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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 23 is going to be the last one unfortunately but do not worry dear, I will keep writing on Samud, 😊
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Part 23:

Previously: Kumud kept looking at the entrance of the temple restlessly.
But amidst all this, there was a person watching all of this, he quickly dialled a number and said,"Sir, your doubts were right."
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Just when Kumud shifted her gaze away from the entrance of the temple, two manly fifures placed their feet on the first step of the temple. Their faces were not seen but they looked in the direction where Kumud, Saras and the others were and they headed there.
Kumud looked again and she sighed of relief, she was the one, who had called the 2 persons here.
She stood up in between the rituals and Saras too stood up, he was confused but then he followed her gaze and saw Sunny and Kabir in front of them.
Saras was angered, "What the hell are you..."
"I called them here Saras," Kumud interrupted him and left Saras, Danny and Anushka's mouth hanging.

Flashback:

Kumud had gone in VC's room to talk to him some days back about the engagement but he was no where to be found. She noticed an envelope which probably fell down from his side drawer which looked quite old as the edges were damaged. She opened the drawer and placed the envelope inside the drawer well but she did not close it as she froze on seeing the paper which was peeping out form the envelope, it had the name of Kabir written on it, but the surname was blurred, could not be seen as there was ink on it and there was the name of the symbol of a hospital on top of the paper. She did not remove the paper and read it as she believed that it must have been personal information and only Kabir had the right to read it, so she placed the paper properly inside the envelope and took it with her.

She went in her room and thought about how she could hand over this to Kabir because VC would not let her outside the house. So, she made up her mind to call him where her wedding venue was.

She did not have his number so she called Sunny.

At sunny and Kabir's place,

"Sunny, who is it?"
Sunny looked at Kabir and mouthed a name to him, who was none other than Kumud's.
"Put it on loudspeaker," Sunny did as Kabir ordered. Both of them listened to the person on the other side of the line carefully.

"Kabir, I have found out something, I know that there had been a lot of problems lately but please trust me, I think I have found an important document and I need to hand it to you personally. I will send you the place in a while," Kumud said.
"Don't worry, we will be there."
"Are you sure?"
"Yes, we need some answers and we will definitely be present tomorrow,"
The person hung up.

"Bro, how can we trust..."
"We have to, it's the only option we have." Kabir said with determination in his voice. Sunny wondered whether that person could be right but he trusted Kabir's decisions and that was enough to get him rid of his doubts.
End of flashback,
"Bhabhi, but why? I mean after..." Danny paused after Kusum looked at him quizzically.
Pramad and Kalika were confused at the current happenings," Kumud, we don't have time to waste with all this drama, if our dads come to know that we arehere, we will be finished!" Pramad exclaimed.
"Sorry Pramad, I really have an important thing to tell them and Danny, I have called them for a reason."
Kumud said as she made her way to where their car was parked and she came back a few minutes with something in her hand. Saras was really confused at her behavior, she did not mention anything to him about this, after all why dis she not tell him anything? Didn't she trust him anymore?
Sunny and Kabir stood there avoiding eye contact with the others, and finally Kumud handed the envelop to the Kabir, "I found this, hope it helps you to find your answers."
"Did you..." Kabir started to say.
"No, I did not read it," she said with a little smile.

Everyone was silent as Kabir opened the envelope and shock was written on his face as he read the paper, his face did not have any expression, it was blank, he let the paper slide down his hand. It was too much to take...

Sunny was also surprised, he was about to pick up the paper but Kumud did so before him and her reaction was the same as him, everybody else were surprised.

But before they could ask them anything regarding this matter, they heard a familiar voice,"Kumud! So this was what you have been doing behind my back?"

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Part 24:

"Dad!" It was none other than VC and BD had reached here too. BD had found something strange in their behavior but he permitted them to go. However, he sent someone to spy on them.

Flashback:

Time stood still, everyone threw nervous looks at each other, they were waiting for BD's reply.
"Ok, you can go but make sure that you all are back before the evening." BD stated in a firm tone.
"Make sure of that," VC said.
The gang including Pramad left from there with their heads bowed down and nodding in approval to what VC said. They crossed the main door and went in the lawn.
"I find that something is wrong," BD said while rubbing his cheek,
"Yes, there is undoubtedly something not right," VC agreed with BD
"Don't worry, I will do something," BD said as he removed his phone and dialed a number," Hello, I need you to follow a car and phone me when you find something."

BD had called one of the persons who were working with him and he had sent him the car plate numbers and that person had carried his job correctly.

