New FF: 'Kaisa Ye Tera Ishq Hei'(part4)(page4)

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi friends . . . I'm Nira; from the last few days i'm reading various FF on "Saras" & "Kumud" , written by many of the great writers. So, i thought of starting my own FF, before it i was wrote FF for "Kitni Mohabbat Hei" forum , but this is for the first time i'm writting for "Samud", so pls ignore all my mistakes grammatical errors etc...plz comment to tell me if i should continue...!!
Check the next post for introduction . . .!!

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

What is love?? What kind of feelings it is?? when should we define a story as "LOVE"story??---ok, I'll give you the answer, according to me, "LOVE"is a true feeling , a attraction between two persons, it is not necessary that when you fallen in love it has to be a romantic backdrops like any romantic movies. "LOVE" can't be defined only be red rose, butterflies etc,etc, typical romantic things. "LOVE"is more than a rough ground of reality than any dream, "Love"is a sweet bitter joy, sorrow, pain a bond of all mortal characteristics. Without feels pain "LOVE" can't be complete , can't be pure.
A tale of true love ennobles the spirit, reinforces constancy & enhances life's good, qualities, & this is because "LOVE"is so blessed a thing that unless "LOVE" instruct people, no one has worthy or honour, How tragic! then that all but a few are doomed to lose "LOVE"'s benefits because they will not bear its sorrow.

Oops!!!! sorry . . . i'm not going to teach you what is "LOVE" or "LOVE"'s characteristics. So, lets introduced with the characters. . .

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

Characters Introduction

Saraswatichandra Vyas:
He is 23 yrs old, only child of Mr. Lakshminandan Vyas, he completed his studies in London, & after doing that he he is come back to India to join his father's business, he is a straight-forward person & don't like too much girlish company, he never finds such attraction for them, but he wants someone's company, since his childhood he finds a girl, his "Fairy of Dream"; he always dreaming of that girl, sometimes he think that may be he will find her, but till now he is searching. He lives with his Dad, Mom & Younger Sister Ritu, His childhood friend Sunny also lives with them.He is very close to his father, he loves his family a lot.He is very kind at heart, introvert, good looking, he is least bother of making girl-friends & all this stuff!!

Kumud Desai:
She is 20 yrs old girl, & lives in Mussoorie, she lives with her dad, mom , elder brother & two little sister. She is caring, loving, chirpy, sometimes little childish & sometimes too mature. She don't like boys, she believes that "Boys are the main problem of the society". She don't believe in love. She loves her family very much, she is very realistic.She spends her time with her family.

Other Characters:

Vyas Family:

Lakshminandan Vyas (Father Of Saras)

Aradhana Vyas ( Wife Of Lakshminandan)

Ritu Vyas (Sister Of Saras)

Sunny Sing (Childhood Friend Of Saras)

Desai Family:

Vidyachatur Desai (Father Of Kumud)

Savitri Desai (Mother Of Kumud)

Kusum Desai (Younger Sister Of Kumud)

Komal Desai (Younger Sister Of Kumud)

Goutam Desai (Elder Brother Of Kumud)

I have given the short character sketches of the main characters and the rest i will give as the story proceeds...plz do comment and tell whether i should continue it or not...

A story of two persons with two different worlds, two different thinkings...how will they meet, will they ever find true love, will the love of each other can change their lives and their life style... Lets see what will happen when their worlds will collide in this beautiful and different love story "KAISA YE TERA ISHQ HEI"...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nyc... Plzzz continue soon... Nd plzzz be kind enuff to send Me Pms!!! :)

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HeBarun21
Nyc... Plzzz continue soon... Nd plzzz be kind enuff to send Me Pms!!! :)

yes i'll send you!!😊

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...ChammakChallo...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey
Sounds Interesting plz do cont & send me pms

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

"Kuch Dard..."

