Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48] - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: awesome-raji



agree with u anju
but plz let her complete this one😆


lol ya finish dis one n den
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

lol ya finish dis one n den


Ya saravathi finish this and do start writing novels it will be just like icing on the cake for us 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

can i say u one thing stop writing ffs fr some and start writing novels u are amazing and it will be realyy gud if u write one

I have not even thought of it,may be will try in future
Thanks anju
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Posted: 11 years ago
😉😉

Originally posted by: mkakkar93


Ya saravathi finish this and do start writing novels it will be just like icing on the cake for us 😳

yup will finish this one but no so soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update soon please???? I am waiting 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

Update soon please???? I am waiting 😉

sry dear held up with work will try posting as early as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts in one go.😃
It is really nice..
Your story is really unique and special and I am loving it.
Please continue soon and if possible then pretty please PM me.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rabir ff "Why us"
Chap-8

Rachna and Kabir reached back their home.They both were silent all the way.Rachna broke the silence when she stepped in to the house
Rachna:Kabir I know you cant bear me for 6 more months.But I assure you I wont even come on your way or disturb you and for your kind info I myself hate to stay with you here just bcoz its court order am doing it ok.
Kabir:I wont come on your way too.Better you pls dont show your face to me after I leave to office you come out of your room.
Rachna:Oh wow ok done then as though am dying to see your face
Kabir left to his room and Rachna to her room.Kabir seeing the do not disturb board and Rachna seeing Beware of dog board both remembered their moments and both turned at a time and stared at each.
Kabir "Ask her sorry man"
Rachna " Rachna give up your ego,go talk"
but both turned back to their rooms.

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Rachna's room and Kabirs room will connect to common balcony.Rachna opened back door of her room and was enjoying the rain in balcony.Kabir too was in balcony looking at the rain.They both were on the other side that they cant see each other.Both Rachna and Kabir thought of a plan to check out on each other,They thought to sneak in to others room through balcony.So both walked forward to others room.Both were tensed.Rachna has washed her sarees and hanged it in balcony.Kabir touched her sarees and felt Rachna's softness.When he took his face ahead of saree Rachna saw him first.She was shocked she thought to run back.Kabir too saw her now.He saw Rachna running back and shouted her name.Rachna stopped but didnt turn back Kabir went near her he stood only few inches away.Rain drops were falling on Rachna's face.Kabir could not see her face since she was turned Her loose hair were brushing his shirt and Kabir got lost in it.There was a thunder Rachna got scared and closed her ears with her hands and and closed her eyes too.Kabir who was lost at her now seeing her innocent act he lost his control his hands went around her waist He hugged her from back.
Rachna still closing her eyes felt warm in his embrace she didnt realise whats happening but she too leaned her body more on him.
It rained heavily with the chin raised eyes closed they both stood in the balcony hugging each lost in each other.
Thunder striked again Rachna's body gave a jerk again Kabir hugged her more tightly now to make her not be scared.
Kabir:Rachna I am der,why you scared now
Rachna on hearing his voice got back to senses and opened her eyes,upper part of her body was wrapped in his arms.She felt uncomfortable now and moved her body to release herself.Kabir felt her movement and opened his eyes.He took back his hands at once and he moved back.Rachna moved forward and tunred to see his face but this time Kabir turned his back towards.
Rachna rememberd" Dont please come and show your face to me"
and she left the balcony.
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Kabir to himself What did I do oh shit she would have thought me so cheap,I konw I cant control me before her thats why I thought to give her divorce very soon but why it it is happening to us
"Why us"
Rachna's thoughts" Whats wrong with me,I am loving Rajiv and hugging Kabir What that strange feeling I got when I was in his arms.Why didnt I stop him.we wanted to move away from each but its not happening "Why us"
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Doorbell rang.Kabir and Rachna both came oot of their to open the door.They finally faced each other.Rachna's eyes were swollen Kabir thought she cried beacuse he hugged her and felt bad on himself and hit his hand on the wall.Rachna thought he is angry bcoz he didnt want to see her face.
Rachna:Its for me,I will open the door.Its Rajiv
Kabir was confused.
Rajiv came in and went to hug Rachna.Rachna moved back immediately
Rajiv:Oh sorry I didnt notice Kabir
Kabir:Why are you here in this late night any problem
Rajiv:Thought of spending time with Rachna and came just like that
Kabir:But its too late how will you return too
Rachna:Kabir whats wrong with you he has come to stay here cant you see his luggage,
Kabir:He is staying tonight but why
Rajiv:Kabir not tonight for six months
Rachna:Yes Kabir we will pay you the rent too.you dont feel comfortable to stay alone with me for six months I cant stay her without talking to none without seeing anyone so I only asked him stay with us
Kabir:You should have atleast asked my permission
Rachna:I thought you wont have any problem
Rajiv:Kabir you dont like me staying here then may be I will take Rachna with me and see some other home
Kabir:What No you both stay here itself
He said and left to his room angrilly.

