡😡

Rapchik Ragzfanaticz

TASK 1

The task was to make the women of Sasural genda Phool and they have only women of Kashyap Parivar. Missed Panna's MIL, Sanjana, Meena, and Dolly didi, Suli-Sudi.

But the pictures you chose are fantastic. I love those pictures!!! Hands down for great choice!!!

Mandatory task

Sweetu dhanno convo was very creative. I could,'t help laughing reading it.

DANCE FREAKS

mandatory task poster

it is Good. It's a basic poster. You should have done a small poem or a small write-up to enhance it. A poster can always have small write up unlike a siggy. It is a very clean poster and was very soothing to the eyes!!! So, That's a Hands down!!!

Task 1

VM Trailer

That was a fantastic VM. Mindblowing. Thoda transition ka problem dikha but that's no big deal!!! Hands down for your VM!!! The VM was very professional!!!

Masakallis Madatory Task

Ishaan's Dhanno & Suhana's Sweetu with caption'

Excellent!!! That was totally creative. I could not find a flaw. Hands down guys!!!

Task 1

Aurat Shayari was Fantastic!!! The task was to make the women of Sasural genda Phool and you missed Sanjana, Panna's Mil, Meena, Dolly didi '

Dancing Divas

TASK 1

Beautiful.. very original' Flawless!! Hands down guys!!!

Manadatory task

Scooter-sweetu conversation' very good' original ' your creativity was too good'The flow was excellent! Hands down!!!

SGPianLovers

Mandatory Task (Sweetu-khatara convo) Really fantastic!!! Hands down for your creativity!!!

Poster Women of Sasural Genda Phool (covered all the women including suli sidi) You guys covered pretty much everyone on SGP. Manju aunty ko kyon chod diya?? Lolol Behthareen poster banaya tum logon ne' The clors were soothing. The picture selection was simply too good! Hands Down!!!!

Sushaanomania

Task 1 Crazy situation

Nothing original in the scenario' the convo is the repeat of whatever has happened' You should have come up with totally a different scenario we have not seen on the screen. Had it been little more creative, it would have done wonders for your team b/c your writing style is very original!! But you still kept the convo very funny. The flow was very good!!!

Mandatory task -

Poster - It was Very Good. But I think you could have done much better. Lekin, I loved the colors you used. The colors were very refreshing!!! Brings out the mood!!! Hands down for that.

Edited by vishmewell - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
judges....thanks a lot for your detailed analysis...
iam sure the teams will love it....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi darlings.....🤗..... Me as usual presenting my general analysis at the last .... appreciate every second u guys took for every task for the past month and did it infusing so much passion into it.... that i am really lost for words to degrade it in any way..... I can understand our tasks teams is comprising of working members to professionals to students.... and the valuable time u guys dedicated for doing each task is just awesome.....Hats off to your passion , your creativity and your zeal in doing the same......!
Regarding the tasks overall till now..... the journey was fantastic.... the thread overflew with abundance creativity and talent ..... felt some members deserve to be in the SGP unit .....😆😉...Hope the unit reads your entries and gets hints to include them in our SGP....😛
Regarding the final tasks.... I loved the idea of sweetu and khataara ...task and i felt the humour content cud have been maintained to highlight the conversation between 2 fictitious characters....Some have given justice to it...👏. some have tried their level best...👏.. !
Regarding the poster to be designed on the women of SGP... again a fanstastic theme and beautiful wordings by some (Tanu awesome....👏)and beautiful colour layouts by some.... so again a marvellous job by those who attempted it....!
Regarding the script for b'day scene......Dazzling Divas rocked it the way they held on to the grip of the b'day sequence and i cud literally visualise the characters and i felt i saw an EPISODE...! so Sheems and Pooja..... I was in awe with the way u guyz handled the simple theme to a beautiful suspense sequence.....👏
Regarding the VM.... Keenu .... u have done a marvellous attempt....U said it was your first....Girl u have chosen lovely scenes, lovely co-relation with the back. music, the narration.... everything was just so beautiful.....👏!
Regarding the poster for Sweetu and Khataara....i felt the concept did not get its due effect by some due to lack of humour.... where as Tanu excelled in it with her innovative concept of presentation.....👏..!
But Sheems i am still not recovering from the visualisation of Suhana in hospital.... kitne mahiney hue...😆😆..yaar....kahin aap TEAM se nahin ho na.....😳.... so i still believe that is the best best task for me till today ...... so my sincere appreciation to dazzling divas for that wonderful script.....👏👏
Thanku guyz for choosing me as one of the judges..... u guyz have given your best....and have entertained the forum members with such lovely talents.....👏...Thanks to Shwets and haaki for coming up with such beautiful wonderful tasks which provided the zeal in u guyz to present it with all passion......all u guyz deserve a huge applause.....👏👏👏

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