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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi

This is so beautifully written. I read all chapters in one go and I loved it. 👍🏼

thank u so much renu for the compliments 🤗glas u liked it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hashii

OMG OMG >.I love the begining .. thank you so much for that .. Like I saw a paradise in the desert .. ..


Res..

🤗Aww the gunjeev part na ?? 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishrocks


Its beautiful! Awesome work! Keep it up Vanny and Vibha! Loved it!

thankk u anam😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: helloaamir

Again, will give detailed response later but awesome job! That was quite a dance ;) and Rach sounded beautiful, wish I could actually see that dres on her 😆 And wowww really. -___- he stole her earring to pay his debts? I hope that he keeps the earring to remember her and will not pawn it! :P

Oh also just had to say this...now I feel like eating chilli paneer. Thanks a lot guys. 😆
OK so I will give more details later but loved this part and update asap!
Love ya!

Aww how are you ?? I am waiting for ur FF update as well Yes something like that on the show would be scandalous 😆 He dint steal it and Finder s keepers 😛 hee hee looking at the earring in the night then looking at the moon and missing her 😆

now i wanna eat chilli panner as well 😕

Thanks for the generous comments 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti2989

Awesome like always...😊 Beautifully written...I can visualise everything...👏👍🏼

loved both Vina And Gunjeev Parts❤️..Rajeev is too romantic...Loved the dance sequence between Vina ..I hope we get the same in the serial too.. About Rachna.. She will look damn beautiful.. I wanna see her like this way,..
Now wait for the next part is gonna start,...update soon plz...😊

Aww thanks for the review 😃 means a lot to u s 😃 rajeev is Mr dependable.. a dance sequence in the show ?? cant wait for it 😆 I wanna see her like that as well😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smruti1981

again sorry for late reply... finally got chance to read in relax mind.. I cannot enjoy reading when i am thinking for other things..
It s oki am more late to reply and even more late for the update 😕

Wonderful update girls👏.you have opened vihan s part slowly.. 😳 I have really enjoyed ViNa scene..
more of him in the next though😃

GunJeev part... Their bonding is strong'want to read analysis of them by some others also. specially from hashi riva. star Ranju all gunjeev fans.. 😳

Yes they are still on res though 😆

Gunjan still loves Rachna that am getting here😉


She does 😃

Ana really loved Homi that is why she lost weight, but why she hided that? Oww.. she has been strong now and does not want sympathy from anyone. 😕


She has to take care of his business and take care of his family as well..😕

Who is Nyasa?😲 Homi s daughter or sister? I want to know homi 's life before he married to Ana.. was that 2nd marriage of him to Ana or first? She cannot be his mother because she graduated after entry of Ana in Homi s life.

one of the two for sure 😆 Yes his life will also be revealed in the next few updates 😃 @ bold ROFL

Ana loves Nyasa.. so they might have good relations'

Yes 😃

Vihan ko nasha nahi chadh raha.. so effective is Rachna s re entry😆' "he was paid by some politician" that is opening some big suspense of Vihan s life.. 👏👏👏


haan ab saara nasha utar gaya na 😆

What was happened? That politician paid him but for what? Politician helped him to come out from jail?? Why did he help Vihan? Vihan had relation with him? Vihan knew something important about him so he helped Vihan? Or he needed Vihan to do more crimes? What type of crimes? Drugs or scandals or murdering or Vihan had connection with underworld? So many options are for relation between that politician and Vihan. 😕

Aww that s the right track.. if the politician does something for him he has to do something back na?? 😕 wow kya imagination hai 👏 👏 👏

Ana knew about politician s celebration parties.. Homi had shared all this with her. 😕

Yes and for sure she has gone in the past with him to such events

Imran also knew about this mud.😕. after all homi had appointed him for Ana.😕 Even if she did not like that her family members thought she is dead, she gave more importance to help them in business so tried to avoid mess of Abhinav following him.

