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Posted: 10 years ago
jess🤗
amazing update...
ofcourse i wil enjoy to read ur ff even after sc goes off air...
plz do continue soon...
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

jess🤗
amazing update...
ofcourse i wil enjoy to read ur ff even after sc goes off air...
plz do continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...

hey 🤗
thanks dear
will continue soon
and you're welcome😊
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Wonderful update...👍🏼
Lovely writing...waiting for next update
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Wonderful update...👍🏼
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Superb update 👏 👏 keep writing, thanks for pm 😳
read all the updates together, it was really nice. ⭐️
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Originally posted by: Kusum04

Superb update 👏 👏 keep writing, thanks for pm 😳

read all the updates together, it was really nice. ⭐️

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Part 14:


Previously: Saras only said "I'll go and have a look."


"I'll come with you,"
"No, you stay here,"

Saras was about to leave when Danny rushed inside the room,"Guys, please be careful on the stairs, a chandelier had just broken over there,"

Danny went to inform the others.Both of them were alone again.

Kumud told him," I'm going."
"To meet that 'new friend' of yours?"
"You got it right."
"I thought I had made it clear before and you are lucky that Danny did not walk in at that time or else, he would have never let you hear the end of it."

Kumud blushed as he said that,"I need to go,"
Saras held her hand and said," I hope it's not to meet your friend,"
"No,"
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"How did he ask you out?"
"Huh!"
"Kumud, put away that phone and tell me how did Saras ask you out?"

Kumud did not know what to say,"Well...actually...he did not,"

"What? You are dating a guy who did not ask you out yet, on top of that, let me remind you, he was your enemy."

"Anu, I don't know, we are just together, even though we've not confessed yet, we did not get time for all this, all I know is that I love him and that's all what counts."

"Oohh, you've changed a lot."

"Anu, just cut the crap," Kumud threw a pillow at Anushka.
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"Ramu, you know what to do."
"Yes sir, don't worry."
"By the way, where were you for all these days?"
"I was at the village, my mum was sick,"
"Oh ok, but in the future, I expect you to here, we never know when we'll be needing your help." Kabir told.

Ramu was going out of the kitchen when Sunny told him," If you dare to deceive us, she will not spare you."

He only nodded and made his way where he was going.
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"Bro, you are in love,"

Saras did not move, he never realized when he fell in love, yes he loved her, he was in love.

He slowly walked towards Danny with a stern look. Danny thought he was in trouble and was preparing himself to run away but he was pleasantly surprised when Saras hugged him.

"Hey, thanks man, because of you I have realized that I love her."
"You're welcome and I'm so happy for you.Did you confess?"
"Um,,no."
"Then what are you waiting for, go right now."
"Danny are you mad? right now? It's nearly midnight."
"What can be more romantic than this?"
"But Ka..." he stopped, Danny should not get to know.
"Stop making excuses, go at the back of the house, I'll tell her to meet you there."
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Midnight,

Kumud walked along the stoned path that lead the way to the back of the house. She got a surprise when she reached there. Saras was kneeling in front of her.

She was about to say something,"No Kumud. Let me speak today, I don't know if I'll get this opportunity again, from the day I met you, we only fought, but deep inside, I always had feelings for you, I thought it was just attraction, but now, I know that is it love, I LOVE YOU KUMUD." as he said that, he offered her a rose.

She took the rose and kissed it,"I love you too Saras."

Saras got back on his feet and gently kissed her lips. She was about to run away when it started raining and he held her hand.

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

He started singing along. He pulled her near to him by placing his hand on her waist.

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai


They slow danced at the back of the house.

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Kyun ek pal ki bhi judaai sahi jaaye na
Kyun har subah tu meri sanson me samaye na
Aaja na tu mere paas, dunga itna pyar main
Kitni raat guzaari hai, tere intezar mein

They were still dancing. Little did they know that a big conspiracy was going on at the same time.

Kaise bataaun jazbaat ye mere
Maine khud se bhi zyada tujhe chaaha hai
Sab kuch chhod ke aana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai


He slowly lifted her and turned her around. They both then sat under a tree. He came on her and started running his hands on her face, lips, neck... Saras then kissed her everywhere on her face and came to her lips. They stayed like that for a long time.

Bheege bheege tere lab,
mujhko kuch kehte hain
Dil hai khush mera ki khayal ek jaise hain :)
Roko na ab khudko yun sun lo dil ki baat ko
Dhal jaane do shaam aur aa jaane do raat ko
Kitna haseen ye lamha hai
Kismat se maine churaaya hai

Aaj ki raat na jaana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

She slightly pushed him and got up. She went in the middle of the back yard and opened her arms to feel the rain. He leaned on his elbow and watched her.

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar main tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai


He joined her and they both did some romantic steps in the rain, while a third pair of eyes were watching them with anger.


Here you go with the next part. Hope you

enjoyed this part too.😊


Love Jess ❤️



Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful confession scene.thank u so much 4 adding a romantic rain dance.i always wanted 2 c a romanticrain scene ofsamud.but v got only kumud dancing alone in rain.u fulfilled my wish.beautifulsong.sensuous description
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
finally both confessed to each other...
romance blooming up
thnks 4 d pm...

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