Rachna to herself " Atleast hereafter you no need to adjust my tortures."
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Rachna:Good night Rajiv
Rajiv:One kiss na pls
Rachna:Rajiv we are not married yet ok
Rajiv:just a small kiss as my girlfriend pls
Rachna pushed him inside his room and closed the door

Rajiv seeing the mirror
"This Rachna is to much,In five years I would have pleaded for a kiss but she never gave, before marriage I will enjoy her completely this time she cant escape"
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Rachna leaving Rajiv ran to her room happily and bumped in to Kabir.Kabir got irritated on seeing her happiness.
Kabir:Cant you be careful.Always in dreamworld
Rachna:Are you not tired of shouting me.comeon pls take a break
I really dont understand her why you hating me this much suddenly.I thought you as a good friend but you are not
Kabir stared at her and Rachna's eyes fixed on Kabir
Kabir:You really cant get why am behaving like this
Rachna:No pls say me.What you want
Kabir:You can never understand it its no use of saying now
Kabir moved to his room but Rachna stoppped him by blocking his way with her hand.
Rachna:Say me,I will try to understand pls give me a chance
Kabir lost his temper and cupped her face in anger,Rachna's eyes widened in shock.Suddenly Kabir's hold became soft and he gently caressed her cheeks.Rachna felt goose bumps all over her.
Rachna:Kabir
Kabir:This is my problem you are my problem pls getlost of my life
He said it pushing her aside leaving Rachna more confused.
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Rachna was more tired that she went to her room and slept soon But Kabir could not sleep at all.
Kabir:"Daadi,I wish you were here,I want to lay on your laps and say I love Rachna Dadi,I now only understood why you married her to me,She is all I wanted but Dadi She dont like me at all.It make me hurt her,I should not hurt Rachna like this,I should keep her happy atleast for this six months.After that she wont be mine.I promise you Dadi I will keep her happy this six months"
He decided to ask sorry to Rachna and went her room it was not closed but he was shocked seeing Rajiv admiring Rachna in bed.
Kabir shouted Rajiv which made Rachna awake.Rajiv too was shocked seeing Kabir
Rachna:What you both doing here?
Rajiv:We both came just now,We heard some sound in your room and we came to check on you
Kabir was confused on hearing Rajiv's lie.
Rachna:Kabir am fine,sorry to bother you again
Kabir:Nothing like that Rachna.Anything for my friend
Rachna's mouth opened on hearing what he said
Rachna:Friends
Kabir gave an assuring smile
Rachna:Thanks a lot Kabir
Rajiv:Hey Rachna you sleep soon its late gn
Rachna:Ya gn both
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In hall
Kabir:Why did you lie her,What were you doing inside
Rajiv:Its none of your business Kabir
Kabir:It wont take few mins for me to reveal the truth to her
Rajiv:You think she will bliv you
He laughed aloud
"No way,She wont bliv anyone but me"shouted Rajiv
Kabir : You dont worth her love"
Rajiv: If you say this to Rachna she will hate you n not me so better dont try
Rajiv left with a wicked smile
Kabir stood worried without knowing what to do

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Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Read all the parts in one go.😃
It is really nice..
Your story is really unique and special and I am loving it.
Please continue soon and if possible then pretty please PM me.😆

Thanks dear ya will pm you
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Posted: 11 years ago
I m reading comment in few minutes

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