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Posted: 12 years ago
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OS Day 5


Come on Guess who wrote this !!! Riva no cheating 😡😆 and if you so from NEXT OS the name of the person will be announced Next day 😈😆 😆 oki now am just being mean and lying😆



Rajeev looked around at his hockey team, all the girls' faces were etched with determination to kill the rival team, except one who was grinning shamelessly. He had to smile to himself. Her smile is contagious, as Vihaan suggested so many times before.


As the girls filed out of the locker room, adorned with their red and white uniforms and hockey sticks, he grabbed Rachna's arms and pulled her back, "why are you grinning?" he asked with mock anger.
"Vihaan said to imagine you as captain of the cheerleading team screaming noisily and pointing pom-poms whenever you get angry!!" came the giggly response before it was turned to full blown laughter.



Rajeev Agarwal was stumped at the audacity of his naughty brother, "who else did he give this "advise" to?" he spat appalled.
His star player started laughing again,"don't worry Rajeev Sir, only me," she winked as she walked out the door. He followed her grudgingly with a mental note to kill Vihaan Agarwal.
Vihaan was only to be seen after the match, after the Swami Vivekanand Team won, to celebrate the victory. It has become a fete for him to enjoy the luxuries of the win. But Rajeev already hatched a plan in mind to get back at Vihaan.
"Vihaan can you go home and collect my black wallet from my room?" Rajeev asked neutrally, "I need to escort the girls to The Pizza Palace and I brought the wrong wallet."
With his trademark remark, "Vihaan is here, why fear", Vihaan left without seeing his brother's sly smirk.



The noisy, talented group of the winning team entered Caf World, disrupting the peaceful atmosphere. Rajeev would usually take them to the regular Pizza Palace simply because the staff and patrons were immune and prone to their noisy and boisterous bunch. He believed in discipline, however, outside the gates of Swami Vivekanand, he was as much a kid as any other them. So when his cell phone rang, he knew exactly who it was and was ready to carry out his plan.
"Yes Vihaan," he said into his mobile a bit loudly to draw some attention from the girls seated around the table, Rachna's first, "we're waiting at the college. The principal said he has an announcement to make to the team."



The girls listened with amusement as they quieted and shushed each other. They loved the cat and mouse game that Rajeev was planning and were unceremoniously "in" the plan.
"No, you reach directly at Pizza Palace, we'll meet you there," Rajeev said into his phone. The girls looked at him excitingly, ready to make fun of Vihaan for all the pranks he played on them.


The orders came at the table and his team of girls dug in enthusiastically like a hungry pack, as usual, forgetting everything else. But as expected, Rachna Garg scooted close to him and whispered, "are we eating without the great Vihaan Agarwal?" she questioned amused.


"Yes," he replied with a wink and picked up his grilled cheese burger and nudged her to follow suit with her aloo tikki.
Half way through their meals, Vihaan called and was appalled to be told that they decided against Pizza Palace and was headed to Caf World, upon reaching fifteen minutes later, he was distraught to discover that the food was done and the girls were contently chatting away with two of the people he loves most laughing hysterically at him.


Aww did u guess?? 😛

It was written by Vanny 😳
Edited by vibz88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Baby that was killer!!!!🤗


My god I loved it and the best part was that it had a ViNa ending!!!!😳😉 Hee hee and the Akdoo Khadoos Rajeev Agarwaal is back!!! 😲woo hoo my god how I missed him screaming on our girl..⭐️ Rachna Rachna grrr... that was torture the way he would speak to her .. Am so slad she gave it back to him and Vihaan is just awesome he gave her the best advice possible ..😈

You know my fav part was when rajeev took Vihaan s name rachna ws the first to pay attention and she does not want to eat without him either ❤️ Love the Rajna bonding !! So much fun and warm!!! If Vina happen I would still like Rajna to share such a healthy relation on the show 😳

Aww 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
For OS #4:

