RaBir FF: ~*Tum hi ho*~ prt 19 updated @ pg27(18 May)

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Colt.Pixy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow i liked starting. different writing. waiting for next update

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thnku for giving us a Rabir ff ...i m waiting to see their meeting...add me to pm list

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: saravathi
Very nice update 👏 pls write in english

ThaNks...! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: linu82
Lovely starting, cant wait for the next part and to their meeting, keep it up

Thanks alooot!!!!! :)))))))

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RabirLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: angelinasingh
thnku for giving us a Rabir ff ...i m waiting to see their meeting...add me to pm list

SuRe... :D

Edited by RabirLover - 11 years ago

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RabirLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

CHAPTER2 :

Dayal: ayay aayay Tripathi jee hum tou apki raah taktay reh gayay

Om: yar dayal aaj mein buhat khush hun maana ke tum banaras mein rehtay ho mein mumbai par aaj humari itnay saalon ki dosti rishteydaari mein badal gayee😛

they both hug each other

OM: aray haan Kabir idhar aao

Kabir: jee papa😛

Dayal: aray yeh itna badaa hogaya😃

OM: aur nahi tou kya abhi abhi australia se apni degree complete krkay aaya hai😊

Dayal also hug Kabir

...chalo beta chalo andar chalo

...the baraat was welcomed with so much honour...

Kabir (whispering mohan in mandap😉):bhaai mein pehlay bhabhi dekhunga aap se bhi pehla

mohan: tu srf apni bhabhi nahi uska poora khandaan bhi mujh se pehlay dekhlena bas

Kabir: woww yes yes😛

suddenly everyone's eyes were on stairs as bride was coming on her right side was Rachna and on left Gunjan and Chaya...

Kabir also look towards bride but view wasn't clear at that time...

as they reached downstairs Kabir's cell rang...

Kabir goes to another side...

Kabir in mind: what the hell mujhay pehlay bhabhi dekhnee thee😡

Rachna, Gunjan and Chaya make Pihu sit in mandap...

and all the mantra's and rasams started...

Kabir: ok ek kaam kar tu direct ghar pohnch jaa, itni late kardeee😡

Mayank: oh bhaai kya karun ek tou itna kaam tha

Kabir: acha jaldi aa m waiting

then Kabir go towards mandap Rachna's cell start ringing...

Rachna:😲hospital se

Rachna go to another side

Rachna:whattt😲😲 aap jaldi se operation ki tayari krein mein 15 mnutes mein puhnch rahee hun

Shail: kya hua tu itni pareshan kyun hai

Rachna: maan woh ek emrgency case hai mujhay abhi jana hoga

Shail: kya abhi tu kaisay jaasktee hai Pihu ki baraat aayee huaa hai teri behen ki shaadi horhe ehai

Rachna: maan lekin ek insaan ki life mere lye meri behen ki shaadi se zyada imp hai aap plz driver ko bolein gaadi nikalein

Shail: Rachna tu aur tera kaam

she goes hurriedly and change all her clothes and went to hospital...

after all rasams Pihu and mohan took aashirwaad...

during dinner

OM: aray dayal Rachna kahan hai humne tou kitnay saalon se nahi dekhee

Dayal: haan woh yehee kahin hogee

Shail: woh usay hospital jana pada emrgency mein

OM: hospital kyun😕

Shail: actually uske patient ka emergency case tha usay islye jana pada

Om: oh acha tou Doctor hai Rachna😛

Kabir (in mind): kon Rachna😕..hogee koi

Sughanda: mere khayal se ab humein chalna chahyay

OM: haan abhi ghr pe bhi tou rasmein krnee hain

Shail(in mind):pata nahi Rachna kab tak aayegaa

during rukhsati: maan Rachna kahan hai😭

Shail: woh emergency case agya tha islye jana pada...

Pihu: mujh se mil ke bhi nahi gayee😭...

Shail: Pihu bas rona band kar...ab😛

Pihu's rukhsati happened...

5a.m

Rachna at hospitaL : what the hell yaar mein dee see bhi nahi mil payee but am happy saved two lifes😛

Dr rahul:oh hello dr Rachna kya hua u look tired jahan tak mujhay yaad hai tumhari dee ki tou shadi thee na kal

Rachna: han par humari doctors ki life mein sab se zyada important kisi ki life save krna hotee hai😊

dr RAhuL: thats the spirit miss beautiful😛

Rachna: uff rahul plzzz ab tum mat start hojana😆😆

dr rahul: acha yeh chodo chayay piyogee

Rachna: haan plzz phir mujhay ghar jana hai...

after few days...

