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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
@ smrth, happy

So true, Happy, we who did not have much knowledge of the source, would have been content with a good story well told.

Unlike you smrth, for whom seeing the story being changed would be a torture. Even that can be accepted, if the new adaptation is done with grace and beauty, and does not in anyway demean or belittle the work.

Today, most of the viewers would judge the original to be a mediocre illogical peace of writing, because this show is all that they know of Sarawatichandra.

Sad.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Happy, Arshi and Hgg. If you have time just watch sometimes, how Saba has granted actual 'forgiveness'. How dignified, collected and above all, not giving in an ounce of self respect... and yet wholly sincere.😲 The result was astounding. The 'offender' was completely 'vanquished'...besides, her act alone opened way for other victim/ culprit Arfeen's ultimate closure and peace. Brilliantly scripted and executed...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: smrth

Happy ji not so happy...😕 but friends consider these...

  1. Kumud is not 'forgiving'. She is deferring. She was capitulated under the force of a 'dying wish'. As late as today, she berated him, 'why did you not divorce?' A probable con by 'dying' was not her fault, when the claim stood supported by Hospital, doctors and above all, Saras.
  2. A person sentenced to death, when asked to speak out a wish, not overturning the verdict, is not said to have been 'forgiven'. Similarly, a deferment for a person condemned to death, may not be 'forgiven' per se.
  3. Inherent ugliness from such thoughtless 'tampering' with the story is bound to begat ugliness even in its retraction, spatially when it stands in direct conflict with intended course. No body is denying clumsiness therein. Especially deplorable are such excuses as 'Kusum's marriage'. This is going to get denser disgusting if or when Kumud would 'use' it to facilitate younger sister's 'life' wish...As for the outrage as a long standing viewer, would you realise dismay of the viewers who might have even remotely known about the characters sketch in source? Per se, divorce is not a stigma nor a widowhood crime this day. But that very 'subtlety' of character sketch in original would make them cringe at such distortions; "Kumud's Divorce in Saraswatichandra" indeed! Wish we know what would have been the reaction of Ivy's gentleman reader on such. In my home, Ma, a seasoned stalwart from KSBKBT days, when watched "Kumud's divorce" she cringed, "SLB is liable for some legal reprimands to expose a literary work to such extent". Pramad's death is an in built elimination in the book.
  4. And yet, Kumud is liable and exposed to much flake when they may 'resurrect' the monster from death bad. So much for a 'humanitarian' act! Now pay the prize...I can hear the thunderous retorts when her altruistic action will rebound on her. I will stand guilty as a dense viewer my friend.


Hello Smrth,

Regarding your point 4, they had better not show a 'resurrection' drama, because terminal LC is well...terminal as the name suggests. There's NO WAY a terminal patient is recovering without getting a liver transplant done. Also, when a patient is deemed terminal, it also means s/he may not survive the transplant operation itself to risk it. So if they go down that path, the viewers may stop watching/ it could also be a 'catch' to SaMud that the libertine has been faking all along. With these CVs, we may never know what's brewing in their heads🤢

Regarding point 1 &2, yes, she hasn't forgiven but the least she could do is admit to Saras that she's made a 'genuine' error in judgement for she's still unaware of the fact that Pramad has been manipulating Saras. Making Kumud cry like a child to assert her point, however crazy it may sound,(even after Saras quelling her reasons convincingly) is clear character maiming. The number of times she's said, you're my strength, don't leave me and Saras saying "I know our relationship is durable", I find these silly writing especially when they have reached that stage of their relationship where they don't have to keep making mundane one-liners to prove/assure themselves how secure their love is.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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All this showing of a yo-yo relationship between Saras n Kumud is getting hard to take now. There needs to be one episode where things are brought down to earth. Like in that kumud's rescue episode.
So the other question is - is she still unable to read Pramad? The very fact that he collaborated with Kalika in buying that saree.

Saras hasn't told Kumud the truth about him being Pramad's target when his car hit her n also how he wants to be a thorn in the flesh. All that pramads talk about kumud becoming a widow - saras didn't tell kumud.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tryforceful


Hello Smrth,

Regarding your point 4, they had better not show a 'resurrection' drama, because terminal LC is well...terminal as the name suggests. There's NO WAY a terminal patient is recovering without getting a liver transplant done. Also, when a patient is deemed terminal, it also means s/he may not survive the transplant operation itself to risk it. So if they go down that path, the viewers may stop watching/ it could also be a 'catch' to SaMud that the libertine has been faking all along. With these CVs, we may never know what's brewing in their heads🤢

Regarding point 1 &2, yes, she hasn't forgiven but the least she could do is admit to Saras that she's made a 'genuine' error in judgement for she's still unaware of the fact that Pramad has been manipulating Saras. Making Kumud cry like a child to assert her point, however crazy it may sound,(even after Saras quelling her reasons convincingly) is clear character maiming. The number of times she's said, you're my strength, don't leave me and Saras saying "I know our relationship is durable", I find these silly writing especially when they have reached that stage of their relationship where they don't have to keep making mundane one-liners to prove/assure themselves how secure their love is.



Hi tryforceful,

I sincerely hope they let go of PPP. But they are untrustworthy. Especially when they have as juicy a 'twist' as 'Pramd duping all with help of some doctor' chartable.🤢 They have further 'incentive' here. Keeping 'seoeration' doubly secured with two padlocks; PPP and Kusum. I hope some sanity prevails.

