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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: manchaadi


absolutely...there was this one time (i already started working - no longer in college)...it was a friday night, so my friend and I decided to go for a movie...and i just messaged my sister that i'm going for a movie...the movie finished around 11 or 11.30 pm...checked my phone...had like 20+ missed calls...from my sisters and both parents...and quite a number of messages scolding me for not answering my phone and stuff like that...i deserved it i guess... quickly called my mom...told her was in the cinema and all is fine...she didn't say much just said to message her once I reached home...but next day...gone!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
YAYYY Ranju!! Very well done! :D I loved the mast chill scene! But yeah seriously you are making me crave pizza now 😆 But anyways that was really a breath of fresh air! Otherwise wahi rona dhona same stuff going on...I loved the ending hehehe great job!!!
Keep writing dear :D You're awesome at it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
👏 👏 👏

This is a bang on Ladakpan OS !!!! 😆 😆 😆

My god maazaa aa gaya!!

I remember the first time I had gone for a movie but sadly i got caught and I had to listen to the after effect s for a long time!! 😆

Thank god Rachna and Gunjan got saved😛 the pizza scene reminds me of the biryani scene in rab ne bana di jodi 🤣


Such a refreshing change to read something not based on couples 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Day 2


Guess the writer!!!


Rachna licked her lips nervously this was do or die she reminded herself. The scout for the national selection team had come for this game; she had performed decently till now according to her standards. Hmm and her standards were really high she reminded herself just this one goal and she would have that extra edge almost guaranteeing her spot on her Dream team. She looked at the crowd who was cheering for her, from the corner of her eye she could see her mom praying fervently. Gunjan was sitting nervously her finger s crossed she looked across the field where the man responsible for fulfilling her hockey dreams stood. He signalled with his eyes and she looked at the net just the way he taught her. He would scream on her everyday while she practiced 'sirf machli ki aankh dekho' whenever she was unable to concentrate.

She lifted the stick and hit the ball remembering another of his favourite lesson 'It s all in the wrist'. The ball whizzed past and the anticipation was killing her. She pumped her fist as it landed exactly where she wanted it to. Damn she should start paying more attention to his boring lectures they actually helped she mentally noted. Her team mates ran and enveloped her in a warm hug she hugged them and they ran the victory lap around the stadium. Her eyes scanned the throng of people but the one face she wished to see was missing. She could always thank him later after all he would call her everyday sharp at 8.30 from the past three months making some excuse or the other.

She ran towards her family and Gunjan punched her shoulder' Yo our star player is here' she hooted Rachna scrunched her nose and put her tongue out in response. Gunjan looked at Chaya with a wicked grin now it was time to make miser Rachna pay. The list of the player s selected would be put up in a month and Gunjan knew Rachna would torture her every waking moment asking her just one thing 'Gunjan hum select ho jaayenge na', just like the last time when she was waiting for the state selection results.

Later that evening in Gunjan Rachna s bedroom

'Rachna we need a treat 'Chaya demanded for the umpteenth time Rachna looked at Gunjan for support who was sitting on the bed applying a cucumber face pack. The evil grin on Gunjan s face Rachna knew she was doomed. She made the first excuse that came to her head and the lie rolled off her tongue easily ' Paise nahi hai. My pocket money is over' at least now they would not irriatate her. Gunjan who was silent till now suddenly interrupted 'It s oki my darling sister I will loan you the money now you give me back next month' Rachna had absolutely no reply and knew she could not wriggle out now she threw a cushion on Gunjan while her best friends were chuckling shamelessly. Chaya high fived Gunjan after all not every day a miser gives you a treat.

'I want to eat momos' Chaya pouted Rachna narrowed her eyes since Vihaan had taunted Chaya momos had suddenly become her favourite dish. Gunjan looked at her with puppy eyes 'I want to eat Dosa Sandwich and Bhel puri' Rachna looked at the people she loved the most and wanted to strangle them both. She knew the long list was only because they wanted to tease her they would never be able to finish eating for hours. To everyone s surprise the girls had licked their plates clean and even ordered chocolate ice cream and dug into it happily. Rachna remembered she had left her phone back at home and when she told that to Gunjan she had to endure their sly taunts. The girls decided to walk back home and halfway Chaya whimpered that she had to use the washroom. Rachna looked at her tensed while Gunjan answered 'Chaya let s do one thing walk for 200 metres more and there is a CCD we can use that ' Rachna looked aghast 'maane we will go in and not order anything?' Gunjan nodded while Chaya screamed 'You are bothered about ordering!! 'She muttered a few curses which had both Gunjan and rachna grinning.