There was a person watching all of this, he quickly dialled a number and said, "Sir, your doubts were right."

BD thanked the person and he quickly spilled the information to VC and they both quickly started their car engines to succeed in stopping all of them.

End of flashback,

Kumud jumped out of surprise when she saw her father here, she was still not able to grasp the shocking fact that she just learnt. Kabir had his back turned towards VC and Sunny too was not facing VC.
"Pramad! I am really disappointed at you." BD said as he walked towards them.

"D..dad, I really love Kalika and she loves me too, I cannot be happy with anyone else apart her..."Pramad said with his head bowed down and while holding Kalika's hand tightly.
They were interrupted by Kumud who was talking to VC," Dad, I can't believe that you are such a disgusting person,"

"What are you talking about Kumud? Are you in your senses?" He said with anger.
Kumud handed him the document and VC's expressions changed, "W..where did you find this?"
"Answer my questions first! You have another child who is none other than him!" Kumud said while poiting towards Kabir who was still under the impact of the truth.

Sunny,Saras , Kusum and Anushka finally connected the missing part of the puzzle and everything suddenly made sense.

VC could not bring himself to say anything, he took some steps back and he took a quick look at Kabir, and looked back at the paper which was a DNA test report certifying that Kabir was related to him.

VC had loved Kabir's mother long back and had an affair with her despite he was married. But she left him after and got married to Sunny's father. However, Kabir was VC's son and she had pressurized him to give her money or she would reveal this information to the entire world and cause his downfall. VC had declined this information and he had done a test. His worst fears had come true when the DNAs matched. Not finding any other option, he threatened her by saying that he would frame her husband but she did not pay heed to his words.

VC did as he had promised and Sunny's father had committed suicide as he could bear the humiliation that he had got for a crime that he had not done. Shortly after, Sunny was born and Kabir was not told that he was VC's son as his mother was ashamed to tell him that and so she told him that her husband was his father. Later on, he got to know that VC was the cause of his father's death so he aimed to get revenge and Sunny also supported him.Their mother expired a few years back and this had aggrieved them more.

VC had kept track of Kabir's activities but he was kept unaware that Kabir had met with Kumud and the others at the mansion. When he had been back in town, VC had got a call form one of his spies and that was the reason why he had removed the envelope form his drawer while reminiscing what happened in the past and he had forgotten to keep it back.

They all came back to the present when they heard BD's voice.

"VC, I have broken the alliance, we are no more business partners as from now!" BD said and he turned in the direction of Pramad and Kalika," I will fulfill your wish Pramad but I have a condition, you must let me arrange a grand wedding for you." He said with a laugh and he led Pramad and Kalika out of there.

While exiting Pramad threw the gang a last look and disappeared.
Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Part 25:

"Dad, why did you do all of this?" Kumud asked.

VC had no reply, he stood there motionless, he had hidden this for so long but all his efforts were futile as the truth finally came out.

Kabir was in disoriented state, he had tears flowing out of his eyes and he slumped to the ground. Sunny was broken to see his brother in this state, Kabir had always supported him no matter what he did, he had always covered his mistakes and had always guided him. It pained him to see Kabir in this state, he bent down and placed his hand on his shoulder but Kabir shoved his hand away," I am not your brother Sunny," he mumbled in between his sobs.

Saras and Danny also sympathized with Kabir at that time and Kusum was shocked, Danny gently squeezed her hand as he knew that she needed someone to support her during this phase. Danny knew what she must be feeling to see the bitter truths of a person you trusted, and respected.

Kumud felt disgusted at VC, "Never had I thought that you would do something like this, I don't have any problems with Kabir being my brother or not but you engaged yourself in wrong deeds, you framed an innocent person. " Kumud said recalling what Kabir had said at the mansion when he was asked the reason why he wanted to harm her.

"Kumud, I ...I did not do anything, they are lying, the papers are fake, he must have put those papers in my drawer, don't you trust me?"

Kumud smiled sarcastically," Trust, I used to trust you dad, but I can't now and I never told you where I got these papers. Then how did you assume that he got them made and put it in your drawer? I am ashamed to call you my father Mr. Vidya Chatur Desai," she said and VC's blood boiled with rage, he raised his hand to slap her but someone stopped him.

Kumud had closed her eyes but she reopened them when she did not feel anything. She saw that the person who stopped VC was Kabir, his eyes were bloodshot because of crying.

