Nokjhok/Love Series Pg 26 OS:The Chocolaty Scene Reloaded!!

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

it was a beautiful romantic OS.Loved d last part a lot.Wish u continued.

they looked at each other as she clutched at his shirt ... finally she spoke up:

- You promised never to let me break Saras. But I am broken...I am lost...and...you are going away again...

Tightening his grip on her hand instead, he said:

- I am not going anywhere Kumud. We did a very big mistake but I will set things right. I will never let u break, I promise.

Plz try 2 complete ur ss

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Arshics

@Arshics

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awesome Jaanu, you paint a picture with your words.

I could see them , on a dark lonely night, feel their pain and agony and sense the passion simmering below the surface!

👏

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: -Pro-
Their Big mistake is still let to be out.. gotta see what that's gonna bring up in the story..
Thanks for the PM..
The twist in the actual tale.. and there's gonna be a LOVE war b/w Saras and Pramaad.. that's what is exciting me now .! Ooohh.. !

Yes the spoilers r very tempting n interesting. Hoe they do not let us down. I so want to see this love war!!

Thanks for ur time buddy.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: kittenlover
Jaanu... 😛
Beautiful as always...I have read in the Os' contest itself. I am fed up with the current track of SC, reading cute OS like this give me more pleasure than watching SC. :) Easy to visualize everything 😊.... beautifully penned down. You have got a good talent jaanu... keep it up !

P.S : , Couldnt reply ,I was little busy today. :(

Thank u for ur nice words kitty. I am late too for replying to u all. Weekend is a bit tight for me too.

Have hope dear. I think things will go to the right direction soon. I personally is seeing a good improvement especially in SaMud scenes so let's hope for the best.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Arshics
Awesome Jaanu, you paint a picture with your words.
I could see them , on a dark lonely night, feel their pain and agony and sense the passion simmering below the surface!

👏

Thank u critic ji!!😳

It feels good when u guys tell me that u can actually visualize the scene.

My objective is met coz that's wat I expect when I write that my SaMud still preserve their character trait as those in the show but still r more lively n less robotic n zombie type like they tend to show.

Thanks🤗

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.
Awww, beautiful one :)

Thanks DD😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
it was a beautiful romantic OS.Loved d last part a lot.Wish u continued.

they looked at each other as she clutched at his shirt ... finally she spoke up:
- You promised never to let me break Saras. But I am broken...I am lost...and...you are going away again...
Tightening his grip on her hand instead, he said:
- I am not going anywhere Kumud. We did a very big mistake but I will set things right. I will never let u break, I promise.

Plz try 2 complete ur ss

Thank u dear.

It's only who got me to post this coz I read the post encouraging us not to stop writing.

I can't promise u about SS. I dunno if I have it in me to write a full story with chapters😳

But I will try.

Thanks again

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: dazzzling
😭 😭 tears of joy because you have updated. I have click like . I know I will like it beforehand but I am reserving. Will read and edit 😛

Unres

This is purely lovely and heart touching. You put life and love in your stories and make us feel whatever the protagonists are living.
I had a lump in my throat after reading this because to be honest I thought you had come up with a nokjhok naughty OS n even the title suggested it in a way but I was completely floored by it.
I realize now that I seriously miss your writings.
Never leave SaMud in your imagination is what I will sincerely ask you.
Thank you a lot for this.

Thank u😭 khooshi ki ansoo.

If u give such feedback I will write every day.

Thank u buddy for ur support!!