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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Atlast read all the four OS! Thanks for the PM Ranju🤗
Wonderful writers!👏 Wish to see most of these on screen too.
Ranju - Awesome OS dear.👏 Every girl could relate to it. A well written story suitable for the title "SSLK". Keep writing more. Loved it!❤️
Vibha - I guessed it right that you wrote it, Vibha. Again a superb one that would happen in college life. "Treat" is something that we would ask for small small victories😆. Rachna has to give for her big success anyway. The detailed part about her feelings during her last goal is wonderful.👏
Sandy - Wow! Your story revolved around the sisters ending towards GunJeev.😳 Loved reading it! Rachna and Gunjan reunion is cute!👏
Pesi - I didn't guess it was you. Your OS just brought back the old memories Gunjan's attitude, Rachna being naive and Vihaan after girls😃. I was surprised to know that Vihaan going to college in a bus?! Enjoyed reading it dear.👏
Edited by GiNa_kavya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
thanks Kavya 🤗
Edited by braich_gal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Sorry to all for my late review...and am a cheater😆, i read author names before reading OS..i dont like surprises u know😉
@ranju-u know what ranju, i usually don't lie and say things straight forward,so i need to tell you the truth, i really didn't find ur story appealing,it was pretty bad there were many loopholes,i guess you could have done better job on this😕, u know u r such a brilliant writer and i expected much more from you...and i know that you want to kill me,but i sincerely want to confess that i was joking with you😛😆...ahhh,i know i know ur heart sank na, am sorry...**holding ears**😳

ok, i loved ur OS alot..it was so realistic,damn as if i was remembering one of my college days..it was so teenagey, so youthful..from cancelling of classes to eating pizza and to making excuses for coming late to home, i loved it all...well!!! from starting only i was never like rachna, my 1st bunk to school was in 6th standard..lol😆, i know i was pretty young..but i was really bold from starting😃...and in college dayzz also i was the plan maker,and pumping other people also for such stuff...i totally ,totally wish ranju cv's read such brilliant stories and imply in there episode, cuz dats what sapne suhane ladakpan ke is, u know small small dreams...ur 1st movie,1st bunking,1st love, 1st crush...thats what the true teenage is...hats off to u for going with the original theme🤗👏

@vibha - i knew it was written by you cuz i already read the author...😳awww, u brought back the whole Rajna feel to ur OS😳..those were the golden dayzz of SSLK, seriously the sslk i used to love was of this kind...that nervousness, excitement for winning, teasing for parties...i loved it, loved it all...hmmm, rachna as miser was funny😆, i used to become like dat sometimes😃...lolzz, i loved 8.30 call and i think i can totally find in rachna's shoes, u know what i mean😉, it is so relate-able to both of us😃...wow, i loved how both gunjan and chaaya were teasing rachna😆...it's so ladakpan haina...gosh can we have some girls post out..🤣, u know talking about all girly things...😳

it was awesome vibha, ur writing..u r becoming better and better...you need to start doing OS series now, i would love to read them...,u know u have dat effect in ur writing where u start imagining the story in ur brains like how story moves, how characters would have given the expression...u know magical effect...that sheldon feeling😃...congrats for such ladakpan story🤗, am in love with this OS

@sandy - r u fuking kidding me??? ** sorry for using F word, but couldn't able to resist it**😳, is it ur 1st OS???😲...don't tell lie😈..i know u r lying cuz i can't believe it was ur 1st OS, dat was absolute MINDBLOWING...it was brilliant san Diego..how in world u r not writing anything???😡, u r such Amazing writer, i loved ur OS totally without any doubt...and i didn't need to see the author in ur one, as i was scrolling down i already got an idea from whom it can be, u know such long os😆...wow san diego, i loved how you made rachna a introvert but yet bold and independent girl and loved how she kick the guy...i also loved how rachna left her home to pursue dreams,truly, sapne suhane ladakpan ke😉...and actual reunion of girls was so touching, am so impressed with u babes,i cant tell u enuf😳...ahhh..i loved u made gunjan as fashion designer, wow...she should be something like dat na😊...last but not the least awww...gunjeev dance, wow wow wow...gunjan thanking god for her much awaited dream coming true was so good,dat butterflies in her stomach, i was feeling in mine too...awww, wished rajeev could have confess his feeling to gunjan too...am sad that it ended super fast😭...i want more😕...and ya ur detailing was so good...👏 ,love u babes...and keep on doing good work😳

@pesi - ok girl, i loved that u made OS on ur fav couple...and how cute was ur OS was...i loved how u made gunjan as bubblegum popping girl😆😆 and also loved how she teased vihaan and 1st time i actually felt sympathetic towards him..lolzzz...poor vihaan... ahhh...so dat was april's fool prank, hmmm i dont think so that was april fool...i think gunjan truly confessed her feelings for him...she was actually teasing both rachna and chayya😆...it was awesome pesi and now am eagerly waiting for ur FF...even this OS can also be turned into FF, it has so much potential, u did a kind of loose ending which give it a lot of scope...well pesi, u r doing great job!!! hats off to u girl🤗...it was truly sapne suhane ladakpan ke...👏👏
Edited by riva2987 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: braich_gal

riva!!!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗


lolzzz...only this much rxn😕😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Sandy

OMG Bebe .. First of all .. congratulations for your first OS Its superb ..👏..