Saras mentally thanked Kabir for preventing VC to slap her. He came behind Kumud and wrapped his hand around her waist, "Don't worry Kumud, Everything that will happen will be for the best." He whispered in her ear and comforted her. Kumud felt a bit lighter on hearing Saras's words.

Kabir shoved VC's hands," I feel disgusted for having your blood but I will not let you harm my sister."

Kumud was moved by what Kabir said, he had accepted her as his sister after everything that happened, and she had no problems in accepting him as her sibling too. She always felt a connection with him when they were in the village for the project. But after the incidents, she was intrigued to find out if what he had said was the truth. There was something in his eyes that made her believe him but the person whom he had accused back then was her father, the person who brought her up and she could not absorb the fact easily.
"Kumud, please forgive me, I admit that I have wronged Kabir and Sunny but I honestly want to repent, please give me a chance, I will set everything back to normal." VC folded his hands and begged in front of Kumud and Kabir.

Kusum also came forward with Danny, "Di, please give dad a chance, he is truly sorry." She said while crying.

-After some months-

A man entered the threshold of the Desai Mansion.

He met with another man inside who greeted him happily," Hey Saras, how are you man?"

Saras shook his hands with the other person, "I'm good Kabir, how about you?"

Kumud and Kabir had forgiven VC. Kabir and Sunny moved in with VC because of his insistence and he had provided them with everything. He handed his business over to Kabir and he managed it well. Kusum, Danny and Kumud and Saras did not get married on that day. Kumud wanted to complete her studies first and Saras supported her, they had decided that they would get engaged by the end of the year and they would get married after some time.

On the other hand, Kusum had gotten engaged to Danny and they had presently gone somewhere.

VC had come to meet Saras," Saras, happy to see you!"

Saras bent down and took his blessings, VC had changed a lot and he accepted everyone's decisions.

"Same here, uncle." Saras said with a smile," By the way, Pramad told me that he will be getting married next week and he convinced his father to invite us."

"That's great news." VC said.

Saras kept searching for Kumud but he could not find her. Sunny had just come out with an apple in his hands and he knew whom Saras was looking for, "Saras, if you are looking for your girlfriend, then she is in her room." He said as he winked and took a bite of the apple.
"Sunny, you are the same thing as Danny," he said as he laughed.

VC gently smacked Sunny's back while laughing," He will never change."

Kabir was also genuinely happy, he had a family to call his own and he bonded with Saras well and he considered VC as his father now.

"Saras, what are you waiting for? My sister is her room." Kabir said.

Saras made his way to Kumud's room. The door was closed so he quietly opened it, he was speechless when he saw the sight before him, Kumud was trying her outfit for Kusum's engagement. She was wearing a lehenga but she could not tie the thread of her blouse and her dupatta was lying on the bed.She was struggling to tie it but she finally accepted defeat and while doing so, she saw Saras's reflection in the mirror.

She quickly turned and saw Saras, she was not dreaming at least. A mischievous smile formed on her lips and she walked towards him. Saras felt his desires going out of control when he saw that look on her face. Kumud raised her feet to match his height and she came closer to him and said," Shut your mouth or else a fly will get inside."

Saras got inside the room and locked the door," You re looking beautiful today." He said as he bent down and met his lips with hers.
"I am just trying this outfit but I can't tie the dori," she pouted. He smiled at her cute antics," I'll tie it for you."

Kumud turned her back towards him and he trailed his fingers on her back. She shivered when she felt him doing so, she moaned his name, "Saras,"

He came back to his senses and he tied the thread, "It's done." He placed his hand on her bare waist and they looked at themselves in the mirror; they completed each other.
Saras's hands started moving on her waist and he bent down and kissed her shoulder, she turned towards him as soon as he did that, her eyes were close and she was breathing hard.

He led her to the bed and he made her lie down beneath him,"Kumud, I still can't believe that everything is back to normal."

"Yes, it is hard to believe, " she said as a tear slid down her cheek. Saras sucked her tear and took her inviting lips in a kiss. He sucked her lower lips while he did the same with his upper lips.

They broke out of the kiss and he continued to place moist kisses on her neckline, while siding the sleeve of her blouse. She made her hands go around his body and pulled him closer to her.

Saras caressed her cheeks," You know, I started to fall for you when we were at the mansion,"

Kumud smiled," Yes, the trip to the mansion has changed everything, if we had not gone there, we would still have been enemies and I would never know that Kabir was my brother, let alone that, I would not know that I have a brother."
" But how did you know that the paper which was in the envelope was something important?"
"I just felt it," she said as he inhaled her scent,"Your hypothesis made all of us discover the truth.
" he kissed her cheek," The mansion has brought everyone's secret out,"

"I agree, the mansion spilled all the Raaz." Kumud mentioned as Saras claimed her lips again and their figures blurred.

