Nokjhok/Love Series Pg 26 OS:The Chocolaty Scene Reloaded!! - Page 22

u knw the Tum Ko song sung by Kavitha Krishnamoorthy frm the film Rockstar whose music is SAME as "Tum Ho" sung by Mohit Chauhan?if i ws in place of Kumud,i wud hv used tht song to express my love for Saras..😆😉...

Tum ko paa hi liya
Maine yoon
Jaise main hoon
Ehsaas tera
Paas main tere hoon

Jahaan mein
Jahaan pe bhi
Seene se laga le
Main toh hui ab tere hawaale
Bandishe naa rahi Koi Baaki Tum Ko

Tum ko paa hi liya
Paa hi liya
Maine yoon
Jaise main hoon ehsaas tera
Paas main tere hoon

Kabhi tu..
Kahin pe bhi ab na dhoondna mujhe
Main har jagah miloongi ab tujhe

Tum ko paa hi liya
Paa hi liya Maine yoon
Tu jaane ya main jaanoon ye
Saath main tere hoon

Jaaanu.. .🤗!!!!

Originally posted by: dazzzling

Thank you for updating. You are a rock star.
I missed your writings. This one is too heavenly to be true. I love it and it is amazing that you have been to pull it with brio without a kiss 😳
Now I would like to ask you something. Why do you like to write from kumud's point of view? I actually like this style and everytime you impress me a lot.
My favorite will always be the diary waala OS which was simply outstanding and so different.
Great weekend
😃

Originally posted by: annete

I couldnt find an appropriate urdu one but here is an English Shayari for your beautiful post Jaanu

I Found you

Love can be ,

found in the warmth of a kiss,in a touch

or a lingering embrace?

Love can be,

found in a sweet, tender glance or a

smile that lights up the face?

Love can be,

found in words spoken softly , in

comfortable silence too?

Love can be,

found in any number of ways?

and I Found Love ,

when?...

I FOUND YOU

Originally posted by: Arshics

Janu, isko padhte padhte Meri saansain ruk gayee

Kash yeh episode aap ne likha hota

Itne super romantic !

Main toh gayee kaam se

i loved it jannu🤗 just forgot click the button 😳...now that LN and guman are coming old days r gonna be back again ...and amidst all marriage rituals and tana from guman we will need lot of ur os to enjoy these dobos togetherness

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Arshi u r too cute!!

Keep ur sansain going my friend, you need to read my SaMud SR too before u go completely Kaam se. 😳😆

I am now really happy for writing this. I was too annoyed yesterday n I was like- why am I wasting my time watching this!!

N now I know why. It is more to come on the forum n b with u all n share our views.😊

Thank u 😃

if u r talking of writing sr .that means shaadi pakka hogi...lol now i really have to read between lines since u have stopped giving me clues.


but omi do add some drama too...u can add drama twist just as some flashback or in few lines stating the impact...i know it becomes lengthy to add drama and romance together ...but i want it one from u that way please ...

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

i loved it jannu🤗 just forgot click the button 😳...now that LN and guman are coming old days r gonna be back again ...and amidst all marriage rituals and tana from guman we will need lot of ur os to enjoy these dobos togetherness

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

if u r talking of writing sr .that means shaadi pakka hogi...lol now i really have to read between lines since u have stopped giving me clues.


but omi do add some drama too...u can add drama twist just as some flashback or in few lines stating the impact...i know it becomes lengthy to add drama and romance together ...but i want it one from u that way please ...