New FF: 'Kaisa Ye Tera Ishq Hei'(part4)(page4) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi...
After writing such an awesome part u r asking about his continuance ...
hey surely continue it... asap...
& that other receptionist is KUMUd na...
She left him may be she is suffering from Disease ...

Will be waiting for ur next part...
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Loved it please update some.
And please add me to your pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you guys for encouraging me...😃
I'll surely continue...
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wow its nice plz do continue & plz plz plz pm me wen u do😃
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"Ek Ajnabi Hasina Se..."
He is sitting in the plane; the plane is just ready to departure. Since he boarded in the plane he becomes the center attraction of all. Saras is checking his presentation for the last time. An air-hostess comes with a tray full of magazines, he took a magazine & going to open that but his eyes stuck to the cover-page. In the cover-page a beautiful model is posing with an umbrella in the rain, seeing that picture Saras's heart feels a pain, an unspoken grief, sadness, his eyes are burning in pain, he hates her, he hates her from the core of his heart, but yet he can't forget her. Kumud conjoined with him by breathe. He close his eyes, he remembers his last line which she told him when she left him, that day she said---"I'm sorry Saras...for everything...find someone soon...fall in love...get married...move on please...!!"---Saras opens his eyes, since that day he wants to forget her, but he can't, that day when he first met her, in a rainy day----

MEMORY:
Today is not a wonderful day; it has two reasons, first of all since morning it was raining very badly & with that today Saras is going to join his father's business. He is sitting in the car, the car is moving very slowly; the main road is almost blocked,---"such an annoying thing traffic-jam is..."---Saras says this to himself. Since his childhood he hates rain don't know why,but whenever he sees raining he feels an irritation, the watery road & damp weather...yucky!!Actually in the morning it was drizzle rain so he thought may be the rain stopped after sometime, but time passed by & the rain become more & more powerful, Saras is become angry at himself, because today morning when his father told him---
"Beta aaj office ka pehla din hei tumhe jana bhi chahiye tha lekin weather bahot kharab hei...toh isliye mei tumhe force toh nehi karunga... par ho sake toh aa jana ekbaar...mujhe toh vaise bhi jana padega..."---Saras knows that his father never wants that his son feels any kind of irritation, so he said that, but Saras also knows the day is very crucial for him as well as for his father also, so that time he replied nothing but decided to go in his father's office. "But it is so much disgusting...accha hota agar mei aaj ata hi nahi..."---he says this to himself, he feels boredom, he look at his watch, the time shows 10:30, the jam was moved but the car is moving very slowly because of the rain, Saras looking at outside, there is still raining, he shake his head in disgust, he was too much late for the office, though his father his very frank with him & give him all types of freedom, but he hates two things, one is lack of punctuality & second one is to tell a lie. "Mei aaj itna important day par itna late ho gaya...ab pata nehi dad kya kahenge..."---suddenly the car stopped with a rash break, he collided with the front seat, his bags & all files falls down, "are dekh ke chalao...itna jor se koi break marta hei... bewakoof..."---he shouts from the back, while rubbing his arms, "Saab...vo samne ek billi aa gayi thi"---he says timidly, "Tum aur tumhara ye superstitions...ab chalo please...mei pehle se hi bahot late hu ab aur late nehi hona chahta hu..."---he says while arranging all his files, the driver spins the car's key to start the car but it doesn't work, he again tries but he fails to start the car, "Ab kya hua..."---he asks the driver, the driver was still trying to start the car, "Saab...lagta hei paani ke vajah se engine jam ho gaya..."---he replies with mumbling, "Oh God...abhi hona tha ye..."---he says, he was now completely exhausted, the weather & the condition of the car made him irritated. "Tum ek kaam karo car ko toe karva lo aur mechanic ke pass le ke jao...aur thik ho jane ke baad ghar chale jana..."---he instructed the driver & coming out from the car, the driver also immediately coming out with an umbrella, but Saras stops him, "lekin saab aap kaise jayenge..."---he asks, looking at his guileless facial expression he smiles & says---"mera fikar mat karo... mei...mei bus se chala jayunga..."---to hear his word the driver says in a fearful voice---"ap bus se jayenge...agar malik ko pata chalega toh meri naukri chali jayegi..."---he is about to cry, Saras place his hands on his shoulders & says---"Kuch nehi hoga...is mei tumhara koi galati nehi hei... agar kuch problem hua toh dad se baat mei karunga...aur ye lo..."---he give him some money & says---"jao...aur kuch kha lena...abhi agar aur barish mei khade rahoge toh bimar padh jaoge..."---he smiles & left.The driver still standing with that money in his hand. he thinks---"ajeeb hei ye saab...inko samaj pana na mumkin hei...kabhi kabhi itna patthar dil aur kabhi kabhi..."---he smiles & calls the toe service number.