Om: haan haan Dayal tum fikar mat karo Rachna yahan 6 months kya 6 saal bhi reh sktee hai

Dayal: thanks alot...

OM: aray thanks ki kya baat hai chal bataa kab ki flight hai Rachna ki

Dayal: aaj raat ki

OM: theek hai mein khud lenay jaaunga driver ke saath

after ending call

Sughanda: kon tha

Om: Dayal tha woh Rachna ki koi training hai mumbai mein usay 6 months ke liye aana tha usne tou bola woh hotel mein rahegee per meine bola nahi jab unki ek betee humaray ghar ko itna cha chala rhee hai doosree ki rehnay ki woh kyun fikar kray

Sughanda: yeh tou buhat acha kiya😛...mein room tayar krwa detee hun

Rachna: yayyy😛😛😛 mein dee ke pass ja rhee hoon per maan mein aapko aur papa ko buhat miss krungee

Shail: ohoo Rachna tu srf months ke lye jaa rhee hai sun achay se rehna

Rachna: haan maan don't worry...maan mere night suits yaad se daalna😛...

Kabir: woww bhabhi aaj tou aap buhat khush lag rhee hai😉kya baat hai bhaai ne koi romantic line bolee kya😉

Pihu: Kabir tu sudhar jaa

suddenly mohan enters

Kabir: ehem ehem😉 mere khayal se ab mujhay yahan se chalay jana chahyay

mohan : kyun😕

Kabir: aray apki koi private talk hogee na😉😉

mohan: Kabir teri life mein romance aur flirt ke ilawa aur kuch possible hee nhi hai na😆😆

Kabir:i hope mujhay bhi koi romance krnay wali mil jayay😉😉 mein din raat uske saath romance karun

Pihu holding his ears: ahaan tou ab romance krnay wali chhayay mohan jee jaldi se iski shaadi krwaayay😛

mohan: haan mein aaj hee pa'pa se bolta hun😆😆

Kabir: nahi bhai plzz yeh mat krna...

Night :

Pihu: Rachna😛 and hug her

Rachna:😛 dee i missed u so sooo much

Pihu: kya hua hai tujhay itni patlee kyun hogayee hai

Rachna: dee aap bhi na😆😆

mohan: hi Rachna

Rachna: jeejuuu and hug him😛

then Kabir came...

Kabir: bhabhi yeh kon hai😕

Rachna: excuse me tum dr Rachna Garg ko nahi jaantay😡

Kabir: tum koi president ho kya jo tumhein sab jantay hongay😆😆

Pihu: Rachna chup

Rachna: dee yeh mera mazaak udaa rha hai

mohan: Kabir sorry bol

Kabir: oh ok sorry miss president😆😆

Rachna: dee dekho😡

Pihu: ohoo Rachna tu sun tou yeh Kabir hai mera dewar

Rachna: Ohhh acha tou yeh hai woh green kurta guy

Kabir: whattt whatt green kurta guy m wearing white cant u see😡

Rachna: kuch baatein unkahi achi lagtee hain 😈

suddenly Sughanda gi come...

Rachna met Sughanda and hug her also...

Sughanda: Pihu tum Rachna ko uska room dikhaa doo

Pihu: han maan chal Rachna

on stairs...

Pihu: Rachna tu kab sudhregee

Rachna: meine kya kiya😕

Pihu: Kabir ke saith aisay behave kyun kiya

Rachna woh hai hee aisa😆😆😆

Pihu: acha tujhay kaisay pata

Rachna: dee samjha kroo na😉

Pihu: uff Rachna

suddenly mohan calls Pihu...

Pihu: acha sun yahan stairs se left second tera room hai

Rachna: oh ok aap jaao

instead of second Rachna enters the first room...😆😆 and throws her bag

Rachna: oh God m super tired mein fresh up honay jatee hun.. she took her night suit😉and went to bath

suddenly Kabir enters his room and he was changing his shirt he saw someone coming out from the washroom...

Kabir: tummm😲😡😡 (and cover body with arms)

Rachna: hawww tummm😡

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ps: likes, dislikes, comments, tamatar, andes all are welcome! 😃

Edited by RabirLover - 11 years ago

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AnjaliPunia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

i wud have preffered rachna in bathrob instead but its okay excellent going...can i kiss u ?

