Dakshna short story - part 5 update p8

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Originally posted by: ssbn_siddhi
Cool... waiting for next part...

Next part on its way 😃 x

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bubblez91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Hey guys, thank you all for your lovely comments 😉 i thought i should update as many parts as i can before exams start, so heres the next installment ....

Recap: Naina and Daksh has little arguement after walking out of their bedrooms and colliding, then as they were walking down the stairs, naina nearly falls, but Daksh catches her and Ayi sees alll this .....

Part 2

Naina and Daksh continue to stare at each other, Ayi is also looking at them too from the sofas (imagine their house). Daksh and Naina come out of their glance, and Naina looks around and straightens herself up.

Daksh: Sambhal ke.

Naina: Sorry.

Daksh: Tum bhi na, dekh kar nahin chal sakthi?

Naina: Kya?

Ayi: Are naina, tum theek to ho? (She goes up to her worried)

Naina: Jee Ayi (and she smiles at her)

Ayi: Chalo tum dono betho, mein tumko chai laa thi hoon. (she walks off into the kitchen)

Naina and Daksh give each other one more glare and head towards the seating area. Daksh starts to read the newspaper, Naina sits down and thinks about what just happened, Daksh lowers his newspaper, and secretly tries to look at Naina, he sees her worried face and smiles. Naina looks up and sees this, Daksh quickly covers his face with the newspaper.

Naina: Mein Ayi ko madad karti hoon … (she also heads to the kitchen)

In the Kitchen Ayi is mixing the tea, while staring into mid air lost in thought…

Ayi: (thinking) Mujhko Daksh ko shaadi ki baat karni paregi, agar uska aur Naina ka rishta jor jaye toh acha hoga (she starts to smile)

Naina: Ayi, kya soch rahe ho? (Ayi comes out of her deep thought)

Ayi: Kuch nahin beta… tum ander jao mein chai laati hoon.

Naina: Nahin Ayi, mein bhi tumari madad karu... batao kya karna hai... (she smiles)

Ayi: Kuch nahin, tum jao under betho, mein laati hoon .... (She smiles)

Naina: (smiles back, and thinks) abh kya karu, wahan se bhag toh aayi hoon … Lekin yeh kya ho raha hein mujhe, kyun aisa behave kar rahe hoon…. Come on Naina, fix up… (she gives herself a gentle smile)

Ayi: Naina kya soch rahi hoon, ander jao, mein aa rahe hoon

Naina: achaaa …. (she slowly starts to head back out towards the seating area)

She goes to seat back down and sees Daksh …. She starts to feel nervous ….

Naina: (thinking) yeh kya ho raha he, mein itni nervous kyun ho rahi hoon… aur voh bhi Daksh ke aas paas…. Never… voh kadhos bhi naa … hamesha gussa karta rehta he ... pata nahin uski problem kya hai …. (she continues to look at him confused)

Ayi comes into the seating area with a tray with the tea… she places it on the table … Naina notices her presence and quickly looks away from Daksh to Ayi. Daksh also puts down his newspaper after realising his mother had come.

Naina: Ayi, baba abhi tak nahin aaye?

Ayi: Nahin usko aaj der ho jayenge, aaj parents teachers ki meeting thi… (she pauses) Chintu kya tum aur naina usse pick up karne jaonge? (She smiles)

Daksh and Naina stare at each other in shock …. Ayi continues to smile…

what will happen next? will Ayi tell them her desire? will Daksh and Naina fall in love without her help? is there gna be more takraar next week? stay tuned to find out.

heres the next part, please leave your comments and i will try to update the next part as soon as possible ... Thanks 😉