New FF: 'Kaisa Ye Tera Ishq Hei'(part4)(page4) - Page 3

Awesome update...👏

omg!!its so beautifull n emotional too..loved d beginning,wat happend 7 yrs ago???sigh i wanna knw it r8t nw..
awsum..keep updating:) :)

"Nayi Dagar Naya Safar. . ."

"Radio Off karo"--- Saras says, to see his sudden change of behavior driver become surprised. "Kya hua saab"--- he ask timidly. Saras is going to burst on him but he control his anger & says---"Kuch nehi sar mei dard ho raha hei". The taxi driver switched off the radio. He is stealthily looking at him from the

Front-mirror of the car. Saras open the Window, outside the rain is now terminate, He takes a long breathe.

"Tring'..Tring'.."----His phone was ringing; the name of Rahul was flashing on the screen;

"Haan Rahul bol'.."----he tries to make his voice normal as much as he can, "Hello'.dude'.how was the journey??"----Rahul asks

"Thik thak'..lekin tujhe kisne bataya mei India aa raha hu??"----he asks surprisingly.

"Sunny ka phone aaya tha mujhe'..Saras tu'.. abhi kaha janewala hai?? I mean Aunty se ho sake toh ek bar mil lena'' "----Saras tries to stop him, but Rahul goes on saying---"ya'.i know'.bahot mushkil hai'..jo bhi hua uske baad'.par jo bhi hai Aunty tere liye bahot fikar karte hai'..aur'.."----he stops,

"Aur??"----Saras asks'.

"Aur'..Vyas Mansion mei Kumud ki Yadein bhi toh hai''dobara jeena nahi chahega vo Yadein??"

"Rahul '..Can we talk later??"

"Yes'..of course'.."---Rahul says, they both hung up the call.

The car stops in-front of a big gate, Saras come out of the car, after the car gradually invisible in the far away bend, Saras sees the big Manson after 7 years. "Vyas Mansion", he gently touches the name-plate; he opens the door & stepped into that Manson, the pebbles scatter road, the big palm trees,----all are same as they were, he is walking along through the wide road, with him his all memories were also struggle to recollect. Here & there Kumud's memory were scattering. The house which was filled with laughter & enjoyment, today it perfectly silent.

"Ding . . . dong"---the bell cries, a middle-aged woman opens the door, "Kaun??"---The woman asked to see him, Saras is standing turning back; he has not that much courage to face his mother after 7 yrs. "Kisse milna hei apko?"--- She asked again, He turns back, his face is without any expression. "Saras . . . tum? Akele aye ho? Sab thik hai na?? aao andar aao'.."---She said with a surprised tone. Saras nodded & tries to smile. Saras come inside of the room. He is looking at the interior of the house; he is trying to find the differences between past & present. He feels a touch on her shoulder without turning back he says---

" kuch nehi badla hei na ma??"---his voice was unusually cold. "Haan . . . kuch nehi badla . . ."---his mother said, Saras turns back, "lekin beta tum bina kuch bataye achanak chale aye . . . sab thik hei na vahaan? Tumhara dad'..business??"---She asked worriedly. "Haan maa sab thik hei . . . vaise mei ek project ke liye aya hu . . . kuch dino ki baat hei . . ."---Saras said while sitting in the couch.

"Hey bro . . . what a surprise ap yahaan??"--- Ritu is standing in the stairs. Her eyes are shinning with joy to see Saras. Ritu come running to him & hug him. "Kaisi hei tu?? --- He says looking at his beautiful sister. " Bro vaise mei friends ke saath bahar ja rehi hu . . . jane ka maan toh nehi kar raha hei . . . lekin vo log wait kar rahe honge . . ."---She says & shrug her shoulder. Saras smiles, "Thik hei . . . tu ja", "Mei laut ke aau phir bahot sare batein karenge'.."-----Ritu left.

After Ritu left, Saras is sitting silently in the couch. "Beta . . . tum itna chup kyun ho?? . . . tumhe shayed bhuk laga hoga . . . tum apne kamre mei jake fresh ho lo . . . mei khane ki taiyariyaan karti hu . . ."---She is going to the kitchen while Saras holds her hand & says---

"Maa'.ap' ap mujhe kuch nahi kahenge?? Kuch puchengi bhi nahi?" her mother sits beside him----"Saras tum acchi tarah se jante ho mei kya puchna chahti hu'.lekin uska jawab tumhare pass nahi hai'..isliye accha hai ki ye saab batein hi na kare'.tum apne kamre mei jao..."----She left. Saras is also getting up from the couch & left.

Saras opens his room which's old smell make him nostalgic. This smell is also reminds him of Kumud. He lay down on the bed, he is completely exhausted.

MEMORY:

"Saras tum aaj ghar chale jao?"--- LNV said him, "tum aaj puri tarah se vig gaye ho . . ." ---

He seems too worried. "Lekin dad . . ."---Saras wants to say something, LNV stops him. Saras knew that arguing with his father is nothing but time-waste. He nodded & left the room.