When Saras reach the bus-stop, he was completely drenched, the bus-stop is full of crowd & the worst thing is today bus is also late. The day has all the characteristics to be a romantic day, with this rain, mild breeze, but Saras is not in the state of romance, he now feeling nervousness. He repeatedly watches his hand-watch, but there was no sign of bus, he is looking here & there, suddenly his eyes stuck to a sight.There is a girl standing, though Saras can see only her back-side only, the girl is try to close her umbrella, which may be clogged & the girl can't close it.Saras is looking at her, from her hairs small rain-drops are failing, her untied hairs are flowing in the wild breeze, her wet "Dupatta"stuck to her perfect figure, Saras is attracted to her like a magnet, it is true that till today he never feels such attraction in girls, he always maintain a healthy distance with them, but today don't know why he can't control himself, he feels an unknown likeliness in her, many times he tries to ignores that feelings but he can't do so, the girl is standing only a little distance, Saras trying to see her but as the place is full of crowd he can't see her.He is feeling hesitation to go & help her, he turns to the other side, trying to ignore her aging, but he fails, at last he keeps his all hesitation aside & come to her, says---
-May I help you??
But the girl give him no reply, Saras feels insulted he thought---"are ajeeb ladki hei...mei khud aya madat karne ke liye aur ye hei ki..."
He clear his throat & says twice-
-Excuse me Mam, May I help you?
The girl turns back to her,
With that Saras feels moon has broke out from the clouds, her hairs were spread over her face it was as if night has descended in day time, Saras is seeing into her eyes...her wet face, so natural, He was engrossing in herself, her expressions, her eye's glance, all are enhanced his likenesses, the girl says---
-No...I can!!---Saras startled, sudden hearing her voice, her voice seems like many pearls are falling, this messy atmosphere suddenly become a romantic one, this rain drops become enjoyable to him, this day become a perfect day, a day which never come before, the sound of rain seems the sound of an anklet.
He come back to her senses,
-ap mujhe bol sakti hei...mei bahot der se dekh raha hu ki ap ise band karne ki koushis kar rahi hei...lekin ho nehi raha hei...----Saras says with a cute smile.
-Excuse me, ap itne der se mujhe kyun dekh rahe the??----she ask frown at Saras, he becomes more irritated to see her angry.
-Nahi...matlab...---he is mumbling, finding such a reason to saw her,
-Dekhiye ye saab tricks na mujhe acchi tarah se pata hei...---she says with confidence, pointing at Saras she again says---"ap iske baad puchenge mera naam kya hei...phir mei kaha rehti hu...line mar rahe ho...? tum jante bhi ho mere bare mei?tum jaise ladko ke liye na..."She can't complete his words because Saras stops him,
-Hello...ap pagal toh nahi hei??mujhe ap mei koi interest nehi hei...---Saras again stopped by the girl,
-Accha...tumhe interest nehi hei phir bhi tum mujhe dekh rahe the? ye saab na kisi aur ladki ke saath jake karna..."---she says & completely ignores him, "Ap mujhe galad samaj rahi hei...dekhiye...ap jaisa soch rahi hei vaisa nehi hei..."---Saras says shook his head, but the girl not stopped, she is talking & talking...
Saras is become irritated, he meets many girls in his life, but he never seen such a talkative & annoying girl, He is controlling his anger, first of all the weather was so bad, & he standing there for the half-an-hour & the most important thing is he wants to help the girl but the girl is so much uncultured, Saras thought---
"Kitni battamiz ladki hei...apne aap ko kya samajti hei...mei khud madat karne ke liye aya hu...aur ye hei ki bole ja rahi hei..."
"Hello...!!"---the girl waving her hands in-front of his eyes, He come to senses---"please...ap mujhe..."----Saras once again tries to says something, one last try to convince her, the girl frown at him---"toh ap hi..."---the girl wants to ask something, but disrupted by a voice, which is coming from the road, from a boy who is sitting in a bike, almost drenched, wearing a white kurta , the boy says---
-Are tum yahaan vig kyun rahi ho?? chalo mere saath...mei ghar drop kar deta hu..."
Saras is looking at the boy & also at the girl, to seeing him her expressions suddenly changed, her eyes become dull, Saras become surprised to see her transformation, she gave him no chance to talk, looking at him angrily, she left.Saras wants to say something, but she already come closer to that bike-guy, the boy asked the girl something, the girl nodded silently.After that she sits in the back-seat, & left.He was looking at them until & unless they become blurry, Saras thinks---
"Ufff...is ladki ki vajah se mei pagal ho jayunga...bol bol ke thaka diya...ajeeb pagal ladki hei...irritating...i wish ki is se phir kabhi milna na pade..."---his thinks disrupted by a bus's sound, he board in the bus, & fortunately get a seat beside the window, the bus was almost full but with that a soft tune fill the bus's atmosphere, but he can't stop thinking about that girl, before sometimes he feels irritated to saw her, but now he is thinking about her, the song which may be come from the radio make him compelled to think about her...!!

