Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry saranya I m too late
Saranya this is so lovely part
Kabir n rachna x lover
Pls quickly patchup kijiy dono ka
I m waiting for more romance ok
Really good job saranya
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I apologize for commenting late.😒
Anyways loving this..I know KT wants to patch up with Rachana for real and not "fake".😆 I hope they reunite Mayank and Gunjan soon!! Then who knows..maybe as a return gift Mayan might unite them?? I'll stop wondering and just wait for your update to find out.🤣
Anyways, I love your story and am hoping you continue ASAP. <3

Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Although i have not written any update but still i am missing ur update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sarnya missing ur updates u know i am selfish 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

Sarnya missing ur updates u know i am selfish 😉

You're not the only one waiting😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

You're not the only one waiting😆


Even I am waiting.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap-12
Weekend in hostel:
Rachna was painting her lips with dark red lipstick in front of her mirror.Gunjan felt something fishy about her sudden outing.So she enquired her but Rachna lied her that she was going with Vishwa for preparing slides and went to meet Kabir.
Dressed up in red Kurti n white leggin,wearing her college bag crossed on her shoulders Rachna stood adjusting her free hair n,made it fall on her cheeks while Kabir came by his car and stopped near her lowering his car glass.
Kabir:Get in Rachna
Rachna:This car oh no way pls,Whole my life spoiled bcoz of this car.
Kabir:If you want Gunjan n Mayank to join get in this.
Rachna opened the door n sat next to him n Kabir was laughing suddenly seeing her.
Rachna:What so funny now
Kabir:Why so much make up today.
Rachna:Really is it too much?oh god
She turned the car glass towards her n was rubbing her cheeks with tissue.Kabir suddenly stopped her hand by holding it .
Rachna:What?
Kabir:Your lipstick s dark,rest all look perfect
Kabir totally turned towards her n admired her Rachna was twisting her lips n checking it,While Kabir held her soft lower lip n pulled t close to him n placed his lips on her
Kabir's dream was disturbed on hearing the horn sound of cars waiting back.Kabir was so happy inside n started to drive,he kept admiring her through mirror all the way.
Rachna:So where we going now
Kabir:Rachna actually we need Mayan to bliv we really r true lovers so I have planned for all that today in mall.
Rachna:I just asked where we going,For this y such a lengthy answer.
Kabir:No I don't want you to think,Am doing it bcoz I want to spend time with you.
Rachna:Oh Kabir I know u r a gentleman
Saying its she laughed making Kabir feel embarrassing.
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Rachna:This mall is really big
Kabir:Yup I think you should shop your dresses here
Rachna:I am bad in selecting,always my mom selection will be perfect for me
Kabir:You should have your own choice Rachna,Not always parents selection will suit you
Rachna was stunned by his words,she understood Kabir didn't mean dress selection n stood staring him.
Kabir:What its just my opinion then your wish.
Rachna:Thats fine but My parents selection will never go wrong.
Kabir:Ok madam then at least let me shop.
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Kabir rejected some hundreds of shirts n Rachna was getting more irritated seeing him shop so long
Rachna:Can I select for u
Kabir was so surprised to hear it from her n he was admiring her as she showed him more dresses all the dresses looked good to him while his eyes was on Rachna.
Rachna:Am done,I love this grey one n you are getting it
Kabir:If you want me to get this then you should try this one I selected for you
Rachna took the dress from his hand n scanned it from top to bottom first,It was a long white skirt with a slit in the knee,
Kabir:Try pls if you dont like you can reject it.
Rachna went to trial room while Kabir was doing the billing,Rachna called out for Kabir.
Kabir:What happen?come out
"You come in"Rachna whispered from inside
Kabir looked if anyone is seeing n after confirming he went in.
Rachna stood there with baby tears in her face facing Kabir n her hands trying to put the zib of her skirt at back.
Kabir:Rachna what happened,If you dont like it change ut,Why you crying for this
Rachna:My Kurti got torn when I removed it fast,I cant wear it too.
Kabir:Oh you silly stop crying,I will get you another one you wait.
Rachna:No,I will get this one itself
Saying it she turned to him n showed her bare back which is to be zipped.Kabir's jaw opened on seeing her
Rachna:Kabir do soon
Kabir hands were shaking as he jently aproached the Zip,Losing his control he touched her skin,which gave her a sudden jerk she stepped ahead but Kabir pulled her hand in force so she fell on his chest and he put his hand around her waist making her not move.As Rachna closed her eyes Kabir took the advantage n put his other hand around her n he pulled the zib up too fast while Rachna gave a jerk n hugged him.Both remained in trial room hugging each for several mins n the people started to knock on the door,Feeling so embarassed they opened the door,
Rachna:Its all bcoz of you,see how bad evry1 looking at us
Kabir:Cool Rachna It was just an accident.
