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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

Thanks again dear hope my mind too imagine wild so i can write,lol n glad to know u found it humourous

i know u will imagine the best 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh god the beginning with Rabir, where rachna thought kabir hold her shawl was great...and then rachna sits beside an old man was too funny, at last she sit beside kabir after this...

oww kabir is trying to make rachna jaleous, and this with gunjan🤔

they are going to stay together😃like it

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap---6
All four reached home it was too small house,when they opened it,it was too dark that they cudn even see the other,Kabir found a hand pulling his hand n Mayank too felt the .
Kabir:Hey Rachna where u taking me?
Rachna:Kabir what no I didn't
Gunjan:Mayank where r u
The boys voice were not heard,Gunjan n Rachna were scared thinking some ghost is inside n they stood in the middle of hall holding each others hand so tightly.Suddenly balloons bursted girls atonce closed their ears n opened their eye to check ,lights turned on n there were lot of boys n girls pouring beer on our hero's n our hero's were jumping on the floor,one of their friends asked Kabir who the girls are?
Kabir:They are our friends,hmm Hey Rachna cum join us
Rachna didn't even take a small step front seeing the beer n,bottles she was so tensed.
Mayank:Guys why all this surprise?
You both r our university toppers so a small party from our side srini gathered all of us here.
Kabir:Hey where is Neha?Didn't she cum
Rachna"Who is this Neha "
Mayank:N where is Lekha?
Both Neha n Lekha came from inside room wearing a sexy smile on their face n a bouquet on,their hand they hugged their hero's Rachna n Gunjan were so irritated n they were giving disgusting looks.
Neha:Hey handsome you look so tired?I think I should help you refresh
All the boys shouted come on Neha as she pulled Kabir for a kiss,Rachna couldn't see that she ran to the room covering her tears,Gunjan wanted to Know more about Mayank so she stood there, the boys enjoying the fun totally forgot about the girls,Neha:Kabir one kiss
Kabir:Neha you r my friend n nothing else
He said n pushed her slowly back.
Gunjan went to back of Mayank n tapped on his back while he was hugging Lekha from back of her.Mayank didn't realize Gunjan tapping on him getting more irritated Gunjan took a juice bottle n poured in to his collar,Mayank jumped in response.
Mayank:Gunjan what s this?
Gunjan:We both came here for you guys n you both totally forgot us n enjoying with ur girlfriends.
Sid:Chill down baby if u want I will give you company
Sid said putting his hand around her shoulders,she didn't like the way he looked as though he will eat her.Mayank took sids hand from her n whispered in his ears"She is mine"Sid signalled him best of luck n left.
Mayank:Gunjan you be with Rachna inside,I will join in u while whole class has cum tuf to handle u see.
Gunjan:You avoiding us for ur friends shit,I hate you getlost.
Mayank:Gunjan
Lekha:Mayank come na lets have fun.
Fast beats were playing n all were dancing like in club in drunken state.Inside girls locked the room n both were cursing the boys badly.
Rachna:All bcoz of you..see where we are now
Gunjan:I thought boys r nice,I never thought they will be so mean
Rachna:I really want to run away from here
Gunjan:Rachna we are at least safe here outside we dunno anyone.Rachna bursted out to cry n Gunjan consoled to hug her.
It bcame noon,Girls were so hungry so peeped out to check if anything is left to eat.They were so irritated to see guys lying on the floor all drunk n bottles were rolling on the floor,Mayank n Kabir were missing n Neha Lekha so the girls matched both got into conclusion.
Rachna n Gunjan thought they really made a bad decision in their life n chose a wrong companion.There was nothing but cake left they were so hungry but thinking what their hero's would be doing with the girls they felt like vomiting they went back to room without eating.Gunjan dozed off with empty stomach but Rachna since she didn't eat previous day as well her stomach was aching n she thought to have water n searched for refrigerator,It was not on the hall n kitchen remaining there were two rooms she found first room locked n thought to herself "Thank god you showed his true face to me"Thinking Kabir would be there inside.She found other door not locked n opened it slowly,She found fridge in it n she opened it suddenly someone from behind tapped on her shouldes she jerked in shock n dropped the bottle,she was about to scream when Kabir shut her mouth with his palm.In the mirror Rachna found it was Kabir but then too she pushed herself more away from him.
Rachna:Don't come near me,Am

