Hamsafar; FF on RaBir Last Part (6) Updated - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: cj-the-greatest

It was a pleasure reading this story. I personally liked the way u incorporated dolu into this. The characters were also very true to themselves. I loved it. I wish it were longer though. Hopefully u will write more. I think u should write a fanfic to portray their married life, I know its still far away in the show. But I wud love to read something like that. May be a One-shot. No pressure though.

P.s. cj is something my friends call me coz my real name buraira is quite a mouthful. And I probably should not have added that -is-the-greatest part coz that's not true at all. My id should have been cj the greatest moron. 😆

How do you preferred to called in this forum? Another ff or OS? I don't know. When an idea strikes, it gets easy. If not, I find it very tough. Thanks for the kind wods.

When you are free, participate in other threads too. Nice chatting to you, bye.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ...SankaDevi...

I assume people at the Fashion show are gonna think Dolu is KT and Rachana's son?

I'm in for this. Please PM me please :) 😆


Actually I was not intending to, at the beginning. I brought it in because some of you liked that idea. Still could not develop that idea much. Sorry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Kikidramagirl

Yes yes I was gonna say that too...are the people think they're married couple with dolu as the son 😆 That'll be really cute

And brillaint start. I'm glad you decided to do FF this time

I know, you are busy. Good luck girl.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Hope you liked the ending too 😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: eshasrk

Great start and gosh Dolu is so cute

Thanks, I am replying to everyone after ending. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sandjanarai

Nice continue dear. Hope you update soon. Pm me if there is a update

Sorry dear, could not PM anybody. Anyway, it was posted regular. So thought, there was no need.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: nividances

Awesome awesome awesome! Please PM me when you update! 😊

Thank you. I still have to reply in your ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: hangok

owww so sweet,
wish dolu would not be there...
but they are just too cute..

nice part..

😕. Don't know, most of us liked Dolu's presence. Of course. If it was after marriage, the reactions could have been different. 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: saravathi

kept smiling till the end n even now...superb story line

Thanks dear, have to reply in your ff too. I am a bit lazy. That's why, today I decided to reply to all the posts.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: AnjaliPunia

u ended it i m angry i ws expecting it to be lng i just hope u cme back with another


Khatam to Hona hi hei, hum sub ko.

Too much spirituality daala kya? Chod do. Aastha channel off.

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