Saras on Not seeing Kumud Face

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chahe laakh chhup tu mujhse

Chahe kitney bhi karle jatan

Pehchaan lunga mai tumhe

Tumhaare us kamarband ki meethi jhankar se

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai , maa ki paayal ki wo chhan chhan

Aur yaad hai tumhaare kamar se latakti wo ghonghroon ki ladi

Pahli baar unki awaaz suni to laga jaise barson se jaanta hoon tumhe

Ek ehsaas hua jaise ajnabi nahi hain hum

Shaayad shaayad koi to rishta hai tumhara mujhse

Kuch bhi naa sahi to kum se kum us meethi jhankaar ka to hai

Jo tumhaare chham se aa jane ka ehsaas dilaati hai

Tumhare aas pass hone ka abhaas karaati hai

So this is our Saraswatichandra's Dil - E-Haal which he did Bayaan in a unique Shayrana Andaaz

His Shayari has more hindi words the urdu

Well i did ask him why ??

U know what he said ...well he said it is a modern SLB style Shaayri...

...zara hatke u see 😉

Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago

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Stitch

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice post!

the shayari is beautifully written

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shmurr
nice post!
the shayari is beautifully written

Thank u ...Saras will do Bunji Jump when i will tell him that people are liking his modern hindi Shaayri 😃

Edited by shana0127 - 12 years ago

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BornCritical

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thats nice poetry

Saras correlating Kumud with his mom through her kamarband ki chan chan !!!

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SHANA

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sahilshivi
Thats nice poetry

Saras correlating Kumud with his mom through her kamarband ki chan chan !!!

hi anahita how r u ...its long since we talked

good to see ur comment did u comment coz i made the thread or u too r taken by SC fever

anyways thanks ...be in touch dear

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HydroxyGroup

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow loved the shayari...keep posting new ones

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BornCritical

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shana0127

hi anahita how r u ...its long since we talked

good to see ur comment did u comment coz i made the thread or u too r taken by SC fever

anyways thanks ...be in touch dear

yes me taken by SC fever too,,,write some more shana