not such a type girl if you touch me again I will really hit you
Kabir:What's wrong with you Rachna
Rachna:Stop calling my name even,you don't fit for that too.Go n continue what you were doing
Kabir:Cant get you
Rachna murmured Neha's name and Kabir understood what she imagined n laughed.
Kabir:Oh my little,You know what Neha s my friend n nothing else,I accept she likes me but I have no interest on her n not only her many girls liked me in my college for my charm n wealth,I cant love them all right,My heart s special for one
While saying it Kabir went close to her pushing her on fridge he placed his pointing finger on her waist n pushed her tummy in which made Rachna so week she closed her eyes as Kabir moved his finger upwards n Kept it the right middle of her chest n whispered in her ears.
"I know am here"He said pointing at her heart.When he pulled himself back from her Rachna opened her eyes
Kabir:Am I right Rachna?
Rachna:No u r wrong, n Don't ever expect such things. I accept I liked you in the first but seeing you with Neha,I decided I should never ever think about you
Kabir:You mistook me Rachna,I really didn't kiss her
Rachna:Kabir pls I am not your type,Neha will be perfect for you
Kabir:Rachna trust me
Rachna ran from the place leaving disappointed Kabir.
*************************
In the evening all friends were gone only they four stayed, The boys were hell tired of cleaning the place n the girls still continued their silence.
Mayank:Gunjan am saying sorry na pls forgive me,How can I avoid my friends suddenly
Gunjan:If you talk to me will kick you just shut up
Mayank pleaded her like a Kid and Gunjan showed her back too him.
Mayank:Gunjan you know you r so beautiful today n u look too thin in this dress,can I take a snap of u
Gunjan:Really am I looking beautiful than that Lekha?
Mayank:Ofcourse Gunjan,She s nothin before you
Gunjan:Wow Mayank u r so nice
She said n hugged him,n Mayank too hugged her n both started to take pics together seeing both close Rabir were so sad,Both dreamt like they taking pics together.Rachna could not face Kabir more so she moved to her room.After few mins when Kabir checked her room he found Rachna crying hard laying on bed holding her mom pic.
Kabir:Missing ur mom
Rachna:I want to be alone Kabir
Kabir:I will go out but before that I want to give you a small suggestion
Rachna:What
Kabir:When you think you want to cry,dont cry alone your worries will never go less,choose a person who will make your tears dry n bring up smile in ur face,Go hug him n cry on his chest"
While he was saying it Rachna's cheeks were brightening,
Kabir stood before her stretching his hand,Rachna broke her control n ran in to his arms n jumped on him,Kabir hugged her n lifted her above his kneels,
Rachna:Yes I love you Kabir
Saying it Rachna kissed all over his face n Kabir stopped her to kiss her lips,when their lips were burning inches away,
Mayank and Gunjan reached the door n shouted Rachna's name.

End of chap 6
Chap7 pg 16
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapne-suhane-ladakpan-ke/4096245/mayan-n-rabir-ff-play-date-completed-last-chap-pg-49?pn=16

Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey got it will read it now saranya thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww what an update 😳
i love gunjan nature here she clear all by saying all to mayank and even got happy with the small appreciation 😳and aww rachna is so much in love with kabir but hse mistook him to be a bad person and really kabir love the arm stretching scne and rachna hugged him and kissed all over his face oh wow wow 😳rachna showing love to kabir whole heartedly its the best
but tmayan came in between their first kiss oh no but stilli have high hopes there will be many kisses in the way😆😉😃
lovely update saranya 😳👏
and one thing that fridge scene was very gud i wish it could have happened in real 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. .
Little busy now . that's why couldn't able to replu in detail. .
Sorry dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Really nice chapter. I loved the fridge scene, just way too sweet, but have to admit Gunjan has me in hysterics, she is just too funny!

Thanks for the pm, looking forward to your next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

Chap---6
All four reached home it was too small house,when they opened it,it was too dark that they cudn even see the other,Kabir found a hand pulling his hand n Mayank too felt the .
Kabir:Hey Rachna where u taking me?
Rachna:Kabir what no I didn't
Gunjan:Mayank where r u
The boys voice were not heard,Gunjan n Rachna were scared thinking some ghost is inside n they stood in the middle of hall holding each others hand so tightly.Suddenly balloons bursted girls atonce closed their ears n opened their eye to check ,lights turned on n there were lot of boys n girls pouring beer on our hero's n our hero's were jumping on the floor,one of their friends asked Kabir who the girls are?
Kabir:They are our friends,hmm Hey Rachna cum join us
Rachna didn't even take a small step front seeing the beer n,bottles she was so tensed.
Mayank:Guys why all this surprise?
You both r our university toppers so a small party from our side srini gathered all of us here.
Kabir:Hey where is Neha?Didn't she cum
Rachna"Who is this Neha "
Mayank:N where is Lekha?
Both Neha n Lekha came from inside room wearing a sexy smile on their face n a bouquet on,their hand they hugged their hero's Rachna n Gunjan were so irritated n they were giving disgusting looks.
Neha:Hey handsome you look so tired?I think I should help you refresh
All the boys shouted come on Neha as she pulled Kabir for a kiss,Rachna couldn't see that she ran to the room covering her tears,Gunjan wanted to Know more about Mayank so she stood there, the boys enjoying the fun totally forgot about the girls,Neha:Kabir one kiss
Kabir:Neha you r my friend n nothing else
He said n pushed her slowly back.
Gunjan went to back of Mayank n tapped on his back while he was hugging Lekha from back of her.Mayank didn't realize Gunjan tapping on him getting more irritated Gunjan took a juice bottle n poured in to his collar,Mayank jumped in response.
Mayank:Gunjan what s this?
Gunjan:We both came here for you guys n you both totally forgot us n enjoying with ur girlfriends.
Sid:Chill down baby if u want I will give you company
Sid said putting his hand around her shoulders,she didn't like the way he looked as though he will eat her.Mayank took sids hand from her n whispered in his ears"She is mine"Sid signalled him best of luck n left.
Mayank:Gunjan you be with Rachna inside,I will join in u while whole class has cum tuf to handle u see.
Gunjan:You avoiding us for ur friends shit,I hate you getlost.
Mayank:Gunjan
Lekha:Mayank come na lets have fun.
Fast beats were playing n all were dancing like in club in drunken state.Inside girls locked the room n both were cursing the boys badly.
Rachna:All bcoz of you..see where we are now
Gunjan:I thought boys r nice,I never thought they will be so mean
Rachna:I really want to run away from here
Gunjan:Rachna we are at least safe here outside we dunno anyone.Rachna bursted out to cry n Gunjan consoled to hug her.
It bcame noon,Girls were so hungry so peeped out to check if anything is left to eat.They were so irritated to see guys lying on the floor all drunk n bottles were rolling on the floor,Mayank n Kabir were missing n Neha Lekha so the girls matched both got into conclusion.
Rachna n Gunjan thought they really made a bad decision in their life n chose a wrong companion.There was nothing but cake left they were so hungry but thinking what their hero's would be doing with the girls they felt like vomiting they went back to room without eating.Gunjan dozed off with empty stomach but Rachna since she didn't eat previous day as well her stomach was aching n she thought to have water n searched for refrigerator,It was not on the hall n kitchen remaining there were two rooms she found first room locked n thought to herself "Thank god you showed his true face to me"Thinking Kabir would be there inside.She found other door not locked n opened it slowly,She found fridge in it n she opened it suddenly someone from behind tapped on her shouldes she jerked in shock n dropped the bottle,she was about to scream when Kabir shut her mouth with his palm.In the mirror Rachna found it was Kabir but then too she pushed herself more away from him.
Rachna:Don't come near me,Am