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Hey everyone,😊

Hope all of you are doing great.

I can't believe that Raaz is over, I had started this FF on the 3rd of August that is 6 months back and time flew so quickly. This is my longest FF till date and it is really close to me.

I want to thank each and everyone who have supported me till now and encouraged me to write more. I also want to thank all of you for bearing with my delayed and short updates and for taking your precious time to read, like and comment on this FF. Thank you for everything.



This is the last update of Raaz and I really hope that you all like it and I hope that it was up to your expectations. I'm sorry if I have disappointed you

I hope that you all will comment and like this part.

I will be updating Ek Villain maybe once in 2 weeks. I have an idea for a new SS or FF, it depends and if you all are interested, then I will start by the end of March.😳

Love all of you a lot,

Take care
Bye...

Jess




Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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jess darling..🤗🤗
loved d updates...❤️
sad that raaz ended.. but story had to b ended one day... u ended it very well...👏👏

u r much better than cvs they start d story well make a fool of it in between & end it completely screwing up d base of d story, charachters... by d end of ny story on tv i have never been content.. but d way u wrote this ff was so beautiful.. every scene was written well... u did a marvelous job with this ff... u not only justified d story well but all d characters too... hats off to u...⭐️⭐️


cuming to d story.. as name given this was a raaz till last update... finally d long hidden secret cums out in open...

couldnt imagine d secret that kabir to b illegitemate child of vc.. & so to hide this ugly truth of his past he did so many cruel things...😲

but alls well if end is well. later vc not only confessed his crimes but also changed himself.. & more over appologise.. a wrong deed can b forgiven if d doer is sorry from d heart.. this is wat happened... vc chngd himself & was accepted by his children...😊
loved d emotions displayed by all...😊
saras supporting kumud.. danny wanting to give comfort to kusum... kabir protecting his step sister from her dads warth... sunny supporting kabir even after knowing kabir is his step brother... bd accepting pramads love & agreeing for a grand wedding...moreover vc accepting saras for kumud, sunny as his own with kabir...
wat is d end without romance of or king-queen.. loved samud romance... finally samud bcame one in every sense...

heartily thanking u a lot of tons for sharing such a wonderful story with us... i had read whole story for god knows how many times even wen u hadnt ended it... & wil b reading it again & again unless ur next story starts..

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I just can't believe Raaz's over...😭 This was awesome👏 👏 👏
Jess🤗 Thank you so much for this awesome FF..👍🏼 U must write more!!😃 Do pm me when u start the new FF/SS😃
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First of all a very big congratulations to you Jess for completing another FF😊, though I am sad too on its ending as it was really nice to read all the updates of this FF and I thoroughly enjoyed each and every part of it. It was really interesting and all the secret hidden in this FF was only opened up in the last part or we can say as per the title the Raaz was revealed in the end😉

Now coming to the last part , it was really nice as usual and perfectly ended on a happy note. It was really shocking to know that VC was the reason behind all that had happened and Kabir was none other than but his illegal child due to his extramarital affair outside. When truth had broken out in front of everyone the shocking reaction of all of them was expected. Kumud also couldn't believe that his own father was involved in the wrong deeds.😳 Really felt sorry for Kabir for what he had gone through after hearing the truth. But good to see Sunny was there to comfort him in such a tough situation even though he was not his real brother.😊 Kabir also showed his kind nature by preventing VC from slapping to Kumud and I loved when he said that he won't let anyone to harm his sister. In the end as usual they all forgave VC after he begged for a last chance to make everything back to normal.
Finally at last all were happy. Pramad got his love Kalika and BD was also forgave him and was ready for their grand wedding. Kusum and danny got engaged and Kabir had also forgiven VC and accepted him as his father and took over the business from VC and was very happy. And the made for each other couple Samud were also very happy after everything had got sort out.
And then came the most awaiting part of Samud romance. It was really well written. Saras couldn't believe on his eyes seeing Kumud in beautiful attire. I laughed when Kumud said " Shut your mouth or else a fly will get inside"😆🤣...And then the romance started with both kissing each other and saras doing naughty naughty things with her on bed😉😆 Both were finally became one at last and the FF ended beautifully on a happy note leaving behind all the secrets revealed.😊

Really enjoyed this FF from the bottom of my heart and now I am waiting for your new FF or SS to start anytime in future. 🤗

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