Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
owww man gunjan and rachna are soo different, there where the one eat full the other doesnt eat😃
soo it seems gunjan and mayank will fall for each other first because here rachna is calling kabir brother😆..

oww it was cute when ginjan cried because mayank called her plump..

ahhh what i liked was when kabir pulled the belt and rachna was shivering because of his touch...

i smell some hidding jaleousy from kabir, because he thinks rachna is mayanks girlfriend😊
hope rachna wakes up and sees gunjan, they can drive all together, this would be fun to see kabir and mayank with girls😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: PINky733

Hey very good saranya
Nice update so funny
I was laughing when rachna call kabir brother
And gunjan n myank are too funny I loved it
I like the scene when mayank n gunjan rolling on the road
I m so much lucky because I get a very beautiful and interesting story
Thank u so much saranya for pm
Update soon ok
I m waiting

Pinky dear so sweet of you,Thanks a lot ya working on it will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: hangok

owww man gunjan and rachna are soo different, there where the one eat full the other doesnt eat😃

soo it seems gunjan and mayank will fall for each other first because here rachna is calling kabir brother😆..

oww it was cute when ginjan cried because mayank called her plump..

ahhh what i liked was when kabir pulled the belt and rachna was shivering because of his touch...

i smell some hidding jaleousy from kabir, because he thinks rachna is mayanks girlfriend😊
hope rachna wakes up and sees gunjan, they can drive all together, this would be fun to see kabir and mayank with girls😊