Pesiii 🤗 That was brilliant & Amazing ! I seriously loved Gunjan's masti here totally like Awww 😳 & You Love Vihaan-Gunjan na?! 😃 I guessed it was written by you since your the only writer who loves GunAn 😳😆 It was awesome to see Vihaan running after Gunjan, Poor Boy 😆😆 Gunjan said she loves Vihaan?! & Then April Fool 😲 So Does She Or She Doesn't?! Awww I wish you sorted it, now it will keep troubling my tiny brain 😆😆 This was brilliant Pesi, really your such a talented writer 🤗 I am eagerly waiting for you to update your FF 😃 Please do it soon =D

This was Amazing, Keep Rocking Dear Aag Ka Gola 😉 🤗 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
For OS#5:

Okay now coming to this One, I really thought this to be Vibha's work :P Mainly because Vibha & Vanny, you both have such similar strokes of writing... Like whenever I read SC & BR, I cannot believe two people are writing it, like you both are so much in sync 😳 So I had trouble guessing it & since I thought Vanny is busy, this must be Vibha's work & when I saw Vanny's name at last, I was like no doubt I mixed both of them up 😆

Brilliant Job Vanny! Like truly awesome 👏👏 Rachna was so bold here grinning at her coach & all that 😲 & Rajeev was also so free, like awww 😉😳 Bwahahahaha 🤣 The Best Part for me was the war btwn Rajeev & Vihaan, like Awesome 🤣 I Loved how Rajeev took revenge on Vihaan by making him miss the Pizza 😈 What a Tasty Revenge 😛 🤣 But I feel bad for Vihaan too cause I know how one feels to lose out on Pizza 🥺 🤣 This was Awesome, totally ladakpan-ish 😉
Just One Confusion, Vihaan said two people he loves the most... 1 is obviously Rajeev... so is he already in love with Rachna too? 😳 But I also felt Rajeev too might have feelings for her :P Jaane do 😆

Awesome Work Vanny! Truly enjoyed reading it 🤗
Keep Writing & Rocking 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vanny...I love your OS!! OMG...Rajeev pranking Vihaan...classic!!!! filled with humor and fun...and the team...it's obvious they all have a soft corner for rajeev...cute!!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
@Vanny
sorry for late reply.. i needed to read in relax mood😉.. you know na that😆😆

Vanny, marvellos os..👏👏👏

Both of you know how big am fan of your writing.😳. where you get ideas from yaar

You have thrown story between the lines.. that s create magic.👏👏👏

So khadoos hockey coach Rajiv authoratively grabbed Rachna s arm and pulled her back☺️ ☺️.. wow, maan gaye tuje rajiv agarwal👍🏼.. it was needed on the show.. to carry on rajna

he could not tolerate mockery of himself by rachna.😆😆😆

And Rachna is not scared of rajiv agarwal'😳 very nice, Rachna keep it up👍🏼. And she is making fun of him whom all students were scared. 😲😆😆


But looks like he was also mesmerized by her smile'😳😳😳


though she loves Vihan only'😳😳 wow.. what a triangle you have created'👏👏👏

Rajiv is planning prank, just unbelievable😲.. and Rachna, Vihan only is running in her mind the way she catches rajiv is talking to Vihan and asks rajiv if they are going to eat without him '😳😳😳. So vina is end game here😳. And both brothers are playing prank on each other . I love the concept. 👏👏👏specially rajiv s reaction for rachna😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
riva...
thanks dear 😊 ..yeah ..i couldn't find how should i end this with such a small story ..so i used the idea of april fool's prank here😆 ...i dont want to write anotehr FF 😳 ...one is enough right ..n we have vihaan thr too ..we can use this concept over thr ...haa haa 😆😆
ranju,

thanks ranju ..u caught me 😆 .s..i miss that gunjan who is chirpy bubbly always ...that's y i brought this april fool prank's concept here..😆


kaavya,
i am glad at least u r the one who couldn't able to find that was me 🤣 ..s i miss those SSLK days whr vihan is always drooling over beautiful girls ...s..for a change he is going in college bus😆😆

sandy,

thanks dear ...nah ..i dont want to sort it out ..left it for readers choice ..i just updated my FF

even meriam25 likes gunVi 😉😆😆 ..ek din mein SSLK forum ko sach mein aag laga dungi 😆😆