Its time to nightfall, the white building looks even more whiter because of snow-fall, the whole city is look like a white carpet excepts the small lights which is used to decorate the building make it more beautiful which is a famous 5 star hotel situated in New-York. Today is a special day for this hotel; it seems the sea of people covers the hotel-yard, some OV vans, camera mans are waiting for that very special person for whom the programme organized by the hotel.
Time pass by, patience levels are also become low by the passing time; suddenly a black Mercedes come & stop in-front of the hotel, with that the cameras are flashing to capture that personality who is getting down from the car. The man wearing a black-suit which is make him handsome & his great appearance, dignity & a killer smile sprinkle with confidence make him more adorable. Today he tied up with an international company.
"Sir, just one question"--- a young reporter ask him. he stops. He knew that which question she will ask him. He removes his shades & turns back, go in-front of that reporter.
"Sir...where is Miss Kumud...??---the lady ask, he looking at the ground, hearing this name after 7 yrs, his heart become drenched, he raises his face, frown at the reporter & says---
"Who is she??? I don't know her..."---he wore his shades again & left without looking anyone & answering any question.He hears a humming of people behind him but he ignores it. He comes straight to the conference room,where people waiting for him eagerly.For not only he is a business man & today he tied up with that company, basically his great personality & mysterious past attract the world. To see him entering from the large door people are stand up & greet him with claps.
After that programme, he comes straight to the reception,where two receptionists are standing,without any fake smile & fake attitude he comes to the counter,
"Excuse me...!!"---he says, one of them is writing something in her register book, suddenly seeing a very handsome man in-front of her, she becomes tensed, she mumbling & says---
"Yes..."---she stand up, arranging her hairs.
"Can you tell me...Mr.Sunny Singh..."---he says ignoring her, without completing him, she says---
"Yes sir...he is in 4th floor room no. 405"
"Thanks..."---he says & come towards the lift.
In the reception:
The receptionist again starts writing in the register book;the other girl is working in computer.From sometime she stealthily looks at him. Now she can't resist her curiosity. She ask another girl---
"Who is he..."---the other girl raise her face from the register book, she put her pen in the table & get up from the chair. She was very excited hearing this question as well as surprised.
"You don't know him na??"---the other girl shook her head.
"Tum yahaan nayi ho na isliye shayed nehi pehchanti ho use...he is Mr.Saraswatichandra Vyas, New-York ka sabse handsome & well-known business tycoon, tumhe pata nehi ladkiyaan iske liye kis had tak pagal hei...par..."
"Par..."---she ask leaning on the table.
"Par ye hei ki kisi aur ladki ki taraf dekhta hi nehi hei...kaisa ajeeb insaan hei...itna reserved hei...aur hei toh ye bahot bada businessman, hamesha profit hi milta hei ise lekin shayed zindegi ki business mei isko hamesha loss hi milta hei...pata hei iske life mei kuch bahot bada tragedy hua hei...
"Tragedy...??"---she ask, frown at her.
"Suna hei iski life mei koi ladki thi...naam...kya naam tha uski..."---she tries to remember with close eyes,after a minute she opens her eyes & says---
"haan...yaad aya...Kumud...Desai i think...lekin pata nehi un dono ke beech kuch ho gaya tha...aur vo dono alag ho gaye the...meine news-channel mei bahot baar dekha hei...7 saal ho chuka hei lekin vo Kumud ki koi khabar nehi hei...vo kaha hei...kaisi hei...kisiko kuch bhi nehi pata...vo jaise vanish ho gayi hei..."---she stops to take breathe. The other girl listening to her, she is thinking about Saras, who is a succesful businessman but loses his lady love. She doesn't want to show him sympathy & who is she...but still she become unmindful.
"Chodo hume kya...bade bade logon ki badi badi batein...hey tum zara counter sambhal lo mei 2 min mei ayi..."---she smiles & left.
The another receptionist still looking at the lift; which is just closed, from the closing door a glimpse of Mr.Saraswatichandra make her addicted to him, she is attracted by him, by his past, by his hiding tears, she wants to go with him,his two eyes which are covers with black shades, she wants to read his hiding eye's language. The lift gone,she knows that was not possible, she heaves a sigh.
In the 4th floor:
Standing in-front of the room no. 405, for the first time he feels nervousness, but at the next moment he make a fake smile in his lips & knock the door.
After 2 knock a boy opens the door & without saying anything he hugs him, & says---
