Enchanted and Skeptic, Alluring Sounds

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" The One, who is, and always shall be, nobody to me, has no right to see me a face. So now which mockery has brought you here Mr. Saraswati Chandra JI? Was an insolent letter not enough? I might yet forgive you a reject, but not a scorn to My Father's prestige and hopes. Not you, I reject thee!"

The torment, the agony that welled up since last evening, steamed out through her heart. But then, for a moment- a fool that this heart is- it did miss a beat, at the first glimpse; Noble eyes, even from their unaware stance, have been issuing an inexorable pull- A need to trust and believe in them, ' indeed! Have I not perceived nobility of honour in them?! Deceptions?!'...And her slandered ego! 'He rejected, even before looking at me! I, daughter of renowned beauty Guniyal*, won't allow him the splendour."

Somehow welters of conflicting emotions were making her confused and lost.


Enchanted,
The Sound came as a whisper, almost inaudible and easily missed by most. But how would he miss such and alike? They represent Saraswati Ma's rare favourite- an ornament- Silver Key ring and crowded tinkles, as they call back in 'home', 'chandi no judo'. Soft jingles were always soothing, assuring her presence around, in childhood, alas, not to be in later.

But today it came confounding all his aims. At seeing Vidya uncle removing all commotion, affording them privacy, he had decided to post an apology at the outset, and then some plain talk.

But the chiming tinkles distracted him first and then, its silhouette Carriage- unexpectedly, unspeakably gracious- held him spellbound, silent. A Doe's waist- achingly curved, a pearl navel- all tantalisingly veiled under a semi transparent, parrot green drape. She obviously is splendour of rare kind, even in profile. No doubt, the daughter of renowned Gunial* Masi... More routing, the onslaught that broke on him afterwards!

As in first onset of monsoon back in India, the breeze came tiptoed, but soon turned in a thunderstorm that whacked him staggered. The blows came in whiplash, like that initial throw of her silky, raven black, thick braid from over her shoulder and a disdainful back, as if a whip was lashed across the space of Ethernet, right here on his face.

The charges were stinging. More so, for they carried a grain. Vidya Uncle's family did poise for a humiliation for no fault. A father's hopes would indeed be shattered. Nor is it correct on his part- his failure to convince his own dad and shift the onus on her. It does not seat well with his frame; Responsible and self reliant. But then she accuses him Coward, Shameless?? She dares him to face her father and apologise?!! So be it...

The encounter shook him from the core. And yet there was a strange pull drawing him bewildered. The sonorous Voice, clear and unfazed, was dictating him straight to the source of the storm, which, though buffeted and drenched him all soaked, yet had a misty moistness in it that beacons him enchanted. Events were pulling him in a vortex of passions beyond his control.
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Edit Add: Links to previous impressions;
2. Skeptic and Dreamer, Commanding Eyes-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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* About Gunsundari, aka Guniyal,
She was conceived one of the best character in Original Novel. Actually, there was an entire section on Young Gunsundari and Vidyachatur, where the ideal growth of their marriage culminating in two beautiful daughters was showed. Guniyal was described an exquisite beauty and Kumud was said her replica.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The story and serial are well past this scene. But mastery, finesse in narration were simply brilliant. They elicit response. Plus, little late on this watch. Hence writing even late, in appreciation of its beauty. Will try to post some fine moments which caught the eye with pictures. Please share...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum post dear..!

ur diction and play of words is superb..

do send me a pm wen u do ur nxt post...!

words and literature aside...

i do agree the finesse is the masterkey through all the course of the show uptill now...
hoping it 'ld continue further...!
trust on SLB and creww!





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Posted: 12 years ago
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do put up more posts...and
u seem to have read the actual novel...which could actually spur thoughtful comparision and analysis ...n adding to which u hav this grt capability wiith enticing wordplay..

keep posting and yeh.. reminding once agn send a pm alert!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

awesum post dear..!


ur diction and play of words is superb..

do send me a pm wen u do ur nxt post...!

words and literature aside...

i do agree the finesse is the masterkey through all the course of the show uptill now...
hoping it 'ld continue further...!
trust on SLB and creww!


Thanks for the response...in fact, lately this serial has caught me by surprise.(Something, long after another watch, ' meri zaat zaara e benishaan')
In fact, this post is the third one in the series that sums up the impact of this serial...here are the links; ( I will edit add in main posts)😊
1.) Opening- 'preordained'

2.) Proposal- ' Skeptic and Dreamer, commanding Eyes'

3.) collision- 'Enchanted and Skeptic...' This present one...

👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

do put up more posts...and
u seem to have read the actual novel...which could actually spur thoughtful comparision and analysis ...n adding to which u hav this grt capability wiith enticing wordplay..

keep posting and yeh.. reminding once agn send a pm alert!


Do you think it may work? I do have some comparative thoughts, don't know, will it work here...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thesaurus

wow just superb..loved it...


Thanks. Saw you in previous thread too. Won't you share more...😊
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Indictment:
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Shaken-
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