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Posted: 11 years ago
OSJ,
Superb. Yaar I told myself to stay away from OSs and FFs for lack of time, but heard about yours and read it.
I have some thoughts in mind for their milan. Arshi, Annete and I dreamt too much about what we want to see in Saras n Kumud's marital life. Those are more beautiful than the reality.
Unke milan ke liye ye gaana (from Vivah movie Final scene song)
Samarpan ki belaa aayi re aayi sajanii.
ye darpan hai ya tera man hai
yahan bhi sajan hai wahan bhi sajan hai
man jisse vaara hai tan uspe vaar de
aaj ki raat ke sare adhikar de
no wo ab paraaya no tum ab paraayi sajni
the meanings of the above song suit Saras n Kumud so well.
Another stanza that's part of another song that comes here
mil hi gayi wo khushi jo thi hamare bhaag ki
agni pariksha de ke paayi raat ye suhag ki
chaand sitare apni milan ki denge misaalein
aaj in charagon se chalo ye ?????
sej phoolon se sajaao tumhe haq hai
sang tum sadiyan bitaavo tumhe haq hai
Edited by pasumarthisa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: happychappy

osj ...🤗

You should be writing the romance into SC...😊

I like the way you keep it so simple and true to the spirit of SC... sigh! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Whereas you are pitch-perfect, our real writer-of-the-day got it wrong from both ends, making Kumud speak in Jennifer's "voice", (as Linda pointed out earlier in this thread) and forgetting that Gautam is the actor who can pull off Kartar Singh, not bechaara Saras...😆 Talk of confusing the actor with the character - I thought that's what viewers did, not the writers of a show...😉






Thank u for ur sweet words happy ji. It feels great to get so good responses from u all. I like to write and if it is on SaMud then I can't really stop😳
Coming to KS episode in our life I think we should try to suffer memory loss n forget about it because for me from the writers to our superb leads, all went over the board with their zealousness to show something new. The intention was good but the outcome unfortunately not to the mark. Iss baat pe ek sher ho jaye😆


Pyar
INSAN se karo
uski AADAT se nahin
Rutho
unki BATO se
unse nahin
Bhulo
unki GALTIYO ko
unhe nahin



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ad_Mumbai_Girl

😊 I always call you OSJ but after reading this part, today i have to call you Janu!!!!!
Thanks a million for this.

Am so happy u wrote this. Yaar this is our Saraswatichandra and Kumud.. not wht we saw y'day.

I was imagining our samud throughout the post and was blushing and smiling like a 16 yrs old fangirl.

I super like it dear. 🤗


Thank u aditi.
Sorry I am late to reply to u. I think I missed urs n happy ji 's posts.😳
It is always a pleasure to write on SaMud. I think I have been living with them or them in me for this whole year😳
I was really upset with that confession n most importantly that balle balle stuff n when I am upset I may write things which may not b very pleasant so I skipped my regular post n went to sleep.
N first thing in the morning I jot this down n read proof it later to post.
I am now very worried. What will this madam do to our SaMud? I mean if one gives u a job, won't u at least check what ur predecessor has been doing so that u get a better idea n proceed from there adding ur personal touch of course.
I am hoping that madam knows what she is doing n it was only a deliberate step from her to ease the air n that things will go in the good direction as from next week.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent osj..
It was such a pleasure in reading ur os..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu


Linda u too? Me n my friend Karen were discussing it n she said something hilarious. I will share it with u thru pm.😉
Let's forgive Radhija ji for this slip hoping that she will learn her lesson n if these ppl really visit the forum, they will defo know wat we feel.
Let's hope we distribute laddoos n rasgullahs during the wedding preps rather than tomatoes.
U read? Thank u 😛
Check the others when u bored. Knowing u, I think u will enjoy them.😃


I dint get PM yet. waiting for PM as i enjoy to read hilarious stuffs ,you know that. 😳

soon i will read your all the stories,you are fabulous writer . Now running behind of professors to complete lectures so getting less time.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu


