HEI...I KNOW LOVE..ViNa FF Impt Note. Pg 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
going good..please continue soon.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome nissar, u r the 1st one here, writing in hindi and english...which is great👍🏼

update was awesome...looks like vihaan is the most famous handsome hunk in ur story...wow i know where dis story heading...its about friendship, their band, love and all...haina😆

keep it up😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gpreeti110

going good..please continue soon.👍🏼

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: riva2987

awesome nissar, u r the 1st one here, writing in hindi and english...which is great👍🏼


update was awesome...looks like vihaan is the most famous handsome hunk in ur story...wow i know where dis story heading...its about friendship, their band, love and all...haina😆

keep it up😉

thanks..seriously.. my hindi is not good.. i just tried it..yeah.. vihaan is the hottest hunk..the story heading.. maybe u r rite.. but my main point is love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

Vihaan and Disha had just entered the cafeteria. Disha started to find a table in the corner leaving their special table in the center of cafeteria.Vihaan was confused. He knows Disha would just sit in the corner if its something very important to discuss which will always led them to a fight.

Vihaan POV: ah.. please aaj koi garbar na hoh.. thak gaya hu mei ise manate manate.. GOD save me..
finally, Disha found table..
Disha: come, darling. Have a seat.
Vihaan: Aaj extra sweet kyun?( while siting on the chair)
Disha: nahi toh.. its normal
vihaan knows something is wrong somewhere..
After a few minutes...
Disha: Vihaan.. wo mei.. mujhe.. I got a modeling offer in StarRamp Industry.. and mei yeh offer reject nahi karna chahthi.
Vihaan: oh.. so now I got it.. this was the matter.
Disha: please Vihaan.. this offers don't repeat. You know that nah?
Vihaan: Disha, tum waha kaam nahi karogi.. I mean modeling. tume pata hai nah ki mei tumhe uss Jay ke saath nahi dekh saktha?
Disha: come on Vihaan, Jay waha sirf ek photographer hai..
Vihaan: i don't care. You wont go means You wont go.. its final
Disha: if I do.. Tum kon hote ho mujhe batane wale?
Vihaan: acha to yeh bhi ab tumhe yaad dilana parega. I am your boyfriend.
Disha: possesive boyfriend bolo. yah phir egoistic.jho apni girlfriend ke success se jalta hai..
Vihaan: enough Disha.. You are crossing Your limits..
Disha: you know one thing? i really don't care. tum zyada se zyada kya karlo geh.. mujhe chor bhi nahi sakte tum..
Vihaan: kyun nahi chor sakta tumhe. tum koi Miss World ho.. tumse bhi zyada khoobsurat larki koh apni girlfriend banha saktah hu mein.
Disha: fine.. then leave me.. actually i am leaving u..aur koi aisi larki doondh kar lao jo khi mujhse kahi zyada achi hai.
Vihaan: go to hell Disha. 2 din keh andar mei ek nayi girlfriend jo khi tumse 100 guna achi ho.. khoobsurat ho.. uss ke saath hoga.. don't be jealous then..
Disha: are u serious Vihaan.( in a sweet voice) apne ego ke liye tum mujhe chor do ge?
Vihaan: dekha Disha. Tum mere bina apne din kese guzaro gi.. when no one will give u fame which u got while with me.. But, i wont come back to u..paisa hi sabh kuch nahi hota..( get up of the chair)
Disha:(use another way of emotional blackmailing) Aur tumhare papa ka kya jo tumhe sirf mere liye tolerate kartha hai? unhe kya pasand ayegi tumhari woh hone wali nayi girlfriend?
Vihaan: shut up Disha. don't talk about him. And you never know who is that girl.. even I don't Know her..(leave from there)

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While there on another site
Gunjan: yeh dono center mei kyun nahi bethe?
Elisya: shayad unhe koi romantic chapter kholna hoga..
Chaya: maybe.. By the way tum uss Rohit koh miss nahi karthi kya?
jiske saath tum woh romantic chapter khola karthi hoh.. i mean thi..
Elisya: hah .. woh..
Mayank: (*cut off) emm.. mujhe koi kaam tha.. mei chaltha hu.. bye..
Elisya: bye.. ab ise kya hua.
Rachna: mei bhi chalthi hu. mujhe library mein kuch kaam hai..
Gunjan: ruko Rachna.. mei Bhi tumhare saath athi hu.. Phir ek saath ghar jayege..
Rachna: dikhe.. chalo..