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RabirLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

CHAPTER 3 :

Rachna: tummm😲😲😲
Kabir:tummm😲😡
Rachna: tum yahan kya kr rahay ho tumhari himmat kaisay huee yahan aanay ki😡
Kabir; oh hello miss president
bt she didnt let him to speak and move towards Kabir
Rachna:samjh gayee mein sab kuch samjh gayee😡 😡
Kabir: kya samjh gayee aur door raho mujh se apni haalat dekhee hai😡
Rachna: kyun kyun door rahoon tum apni haalat dekho bina shirt ke khaday ho mujhay pata hai tum mera faidaa uthanay ki koshish kr rahay ho😡
Kabir:😲what are u mad mein aisaa nahi hun

Rachna: jhoot jhoot mat bolo tum jaisay ladkay jahan khoobsuarat ladki dekhtay hain wahin pe

Kabir :Oh hello tum jaisee ladkiyan Kabir Tripathi ke samnay australia mein aagay peechay ghoomtee theen bt meine kabhi unhein lift nahi karayee btw tumhein kis ne kaha tum beautiful ho😆😆

Rachna: kya kaha😡😡😲

Kabir(got naughty mind to make her scare): haan lekin itni buri bhi nahi ho...and move close to her waisay buhat hot lag rahee hoo😉 and winked at her

Rachna:😲😲😲 dee
Kabir: chup bilkul chup waisay chalo na thoda flirt krtay hain😉

Rachna:😲😭 tum aisa kyun kr rhay ho mein abhi single hun

Kabir:tou tumhein lagta hai mein 2 bachon ki maan se flirt krunga😉...
then he🤣 dekho apna face mirror mein kaisay darr jaatee ho na tum ladkiyan

then he wore his shirt back and Rachna kept standing in shock

Rachna:😡
Kabir: ohoo dr Rachna Garg ab rona band kro😆😆
Rachna: mein kahan ro rahe ehun😡
Kabir: acha abhi tum ro hee tou rahee thee😆😆

on the other hand Pihu searching Rachna...
Pihu in mind: yeh Rachna kahan chalee gayee then she heard some voices and entered

Rachna:😡mein kabhi nahi rotee
Kabir:acha ab room mein aa hee gayee ho tou tum meree room mate ban sktee ho😆😆😆 i have no problem

Rachna: whattt😲😲😡 Kabir excusme tum mere room mein aayay ho
Pihu: Rachna😲
Rachna: dee
she go towards Pihu and hug her
Rachna: dee dekho na Kabir mere room se nahi ja raha
Kabir: bhabhi yeh kis pe gayee hai aap pe tou bilkul bhi nahi😆
Pihu: Kabir buree baat meri chotee si doll ko tum aisaa nahi bologay
mohan also enters
mohan: kya hua
Rachna: jiju yeh Kabir mujhay tang kr rha hai
Pihu: ohoo bas buhat hogya ab chalo apnay room mein
Rachna: matlab😕yeh mera hee tou room hai
Kabir: jee nahi yeh mera room hai
Rachna: jhoot mat bolo😡
Kabir: acha is ghar ki maalik tum ho ya mein
Rachna : mein then she realized😲 what she said..m.m..matlab uncle hain
Pihu: basss Rachna Kabir ...Rachna tmeine tumhein bola tha left pe second room na ke first
Rachna: tou yeh second hee tou tha
Pihu; nahi woh store tha jisay tumne room samjhi😊
Rachna: what😲...oh acha sorry dee mistake hogaye..
Pihu: mujhay nahi Kabir ko sorry bolo
mohan: aray leave it chalo Rachna
while leaving Rachna turned back and Kabir giving her naughty smile😉

Next morning...
7 a.m
Kabir in his room ...while sleeping...
Kabir: 😡😡yeh koun hai yr itna subah subah itna tez volume mein deck🥱
Rachna busy in her excersise yoga..in yoga dress😆
Kabir wakeup:😡😡😡 dekhna padega...