Rachna was hurt by his words for few mins she thought him as her boyfriend n his words remainded her that its all fake.
Rachna:Hmm sorry I over reacted.
Kabir:I text Mayank n Gunjan from unknown number to come mall by now they should be coming
Rachna:Thats gr8 Kabir am so tensed.
Kabir:You should be quiet for whatever I do thats enough
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Rabir was practicing for next few hours n Mayank n Gunjan reached the first floor n both were shocked to see each other.
Gunjan:Mayank you here?I mean are you alone
Mayank:Hmm sort of..You
Gunjan:I came here searching for a friend
Mayank:Oh boyfriend?
Gunjan:Obviously,I have a new fan now
Mayank:carry on madam,bye
Gunjan giggled n left him but Mayank followed her secretly.
Rachna:Kabir they r cumin,do something
Kabir:Hey what can I do now,I planned them to meet us at lunch but now they r too near us
Rachna:Cum lets run from here
Rachna dragged Kabir's hand n ran on the steps.Mayan walked on same path.Rachna was shocked seeing the deadend of mall,she hide behind the pillar with Kabir while Gunjan was searching for her fan.
Kabir:Rachna she might find us,All will flop if she us like this
Rachna:Stop talking n think of something
Kabir:Rachna we have no other go,We had to do this
Rachna:What
Kabir:Kiss me
Rachna:What are you mad
Gunjan was so close to them which made Rachna more nervous n she with more awkward look approached his mouth
Kabir:Rachna can I
Rachna without letting him speak shut his mouth by placing her lips hard on his.Kabir opened his mouth n locked her lips in his.Both were kissing hard at same time checking with one eye on Gunjan who stood there in shock.Mayank too witnessed it but he doubted it was Rabir so went close to them.
Gunjan:Rachna
Both pretended like they are shocked seeing her.
Rachna:Gunjan u?
Gunjan:Yez me,first you leave his hold.
Rachna with all blushing moved back from his hold n ran to hug Gunjan but Gunjan stopped her .
Gunjan:I cant bliv,you will cheat me like this,You said you gave up your love for ur family,Then whats all this
Rachna:Gunjan I tried to forget him but I couldn
Gunjan:But Y did u lie me,Have I ever hidden sumthing from,you?How can you alone behave so
Kabir:Gunjan you not happy that we joined
Gunjan: I cant really enjoy it knowing Rachna lied to me
Mayank:Gunjan I think you should forgive her
Rachna:Yes pls Gunjan,I thought to say but I was scared
Gunjan:Hmmm sorry Rachna,I cant take it easily,You lied to me for Kabir,Is he so imp to u than me,If you want me leave him n come with me else forget me
Rachna really got scared seeing Gunjan angry n Kabir got tensed thinking Rachna might tell the truth.So he dragged her near him n whisperred
"Its all going in right path dont spoil anythin,If she dont have your company only she will think of Mayank"
Rachna:But if she hates me,I cant live
Kabir:You must do this to expose her feelings for Mayank.
Rachna with heavy heart nodded n she held Kabir's hand,Gunjan understood what she wants n ran from the floor crying.
Mayank:Guys whats this
Rachna:I cant obey her in everything Mayank,She s wrong
Mayank:Rachna is it you?shit how can you say her so,Dont dare to talk a word about her again.
Mayank ran to console Gunjan while Rachna fell on the floor crying hard.
Mayank:Gunjan need a tissue
Gunjan:Leave me alone,I hate everyone,no one s true to me
Mayank:Gunjan see me
Gunjan looked up in to his eyes,she saw the concern for her n she jumped on him n hugged so tight crying
Mayank:Gunjan its ok,am there dont cry
Gunjan:I hate Rachna
Mayank:Hmm I know
Gunjan:I hate you too
Mayank:I know baby
Gunjan got down from him giggling n gave her hand to him saying friends.
Mayank:Only friends,nothin else ok
Gunjan hit him on his palm n both gave an hifive with broad smile on their face.
Rachna stood behind them letting out happy years .
Kabir:I said u right it will work out see how happy they are together.
Rachna:Thanks Kabir I never imagined Mayank will cool her so easily
Kabir:Thats the power of love
Rachna:Hope she wont hate me so long
Kabir:Hey come on,she loves u so much she s just angry,she cant hate you at all,n Rachna can I say you something.
Rachna:What now
Kabir:Actually ur lipstick is perfect shade now
Rachna:How suddenly
Saying it she checked in mirror it was not dark n she remembered Kabir kissing her.
Kabir:N infact it taste good.
Rachna got irritated n chased to hit him as he ran,As Rachna could not run more with her new dress she stopped getting stuck with her dress,Kabir laughed hard seeing her n came to her.
Rachna:Stop laughing
Kabir imitated like Gunjan n said friends
Rachna too laughed n gave hifive like Mayank
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi


Even I am waiting.😳

sorry for the delay guys
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank You!!!! For updating!!!😃
I was waiting for this update for a while...
Poor Rachna..Gunjan is mad at her.😭
Rabir were just awesome..☺️
Glad that Mayan are "friends" now. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Haye saranya what an update yaar.Cool
I just loved it.Bechare Rabir.Chori karte hai aur pakade jate hai.

Loved Rachana nd Kabir';s naughty convo here but they caught by Mayan.

Kabir choose dress for Rachana.Fab.

Rachana is kabir's choice so i must say his choice is fab

Mayan ka Hate you love you enjoyable again

Great continuation dear👏
I am not here for next two days.

So happy weekend and Rakshabandhan to you dear.🤗

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