OS: I am sorry!!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Anki_KJSG
Sweet,cute n beautiful... Loved every moment.. keep writing..

Thanks!! Most of u said it is sweet n cute. I think I will give a hot one a try now.
Well I will try. 😳 😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: saru143
loved it om..😳.kya likha tune.👏.i can imagine that scene just by reading this..🤗

U can?? 😊 great na! I think as Toni told me the other day my imagining powers is on a high these days after a drool worthy week
Thanks 😃

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sarada

@Saru...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

U can?? 😊 great na! I think as Toni told me the other day my imagining powers is on a high these days after a drool worthy week
Thanks 😃

ofcourse i can isliye to bola maine.😆😆 keep writing..😳😳

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archanamanav

@archanamanav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Well sunny asks how was this date??..and saras says shut up idiot!..and u r asking us how is this date?..I say very nice and romantic!..nicely written as always!.

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asph

@asph

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

heyy ur awesome..love how you write on the track and things we really want to see happening..
aww this was lovely..love your pace and description..nothings over done..so easy to visualize!!
thanx..pm me please..when u post next

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Thank u guys for ur encouragement. I wud like to answe each of u personally but got to rush. But I clicked like which means i do read n it made me happy. See u *hugs* to all of u

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

This was ADORABLE!

I Loved these lines!

Saras closes his bedroom door, sighed n turns around grinning like a 5 year old boy who has found his long lost favourite toy to see a pair of bright laughing eyes on a silly face grinning back at him.

- Sunny!! U scared me!!

- How was the date?

Throwing a pillow on his best friend and turning off the light to hide his smile, Saras exclaims sternly:

- Shut up you idiot!!

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

very nice one shot ...well written

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

@ dancing diva

Thanks dear. I am sorry is a very special OS for me.
Me too loved the ending. Saras n Sunny r so entertaining especially when the latter pulls Saras' leg. I had to add him in the story!! 😆