not such a type girl if you touch me again I will really hit you
Kabir:What's wrong with you Rachna
Rachna:Stop calling my name even,you don't fit for that too.Go n continue what you were doing
Kabir:Cant get you
Rachna murmured Neha's name and Kabir understood what she imagined n laughed.
Kabir:Oh my little,You know what Neha s my friend n nothing else,I accept she likes me but I have no interest on her n not only her many girls liked me in my college for my charm n wealth,I cant love them all right,My heart s special for one
While saying it Kabir went close to her pushing her on fridge he placed his pointing finger on her waist n pushed her tummy in which made Rachna so week she closed her eyes as Kabir moved his finger upwards n Kept it the right middle of her chest n whispered in her ears.
"I know am here"He said pointing at her heart.When he pulled himself back from her Rachna opened her eyes
Kabir:Am I right Rachna?
Rachna:No u r wrong, n Don't ever expect such things. I accept I liked you in the first but seeing you with Neha,I decided I should never ever think about you
Kabir:You mistook me Rachna,I really didn't kiss her
Rachna:Kabir pls I am not your type,Neha will be perfect for you
Kabir:Rachna trust me
Rachna ran from the place leaving disappointed Kabir.
*************************
In the evening all friends were gone only they four stayed, The boys were hell tired of cleaning the place n the girls still continued their silence.
Mayank:Gunjan am saying sorry na pls forgive me,How can I avoid my friends suddenly
Gunjan:If you talk to me will kick you just shut up
Mayank pleaded her like a Kid and Gunjan showed her back too him.
Mayank:Gunjan you know you r so beautiful today n u look too thin in this dress,can I take a snap of u
Gunjan:Really am I looking beautiful than that Lekha?
Mayank:Ofcourse Gunjan,She s nothin before you
Gunjan:Wow Mayank u r so nice
She said n hugged him,n Mayank too hugged her n both started to take pics together seeing both close Rabir were so sad,Both dreamt like they taking pics together.Rachna could not face Kabir more so she moved to her room.After few mins when Kabir checked her room he found Rachna crying hard laying on bed holding her mom pic.
Kabir:Missing ur mom
Rachna:I want to be alone Kabir
Kabir:I will go out but before that I want to give you a small suggestion
Rachna:What
Kabir:When you think you want to cry,dont cry alone your worries will never go less,choose a person who will make your tears dry n bring up smile in ur face,Go hug him n cry on his chest"
While he was saying it Rachna's cheeks were brightening,
Kabir stood before her stretching his hand,Rachna broke her control n ran in to his arms n jumped on him,Kabir hugged her n lifted her above his kneels,
Rachna:Yes I love you Kabir
Saying it Rachna kissed all over his face n Kabir stopped her to kiss her lips,when their lips were burning inches away,
Mayank and Gunjan reached the door n shouted Rachna's name.

End of chap 6

The most romantic update I've read till now... Loved each and every part of it... Great job... Loved it...👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it looking forward to more romance, friendship and misunderstanding
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r too good...
Seriously i expected some fight or compromise between our heros...
but u toh gav a different twist...
Thank you for the update.
will b waiting for the nxt...😊
This s for u👏👏

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