Trust-Samud OS (Based on yesterday's episode)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Trust

Kumud revealed to Pramad an his family that Navin Chandra who stays in their house is her ex-fiance Saraswati Chandra.Pramad forgave her and married her again.Later Saras came to know that Pramad was pretending to be nice and punched him hard.Pramad lied to Kumud that sine Saras can't bear her being with Pramad he hurt him.Saras who tried to make Kumud understand the truth got slapped by her.

Pramad who watched Saras-Kumud fight smirked.
Saras was shattered as his lady love Kumud did'nt believe him.She even slapped him.
Kumud came back to her senses.She regretted slapping him.She said in her mind:
I am sorry Saras.


Saras went to the resting room and shed tears.Pramad with an evil smile entered the room clapping his hands.Saras looked at him supressing his anger.
Pramad laughed:You challenged me that you will tell the truth to Kumud.You told her how I am cheating on her.But did she believe you?No...
Pramad laughed like hell.
S:Don't think you won Pramad.I will expose you before Kumud.Truth cannot be hidden for long.
P:Really?But if you approach Kumud again she will slap you again.Se will never believe you.Because she trusts me that much.My drama to be an ideal husband has worked on her very well.
He laughed again.
Suddenly they heard a voice from behind.
"Don't laugh too much Pramad".
Pramad and Saras looked behind.
They were shocked to see Kumud there.
S:Kumud!
K:Pramad...what do you think?You thought I will believe what ever lies you tell against Saras?I know very well that what ever happens Saras cannot lie to me.
Pramad was numb.Saras became emotional.
S:Kumud!
K:My trust in you cannot be broken by anyone.I know that you can only do things for my good.
Saras was touched by her words.
K:Saras,I am sorry.I slapped you.

I did that not because i believed Pramad's false accusation against you.But only to expose Pramad.


Saras smiled:Kumud,I don't feel bad about the slap.But I am happy that at last Pramad got exposed in front of you.
K:Pramad,I pretended to be angry with Saras to see how you will feel about your short lived victory.
Pramad was not willing to accept his defeat.
P:Don't talk too much Kumud.Even though you know my true colour no one else will believe you.Because now for my family I have become a good son and husband and for your family I am a caring son in law who respects their daughter.
K:My family will believe me.No doubt.And your family...
Kumud turned back.
Pramad's parents Buddhdhan and his wife came inside.Pramad was shocked.Saras was surprised.
Buddhdhan slapped Pramad:I feel ashamed to say that you are my son.
His mother wept:I blamed Kumud for fooling us.But after what I saw here I realized that it's not Kumud,it's you who cheated us.And you don't deserve any pardon.You are not my son anymore.
Buddhdhan pushed Pramad out.
B:Get out.Never come back.You don't belong to this house anymore.
The furious Pramad roared:I will take revenge on you all.Kumud...you will never get happiness.
B:Get lost.
Pramad went away.
Kumud's eyes were wet.
Pramad's mother was crying.
Buddhdhan held Kumud's hand:Kumud beta...till now we all did only mistakes by trying to reunite you with Pramad.But now I will correct the mistake.
He held Saras' hand.He kept kumud's palm on his.They were shocked.
B:Saras,only you could protect her.You had to live here as Navin Chandra to protect Kumud.Now onwards you should live here as Saraswati Chandra to protect Kumud's life forever.
Saras and Kumud could'nt believe it.
B:Remember Saras...when Pramad asked you to marry Kumud,you thew the sindoor tin and the sindoor fell on Kumud's forehead only which proves that Kumud is only yours.This is what God wants.
Saras and Kumud shed tears.
S:What are you saying?
B:I am telling the fact.
Buddhdhan's wife shed tears:I will support you this time to unite them.Othewise because of our son Kumud will suffer through out.
B:Kumud,don't think of society or it's odd rules.Listen only to your heart.

Slowly Kumud looked at Saras' teary eyes.Her tear drops kept flowing down.
K:Saras!
S:Kumud!
A deep emotional eye lock...

Kuch na kahein, bas chup rahein


Khamoshiyan hi keh jaaye


Tham jaaye, yeh jahaan
Aur pal bhi, theher jaaye


Rahein na kuch bhi darmiyaan

Mitey yeh saari duriyaan

Milke bhi hain adhuri si,

Yeh daastaan...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice .

BD and SD became mahan father -in-law and mother -in-law

SaMUD TOGETHER ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good one 👍🏼
but it ends here ..want more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab OS! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a lovely story. Pramaad's true colours out and eevryone aware of his plans. Wish something like that happens in the srial but with lots of Samud moments in. And, yes Desai family should realise Saras worth.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is good to read that Kumud has a brain in ur story n is smart enuf to act just to unmask Pramad!!
Nice one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its beautiful .I loved it .U deatiled things so well and so well use of SC title song .Thank u for writing such a beautiful OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well-written👏
amazing one😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww that was lovely
I like how both Pramads parents supported kumad
N fab ending that she n Saras r together
Thanks for pm was fab

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