An hour later the girls were back home telling Shayl about their outing Rachna s phone rang and Gunjan screamed 'Look s like it s 8.30 already' Rachna ran up the stairs turned around and screamed' We should go out more often, Its fun' leaving Chaya and Gunjan stumped.


Aww did you guess?? It was written by me 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome OS Vibha, This one is Fantastic 🤗
I already knew you wrote this & you know how! 😉😆
I Loved reading it really, it was totally based on the Show's theme, Sapne Suhaane Ladakpan Ke 😳 Rachna winning the Hockey Match & excitement of all 3 girls, truly reminded me of the beginning of the show. What days

Loved it when Rach won the match & Gunjan, Chaaya congratulated her. Rachna remembering her coach's words & getting target set on Maccli ki Aankh was inspirational. Rajeev is so motivating & inspiring 😳

The Best Part was the treat part for me 😆 Rachna, the miser, finally had to shell out bucks for her wicked cousin & friends 😆 She reminded me of a friend of mine, who is same as her, a total kanjoos 😆 She hates spending money & we love creating situations where to she has to pay 🤣 & the CCD incident here 🤣 I did that once while in Mc D's 🤣 OMG! Are you guys really picking out incidents from my real life 😲😆

Loved the way at the end, Rachna herself initiated to bunk 😲 So Cool 😎😆

Brilliant OS Vibzz, I Loved it 🤗
I am really a huge fan of your writings & its always a pleasure to read them 😳
Keep Writing & Rocking 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: SandCastle.

Awesome OS Vibha, This one is Fantastic 🤗

I already knew you wrote this & you know how! 😉😆
I Loved reading it really, it was totally based on the Show's theme, Sapne Suhaane Ladakpan Ke 😳 Rachna winning the Hockey Match & excitement of all 3 girls, truly reminded me of the beginning of the show. What days

Loved it when Rach won the match & Gunjan, Chaaya congratulated her. Rachna remembering her coach's words & getting target set on Maccli ki Aankh was inspirational. Rajeev is so motivating & inspiring 😳

The Best Part was the treat part for me 😆 Rachna, the miser, finally had to shell out bucks for her wicked cousin & friends 😆 She reminded me of a friend of mine, who is same as her, a total kanjoos 😆 She hates spending money & we love creating situations where to she has to pay 🤣 & the CCD incident here 🤣 I did that once while in Mc D's 🤣 OMG! Are you guys really picking out incidents from my real life 😲😆

Loved the way at the end, Rachna herself initiated to bunk 😲 So Cool 😎😆

Brilliant OS Vibzz, I Loved it 🤗
I am really a huge fan of your writings & its always a pleasure to read them 😳
Keep Writing & Rocking 🤗

Thank u sandy 🤗
you knew that 😆 so no guessing...Hmm why should the guy be Rajeev😛 he can be any man.. any coach or even a friend who is helping her or a senior it s just open ended😆 but am glad u thought it was Rajeev 😳


You did that in Mac Ds😆 We do it there all the time specially the once which are two storied so we go upstairs!! CCD is embarrassing as the waiter s know you dint order and 🤣 It s always fun to make a kanjus person spend and that is inspired from a real life incident where we made a girl treat us for lunch and diner same day!!!😈

Thank u Sandy am waiting for ur cooments on SC and Br 😆 waiting for ur OS as well
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
this was awesome Vibzy!!! just AWESOME!!! Rachna the miser...🤣 and I loved the whole hockey part...i'm glad you wrote about that...Hockey has been missing from the show and it has always been Rachna's dream and somehow as soon as her father accepts that she plays hockey..it's no longer shown after that...😡

And loved the way Gunjan and Chaaya made Rachna give them a treat...man...you brought back old memories!!! 😆

Again...awesome work Vibz!!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: braich_gal

this was awesome Vibzy!!! just AWESOME!!! Rachna the miser...🤣 and I loved the whole hockey part...i'm glad you wrote about that...Hockey has been missing from the show and it has always been Rachna's dream and somehow as soon as her father accepts that she plays hockey..it's no longer shown after that...😡


And loved the way Gunjan and Chaaya made Rachna give them a treat...man...you brought back old memories!!! 😆

Again...awesome work Vibz!!! 🤗

Aww Ranju rachna is the miser 😆 I so miss hockey !!! 😭 😭 that s the reason i started the show..

