Skeptic and Dreamer; Commanding Eyes

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Announcement came like a bolt from nowhere. Like another piece of Dad's sprawling wealth, he was put on the auction and committed to a prospective buyer! So what, the prospective buyer is someone who stirs pleasanter memories of past? Has he no say himself? And how was he to obey this decree?...For years- since first dawn of cognition- he was chained to his will. Saraaswati Ma herself had sworn him to the allegiance- his duty. Aspiring him for the ideals of Ram. Indeed! whose Father Dashrath had long since inclined towards other Queen Kaikai. But Ma's call was reason enough to ensure his compliance, besides filial dues to one's father. And when has he not obeyed? Duty bound, Oath bound, he has discharged the obedience unflinching. He lays committed to the father; Year by year, assisting in his tremendous work load, pitching in towards his limitless ambitions and begging to his Gods for his fine health and long life. If only, Father were to concede a wee bit of love, he so sorely missed after Ma's Departure!...
"But no, this is not done. First time, I must overstep. It is not only me, or a valuable property. This involves another life. An innocent girl- vaguely remembered in childhood conversations, Vidya Uncle and Gunial Masi's first born. I can not allow her yoked into a loveless, hapless union- Her life ruined. If Dad refuses to listen to me, I will have to be proactive. I will write straight to her..."

A Dreamer;

"Who was he?! Why he broached so forcefully- so suddenlly into my dream space last night? A bolt from nowhere! Who had permitted him this trespass? Not I!...Yesterday evening, Bapu and Guniyal were reminiscing a long past friend, Saraswati masi, departed wife of Nandu Uncle. There was some vague mention of a boy and I went to slip, annoyed, 'why Gunial is not chatting about my recent success in bringing Internet to village instead?...But why the Dream! It forces me, drives me, orders me into conceptualising its content on paper. And that profile!...

Thick, luxurious crop of hair crowning a perfect, imperious forehead; Broad, Clear and emitting a habit of authority, resolve, firmness- though, there lurked a suppressed vein in the left, hinting a capacity of a rage. But the regal section itself, fittingly anointed with a blazing vermillion Tilak in the middle in between two thickset eyebrows. Those abundant brows, narrating lush fecundity, adorn atop two windows to a Soul, His Eyes;

Deep, penetrating and piercing, as if, they saw through me even from their surreal plane of a dream. Iris-dawn black of brown, set off by moon white of sclera, embody a perfect almond, which themselves were mellowed of their exuded power by fine Curves of eyelids with sparse sprinkle of manly eyelashes.

They issue a dare; No lies, no nonsense would be suffered. The deal was simple. Candour and Frankness discharged, as well expected. They demonstrate a straight soul. Integrity so evident; Undiluted Honesty and Unblemished sense of Honour. Despite the power, one feels secure, protected under them...There is no pause in falling headlong for them. They command it so, will it so...But what was this? A tinge of sadness! In their unblinking gaze, a slight droop of the eyelids and carefully concealed in them- some melancholy! Let me be a share, permit me be a repose, if you may!"...

Urge to capture the rest was unbearable, almost frightening. But not only dream, even real world's much touted technology played fickle, leaving her stranded hopelessly amidst God-tokens.

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Edit add: Link to impressions on previous episode...
1.) Preordained,
Next episode,
3.) Enchanted and Skeptic, Alluring Sounds
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mith-

Beautiful dear...😊

Thanks...and wish I could restrain this succinct!😆
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The Letter,

This was one of the most unusual first contact of the Leads on television. It leads to a most dramatic first encounter too. But before that, Creatives ( Cvs?) are creating several conjectures in consequence. First, the way they showed Saras obtaining address from a greeting card present in his drawer, it shows, he was well in groove with family's cordial communications with Vidyachatur's family. The facts that later he easily accessed Kumud's Internet account, or their famous Internet encounter, naturally raises the question, 'why did he not send an e-mail in the FIRST?...here, We have to reckon three points.
1) Cvs want to adhere to some important practices, the way they were written in original ( obviously, no Internet then!) Written Letters were important aspect in Original. (A beautiful song was propped on Letters in Movie too).
2) Cvs wanted to construct visual drama, impact on Girl's side, involving sister, mother and most of all, lingering visuals on Heroine.
3) Cvs are planting a documented proof against Saras's rebellious defiance to Father's express edict. Guman is going to exploit, no matter initial concealment in favour of Saras. She would use it at appropriate time along with other substantial and more serious 'charges'...
All of these were not possible in "an e-mail" script. On account of its plausibility, I have no complain to Cv's 'written letter' ploy this instance. Now on the impacts and consequences of the Letter...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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where was this beuatiful topic hiding???

wowww you are just too good with your words and emotions😳👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iheartsamud

Ur an amazing writer! x

Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You have written it so beautifully that I cant just go and fall in love with those words and the person for who this is written!!
The eyes were indeed a challenge and something Kumud believed in that first glance and it is the betrayal of those eyes that has her existence challenged and heart break!!! She had believed in something good and suddenly that belief was proven to be wrong..ofcourse it was her ego which was hurt too...but she wont exactly be saying that...
And on Saras's side it was more of his inner beliefs that were turned upside down...deep down he himself believed himself to be a good son...a good person...his mother's son..and a person told him coward!! COWARD!! he actually has jumped twice...in fire and in water since coming to the village...and yet he has been branded as that...his hurt and his anger at this is so so justified..and yet what bugs him most is that Kumud wont look at him...*sigh* such stubborn souls both of them!!
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Originally posted by: Sanju_

where was this beuatiful topic hiding???


wowww you are just too good with your words and emotions😳👏

Where else would such heavy verbosity reside? Back pages..😆. I shud thank those like who tolerate me so kindly.😳
Joke apart, in last thread I had asked you some help regarding picture posting, though I got to reach relevant instructions later...yaar, despite my good nos. in posts ( over 9 centuries, by now😆), I am naive about many of posting tools here. Looking at your col code, I thought you might know...please help me sometimes...😛
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@ MS-Meghasharma,
@ Priya,
Thanks for reading.
To all of you may I request more inputs? Like your observation, or views whenever you get an inclination? That would be a favour on account of learning many points or angles that I might have missed on such a complicated tale taken on such an mega scale. Thanks.😊
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Originally posted by: smrth

Where else would such heavy verbosity reside? Back pages..😆. I shud thank those like who tolerate me so kindly.😳
Joke apart, in last thread I had asked you some help regarding picture posting, though I got to reach relevant instructions later...yaar, despite my good nos. in posts ( over 9 centuries, by now😆), I am naive about many of posting tools here. Looking at your col code, I thought you might know...please help me sometimes...😛

OMG!! you asked help regarding pictures posting? I am so sorry I didn't see it but good thing you reached the instructions!!

you are really good with words, so you should write more and I would love to read more from you.

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