so this was part 2...do comment and if you don't like anything or want to suggest something then feel free ...plz do comment... and tell me how do you find the story...plz ignore and forgive any mistakes in grammar and spelling ...Thank you...!!😊
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part...
loved it...

cony=tinue soon... waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was awesome. Hope you update soon.
And thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow plz plz do continue & who is tht boy plz conti fast & dont 4get 2 pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it...The boy..maybe her brother? eh well cant wait to read more...update soon.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Tere Bin Nahi Jeena..."
When Saras reach his father's office he was exhausted & completely wet. Standing in-front of the office he again feels a bit of nervousness. He shrugs his shoulder & come in-side of the office. "Vyas Industries" one of the finest industry in Mussoorie. Saras's father Mr. Lakshminandan Vyas's only dream is to see his only child as a top industrialist not even in India, in abroad also. In Saras's childhood everyday he took him to the near play-ground, & every-day he gradually taught him how to lead an honorable life, how to become a good man, today is that day when Saras stepped into this business world.
"May I come in Sir...??"---Lakshminandan's thought disrupted hearing this voice, he look at the door, there is Reshmi standing; who is his secretary.
"Oh...Reshmi...come in...sari taiyariyaan ho gayi hai??"---he ask closes his laptop.
"Yes sir...its all done..."---she says smilingly.
"Ok...you may go..."---Lakshminandan smiles, Reshmi left.