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Gunjan: Rachna.. tum itni fast kese chalthi ho.. slowdown nah..
Rachna: tu dheere dheere ah.. mei jati huh..
Gunjan: are sunho..

Rachna bump into some one.. the books drop..
Rachna: dekhe nahi chal sakteh? (she said without looking at the person and pick up the books) ab ise bhi abhi ghirnah tha..
the person: ho hello... who was reading the books while walking? itni bhi akal nahi hai kya khi apni galti koh maan loh..
Rachna stands up and...she was mesmerize with the chocolate eyes.. she thinks.. actually sab sahi bolthe thei yeh Vihaan itna bura bhi nahi hai..
Vihaan: mujhe pata hai.. khi me bohot handsome hu.. phar ab gurnah band karogi?( another girl in the line)
Rachna: (shocked + embarased) hah.. handsome aur tum.. zameen asmaan kah pharakh hai tum dono mei..
Vihaan: kya kaha tumne.. tum bhi itni pretty nahi ho.. actually todhi sih bhi nahi hoh..
Rachna: acha toh tumhari woh Miss Disha bohot pretty hai nah?
Vihaan: (don't want to reveal about Disha yet to anyone) ab use bich mei kyun laya? oh i see so u r jealous nah??
Rachna: jealous hogi meri Jutthi..
Vihaan: tumhe koi shonk hai mujhse larne kah? mujhe nahi janti kya? yaha nayi ho?
Rachna: heh.. tumhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki hum ab ek hi class mei parne wale.. wese mei tumhe achi tera seh jaanti hoo.. woh larkiyan jo tumper marti hai.. woh tumhe nahi jaante..
Vihaan: acha,,, toh kis terah ka larka hu mein?? batao nah??? aur sochne wali baat yeh hai.. ki tum mujhpar kyun nahi marti.. tum larki nahi ho kyan?
Rachna: you...

Gunjan interupts.. EMM Rachna..
Rachna and Vihaan: kya hai??? looks at each other and give a killing look.
Gunjan: woh.. actually mujhe hi library jane ki jaldi thi.. toh mei chalthi hu k?? (fed up)
Racha: are hah.. mei toh bhool hi gayi.. its all because of him..
Vihaan: loh.. abhi takh toh blind hi thi.. ab bhulakkar bhi hogayi hai.. Miss Statue..
Rachan: yeh miss satue kis koh bhola.. tumse toh meh baat mei baad karthi hu..Gunjan.. chalo chalthe hai..

Gunjan: hah..thank god.. wese tum dono khi achi chemistry thi..
Rachna: Tum abb mujhse pangga matloh..

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Vihaan go toward his bike where Prince and Apoorva were waiting for him

Vihaan: yeh larki neh mera sar gumha diya hai..
Apoorva: konsi larki.. Disha?
Vihaan: nahi yaar woh.. Miss Statue..
Prince: finally.. koi aur larki hai..
Vihaan: wese mei tum dono koh kuch bataneh chahtha hu.. i had a break up with Disha
Princes: sachi?? ab mei 2 saal baad chen khi neendh soh paoga..
Apoorva: phar kyun
Prince: usse hume kya lena thena.. hogi phirse uski modeling issue..
Apoorva: tu use bara jaan tha hei?
Prince: woh.. woh.. Vihaan humesha batata reh tha hei nah.. isi liye.. chal acha hua.. gayi woh .. Miss Perfect.. Aur aayi woh kya?? Miss Statue..
Vihaan: tum bhi nah.. wese ek problem hai..usne( Vihaan explains the whole challenge shart and all that) ab mei kya karu.. agar mei uski type ki larkiyon se help mangne giya toh woh to mera pura faida udhai ge..
Apoorva: wese.. mere paas ek idea hai...
Prince and Vihaan: kya??

promo: planning.. Rachna and Vihaan second meet.. and much more..

p/s:how was it? I know its a bit boring.. sorry if u feel so.. k??? i m not good in writing.. and this is my first ff.. so... sorry???

Edited by watsup - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏, wow nissar, u r writing really fast...but it was really interesting...waiting for next chapter...hope it will be going to be as interesting as this😉
Edited by riva2987 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
wowww nice story yaar! im looking forward to more VINA!!! :D hehehe <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
lovely update... looking forward for nxt...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Wow your story is kind refresing totally diffrent from the show.. plz update more an more parts in speed
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
nc ff
update soon dr
do pm to me

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