Saras is sitting in the bus. He is in his way back home; the bus stopped in the signal, Saras is sitting in a window-seat, he is looking at the outside from the bus, the nature looks fresh & pure after this rain. He feels happy. He constantly thinking about that girl . . . he can't forget the way she insulted him, he was so much angry'.. from the window , the outside sky looking like a peacock expand its plumage; he is looking at the sky , suddenly he sees a sight, his eyes can't believe. In the flower shop that unknown girl is standing with some of other girls , may be with her friends , She is choosing some flowers, she is smiling, her smile is seems to a sweet sun rays after a long heavy rains. Saras can't understands what to say, what to do, he wants to go there, his happiness becomes irritations in one second, though she is looking a nymph, a ray of glow between that beautiful flowers, even she looks more beautiful, like a picture, but still Saras can't forgive her'.. "Yes, she is beautiful'..but so what??? She insulted me'.. jis tarike se usne behave kiya uske baad'''.ghatiya'..low-standard girl!!"---- The girl already chooses the flowers, she is looking here & there, suddenly her eyes also stuck with Saras, "Are ye vo battamiz ladka'.is type ke ladke ko na acchi tarah se janti hu mei'..kaam-dhanda toh kuch hota nahi hei'..ladkiyon ki picha karte rehte hai'.."---- "Kaun hei vo ?? ---One girl asks to her . . . "Koi nehi . . ."---she says & turns back, Saras suddenly he sees a boy come out from the flower-shop , he is holding some flower bouquets , & give them to that girl. Because of the girl is standing turning back, Saras exactly can't see her expression, but he understands that the boy is not her brother or something . . . may be her boy-friend . . .

Red signal become green, the bus moves on . . . Saras checking his phone, suddenly his phone starts ring;

"Haan dad'..boliye'."

"Mei tumhe ek baat batana bhul hi gaya'.. mei ghar ake bhi bol sakta tha lekin abhi bol raha hu taki tum taiyariyaan kar sako'.."

"Baat kya hai dad??

"tumhe wine-factory project ke liye Shimla jana hai'..actually beta mei hi chala jata lekin ab yahaan itna kaam hai'..i hope tumhe koi problem nahi hoga''vahaan Rahul toh rehga tumhare saath'..aur tumhara rehne keliye kuch bandobast kar diya maine''so, don't worry!! His face become pale,

"Lekin dad'..achanak Shimla'.. kaal hi toh mei aya hu'..mei yahaan kaam kar lunga"----he tries to convince his father, he don't want to go there'.but his father don't listen to him''

"Aur haan vahaan tumhara Partner bhi rahega'. sorry rahegi'.. Kumud Desai'.mei tumhe ek mail kar dunga'.uski details'."

"Kya'..ek ladki'.??? Dad ap jante hai I hate girls'..phir bhi ap'."

"Saras'..tum vahaan kaam karne ja rahe ho'..ladki dekh ke shadi karne ke liye nahi'.. aur Kumud bahot acchi ladki hai'..itni kaam umar mei vo itna aage bad gaya business mei'.waah!! I hope tum dono acche se kaam karoge'.best of luck!!"

"Dad'.dad'."---but LNV already cut the call.

Saras comes home, exhausted & irritated, "Saras . . . tum achanak chale aye . . . sab thik toh hei na . . ."---his mother look at him in a worried look. "No . . . mom kuch nehi . . . aaj vaise koi kaam nehi tha isiliye chala aya . . ."---Saras says while he sitting in the sofa. "Aur Dad ne mujhe Shimla vegne ki soch raha hai'.."----He says, "Shimla kyun??"----His mother asks, actually she was also very surprised because she don't know about the decision, LNV discuss everything with her . . . "Vahaan ki Wine-factory ka charge dad ne mujhe diya hai'..but you know ma'.sabse worst thing'.mujhe ek Partner ke saath kaam karna padega aur vo ek ladki hai'.."---He says angrily, "Saras'.tum ladki se itna irritate kyon ho jate ho??"----She asks, "Mujhe nahi pata ma'."---Saras exactly don't know why he dislikes girls, "Thik hai tum upar apne kamre mei jao'."---he left.

At Night Kumud's house:

"Kumud'.."----she raises her face, she is packing her bags, "are papa ap'.andaar aiye'."

Vidyachatur comes into her room, "Ap kuch kahenge'..??"----Kumud asks '. "Bachpaan se aaj tak teri har khawaish puri kiya meine'. Pata hi nahi chala tu kab itna badi ho gayi'. Ki ab mere khawaish puri karne chal padi'..bahot naaz hei mujhe tumpar beti'.mujhe pata hai'.tu jo bhi karegi na'.accha hi karegi'.kyun ki tu bahot acchi hai'."----Kumud's eyes was full of tears, she comes & hugs her father, VC says---

"Chal ab khana kha lete hai'.kaal subah tujhe nikal na hai'.accha sun jo bolne keliye mei aaya tha'.ye le"---he gives her a piece of paper, "Ye hei Lakshminandan Vyas ji ki ghar ka address'.Shimla mei unka ek ghar hai'..unhone mujhe phone kiya tha aur kaha ki tum Shimla ja ke vahin rahogi'.unke ghar mei'.."

"Lekin papa'."

"Kumud'."

"Thik hai'."---She again starts packing her bag, his father was going but suddenly he stopped & says---

"Accha haan'.tera jo Partner hai na uska naam hai Saraswatichandra Vyas'. Ab aaja khana thanda ho raha hai'."----he left.

Kumud Says---

"Ab pata nahi kya kya honewala hai'..ek ladke ke saath kaam karna'.i hope ki ye jo bhi ho thoda acche se behave kare'.."----she put the dresses in her bag & left.

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