Imran knows a lot but he is bound no to open his mouth 😳 It s not only her family she is thinking about Homi wanted that so she is fulfilling it..😃

But am really surprised that Ana knew to take grant from Pradhan but Vihan did not know that grand would be given by pradhan only for their business???😕 That is why he was shocked to see her!! Or he did not think that Rachna could come to attend this type of party also !!!😕

Hmm Vihaan has no idea so when he sees her first he cant believe his eyes she is actually in front of him and he is not dreaming. then reality set s in and the thought process starts why here?? this time ??

Vihan knows Abhinav is spoil brat with gandi nazar '.😕


Abhinav is just 18 so hormones raging

Ana knows Vihan so deeply that he does not want to spend money for alcohol or cannot spend money for alcohol 😕'.i think he cannot spend'😕 so he is facing financial problems !!!

LMAO even if he has money he does not mind the free drinks 😉

She was missing Homi as he might have protected her so much when he was alive so she prayed homi!!!😕

Yes Homi was the man who changed her life so now he is no more it s more like he will always look after her so the prayer 🥺

OMG!! Vihan is shocked for her back less cloths😲.. that leaves me thinking that she might be so simpler before 7 years she left home '.😕

Yes and he has no idea how much she changed all these years 😳 so he get s a few jhatkas and a bumpy ride...

She spent night with him leaves me pondering that why did he reject her !!! how did Rajiv knew about their proximity before 7 years.😕. Vihan shared with him that .. I don't think Rachna can share this with him..😕

Rajeev has no idea about the proximity .. if Rajeev knew Vihaan would be thrashed big time 😆

That song was for Rachna as she spent her night willingly with Vihan before 7 years or for current situation but for here she cannot be soft for him so easily but you told she is blushing so this song goes for both ways😕' but for Rachna only I think.😕


It s for both ... Kurbaan hua ...

As said before he is facing financial problems but kitna niche gir raha he Vihan? Am very upset with him.

Really ?? hee is a kammena only dont expect anything from him 😳 you will be more upset as the story goes by...


My god fabulous smriti 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: makhichoos


now this seems to be mid ... look at username😆..



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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys!!! 🤗

How are you all? 😊

Sorry for the delay. Circumstances were such that both Vibz and I could not have produced a chapter to our standard and quality earlier.

Our sincere apologies,



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Posted: 12 years ago

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This chapter is dedicated to a wonderful friend and sister, Riva. You have introduced us to one of the most precious thing in our lives right now and it has impacted both of us positively. Thank you very much baby! 🤗 (Read to know what that is! 😉)!!

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Ana buried her nose in the pile of paper kept in front of her so that the constant staring of the man across the table would not affect her. His constant wicked gazes made her uneasy.

Damn Vihaan Agarwal and damn her traitorous body, she cursed internally.

She flicked the pages relentlessly with one hand, whilst playing with a pen with the other, trying to find a single mistake in his report so that she could use her famous scathing tone to appear in control. She looked up to see him grinning and to her surprise he asked her, "Why is Ana Wadia always fidgety around me?"

To her utter disgust, her body responded before her witty brain and he was rewarded with a traitorous flush. She cleared her throat, looked into his eyes and uttered dryly, "I'm scared about my safety. After all you could even scare the daylights out of a hardened criminal," she stared intently at him with feisty eyes and continued in a cold tone, "Vihaan Agarwal, son of the esteemed business man Shailesh Agarwal, charged with assault battery, possession of illegal arms and murder of Charu Garg."

For a moment Vihaan saw the careful mask slip and he saw the innocent girl who had somehow managed to worm her way in his heart as Ana s eyes flashed fire. The intense moment was broken by a knock on the door and a familiar face announced that lunch was ready. Ana glanced at her secretary's face and breathed a sigh of relief. This man would be able to peel the layers of Ana quickly if he kept provoking her with his calculated behaviour. She picked up her phone and stomped out of her cabin with Vihaan following lazily behind.