Thank s4 the feedback !! Much appreciated !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Ok Guys Day Three !!!


as usual try guessing who wrote it 😉



SERENDIPITY


"Gunjannn! Come fast, it's 7:30 PM, we are getting Late"

" Coming, Maya... Gimme just 2 minutes"

It was the Day for SVC College Reunion for Gunjan's Batch. She was going to meet all her friends almost after 5 years & she was too excited. Wearing the Perfect White Burberry Dress with a Gucci Handbag, Jimmy Choo High Heels & some make up, she made sure to be dressed to Kill. She was usually very particular with her appearances according to situations & today she made sure to be impeccably dressed up, obviously wanting to impress people around her. She had always been the Diva of the College & she still wanted to be known for that tag. She picked out the BEST collection out of her wardrobe & was finally set to go.

Maya was thrilled looking at Gunjan & understood what took her so long. Both the Girls after complementing each other, left for the Party.

SVC is still the same, thought Gunjan. All her college memories, Good & Bad, flashed through her eyes, making her feel very nostalgic. She had missed her college, but she never knew she would be so much affected after finally arriving there. She entered the premises & was so surprised to see all her friends. Everyone went ahead & hugged her & she felt great being among them. During her days here, she was known as "The Snobbish Girl with an Attitude Problem". But that was not the case. She had to come to Banaras after her mom's death to live at her Aunt's place. She was just not comfortable being among the people there & her aloofness was taken more as "attitude problem". Slowly she began to adjust among the people & made a few friends, all thanks to her loving cousin Rachna. Gunjan Smiled & wondered if even Rachna would be here. It had been 5 years since she had talked to her. Rachna was her only friend & support when she came to Banaras. They used to have so much fun, as their memories started flowing in her mind, Gunjan excused herself from the Crowd & moved towards the Garden which was spacious & empty. Letting the Cool breeze mingle with her Skin & Hair, she started recollecting those beautiful memories.

Rachna was the complete opposite of Gunjan. Shy, quite, an intovert & she loved her family immensely. Soon Rachna became her Best Friend cause she could very well understand what Gunjan was going through. Rachna was a very ambitious person, her passion being Hockey. She wanted to pursue it but uncle Dayal never allowed her to do so. Garg family was extremely loving but also conservative & they did not allow their girls to take active interest in sports or extra curriculars. Gunjan recollected how Rachna had finally managed to come out of her shell & finally act like a teenager.

Once they had gone out for a movie, bunking college & without informing the family. That was the 1st time, Rachna ever went for a movie ALONE with Friends & was hell scared to even think of the consequences. Chaaya & Gunjan were enjoying every moment of Rachna's Panic & began mocking at her. They had already surpassed their deadline & Rachna was scared to death now. On their way, they had come across a hooligan, who tried to make passes at them by holding their hands & touching them. As soon he pulled Rachna's dupatta, Rachna was mad with anger. She caught hold of him by his shoulder, & kicked him where it hurts the most. The Guy was unable to control the pain in his groin & started crying hysterically. Both Gunjan & Chaaya stared at her with their mouths forming a big O & were shocked at the Rachna standing in front of them. Gunjan had then realised what a strong & independant girl was lying within her meek sister & had felt proud of her. Gunjan started chuckling at such memories & recollected them all.

After Graduation, Gunjan's father had come to take her to Australia with him. Gunjan really didn't want to go but had to for the sake of her father. She had promised Rachna & her shail maasi to always be in contact with them. After leaving for australia, she came to know that Rachna's marriage had been fixed. She knew, Rachna was not willing to get married as she wanted to pursue her passion, hockey, even further at State Level. Their Coach, Rajeev was always very supportive of Rachna pursuing hockey & encouraged her to follow her dreams. Gunjan had a little crush on Rajeev but never pursued him out of fear of rejection.