thanks for pm

As always ur predictions r so interesting,U will know am using t or not😉 Thanks dear for ur precious comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Chap 4
Rachna's sleep was disturbed when Kabir put the sudden brake seeing Gunjan.
Rachna:Kabir why did you stop now
Rachna looked front n found Gunjan blocking the way by stretching her hands,Rachna was so happy to see her,Happy tears were rolling from her eyes,Suddenly Mayank pulled Gunjans hand n took her to the corner of road,which shocked both Rachna and Kabir.
Mayank:Gunjan thats my enemy's car,Come lets go
Gunjan:Enemy ha ha How silly is this this first come lets go n get down near by bustand.If you have any problem in asking him I will ask.
Mayank got angry on her n cupped her face, "If you want you go,I am not coming"Shouted Mayank.
Seeing Mayank holding Gunjans chin Rachna imagined Mayank is harassing her n she ran to them n she pushed Mayank n dragged Gunjan along her.
Rachna:Kabir come here,Pls help us from him
Gunjan:Rachna you..
Rachna:Thanks god,I came in the right time else this man would have
Kabir came out of car with so much of confusion in his mind.
Gunjan:No Rachna you are wrong he is my friend,He is helping me
Mayank:Who is she Gunjan? Doesnt she know manners.
Kabir:Hello you 3 whats happening here?
Rachna:Kabir I thought this man is behaving wrong with my friend Gunjan n I bhaved stupid.
Kabir:What you mean Rachna?You dont know who this man is?
Rachna:How will I know.I just saw him now
Gunjan:Rachna in this mans car only I was sleeping last night.Now got it how we got to know
Rachna:What?You mean he is Mayank..No
Rachna was so scared to face Kabir who was throwing killing looks on her.
Gunjan:Hey Rachna leave that now we both joined Thank god we are together again n I know you will get me
Saying it Gunjan hugged Rachna and Rachna too hugged her still lokking at Kabir.
Mayank:So you both ran out of house n you got separated n you came in search of other,wow how brave you girls are
Kabir:Not brave they are cheatsHe said n moved to his car.
Gunjan:Whats wrong with your friend Rachna,Why he is angry
Rachna:Hmm I will say you later,you both wait a min.
While Gunjan and Mayank were waiting for Rabir a bit away,Kabir was trying to start his car but it was not starting,He hit his hand on the stearing,n at that time Rachna knocked on the car glass,Kabir didnt even open it this time.Rachna pulled her ears n asked him sorry,Kabir's anger was turning in to laughter seeing her way of pleading n he opened the glass.
Rachna:Kabir pls am sorry,Actually I was scared to say the truth,Yuo are completely a stranger to me you see.
Kabir:I accept everything but comment you made that you cant control you before Mayank is really making me damn irritated. You are really big cheater.
Rachna giggled n Kabir was starring at her.
Rachna:Ok am asking sorry na,Pls forgive me
Kabir:Hmm you told me such a big lie n you just asking sorry,thats not a big deal.
Rachna:Ok then I will call you anymore brother..What say? Happy?
Kabirs eyes brightened on hearing it but pretended to be normal.
Kabir:Hmm thats better.
Gunjan:Hey what you people doing here making us wait?
Maynak:Yes Rachna we need to walk more distance.So come lets start.
Kabir:What Why you 3 should walk now,come I will drop you
Mayank:Excuse Kabir they are my friends now,I know to keep them safe thanks for your help n u can go now
Rachna:Why Mayank why are you harsh to your friend he is helping us only na
Kabir:Rachna you be silent,We both r against each not friends n all.
Gunjan:Yes Rachna,Mayank dont like to go in Kabirs car hmm He helped me a lot,I think I should be in his side now n I bliv you wil come with me.
Rachna:But Kabir hel.
Before she could finish Kabir closed the glass n started the car again which Shocked Rachna,This time the car started, Kabir was controlling himself not to look at Rachna and drived,He went a few steps n saw Rachna through mirror who was standing there without knowing what to do She wanted to stop him but she felt she has no rights.
Mayank:I said you Gunjan see this is he,He never respect others he thinks he is right always.
Rachna didnt like what Mayank said but gave him a fake smile.
Gunjan:Hey Rachna you know Mayank is so nice n friendly.I just like him a lot
Mayank was feeling overwhelmed on hearing Gunjans opinion on him
Rachna:That's gr8 Gunjan n thanks Mayank for helping my friend
Mayank:Now she is my friend too
Gunjan gave him a wide smile n Mayank admired her,Which made Rachna remember Kabir n she said to herself "I wish you were here Kabir"
They walked a while n stopped seeing a lake.
Gunjan:Hey Rachna there's a lake neasr wow come lets fresh up.
All three ran to the lake,Gunjan seeing Mayank folding his pant till his knees she too did the same,n she removed her shrug she wore which revealed her sleveless top which made Mayank bit confused which to admire her bare hands or legs since both were making him week.
Gunjan:Mayank what starring at me cum clean ur face she said n spilled water on him which helped Mayank to get his senses.Rachna was not comfortable around Mayank so she just washed her face n went to sit on the sand nearby while Mayank n Gunjan were playing with each other spilling water on each.
Gunjan:Rachna join us
Rachna:No Gunjan I am tired actually
Mayank:Rachna you need anything to eat or drink.You look so tired
Rachna:No I ate more,
Gunjan:Mayank wont u ask me
Mayank:I thought u will ask ok anyways time for lunch too.
All three reached hotel Mayank was teasing Gunjan while she was ordering,Rachna just ordered coffee since she was in no,mood to eat.
Mayank:Gunjan hav this its so nice
Gunjan already had handfull of deserts so she opened her mouth to him n Mayank happily fed her.seeing Mayank feeding her Rachna remembered Kabir buying her fruits n she dreamt like he is feeding her an apple n she shyly avoiding it.
when Mayank fed her the last bite he forgot to take his hand back being lost in her again,Gunjan bit his finger not with her teeth with her lips thinking desert is still left.
Gunjan went red on knowing what she did n Mayank took his hand back blushing.Rachna didn't notice it as she was in dream with Kabir.