then he heard voice coming frm Rachna's room
Kabir: oh God yeh ladki subah subah ko dance kr rhee hai kya😡 dekhta hun isay abhi

he opened her door and kept on lookin her in irritating look while keeping one hand on his waist she wasnt knowing and was busy in exercising
he go and stop the player...
Rachna:😕😡 koun hai
she tuned and saw
Kabir: excusme miss president yeh ghar hai disco bar nahi😡
Rachna: tumne mujhay excersis krtay dekha😡
Kabir: nahi nahi dekha forgodsake volume slow krkay bhi tum krsktee ho
Rachna:nahi mujhay aisay mazaa nahi aata😡
Kabir: btw tum insaanon ki dr bilkul nahi lagtee ya tou tum pagalon ki dr ho ya tumhein dr banany walay pagal thay😆😆
Rachna: tum ne phr mera mazaak udaya😲
Kabir: nahi meine tou banaya😆 udaya kahan btw jaakay dresh hojaao itni smeel krdee hai sweating se🤢
Rachna :Kabir😡 how dare u
she tried to catch him and Kabir ran away and goes downstairs Rachna keeps on chasing him
he directly enters kitchen
Kabir: bhabhi bachaao 😆😆
and hide behind Pihu...
Rachna: dee hato yahan se aaj mein nahi chodongee isay😡
Kabir:pakad ke dikhaao na kaali billi 😆😆 meoww
Rachna: dee 😡 dekhoo ab
Pihu: Kabir
Pihu; Rachna😲 tum mere saath chalo ooper😡
before leaving Rachna throwed water bottle to him bt he catch it
Kabir:😆😆😆thanks
Pihu: dekho apnay aapko yeh kaisay kapday pehnay huay hain Rachna dekh yahan koi aisay kapday nahi pehnta aur sun humaray ghr mein bhi aisay kapdon ki ijaazat nahi this hai na tu kaisay aayee is haalat mein bahir

Rachna: han mujhay pata tha aap usee ki side logay😭 and sit on bed
Pihu: Rachna mera matlab woh nahi tha chalo ab rona band kro aur ready hojaao 😛 tumhein training ke lye jaana hai na
Rachna:haan
Pihu: dekh Rachna aisay kyun itna sad horhee hoo...pata hai meine Kabir ko kabhi itni masti krtay huay nahi dekha woh sirf apni sisiter se masti krta tha bt uski sister abhi bahir hai bechara sara din bore hota tha mere sath thoda hassi mazaak kr leta tha

Rachna: lekin dee woh mujhay tang krta hai😒

Pihu: nahi krega ab tang i promise😛 han lekin Kabir buhat khush mizaaj hai buhat masti wala tumhari aur uski buhat jamaygee dekhna😛 chal ab smile kr

Rachna:😛 mein ready honay ja rhee hun

after sometime evryone on breakfast table...
Rachna coming frm her wearing light pink anarkali suit leaving hairs open
Kabir: eee bhabhi bas itna zyada
sug: 😆😆Pihu isay itna mat khila mottaa hojayega
Kabir: han phr koi ladki mujhay..and his eyes were on Rachna she was looking damn beautiful coming down frm stairs😳 he kept on staring her
sug: aao beta breakfast krlo
Rachna: nahi aunty woh mujhay late horhee hai
Pihu: thoda sa tou khaa lo
Rachna: nahi mein wahin kuch khaalungee
Pihu: chal mein driver ko bol detee hun tumhein drop krde
sug; lekin driver tou Om legayay aur doosri gaadi mohan
Rachna: koi baat nahi mein auto se chali jaongee
sug: aray nahi aisay kaisay...Kabir hai na
Kabir:😲 mein
sug: han jaao Rachna ko drop krkay aao
Kabir: oh ok maan...
and he left
Pihu: chal Rachna jaa and remember my words rite😛
Rachna: ok dee dont worry

RaBir in car😛😛
on the way...she didnt speak a word
Kabir:😕isay kya hua kitna bol rhee the
Kabir: woh...m sorry😊
Rachna: kis baat ke lye
Kabir: kal raat se aapko tough time dya na
Rachna: nahi its ok infact m sorry mein zyada over react krtee hun😊
Kabir:btw aapne bataya nahi aap konsi dr hain😛
Rachna(fits was abt to show anger bt she):😆😆😆
Kabir: why u laughing😕
Rachna: kuch nahi ...subah wala joke yaad agya
Kabir: acha woh😆😆hmm now serious note tou aap konsi dr hain dr Rachna Garg😉

Rachna: tumhein flirt krnay ki aadat hai kya😆 ya heritance..hmm m gynecologist
Kabir:😃 nahi mein flirt mein believe nahi krta but haan m damn romantic
Rachna: really mein bhi😛
Kabir: ok krkay dikhaoo😛
Rachna: kaisay😕
Kabir:😆 tum na buhat innocent ho
Rachna:😆
Kabir: lo agya tumhara training college😛
Rachna: thanks😛
Kabir: ek aur baat
Rachna: kya😊
Kabir: tum sach mein beautiful ho😛
Rachna:😳 thanks...
and left Kabir was grinning inside car