Thank u aditi.
Sorry I am late to reply to u. I think I missed urs n happy ji 's posts.😳
It is always a pleasure to write on SaMud. I think I have been living with them or them in me for this whole year😳
I was really upset with that confession n most importantly that balle balle stuff n when I am upset I may write things which may not b very pleasant so I skipped my regular post n went to sleep.
N first thing in the morning I jot this down n read proof it later to post.
I am now very worried. What will this madam do to our SaMud? I mean if one gives u a job, won't u at least check what ur predecessor has been doing so that u get a better idea n proceed from there adding ur personal touch of course.
I am hoping that madam knows what she is doing n it was only a deliberate step from her to ease the air n that things will go in the good direction as from next week.


Oh nahi re radha madam is not writing for SC anymore.

New team is ved raj and abhijeet sinha. Such frequent change of writers is a big point of concern now.

But good part abt such dynamic changes is tht i can continue to dream of reading your name in there one day... can i
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanku so much my dear for brightening up our weekend 🤗
and now after watching the segments things are looking awsome more scenes to inspire u to comeup with lovely OS's
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: believerintruth

jaanu ji !


awesome ! I came to know today that I am maha late in reading all the nok jhoks written by you !
you have always been awesome and will always remain one ! I loved it ! you made me go red in all your written updates !!!! This one was nevertheless !!!

you know what ? you should be assigned as the official writer for SC, the show deserves you ! we would so want to see all of them happening.

you, shana ji , and arshi ji should gang up, one can write the romantics , one the drama and one the comics ! annete ji can be the shayar of the show !!! there could be many other forum members who have hidden talent within them and are not showing at all !
as for B.N.K ji , could be the fabulous vm maker !!!!

it would be the most best working team !!!!
anki ji , meena ji , and some others who I have currently forgotten to mention are brilliant too ! so awesome as an idea.

thanks thanks thanks for writing this one up, and keep writing and posting regularly. waiting for the next update soon ... 😃


Oh thank u pia ( I think I saw anti addressing u as such😛) can I call u too?
Well I haven't been writing for a long time so no wonder u missed my stories. I will for sure coz I genuinely miss writing for SaMud n after u girls boosting my morale so much I feel like writing one every week end.😛
Oh yes the forum is full if talented members n if CVs take us on board we'll rock SC😉😆
How about u choosing the wardrobe of our leads giving them bright , attractive n lovely clothes??😃
Thanks again n sorry for the late reply. Weekend is kind of multitasking for me so I may b late.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pasumarthisa

OSJ,

Superb. Yaar I told myself to stay away from OSs and FFs for lack of time, but heard about yours and read it.
I have some thoughts in mind for their milan. Arshi, Annete and I dreamt too much about what we want to see in Saras n Kumud's marital life. Those are more beautiful than the reality.
Unke milan ke liye ye gaana (from Vivah movie Final scene song)
Samarpan ki belaa aayi re aayi sajanii.
ye darpan hai ya tera man hai
yahan bhi sajan hai wahan bhi sajan hai
man jisse vaara hai tan uspe vaar de
aaj ki raat ke sare adhikar de
no wo ab paraaya no tum ab paraayi sajni
the meanings of the above song suit Saras n Kumud so well.
Another stanza that's part of another song that comes here
mil hi gayi wo khushi jo thi hamare bhaag ki
agni pariksha de ke paayi raat ye suhag ki
chaand sitare apni milan ki denge misaalein
aaj in charagon se chalo ye ?????
sej phoolon se sajaao tumhe haq hai
sang tum sadiyan bitaavo tumhe haq hai



Thank u Santhi for ur time. It means a lot that people read my work and give me their feedback. N if they love it wat more can I ask for.
I love the movie vivah. I am not remembering the final song but I will check it out. But the lyrics as u say r simply beautiful.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jaanu ji 🤗 ., u are the Queen of romance in writing romantic scenes..😳
Busy with my studies these days.,but i couldn't resist myself from commenting on ur OS..
Now dat samud's marriage is on cards.,i expect more n more from u..😃

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