Lakshminandan gets up from his chair & stand in-front of the big window of his chamber, the glass is blurry due to rain; he wipe the glass with his palm, from the 15th floor the lonely road looking foggy, it reminding him of his own life. One day when he stood there, in the starting point of that road.That day no one was with him except his two companions; eyes full of dreams & a big hope. Today that journey comes to an end; a man's life is similar to a circle, man has to quit his place for new one, like that today he going to make his son as MD of his company; at last he ends his journey, his struggle.
"Dad...!!"---Lakshminandan turns back hearing Saras's voice, his lips become wide.
"Come...son..."---he says & come to sit in his chair. "kya baat hai Saras mei kab se tumhara wait kar raha hu"---Lakshminandan says removing his spectacles.
"Dad...vo barish ke vajah se..."---his memory flashed again with that unknown girl's picture, the glimpses of her beautiful face , her stunned expressions with astonishing eyes, her angry face make her even more beautiful, but at the next moment remembering her rough behavior he felt anger, how could she talk with him like that?? he is "The Saraswatichandra Vyas" & she is nothing but a silly-fool low standard girl, she had not minimum sense to respect people, the way she refused to took his help is freaking insulting...more than irritating.
"Saras...kya hua?? kya soch rahe ho??"----Lakshminandan asked him,
"Nothing dad...mei bas soch raha tha ap mujhe MD banana chahte hai... kya mei...??"---he stops without completing his word. Lakshminandan look at his son's face, which is covers with doubtfulness. He hold Saras's hand, "Dekho beta...life mei kuch bhi karo...lekin ye doubt ko kabhi pamper mat karna...kabhi galati bhi karo toh vo bhi confidence ke saath"
"Dad...aap bhi na..."----Saras smiles, Lakshminandan laughs out loud.
"Nahi beta...doubt hamare zindegi ko kashmakash mei dal dete hai...aur tab sahi aur galad ka farak karna mushkil ho jata hai..."---he stops, then he took a long breathe, "Lekin tumpar mera poora bharosa hai..."---Lakshminandan smiles. Saras get up from his chair & hug his father, Lakshminandan patted his back.

"Sir...Sir..."---Saras opens his eyes hearing a female voice. At first he can't understand what is going on, in-front of him there is an air-hostess standing with a expressionless face.
"Yes...any problem??"----Saras asks, "No sir...please tied-up your seat-belt, we are going to land..."---Saras nodded, she left. Whenever he look at them he finds nothing but false, fake, made-up expressions. Their smiles, behavior, all are very much fake, which can give a feel-good feelings, but never touch anybody's soul. Saras never find any attraction in them. He tied the seat-belt & at that moment his phone beeps, there is an msg from Rahul.
"Welcome to India!!:)"
He smiles to see his msg, he don't know which kind of reaction he will get from his family-member, especially from his mother.He was happy to see a positive response from Rahul...at least from Rahul; he has not that courage to face his mother without Kumud, but he have to do this...he heaves a sigh.

After the plane land in the airport, Saras stepped in India's land after 7 years. He come out of the airport; standing in the taxi-stand he unmindfully looks at the sky, where black clouds are gathering, looking at the sky he thinks about his past. The first day when he met her, that day the sky also covers with black clouds, & with that first glimpse of her Saras till now obsessed with her. Since that day he meet many other girls but an absence always haunts him,
"Sahaab...kaha jana hai??"---Driver's rough voice disrupted his thought Saras gives him the address & sits in the back-seat, the taxi starts & with that the rain also starts, he closed the window, the car stops in a signal, Saras's eyes stuck in the bus-stop, there a boy standing hugging a girl, they are trying to hide themselves from rain-drops, it seems that they forget to bring umbrella with them.
"Sahaab...radio chalau??"----hearing driver's question Saras come back to his present, "Haan..."---he says to avoid the sultry atmosphere of the taxi, his eyes becomes blur, he keeps his eyes down, wipe his tears. In radio there is a show going on based on love & relationship; Saras don't listen to the show, his concentration based on Kumud.

When Kumud left him, since that day Saras never remember her nor even trying to do so, but still now whenever he sees something related to their past memories he feels an unspoken irritation, anger, hatred, perturbation...he don't whose fault it was or who was the victim, why he fall in love, why his flowered path become dusty, why his dreams becomes shattered----he don't know, even he don't want to find her, she left him without any reason, from that day till today he tried many times to forget her, but Kumud is lives in his breathe, his soul.
Saras close his eyes, one question he uttered after 7 years---
"Kumud...where are u??"


So thats the end of part 3 hope you guys enjoyed it...do comment.. And yes i haven't introduced the character "Rahul" & Saras's sister, mom Kumud & her family... i have given their very short character sketches but in the story they have not been introduced yet..

those who want me to pm them the next updates of this ff kindly send me a buddy request and i will surely pm them...criticism and suggestions are welcomed...do comment and hit the like button...thank you...next update will take some time may be two or three days..:)
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago

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