V2 FF: Breathing Room Ch 6 Pg 25 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this is awesome... waited for d update for so long.. Thanks :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Without reading the chapter ..I am telling I think its related to korean drama ... kim bum or Kim Hyun joon related .. Just saw the note dedicated to Riva ..

I am excited ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh.. Finally something came to read from your side . will comment after reading 😎
Edited by chacha_chaudhri - 12 years ago
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Well..what should i say now😳😳..am just totally speechless..😆😆..but can i say its like one of best moment in IF😃..yeah!! yeah!! i think i should be thanking u guys, that u followed my suggestion😆...i mean i have recommended to many peeps but it was u guys that took my suggestion seriously😆...otherwise all take me as granted😃...but u see, true friends always jump in with ur insanity...and yeah i can say proudly u r the best peeps🤗..love u guys😳
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now coming down to ur chapter...well!! it was kind of really emotional writing and u have penned it down beautifully!! darn man!! i missed ur FF😃😆..thank god u guys are back

well!! parts which i love are the following :

a) uhmm, heart the scene where rachna was cursing herself and vihaan😆😆..haha..Interesting, how vihaan always has dat witchy gazing effect on rachna..it always work like magic...and we get to hear some magical hatred comments from her, which i totally like...i like rachna when she is badass, in temper and cold😃😆...can we have more of that??

b)HAHA...i m in love with this rachna...cold like an ice...i must say her heart is jack frost😆, so much pain and darkness...very mysterious...double thumbs up..for showing in that way...Grey characters always appeal to me😃, she ain't scared of saying anything...she just blurted out and gave nice one on vihaan's arse..😆😆

c) WoW ...rachna words pierced the lions heart.😲😆...am totally loving this subtle love-hate relationship..they do have something, some string attached to each other...dats why they both affect each other on different levels...and what a shocker it came out to be...charu's murder???😲..by vihaan?? interesting..very interesting😎...this heart stealer is murderer too...but the point is how, for what and why?? and in which circumstances?? i know, i know u girls will make us wait for that **sigh**

d)Pyar ke side effects??? 😆😆 glutting down food..its so freaking true...vihaan indeed wants to fill up his stomach upto heart to relieve his pain...awww, i wanna hug this poor guy🤗..hands down to u guys...its so typical reaction of heartbreak, and u have jotted it marvelously.

e) Awww, u guys made smruti's favt song >> VIHAAN-RACHNA<< song ...can't be better than this..the pain, the intensity, the wordings and of course the love is so for VINA...😳😳...and i got goosebumps when i read, how vihaan joined the song with rachna and rachna appreciated it...its indeed very magical scene...i think this is my favt scene out of all😃😆...u guys r making me hopeless romantic now..gosh!!! i don't want to be, i blame u guys for this mess..yeah!! period

f) both of them thinking, how they have attachment to the same song is so freaking romantic..i loved it heaps,no doubt in dat..i mean talk about destiny and here it comes...playing with both of them, connecting them thro' all mother's nature creation...how much u escape from each other, hide from each other..but that love , that one feeling will find u through her own ways..hating but still loving..dat is so oxymoronic but yet magical.

g) hey this rachna is indeed very sharp...her brain runs like a horses...dang!! how she catched up one single clue and here we go one more cat is out...am so loving this rachna...she so reminds me of me😆😆...na just kidding...

phew** done...sorry guys for the delay, u know dese dayzz am so lazy to comment anywhere...yeah and i loved ur FF..and plz one plea, do updates regularly..otherwise its become hard to catch up the story..😳..yeah!! well done guys...thanks 😉
Edited by -PrimaDonna- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Writing seems to be of Vanny this time. Last was vibz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chacha_chaudhri

Writing seems to be of Vanny this time. Last was vibz

What makes you say that 😛 .. you mean the last chapter was mine and this one is Vanny s 😃??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chacha_chaudhri

Writing seems to be of Vanny this time. Last was vibz


🤣 We both write each and every chapter dear! 😆 We know each other's strength and weaknesses, so we know where to apply our skills and provide the best possible chapter for you guys. 😊

No chapter was written entirely by one person only. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny


🤣 We both write each and every chapter dear! 😆 We know each other's strength and weaknesses, so we know where to apply our skills and provide the best possible chapter for you guys. 😊

No chapter was written entirely by one person only. 😉

Yeah every chapter is a joint effort and that s what takes us so long 😈 ...

But seriously baby I never knew our writing style was so similar 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vibz88

Yeah every chapter is a joint effort and that s what takes us so long 😈 ...


But seriously baby I never knew our writing style was so similar 🤗


🤣 Yeah...that's definitely why each chapter is so...late. 🤣

I know right!!! It's so cool! 😎 Love you!!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny


🤣 Yeah...that's definitely why each chapter is so...late. 🤣

I know right!!! It's so cool! 😎 Love you!!! 🤗

Awww Love you too 🤗

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