Rabir ff-'Why Us'[Last chap-PG 48]

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AnjaliPunia

@AnjaliPunia

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

grr mera rajeev grey but loved it hayee i can imagine his wicked face he wud be sexy in it too
six mnths enuf fr falling n catching each other nice update n thnx fr p.m .

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

no problem wonderful update saravathi loved it and haan rajeev is negative but no problem as u cant give everything in one ff and everybody cant be gud always 😃 i m happy and kabir hiding his feelings is the best part today and he is so lovely and selfless that he just file the divorce papers with no hesitation and so fast however he must be broken inside 😭but love the law they extended for six months and this six months will never end 😳lovely update as always 👏 and i was aiting very eagely me and oishi were dicussing how marvellous ur writings are 👏

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia
grr mera rajeev grey but loved it hayee i can imagine his wicked face he wud be sexy in it too
six mnths enuf fr falling n catching each other nice update n thnx fr p.m .

lol..I don't have any clue with this six months I just changed the story as oishi asked and ended up somewhere else

Thank u so much for ur comments

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: mkakkar93
no problem wonderful update saravathi loved it and haan rajeev is negative but no problem as u cant give everything in one ff and everybody cant be gud always 😃 i m happy and kabir hiding his feelings is the best part today and he is so lovely and selfless that he just file the divorce papers with no hesitation and so fast however he must be broken inside 😭but love the law they extended for six months and this six months will never end 😳lovely update as always 👏 and i was aiting very eagely me and oishi were dicussing how marvellous ur writings are 👏

Thanks mehak..

how cum u read it so soon n comment,Is my update too short

😲 but while i was typing about Rajiv's real

char, first I wrote him more negative than this but thought of your comments n changed him again😆

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: saravathi

Thanks mehak..
how cum u read it so soon n comment,Is my update too short
😲 but while i was typing about Rajiv's real
char, first I wrote him more negative than this but thought of your comments n changed him again😆

ur update is not short yaar its just that i roam around ur ff always so that as soon u post i start reading😆 i love it so much that i just always wait for ur updates eagerly😳 and one thing more too that i am a little bit fast reader and thanks that u did write abut him more negative but no problem just continue ur story as ur thoughts no restriction 😳if u make rajeev more negative then also no prob he acts a role of villian also very gracefully i will love that too as i love ur updates 😳👏

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sandjanarai

@sandjanarai

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Hai i love ittt.
I knew it dayal can't hurt his daughter
And in this 6 months they will fall in love
Hate you rajeev, you are a coward who was afraid to marry a country girl
Update soon
Pm me
Thanks

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

and aww u have to write it all again on rajeev just thinking of mee 😳so sweet and thanks a lot but there is full freedom to u u can write anything as everything u write i love it to the core 😳

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

ur update is not short yaar its just that i roam around ur ff always so that as soon u post i start reading😆 i love it so much that i just always wait for ur updates eagerly😳 and one thing more too that i am a little bit fast reader and thanks that u did write abut him more negative but no problem just continue ur story as ur thoughts no restriction 😳if u make rajeev more negative then also no prob he acts a role of villian also very gracefully i will love that too as i love ur updates 😳👏

Thanks, love u dear

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: mkakkar93
and aww u have to write it all again on rajeev just thinking of mee 😳so sweet and thanks a lot but there is full freedom to u u can write anything as everything u write i love it to the core 😳

I must say this you r not a fast reader alone

you post fast too..was surprised seeing ur other comment

so soon,see how long am typing it still lol😉

n thanks dear yup will update like asusual in my way

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

😆

Originally posted by: sandjanarai
Hai i love ittt.
I knew it dayal can't hurt his daughter
And in this 6 months they will fall in love
Hate you rajeev, you are a coward who was afraid to marry a country girl
Update soon
Pm me
Thanks

Thank god atleast you hated Rajiv,n actually I used ur prediction on dayal since I liked it

sorry was in short of story line😭😊😆