Edited by pesi11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh i guessed that right,with rajiv and rachna with hockey track, must be someone who is rajna fan..and when word contagious came in the OS...i knew it, it was none other then Miss Vanny🤗🤗😳

now that's what i called as fantastic OS👏 awww...it was mostly brother's ladakpan🤪...and i loved it😃...lolzzz...vihaan advise to rachna was awesome,🤣...captain of cheerleader and pointing those pom poms...oh god!!! i laughed like crazy🤣...i thought only vibha is evil...but i under estimated u, u r equally evil😈😛😆...pranks are so part of ladakpan and specially when it happens between the brothers,it becomes more evil, nasty and fun😃...i have never thought that rajeev would be dat smart and fun to do tricks on vihaan...but thanks to u,discovered some fun side of rajeev🤗...ahhh!!! vanny that was absolute mind blowing...i was alwayzz ur writing phanki, but this OS was something new from ur side...i alwayzz thought dat u do romantic and lovey dovey stuff...but man, ur unique concept has made ur fan more crazy about writing...am in totally love with this OS...wow!!! am getting lot many surprises from you guys...and you are showing ur new side,which i was unaware of...i mean in ur writing😳😆...lots of love and kissess baby🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Sandy extremely sorry for late reply.. dimag me se pura nikal gaya 😒but when i came to gunjiv at now i read and replying to your os..

First of all .. congratulations for your first OS Its superb 👏..with fantastic title👍🏼

I m really very proud of this Rachna 👍🏼.. from a naive innocent girl to the sports star..you have written it nicely . See she is a star today .. And Gunjanis also a successful in her dreams ..can there be an any better ending.. I am happy they both are career oriented

i can't believe it was ur 1st OS, this is absolutely brilliant. ..how in world u r not writing anything???, you are such Amazing writer, i loved your OS totally without any doubt...and i saw the author in you,as i was scrolling down i did not get idea from whom it can be. ..wow sandy, i loved how you made rachna a introvert but yet bold and independent girl and loved how she insulted the guy...i also loved Rachna running away from a wedding at a very young age to achieve dreams👍🏼 this is called sapne suhane ladakpan ke...and actual reunion of girls was so touching, I am too much impressed with you. Wow, you made gunjan as fashion designer. 👍🏼


read gunjiv part also..this is lovely os. keep it up.👏👏

Edited by smruti1981 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smruti1981

@ Sandy extremely sorry for late reply.. dimag me se pura nikal gaya 😒but when i came to gunjiv at now i read and replying to your os..

First of all .. congratulations for your first OS Its superb 👏..with fantastic title👍🏼

I m really very proud of this Rachna 👍🏼.. from a naive innocent girl to the sports star..you have written it nicely . See she is a star today .. And Gunjanis also a successful in her dreams ..can there be an any better ending.. I am happy they both are career oriented

i can't believe it was ur 1st OS, this is absolutely brilliant. ..how in world u r not writing anything???, you are such Amazing writer, i loved your OS totally without any doubt...and i saw the author in you,as i was scrolling down i did not get idea from whom it can be. ..wow sandy, i loved how you made rachna a introvert but yet bold and independent girl and loved how she insulted the guy...i also loved Rachna running away from a wedding at a very young age to achieve dreams👍🏼 this is called sapne suhane ladakpan ke...and actual reunion of girls was so touching, I am too much impressed with you. Wow, you made gunjan as fashion designer. 👍🏼


read gunjiv part also..this is lovely os. keep it up.👏👏

Thanks a LOT Smruti 🤗
I am glad you liked Rachna's Story here😳 I wrote it all for you guys only 😃 Yeah this is how our girls should be, Smart, Independent, Bold & Confident not the rondu ones like in the show, especially Gunjan 🥱

I hope both the girls get out of this marriage drama & Dard (Garg) Nivas & shone brilliantly in their individual ambitions ⭐️ Just hoping ! =D

& I am double glad you liked GunJeev & read about them 😲😆 Makes my Day 😳

Again, Thank You so much for such a Wonderful Comment, Love You 🤗 😃
Edited by SandCastle. - 12 years ago

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