Nokjhok/Love Series Pg 26 OS:The Chocolaty Scene Reloaded!!

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Arshics
Janu,

Kya baat hai! My Sunday is made. Crackling OS from you!

I am so glad that we got Saras's birthday before Pramaad's.

At least here, if not in the show.

He had given her a dream birthday, it's only fair that she should do this for him too

Lovely romantic beautiful

Full marks for reminding us of the soft and sweet days of Samud romance which were sadly too few!

Thank u ji for the full marks. I deviated from my usual romance Wallace stories to write something just for our Saras with even kumud in the background.

I think he truly deserves this n besides as u said at least we r celebrating his birthday before pramad's

Happy u liked it😊

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: rainlover03
Beautiful celebrations for Saras's birthday!!
written so perfectly... it was a good sunday suprise...
brought back the lovely samud moments that we all miss!!
Thamk you sooo much for sharing this🤗
would love to read more of such light and happy moments!!

Thank u RL for ur sweet comments.

It means a lot.

Sure I will write more.😃

See u

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: dasan.divya
wooowww OS QUEEN JAANU DHEEDHI
awesome awesome awesome...
zor dhar thaliyaan...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SARAS
i was soo sad about upcomming prammy birthday celebration but now i'm super happy coz we celebrated saras's birthday b4 prammy yaaayyy
thank u jaanu dheeedhi...

I know Divya. We all had like a jealousy pang realizing that Pramad will celebrate his birthday😳 I wrote this OS with ths in mind😆

U r welcome. I shud b thanking u for reading n liking it. 🤗

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: kittenlover
Very Beautiful OS. Nicely pen down Jaanu ! 😛
Saras , the birthday boy's gift was nice as expected... (We dont have a chance to see that in reel. So i just imagined it, And satisfied ! )
I felt saras and sunny were the heroes ! Kumud had a little role here... But
Saras and sunny's convo , is really superb !Bonding the friendship... You are exactly sketching the character, this would have been told by saras and Sunny if it was in reel.
very Nice Jaanu , I really loved it :)

You are right kitty. This OS was more on bromance than romance😉 that was one deliberate action from me. I wanted to dedicate the OS to our hero with all other characters as supporting cast😆

Thanks for reading😊

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: kiranpreethee
At least our hero has been spoilt for once and his Kumud behaved like a girl in love. I like your kumud better compared to what we are getting on TV. Thank you for giving us Saras' birthday.

U r welcome my friend😃 It was a pleasure writing this.

The kumud is the one I have loved in the beginning of the show. Can't say that I can relate to her now but I I still love her n I am hoping to see SaMud again. Till then I'll just imagine them as we loved them.

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: beutifulppl
OSJ ...

Lovely OS ... A nice Birthday surprise ... the party ...

and the best part,the Birthday gift at the end ...😊

Thanks !!

Thanks beautiful 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

It's a nice point for you to catch "Saras not celebrating his B day yet.??"

Well , the OSJ delivered quiet a COMIC and CLEAN 😉 one dis time..!
Well done,.! 👏

Continue it.. not weekly but at least once in three weeks or so..

Your fellow GMTA..! 😆 😃

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: -Pro-
It's a nice point for you to catch "Saras not celebrating his B day yet.??"

Well , the OSJ delivered quiet a COMIC and CLEAN 😉 one dis time..!
Well done,.! 👏

Continue it.. not weekly but at least once in three weeks or so..

Your fellow GMTA..! 😆 😃

Yes this one is clean n decent I admit. I didn't want to write romantic encounters after wat we r being served these days.

Sure I will write. This is my favorite pastime n I can't keep away from writing.

Thanks buddy

See u

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Sorry for being this late, jaanu 😭
Things aren't well on my end 😭

Thank god here Kumud isn't 🤬 here, and I love Saras here as usual!
Nicely written, and I love the way you have used all the characters 👍🏼

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: hunnybunch
Sorry for being this late, jaanu 😭
Things aren't well on my end 😭

Thank god here Kumud isn't 🤬 here, and I love Saras here as usual!
Nicely written, and I love the way you have used all the characters 👍🏼

Hi Zu🤗 oh I am sorry to hear that. I hope all is well soon.

Thanks for still finding time to read n comment.

This one is just a light story to relieve us from the emotional atyachaar we r bearing in the SC