Just a few days before the wedding, Gunjan had finally came to know that Rachna had ran away from home to pursue her dream leaving her impending marriage behind. People incuding her own family were cursing Rachna for degrading the family name but Gunjan was very happy with this decision of Rachna, along with Shail. They both knew how much Rachna was passionate about her game & they truly wanted to support her.

Rachna was not in contact with anyone including, Shail & Gunjan for all these years. She was a Star now & a member of the National Women's Hockey Team & played for India. Gunjan used to follow her news, articles & interviews & was extremely proud of her cousin. It had been 5 long years since they had met & Gunjan really wanted to meet Rachna this time.

Just when Gunjan was about to turn to go inside, She heard a voice saying, Gunjan, which took her out of her reverie. She turned to look & couldn't believe her eyes. Rachna was standing in front of her, smiling at her. She wore a very pretty Red Dress with high heels & suave make up looking very beautiful. Gunjan couldn't control herself & she ran towards Rachna & hugged her tightly. Rachna hugged her back & both of them were filled with Joy looking at each other. They just couldn't say anything & kept giggling & tearing up. All they could say was-


"I missed you Gunjan"

"I missed you too Rachna"


They started walking in the Garden, recollecting all their memories silently. Finally Gunjan spoke.

"Wow Rachna! Your a star... I mean you play for the National Women's Hockey Team, that is like WOW! You must be the 1st person from Banaras to do so. Damn It! I am so proud of you! Gunjan was bursting with excitement.

"Thank You Gunjan. Even I could never believe that my Passion would take me here. I am thankful to you for encouraging me always which gave me the confidence to follow my Passion. I Love You Gunjan".

"Awww Rachna, I Love You too, always & forever". Gunjan said hugging her.

"Waise Gunjan tum bhi toh kitni badi fashion designer ho. Really I am so happy for you"

"Awww Rachna. I know. You know how much I Love Fashion & all isiliye. I really enjoy it". Gunjan said smiling. "You know Rachna, I came to this reunion just to meet you again. You can't imagine how much I missed you all these years. I am so attached to you & I just can't imagine how I could've survived after Mom's death, if not for you. You are like the Best Gift ever for me & I can't thank god enough to have a sister like you. It's indeed my lucky day today to be re-united with you again".

"Yes Gunjan. Even I am very lucky to have you in my life. I don't ever want to lose you. You are my Best Sister, My Best Friend in the entire world & the One I can always count upon. Thanks for always being there for me Gunjan, Thanks a LOT.

They both felt extremely lucky for the bond they shared. They truly believed that they were lucky to have each other in their life, they knew they could always Count on each other for everything, in happiness & in Sadness, in Good times & in Bad times. Both couldn't thank the Lord & each other enough for the wonderful gift they both had in form of each other. They both were the Best Friends, Best Sisters to each other & always wished to be the same.

Both smilingly went towards the entrance to join their other friends & soon the crowd gathered around the famous hockey player Rachna Garg, completely overwhelming her. Gunjan smiled at Rachna & excused herself for a Drink. She heard someone calling out to her, It was Rajeev. Gunjan was so pleasantly surprised to see him there, she knew he had resigned from college long time back & she was seeing him after very long too. She went ahead to greet him.

"OMG Sir, what a pleasant surprise. Your here, I can't believe it". Gunjan exclaimed.

"I came here to meet you... umm, I mean my favorite batch of student's & BTW I am not your Sir anymore so please call me Rajeev... You look really pretty". Rajeev smiled at Gunjan complementing her & Gunjan responded with a very sweet smile.

After talking to each other for sometime, Rajeev asked Gunjan for a Dance. Gunjan again had those butterflies in her stomach which she usually had 5 years ago when she used to see him. She murmured a silent thank you to God & went ahead to dance with him. Today was indeed a Lucky Day for her! =D

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Hmm This was written by Sandy!!


Now say the truth if u were able to guess correctly/not

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Ok i just read all 3 OS and let me tell you they were freaking awesome😛👍🏼

Ranju i love your OS i'm sure most girls experience the movie thing at some point in their collage days. I never bunk to go to movies but to go shopping with friends😆 Had to lie and say i went to the library 😲😆

Vibzy i love your OS too 😛

Sandy OMG i love love your OS its mind blowing man and the end put a big smile on my face😛
Well done girls👏

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