Vihaan's head kept churning with the thoughts that are slowing robbing his rational thinking. This lady not only knew the exact charges, she also recited the entire headline splashed on every newspaper in town in a blink of an eye. Her icy tone had felt like a stab in his heart. Nothing had shaken him, neither his father's angry words, nor his mom's tears nor the thrashing his brother had given him. If he had thought Gunjan's constant assurance that she believed he was innocent was going to be his undoing, he was wrong. It was Ana Wadia's calm and snooty tone which made him want to curl himself in a ball and howl. This woman had him wrapped around her little finger earlier. This time around, he would not fall for the bitch's tactics again. He made his way to the cafeteria where a huge table was laden with delicacies. He decided to stuff himself as much as possible and served himself generous portions. Ana looked at Vihaan helping himself unabashedly, probably he was still hungry. After all, they didn't serve good food in jail she guessed. She made a mental note to sit far away from him but to her utter disgust the only vacant seat was across him. Ana thanked her lucky stars he didn't glance at her even once and to her amusement, he was the first one to get up for a second helping. Lunch was uneventful and the only noise was because her employees were chattering like magpies. Just before everyone were about to dig into their desserts, a familiar piece of music halted conversations. Someone's phone was ringing and Ana's eye kept looking around to see who had the same ring tone as her beloved Nyasa, her heart did a somersault when she saw Vihaan Agarwal remove his phone and drawled a lazy greeting as he excused himself from the table.

The person next to her asked curiously, "what ringtone is that? It is different," she added.

"It's a classic!" Ana exclaimed with the most serene smile since her arrival, "I know it very well," she added and started singing.

When Vihaan Agarwal made his way back to the table, after having a talk with his bookie, he saw the entire table listening with rapt attention to Ana who was singing the words perfectly though her accent was a little off. He stopped; mesmerized and as soon as the chorus came he could not help but joined in, "Hoon ja di sitto, crying for you, hoon ja di shitto, missing for you'Baby I love you; am waiting for you"

Hearing a voice join her, Ana faltered but he continued the soulful singing in an impeccable accent and soon she sang along as well. The employees clapped enthusiastically once the song came to an end.

Vihaan picked his sanitary bowl of kheer and was about to leave but suddenly he turned around and asked her, "BOF or SS501 fan?"

Ana was taken back but managed to mumble, "BOF." However, he picked up on her enthusiasm.

He was about to walk out when she returned the question but he dismissed the question with a casual wave, "I heard it in a concert."

Curiosity got the better of her and she continued, "a Fan Meeting?"

He simply nodded but she was still not satisfied. She pressured, "Seoul??"

"Japan," he said carefully and disappeared through the opaque, glass doors.

The employees were looking at the rapid fire with amazement. The two bosses seemed completely at ease for a moment as opposed to their usual war with constant mind battles and heated arguments regarding trivial matters. This was a welcomed relief they all exchanged secret glances grateful they had found an ice breaker to lighten the working atmosphere.

Vihaan thought back to the split second when she had faltered and he had encouraged her to continue singing and she had obliged hesitatingly, he had felt that they were lost in their own cocooned world; safe from everyone's prying eyes. That moment had shaken him and he strengthened his resolve to stay away from her and her sorcery. He would sell her earring today and pay his bookie, he reminded himself as he patted his left breast pocket where the trinket rested. He was as curious as her to know about how she knew that song or BOF for that matter, but the momentary resurfacing of his old buried feelings had him running like a coward he was.

Ana came back to her hotel suite and had a quick shower. After having scrubbed herself clean, she ordered a bowl of soup as she called Nyasa, who informed her that everyone else had already gone to sleep.

The last words, "Bye mom" had warmed her heart even more than the spoon of the piping hot soup she had ordered. She kept sipping, thinking all the time about Vihaan and the song which at one time was the only thing she listened to. When he had told her that he had been to a fan meeting she had been jealous, he was so lucky to see them live.

She scrunched her nose and repeated, "Japan" like a mantra. Suddenly it struck to her and her hand shivered as the soup fell on her bare leg.

It was not possible. It could not be.

In her hurry to switch on her laptop, she didn't even bother about the hot liquid which scalded her thigh. She had to confirm her suspicion and as soon as she hit the search button, she uttered the four-letters slang which she and Homi never let Nyasa voice. She didn't realize that she had been clutching the sheets all along. The date of the fan meeting flashed before her eyes and the room became hazy as tears sprouted from her eyes first time since Homi's death.

How could Vihaan Agarwal be in Japan when he should have been behind bars at that time?

Edited by MSN_Vanny - 12 years ago

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