So you have taken a 5 years leap and took us back to their college days .. Nice concept .. And I am happy they both are career oriented ..and didn't sacrifice their lives ... So I like the way you dressed up Gunjan ..
And I m really very proud of this Rachna 👍🏼.. from a naive innocent girl to the sports star..you have written it nicely .. And I am happy that the way she faced the hooligans ..GO Girl .. 👏👏👏

And specially for not getting married under the family pressure .. and See she is a star today .. And Gunjanis also a successful in her dreams ..can there be an any better ending..

The last section is so sandyish ... Took Rajeev to the picture and didn't forget to make him not a teacher anymore .. 🤗 I love more for this❤️ ..and Thats so sweet of Gunjan to thank god for the chance .. How cute .. And I am sure there dance is just so dreamy

SO my twinno .. You have done a wonderful job .. Superb bebe .. I am so lucky to have such a talented sister .. ❤️🤗❤️


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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: riva2987


lolzzz...only this much rxn😕😆


Love you too 🤗 😆

Thanks for the feedback...glad you loved it...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kavya 🤗 Thanks a lot dear, I am glad you loved it 😳 Honestly, I thought it sucked but now not much I guess 😆 I am happy you liked Gunjan Rachna & GunJeev ☺️ Thanks a ton for commenting 🤗


Ranju, your so Kanjoos 😕 Riva ke itne long comment pe bas itna hi?! 😲😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SandCastle.

Ranju, your so Kanjoos 😕 Riva ke itne long comment pe bas itna hi?! 😲😆😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: riva2987

Sorry to all for my late review...and am a cheater😆, i read author names before reading OS..i dont like surprises u know😉


@sandy - r u fuking kidding me??? ** sorry for using F word, but couldn't able to resist it**😳, is it ur 1st OS???😲...don't tell lie😈..i know u r lying cuz i can't believe it was ur 1st OS, dat was absolute MINDBLOWING...it was brilliant san Diego..how in world u r not writing anything???😡, u r such Amazing writer, i loved ur OS totally without any doubt...and i didn't need to see the author in ur one, as i was scrolling down i already got an idea from whom it can be, u know such long os😆...wow san diego, i loved how you made rachna a introvert but yet bold and independent girl and loved how she kick the guy...i also loved how rachna left her home to pursue dreams,truly, sapne suhane ladakpan ke😉...and actual reunion of girls was so touching, am so impressed with u babes,i cant tell u enuf😳...ahhh..i loved u made gunjan as fashion designer, wow...she should be something like dat na😊...last but not the least awww...gunjeev dance, wow wow wow...gunjan thanking god for her much awaited dream coming true was so good,dat butterflies in her stomach, i was feeling in mine too...awww, wished rajeev could have confess his feeling to gunjan too...am sad that it ended super fast😭...i want more😕...and ya ur detailing was so good...👏 ,love u babes...and keep on doing good work😳

RIVAAA!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗
I Love you babes ❤️ This is like really precious to me coming from you, Yay! I am so happy

Awww babe, Please don't be sorry 😆 I use that word f**king lot so its Okay 😳 (see I just did, can't speak without it 🤣) Umm ya this is basically my 1st OS on SSLK & Its been really long since I wrote something so yeah :P But yeah I won't lie, I DID write something before & it painfully sucked so 🤢

& OMGGG your making me too much flattered now ☺️☺️☺️ I know it sucked But still your comment made me a blushing tomato ☺️ see what your comment did to me 😡☺️ You want me to write more? 😲 Your prolly out of your mind 🤣

But if you seriously liked it, that will be biggest compliment for me 🤗🤗 You know how much I had loved your Old Leaves & for this to come from you, means a ton lot to me 😳 So Thank You Baby for this Wonderful Generous Comment 🤗🤗 I am about to cry a bucket of happy tears 😭😳😆 & you came to know I wrote this cos it was long? Do you mean I drag stuff? 😲 Mahn, looks like m very much predicatable 😲 Me not likey 😆 I will write short next time & avoid Rajeev then :P
Best I would write something romantic on MayAn, noone on earth would suspect it to be me 😈 *muhuhahahaha* 😈🤣🤣

I am happy you loved Gunjan & Rachna 😳 Yeah the basic theme was to show Girls successful & happy without Guys in their life & that is how it should be... Why should a Guy only determine your happiness? Life has many more awesome things 😳 Yeah Gunjan should be shown as a fashion designer, it suits her character =D & Rachna should pursue her dreams of Hockey too 😃

Awwwiieee I am so glad you liked the GunJeev part I was a bit hesitant to put him in a sister's story but I was missing him so darn much that I couldn't resist 😳 Glad you loved it 🤗 Awww ☺️ even I got butterflies while writing that scene, so adorable na ☺️ How could be confess so easily yaar? Itne saal baad mile h pehle thik se baat toh kare 😳 You can imagine that after this night they started meeting more often, even Rajeev liked her back but never confessed coz of teacher issues & now that he's no more a teacher, he proposed to her & Gunjan accepted ☺️ They got married & ho gayi happy ending I ended it superfast?! 😲 It was already so long, aur likhti toh jinhone poora read kiya vo bhi bhaag jaate 😆😆

Thank You so much Rivzzzyyy 🤗 You have no idea how happy you made me today, Thank You Thank You Thank You 🤗🤗 Your San Diego Loves you infinite times more ❤️🤗🤗 You Rock! =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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san diego so sweet for saying that😳😆

and its ok ranju, no need to😆...u know less is more😉

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