Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 22

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Amazing Update!!!:)
Vishwa seems kind of fishy to me..maybe I'm wrong.😆
I loved Kabir's jealousy..that part was terrific.
Poor Gunjan..the way Mayank is treating her.😕
Please continue soon..please want to read more.😊

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

The last part hahaha
this chapter made me think about my collage days. They were the best days in collage. Lots of fun. Missing those days .Nicely written dear
and is vishwa having some feelings for rachna? It seems like he is so interested in rachna

Originally posted by: saravathi

Vishwa fishy hmm maybe later but now I don't have any such thought but nice suggestion though Thanks n sorry for the delay will continue soon dear

So funny that I immediately thought that Vishwa was up to no good as well! It's probably because I'm so pro Rabir that I will frown on any competition for Rachna's affection.

Originally posted by: hangok

ahh great,

so the hero kabir came to safe rachna...

owww great we could see jealous kabir i like it ...

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: crtkelly

So funny that I immediately thought that Vishwa was up to no good as well! It's probably because I'm so pro Rabir that I will frown on any competition for Rachna's affection.

Lovely update as usual!

Totally get Gunjan and the chocolate...been there done that LOL

Nice update saranya
I enjoyed every scene I loved it
I like choco scene so much
But this vishwa not a good men I think somthing wrong with his
Saranya pls tell why gunjan rachna behaving like
Ab to too much ho gaya
When will you reavel this confusion?
Thanks for pm
Update soon

Originally posted by: saravathi

All credits to u

u suggested n I just wrote t..

but you have wrote it so well👏

Thanks for pm saravathi.

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Saravathi,this is for your ff.