"Saras... aaj 7 saal baad tujhse mil raha hu...samay kitna badal gaya hei...lekin tu usdin jaisa tha aaj bhi vaisa hi hei"
Releasing himself from his hug, he says---
"Sunny...jo kaam ke liye mei aya hu pehle vo kar lete hei..."---Saras entering in his room saying this. Sunny still then standing beside the door, seeing Saras without any expression he can't control himself & ask him that question.
"Kumud ki koi khabar mila?"
Saras stops, he says---
"Mei ab ummid bhi nehi karta hu...jo khud mujhe chodke chali gayi thi uski lautne ka ummid toh koi bewakoof hi karega..."---Saras says without turning back.
He goes to the balcony, Sunny's room is sea-facing. Since his childhood Saras attracts by the sea.Though he lives in Mumbai, but whenever he came to New-York with his parents he spend his time walking in the beech, counting the waves. Every night when he looked at the sea, he feels that a lady who wore a white gown, walking along the beech, it seems she is finding his soul mate. She is pale & insane. Many times he trying to find her but he failed. Once in his childhood, his father asked him---
"Saras tum bada hoke kya banoge?"---little Saras thought for sometime then he said---
"Samundar..."---his father looked at him,he was surprised & he kept his hand on his head & said---
"Hamara zindegi toh ek samundar hei, aur tumhe ise tair ke dusri or jana padega jahaan ek khubsuraat zindegi tumhara intezaar kar raha hei..."
"Par dad...agar mei us par chala gaya toh vo fairy yahaan akeli reh jayegi...mujhe use dhoondna hei..."---he answered with a innocent face.
"Jab waqt ayega... tab vo fairy tumse milne apne aap hi aa jayegi...par dekhna pehchaan ne mei galati mat kar dena..."---his father smiled & left.
After that they permanently shifted in Mumbai, & come to that age he realized that was nothing but an imagination. Today come back to that moment, to that imagination, he feels that may be his father was right, may be he did wrong, a fairy was came in his life, but he a stupid fool, who can't recognized her.
"7 saal se Kumud gayeb hei...aur tu use dhoondne ki koi kaushis bhi nehi kiya?vo kaha hei...kis halaat mei hei...aur..."---Sunny stopped to saw him silent, Sunny come near him, keep his hand on Saras's shoulder, Saras shivers to feel his touch, he says---
"Vo zinda hei Sunny...tu mera yakeen maan...mei sach mei use bhool gaya tha...lekin aaj achanak ek reporter ake phir se sab kuch yaad dila diya..."---Saras says & at the next moment he controlled himself, "Chod...kaam ki baat karte hei...kaal mei vapas India ja raha huCompany ka kuch kaam se...tune vo presentation dikhanewala tha..."---he says, come back to the room.
Sumit understands that now talking about Kumud is nothing but stupidity. The day when Kumud left their house, Saras tried to stopped her, but no one knows why she left them, & with her that step she made Saras...nothing but a life-less doll, who don't know anything except profit & loss. It seems his life becomes a rough graph of economy, which starts with a profit but it ends with a loss. As a tree shedding its withered leafs with no grief, like that Saras also thrown his feeling from his heart called "Love". Kumud compelled him to choose that path.
At about 10:00 p.m. Saras get up from the sofa & says---
"Ok...Sunny its a nice presentation...i have to say..."---Saras sees the time "Sunny ab mujhe jana hoga...aur haan mei 2-3 weeks mei hi vapas aa jayunga..."---he says Sunny close his laptop & also get up.
"Thik hei..."---he says & wants to say something more but hesitating "Par ek baat mere samaj mei nehi aa raha hei...usdin hua kya tha?"---this was a mysterious question, no one knows its answer, Saras too, he keep his hand on Sunny's shoulders, says---
"Koi faydaa nehi hei...ok...bye...take care of yourself".
Saras smiles, though it looked like a fake smile, it was an utmost effort to hide his tears, & with that he left.
He is sitting in his car, way to air-port. His past memories gather in his brain like dull leaves flying by the stormy winds. Saras can't bear this pain, he is become a dead man, his eyes turns dull, he wants to cry, he is longing for someone's arms where he could cry, he could feels relax. Today he is a businessman, everyone knows him, despite of everything he is lonely & he still can't overcome her absence. She was covered him, she was protected him, she was soul of his soul. Her face, grace, he can't forget. But this is also true, for this pain, this tears, who was responsible??? Kumud, he or situation??? Saras opens the shut window, a gust of wind feels him freshness.He watches the time, still 45 min left to reach air-port. He is now may be habituated with this,this love which is a pain burns him alive...!!

Background: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hLcAs2e3cQM

so here is the first part...do let me know how it went and should i continue or not...next part will be updated soon...

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago