RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May) - Page 3

Really nice !! I do follow Hindi very well too.😆

Love it. I can follow hindi. But when it is mainly dialogs, I would feel easier to read the English version (and Hindi version in leisure, as I did for another ff of yours).

Thanks for the pm and very nice update ...continue writing

Originally posted by: nividances

Hi! Just read all the parts of your story...please continue, it's reaally good! Also can you PM when you update...just sent you a request. 😊

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond

nice! is it possible to write in English? tks

Originally posted by: brat2008

Really nice !! I do follow Hindi very well too.😆

Pls don't stop , continue writing pls😆

Pls pm me once you update😳

Originally posted by: usrfan

Love it. I can follow hindi. But when it is mainly dialogs, I would feel easier to read the English version (and Hindi version in leisure, as I did for another ff of yours).

Originally posted by: saravathi

Thanks for the pm and very nice update ...continue writing

chapter 4:

Chapter 5:

Kabir was going downstairs...he was finding Pihu...finally he got her

Kabir: bhabhi bhabhi plzzz meree baat sunoo

Pihu: kya hai Kabir plzz dekho phr se subah wali koi bi fuzool baat mat krna mujhay buhat kaam hai she was abt to left for kitchen

Kabir: nahi bhabhi suno touu sach mein ek baat hai

Pihu: hmm bolo

Kabir: who mere friends ne party rakhee hai

Pihu: tou :p

Kabir: tou yeh ke

Pihu: maan se permission lenee hai ya pa'pa se

Kabir: array nahi aap se permission lenee hai

Pihu: mujh se kya 😕

Kabir: who mein soch raha thaa ke Rachna tou ghar pe bore ho jayegee naa

Pihu's eyes wide open

Pihu: who kyun bore hogeee

Kabir: array I mean agr woh mere sath chalay tou...

Pihu gave him look...

Pihu: u mean tumharay saath party mein

Kabir: han trust me usay buhat mazaa aayega mere friends bhi hongay na

Pihu: lekin raat mein agr late hogayee tou nahin Kabir kabhi Rachna ko aisay akelay maan papa ne nahi choda unhein pata laga tou

Kabir: nahi sach mein we will be back by 11

Pihu: BY 10

Kabir: acha ok By 10 pakka

In mean while Rachna came...

Rachna: kya horha hai

Kabir: dekha bhabhi isay kehtay hain think of devil and devil is here he laughed loudly

Rachna: 😲 mein devil tou tum (she was not knowing what to say)devil ki biwi

Pihu hit her own head

Kabir: isay kehtay hain pagal billy mein tou ladka hon hahhahah

Rachna: hahhaha lame joke kisne kaha tum ladkay ho

Kabir: Dr ne ab bolo and winked😉

Pihu: stoppp Rachna Kabir yeh sb kya hai mein pagal hojaungee tum dono ke beech mein..oh God. Rachna jaa ke ready hojaa party mein jana hai na!

Kabir: haan haan jao aur sunoo achay se kapday pehan na

Rachna: matlab 😕

Kabir: achay se

Rachna again confused

Kabir: array tumhein itni simple baat samjh nahi aatee

Rachna: Oh God mein ja rhee hun ready honay

Rachna left

Pihu: Kabir yeh kya hai mein samajh gayee tum kya bolna chah rahay thay and *held him from ears* sudhar jaao

Kabir: sorry bhabhi mazaak kar rha tha ahhh mera kaan

Pihu: hmm jao aur late mat karna aur Rachna ka achay se khayal rkhna

Kabir: don't worry

Its 7pm...

Kabir went in Rachna's room, knocking first.. Rachna was getting ready.. she was wearing a beautiful red top knee length, she was wearing a one piece and had left her hair open(she has step cutting) she wore silver loops and high heels

Kabir eyes and mouth was wide open she was looking stunning she wasn't knowing he is standing at door when she turned from mirror

Rachna: come in who is there...oh Kabir sorry for late m ready now shall we go

Kabir was staring at her and then came back to senses :yeah its ok chalo

They sat in car and went to the party...

As they entered the club it was fully disco environment...

Mayank saw Kabir

Mayank: Kabir idhar aa

Kabir: ok coming

Mayank: kahan tha yaar tu itni late krdeee..

Kabir: kuch nahi yr traffic tha oh yes meet my new friend Rachna

Mayank: hello Rachna

Rachna: hii

Mayank: ok lets go to tha side everyone waiting

Kabir met all his friends and his one friend tina hugged him so tightly

Tina: Hi Kabir omg u r looking so handsome

Rachna(in mind);yeh ladki pakki flirt hai

Kabir: oh yeah meet Rachna...Rachna she is tina, nisha ,neha, ashish and rahul

And guys she is Rachna my sister in law's sister and my new friend

Rachna: Hi

They all greeted her..Rachna got happy that he atleast introduced her as a friend

Tina: oh Rachna u really beautiful...Kabir coughed to tease Rachna.. Rachna understood

Rachna: thank u

Nisha: guys lets dance hum kya krnay aayay yahan

Rahul: yea lets goo...

Kabir: Rachna chalo na and in mean while

Tina dragged Kabir and all friends were busy in dancing Rachna was left alone

Rachna: mein yahan kyun aayee (feeling sad)

Rahul noticed Rachna

Rahul: come on Rachna lets dance

Rachna: no sorry mujhay dance nahi aata feeling little weird

Kabir: wait a minute tina m coming he went towards Rachna...Rachna chalo naa

Rachna:lekin Kabir

Kabir: arrey come on... he hold her wrist unknowingly and dragged her to dance floor.. Rachna felt goose bumps...

Kabir: kya hua tum itni chup chup kyun ho kaali billi ghar pe tou buhat meow meow boltee hai and she laughed

Rachna: woh Kabir mein kabhi aisee parties mein nahi aayee naa islye thoda ajeeb

Kabir noticed she didn't mind his word kaali billi he got it she is not in good mood...

Kabir: hmm tou ek kaam krtay hain chalo hum ghar chlatay hain

Rachna: nahin tum apnay friends ke sath raho mein ghar chalee jaaungee

In mean while nisha interrupted kya ho raha hai guysss arrey Rachna chalo mere saath tum bore horhee hogee na dekho jab mein new thee na is group mein mujhay bhi yeh log aisay bore krtay thay

Kabir laughed: hmm yeh tou baat hai lekin nisha tumhein nahi lagta Rachna kuch zyada alag hai and winked to nisha

Nisha: ehem haan yeh baat tou hai

Rachna: mein paani peeke aatee hun she went towards the counter

Kabir was seeing her where she is going..

Nisha: Kabir waisay agar tum aur Rachna I mean ehemm

Kabir; shut up nisha

Nisha: showed him toungue😛

Rachna was drinking water in mean while some white guy who was fully drunk came near to her

Guy: hi baby u look so hot

Rachna became scared and tense she by saying excuse me tried to leave but that guy held her hand

Guy: hey where are u going

Rachna tried to loosen the grip of his hand and slappd him with the other hand.. she got tears

Guy: u slapped me I won't leave u!!

he held both of her hands and she in scare started shouting but there was too much noise people couldn't hear...she shouted loudly Kabir plzz help me plzz help...

Kabir : yaar yeh Rachna kahan reh gayee

Nisha: mein dekhtee hun

Kabir:haan chalo dekhtay hain...

He reached the counter and saw some guy was trying to drag her and harrass her he immediately held him from collar and punched him and that guy fell on the floor and they left from there

Nisha: Rachna are u ok...

Gang reached there...

Rachna was crying badly she nodded her head.. Kabir felt really bad for her... he went towards her Rachna was scared so she hugged him and she was crying

Rahul: guys lets move from here

Kabir: Rachna chalo ghar chaltay hain...

Outside the club... At a restaurant

Tina:oh God these guys are sooo stupid jahan ladki dekhee start hojatay hain apni asliyat pe...come on Rachna cheer up

Rachna: yeah am ok with a fade smile

But Kabir knew she wasn't ok.. he tried to console her by holding her hand..Rachna was shocked to see his care towards her

Mayank: I guess ab hum dinner kar latay hain kafi late hogayee hai

They all had dinner and Rachna also became there friend...they had a fun time but Kabir was noticing Rachna was still too much scared due to that incident...

On the way returning to there home...

Kabir: m sorry Rachna mujhay tumhein nahin leke aana chahyya tha

Rachna: tum sorry kyun bol rahay ho tumne tou meree help ki hai mujhay tumhein thanks bolna chahyay tha

Kabir: I think friends mein thank u word nahi hota hai na

Rachna (smiled): aur sorry bhi nahi hota they both laughed

they reached the gate...Rachna felt something.. she was confused...

Kabir: arrey chalo na andar

Rachna: woh...mein aisay

Kabir: kya hua

Rachna: kuch nahi tum chalo mein aatee hun

Kabir: aisay mein andar nai jaa skta gaadi kon band karega chalo na

Rachna: Kabir lekin mera dress.

Kabir: kya hua tumharay dress koo

Rachna: woh peechay se shayad zip khul gayee hai (while looking down)

Kabir also felt shy and blushed...

Kabir: mein help kardun

Rachna was having no other way

Kabir signalled her to turn Rachna turned and he removed her hair from back she felt her heart beat raising so hard Kabir while looking only towards close make her zip up she felt his fingers touching her bare back and she closed her eyes breathing high...

Kabir: while looking in other direction...ho gaya chalo ab

Rachna was blushing soo much she was again going to say thanks when he interrupted her no thanks and sorry remember btw u are looking really beautiful today

Rachna only smiled while blushing

In the mean time Pihu reached the gate

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