Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 13

very nice update saranya
Rachna is so emotional girl
But finally she says I love u
I like it

himmm the boys forgot the girls , dont like this,

ooww for a moment i thought kabir couldnt to anything and this girl would kiss him but nooo,

poor girls were hungry,

sooo kabir searched for rachna, like the scene for the fridge, how he signed that he is in her heart, i even like this rachna how she refused..

gunjan forgive mayank easily, just he said she is beatuiful and everything was lost...

the scene where rachna cried was great, like it was kabir said to her...so he is the shoulder for rachna...

uff why have mayank & gunjan to came, dont want to see them lecturing rachna..

thanks for pm

Omg what an update
Lovely full of romance ans some misunderstandings
Poor rachna she was so jelous
Their hug and littke romantic scene was like a cherry on a cupcake
Sorry for commenting late

Chap-7
Rachna and Kabir broke their hug seeing Mayan at the door,Rachna put her head down n was nervous what Gunjan would say about her new relationship,Kabir stood more confused whether he should ask an excuse or wait.
Gunjan:Rachna,I cant bliv what I saw!What does that mean that you both r in love? Or its an accident
Kabir:Actually we didnt
Gunjan:I am asking my friend Kabir,pls hey Rachna come with me now.She grabbed her hand along her n took her to other room,leaving the boys confused.
Mayank pointed his thumb down at Kabir but he didnt Mind it this time,he was worried that Gunjan might change her mind.After half n hour girls came out of room walking more confident holding their hands,
Rachna walked close to Kabir n he tried to read her eyes but it was more dry n no love for him was seen suddenly she raised her hand n slapped him,
Gunjan:Rachna what s this,you are standing in front of him but Kabir s in some other world,saying t Gunjan laughed alound which made Kabir cum back from dream,
Mayank:Girls whats happening?What you did so long
Rachna:What happened was my dear Gunjan was asking me tips how to propose n Kiss since am experienced now,
Gunjan was blushing n she pinched Rachna's hand for telling truth.
Mayank:Gunjan but why u need all this now?
Rachna:Oh poor Mayank,am so sad for you your life s going to become a hell from now on,Kabir understood what she meant.
Kabir:hey thats a gr8 need congrats Gunjan
Mayank:Pls say me whats happening
Gunjan:You really a tubelight.I love you mad.
Mayank was so excited n went to hug her n he wrapped his arm around her so hard,Gunjan's head rightly placed on his chest n, while he kissed her forehead

Rachna cleared n throat n Kabir signalled her to be silent n follow her silently n Rachna followed him.
Kabir locked the door, n asked Rachna to come hear him as he sat on bed but Rachna stood sticking to the door,
Kabir:Before your friend calls u pls come
Rachna:No you talk from here itself,its wrong
Kabir:What oh madam,you thought am calling u for that,you r too spoiled,I called you to talk about Mayank
Rachna hearing his serious voice got tensed n moved to him,
Kabir:Actually Mayank is
Rachna:Say soon na
Kabir:I cant shout from here,its too secret cum close n here
Rachna moved more near him that her ears were so close to his mouth,Kabir licked the soft muscle of her ears where her earring was swinging n gave her a naughty smile,Rachna on sensing the moisture she shrinked her neck,Kabir now made her sit on his lap, he raised her chin n took the dollar of the chain which rested little below her neck from behind he bent forward n kissed where the dollar rested,Rachna's heart was beating fast as he did that he took her hand n kissed it from finger tip till her shoulders,Kabir pushed the top to see her bare shoulders n hands but Rachna covered her feeling shy.
Kabir:Rachna pls
Rachna:Kabir you r too fast
Kabir:You dont bliv me?
Rachna:I do but I need some time for all this,hope you understand me
Kabir:Hmm ok I will wait but I cant assure you that I will listen to you next time
Rachna stood from his lap n put her hands circling his neck n Rachna:Even I am not sure I will stop you next time,
Before Kabir could realize what she said Rachna ran from the place n Kabir chased her,As Rachna ran she bumped into Gunjan who also came running chased by Mayank.
All the four ended up falling on the floor n laughing seeing each others weird expressions.
There was a knock on the door,
Mayank went to open the door n he was talking so seriously to someone,Kabir on noticing change in Mayanks face he went to the door aswell.A police jeep was standing out n few policemen enquiring them
Mayank:I dunno anyone in name Gunjan or Rachna
Police:We got clear evidence that those girls were with you n your roommate
Kabir:Sir we really dunno
Police:Lets check your home first.
As the police checked,Rachna n Gunjan hidden under bed,
Police:Mayank n Kabir we arresting you both for kidnapping two girls
Kabir:Sir this s too much,we really dunno who those girls are
The police didnt hear them n they grabbef heros collar n took him to jeep while both girls ran to them
Gunjan:Sir pls leave them,am Gunjan n she s Rachna,we are not kidnapped,we ran out of our n these two helped us
Mayank:Why you both came out now
Rachna:We cant See you both suffering for us,
Both girls went to hug their boys but the police man blocked their way,Rachna broke out her tears n both girls entered the car in which their relatives where waiting.both the boys ran behind the car shouting the girls name but car left seperating four hearts.
Gunjan:It just started no how can it end
Rachna:Gunjan they will def come for us
Gunjan:What if they dont n what if my marriage happens amscared more now
Both the girls wiped each others tears n consoled each other.
Mayank:Damn it,how dare he take away my Gunjan,she s gone omg they will definitely marry her to sum1 now
Seeing Mayank in tears Kabir felt bad for him,for the first time he felt his pain,
Kabir:Mayank
Mayank:What pls dont tease at me now,Yes am a loser,ok happy now
Kabir:I lost my love too but if you keep feeling like this nothin going to change,we should get them back,we should be together for that. First.
Mayank:you sure?
Kabir gave his hand for an hand shake,but Mayank just went n hugged him,Kabir too hugged him back n both smiled,
Mayank:The girls will be so happy when they see us like this
Kabir:Thats the spirit man,comeon lets get our girls.
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End of chap-7

oh wow wow love u saranya if i would have demand something else then today i would have got that too reading now

oh wow sarnya love the update i have read three times till now and then commenting

Omg... It was so like a sweet romantic movie... Loved it to the core...😊😊 Waiting eagerly for the next update... The story has taken such a surprising and awesome turn...

Awesome update now our heroes to the rescue.

OMG!!! This story is SO SWEET!!😳
I loved Rabir and Mayan moments. I'm glad that Mayank and Kabir are friends now:)
Aw, Gunjan's family making her get married:( But I know our heroes will reach the girls.😃
Loved this beautiful update, please continue soon!😛
p.s. I'm sorry for late comment:(