Mayank:Why your friend is so silent.she is not ur type she is very silent n u never stop talking
Gunjan:Don't conclude her with how she behave today she s a big chatterbox than me,I think she is home sick
Rachna gave them a flat smile n sipped the coffee.
Mayank:Its really difficult to understand girls.
Gunjan:Better don't try
Rachna:Gunjan can we start else we cant reach the bus stand before evening.
Mayank:Ya Gunjan after 6 there won't be buses to my friends house.
Rachna:What are we going to his friends house.
Gunjan:Yes Rachna you know what Mayank's friend is not in India now n he asked Mayank n us to stay for some days.We can really enjoy there.
Rachna whispered to Gunjan"Are u sure we will be okthere?
Mayank:Rachna u don't need to,worry Till how many days u want u can stay there n then when ur problem in home solves u can return home aswell.
Rachna:Hmm whatever Gunjan decides.
Gunjan hugs Rachna n gives her a confident smile.It was growing dark n they finally reached the bus stand.
Gunjan:Rachna u know this Mayank said me few kms n made me walk from morning,omg my legs r paining like anything
Mayank:Can I lift u dear?
Rachna laughed n Gunjan put her tongue out.
Gunjan:Hey Rachna that's Kabir car right.
Rachna's face brightened on hearing his name.She eagerly check out.
Rachna:Yes it is,but where is he?
Mayank:He is there girls in that tea shop
Rachna was smiling after so long time,Kabir's back was only facing her,she didn't know how to make him watch her now.
Gunjan:Rachna go n talk to ur friend
Rachna:Why should I talk no need
Mayank:Wow Rachna I like you now
Gunjan looked at him raising her eyebrows n he put his tongue out now.
Gunjan was waving her hand at Kabir but he didn't turn.
Rachna:Gunjan why you calling him now
Mayank:Yes what's your problem now Gunjan?How many times should I say I don't like him.
Gunjan:ok sorry cool down
Rachna to herself "This Mayank is irritating me"
Rachna:Mayank I feel like having tea,head is aching lot.
Mayank:Ok cum before bus cums lets all go have tea.
Rachna happily ran to tea shop she ran too fast that she didn't stop to check before crossing road
Mayank:Your friend s bhaving strange.
Gunjan:I think she likes Kabir
Mayank:Bad taste really bad taste
Gunjan:Y he is handsome.
Mayank throwed a kill u look on her n she smiled n held his arm to cross the road.
Rachna: three glass tea said Rachna aloud
Kabir guessed her voice he turned with so much of surprise.
Kabir:Rachna you
Rachna:Oh Kabir you are here,I didn't see you at all.
Kabir:Really hmm ya I came for tea.
Gunjan:Hi Kabir
Kabir:Oh hi Gunjan
Mayank:Have tea n cum soon bus may cum at anytime.
Kabir:Don't worry bus s only at 6 30.I enquired.
Rachna:Why did u ask for bus timing
Kabir to himself (you idiot am waiting for u for so long n u questioning me)
Kabir:Hmm actually my car tyre punctured,so I had to go in bus too now
Rachna:Wow thats sooper
Rachna without her knowledge shouted it n felt embarassing to face all.
Gunjan:Ok then all four will go together it will be superb.Mayank you have no problem la
Mayank:Why should it bother me ,its public bus anyone can come.
Kabir:So kind of you Mayank
They both stared at each.
Gunjan:Ok guys comeon bus is coming
Mayank held Gunjans hand n they both ran to get the bus leaving Rabir.
Kabir gave his hand to her.
Rachna:I know to cross Kabir,anyways you going to leave me after this bus travel so lets not get closer.
Kabir without listening to her pulled her hand so firm n both ran to bus.
Gunjan:Come soon bus is starting
Mayan were already on bus while bus was moving.
Rachna:How can I get in to it,Gunjan stop then bus
Kabir caught the bus n he pulled her within his embrace holding her waist n both stood in the last step of the bus n then driver put the brake to stop.While Rachna and Kabir were in eye lock Gunjan whistled n driver started bus
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End of chap 4
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Awww...!!! I loved the bus part... <3
Reading the update gives me the feeling that I've watched the entire episode... Its so clearly explained... Nice... 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
thank god, they found each other, oww poor rachna couldnt stop kabir😔, i thought he wouldnt drive or atlast would say that he can drive all but noo...
but then it was great to see him in the tea shop he was waiting for her,,,great he said his car is broken but i dont belive him😆
oww the best part was the last part...he is holding her
and now a bus drive, this will be surely intersting...
mayank& gunjan sit together and RABIR sit together, rachna fells asleep on his houlder and so on
you see im already crazy about them😃

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: anks209

Awww...!!! I loved the bus part... <3

Reading the update gives me the feeling that I've watched the entire episode... Its so clearly explained... Nice... 😊😊

Thanks anks n ya I wanted t to be long glad u liked t
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Chapter 3 very funny love G and M new found comfort and friendship, R is a clever girl need K help but is using her head to maintain distance
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: hangok

thank god, they found each other, oww poor rachna couldnt stop kabir😔, i thought he wouldnt drive or atlast would say that he can drive all but noo...
but then it was great to see him in the tea shop he was waiting for her,,,great he said his car is broken but i dont belive him😆
oww the best part was the last part...he is holding her
and now a bus drive, this will be surely intersting...
mayank& gunjan sit together and RABIR sit together, rachna fells asleep on his houlder and so on
you see im already crazy about them😃

thanks for pm

Actually u r helping me luv ur crazy ideas n thanks for ur comments means so much to me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: sb1410

Chapter 3 very funny love G and M new found comfort and friendship, R is a clever girl need K help but is using her head to maintain distance

Am happy to know u like the characterisation hope u will like the next part too

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