Regarding second para, well, perhaps a long break from the actual viewing had refreshed some juvenile appetite here.😲I found it somewhat cute. 😳Consider this... Madam knew, this time Saras is more right than her. First she tried fatuous reasons 'Kusum's marriage'. It did not work. Then she resorted to counter attack, "where were you". Still it did not cut much 'bread'.😆 Then only she flung her last weapon.Tears. Now for a self avowed diva of 'self respect', this must be a terrible 'humiliation'.😈...
But look at the bright side. She would use this only on the one whom she considers hers. A familiar 'spousal' technique when in 'corner and on wrong foot'?!?😲And he obliges. What else could he do?😕 He knows it for a 'manipulation'. Yet chivalry demands 'compliance'. I loved this 'spousal' element, side by side demonstration of her errors. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smrth


Hi tryforceful,

I sincerely hope they let go of PPP. But they are untrustworthy. Especially when they have as juicy a 'twist' as 'Pramd duping all with help of some doctor' chartable.🤢 They have further 'incentive' here. Keeping 'seoeration' doubly secured with two padlocks; PPP and Kusum. I hope some sanity prevails.

Regarding second para, well, perhaps a long break from the actual viewing had refreshed some juvenile appetite here.😲I found it somewhat cute. 😳Consider this... Madam knew, this time Saras is more right than her. First she tried fatuous reasons 'Kusum's marriage'. It did not work. Then she resorted to counter attack, "where were you". Still it did not cut much 'bread'.😆 Then only she flung her last weapon.Tears. Now for a self avowed diva of 'self respect', this must be a terrible 'humiliation'.😈...
But look at the bright side. She would use this only on the one whom she considers hers. A familiar 'spousal' technique when in 'corner and on wrong foot'?!?😲And he obliges. What else could he do?😕 He knows it for a 'manipulation'. Yet chivalry demands 'compliance'. I loved this 'spousal' element, side by side demonstration of her errors. 😆


Well said. It truly had that stamp of ownership from Kumud. But I wish saras also displays that ownership on her soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smrth




Hi tryforceful,

I sincerely hope they let go of PPP. But they are untrustworthy. Especially when they have as juicy a 'twist' as 'Pramd duping all with help of some doctor' chartable.🤢 They have further 'incentive' here. Keeping 'seoeration' doubly secured with two padlocks; PPP and Kusum. I hope some sanity prevails.

Regarding second para, well, perhaps a long break from the actual viewing had refreshed some juvenile appetite here.😲I found it somewhat cute. 😳Consider this... Madam knew, this time Saras is more right than her. First she tried fatuous reasons 'Kusum's marriage'. It did not work. Then she resorted to counter attack, "where were you". Still it did not cut much 'bread'.😆 Then only she flung her last weapon.Tears. Now for a self avowed diva of 'self respect', this must be a terrible 'humiliation'.😈...
But look at the bright side. She would use this only on the one whom she considers hers. A familiar 'spousal' technique when in 'corner and on wrong foot'?!?😲And he obliges. What else could he do?😕 He knows it for a 'manipulation'. Yet chivalry demands 'compliance'. I loved this 'spousal' element, side by side demonstration of her errors. 😆


I'm Shrija, nice to meet you!

Yeah it was cute, I loved the intensity and passion (I watched only that scene from that episode for 20 mins😃). Very well, if Ms amour propre can act like a pedagogue and less as a self sacrificing elder sister on Monday, I'll try to let go of my grouse. 😳 Anyway, I'm using
writers/characters interchangeably and it's not Kumud that's getting solely targeted. The entire Pramd/Kalaika/Kusum +Kumud exposition is getting targeted!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tryforceful


I'm Shrija, nice to meet you!

Yeah it was cute, I loved the intensity and passion (I watched only that scene from that episode for 20 mins😃). Very well, if Ms amour propre can act like a pedagogue and less as a self sacrificing elder sister on Monday, I'll try to let go of my grouse. 😳 Anyway, I'm using
writers/characters interchangeably and it's not Kumud that's getting solely targeted. The entire Pramd/Kalaika/Kusum +Kumud exposition is getting targeted!


Hi shrija,
Nice to hear from you. Instructive also. For your 'grouse' points out some in built faults in the story.😊
But friend, 'pedagogy' has a lucrative advantage of subduing and converting even adamant 'non believer'. Look at the present conversion!😃 It's another matter, its open to misuse too.
Also noticed omission of Mr. Adamant from your target list of various 'virtues'. Doggedness can also be listed as a useful defence virtue against excessive 'manoeuvres' by pedagogue. Will it hold? Let's see. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Excellent great read after a long time ,dosto...thank you'll...this is so missed in CB...👏
teacherji ke liye ek sher 😃

Har baat pe ranjishen,har baat pe hisab
Goyaa Saras ne ishq nahi nokri kar li...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: annete

Excellent great read after a long time ,dosto...thank you'll...this is so missed in CB...👏

teacherji ke liye ek sher😃

Har baat pe ranjishen,har baat pe hisab
Goyaa Saras ne ishq nahi nokri kar li...😆



I agree annete. Once again after a long time there's so much food for thought. So much to read.

the masters are back to steer the discussions.

me super happy

loved the sher. As always.

and again I repeat. You need to make a shayari post on sc
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