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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rachna: 21 year old girl final year in college a traditional girl but dose not always speak her mind studying to be a doctor has major dad issues like him always mentally and physical abusing her for her not being a boy and blaming her for her moms death
Vihaana:24year old guy rich Indian cricket player his family dad in a crash when he was 8 brought by by his uncle who loves him very much has relationship and sex with a lot of girl thinking love dose not exit
Darren:rachna boyfriend just with her because if sex very abusive to her thinks cause he a billionaire can buy there world but acutually has felling for rachna
Gujan:21 year old how it's a hoker and helps rachna to have courage






I no guys not very good good it's my first time but promise nice time it will be better can u guys comment and tell me what you think😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry! Dear ,

Pls keep the characters simple and lovable.

Arrogance, anger is fine with the characters 😃 But sex🤢🤢

Keep it light and lively😆 the characters are already weighed down with so much of negativity to begin with both main characters in an abusive atmosphere😳

No offence dear just suggesting😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love the starting
really different storyline
waiting for the next part

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