FF Hote Hote Pyar Hogaya Last part 30A,B pg 25,26 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys I write my ff part 3 on wed but i think I post tomm or Tuesday my part 3.




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Posted: 14 years ago
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@hafsa..enjoy reading each part..😊
so interesting and liked the changes you made in the story..
alekh in office with anmol.wow ragini dreaming about anmol and in love..sounds good..😊
well there is suspense in end..
will wait for next part..
keep it up..👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read both parts very niuce hafiza and yes waiting for part 3..
loving this idea anmol ghar k auar ranvir bahar ka...kahin tum aur main report hi na ho jaayein😆 but that was best of all lets see what will u show us..next
ps a suggestion to u use lower case as it is easier to read and also on IF u r not allowed to write in capitals....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hafsa Fantastic Yaar especially Ragini dreaming about Confession😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice second part !!👏
So she first dreams abt Anmol and realizes that she has fallen in love !!

Wow now who is @ the market Anmol's surprise !!
Well you have kept us on the edge of our seat.
Do continue quickly !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hafsa I read all the three parts. awesomeeeeee dear. Plz continue soon.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice effort with the writing Hafsa!👏👏👏...i liked the bit where Ragini dreams of her Confession to Anmol!😳...n of course the famous button wala scene..😉...do update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi, guys i am back whit my part 3.

HOTE HOTE PYAR HOGAYA PART 3


Now Anmol is in market see looking some think but he didn't fine anything.Then he saw a shoppe of jeweler he went there he is looking our there then he saw a heart necklace in that necklace write AR on it he ask the price of the necklace.Then he say pack it them for me. Then he pay it and tack it. when he turn to go back home he get shock too see someone. And he get happy to see them after 8 year and he ask them when u guys come too India to his friends.They said we came India last night. Anmol said then way u not call me to come airport to pick u up u guys.Then he ask where are u staying. They said we stay in Agra Taj hotel.Then Anmol say why no u guys stay in my home. but they say we can't stay with u. He ask what they say what ur mom and dad say. He get happy to see u guys and tomorrow is karva chauth and in my how is celebrate in big scale and in that case u meet my whole family. Then they say we sift India for there whole live and now they stay in Agra and he sift he business in Agra. And now he searching for house then his ask how u come our her by car they said no by taxi too buy something. Then he say lets go with me in ur hotel and take ur bags and come with me then day buy something then leave. They reach Taj hotel. They go to talk to hotel manger that they are leavening and they pay a bill then they go in her room with Anmol they went there room Anmol cell star ring hi start is mic and start talk its from home. he say hello from other side come voice come hi papa they said. He say hi my cutes littles Angels. From others side here cutes littles Angels ask them they buy mam gift. Anmol say yes my cute little angel. Then other side they ask when u come home papa he said in 15 minte. Khushi and Tammy get happy too hear that he come back in 15minte then they say bye to Anmol. He cut her phone they his look his friends they are shock too hear someone calling Anmol papa.They Ask when u get married. He say 7 year ago they say u didn't tell us when u back 8 year ago after that u didn't call us. he say that time he back too India in that day everything get change. They ask what ur wife name he said u no them. they said we no them who is she who change ur mind u didn't want too married whit any one Ragini married Ranvir. He say u rite but i married not other then Ragini. Ragini is my wife they hear that and get Shock how.They tell After he come back India then After that next year Ranvir dia in some accident and he take promise that he take care of his wife and kids. Then they reach home they come out from car and tell his driver too bring there bag in side. They go inside everyone is sitting in louche and talking.They come inside Khushi and Tammy saw them and run to Anmol saying papa and hug her and they both kiss Anmol chick then his interduse there friends. First he interduse his mom Vasu and her dad Indrajit Then her Alekh Bahiya,Guni then her cute littles Angels Khushi and Tammy and then his beautiful wife Ragini. He tell everyone that they are her us friend Karan virani and Nandani virani he say they meet him USA. now he sift to Agar last night and they staying in hotel but i bring then our her too stay whit us. Vasu say u do it rite they stay with us. Then Anmol say thank and he said too Guddi too open a guest room and clean that room and put there her bag. Then he went to his room to get change.

counting in part 4: Ragini want try to talk Anmol but Anmol is busy with Nandani and Ragini has not get change to get talk to Anmol in alone and Anmol wake up before Ragini in to help Vasu to paper sahragi.

And thank u for u r replay👏😊




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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊 Hi guys i am back again with my ff hote hote Pyar hogaya part4.


HOTE HOTE PYAR HOGAYA PART 4

Anmol interduse his friend too everyone in the house.Then he went to his room to get change and come down stares for diner. Everyone eat there and talking with Karan and Nandani then after one go and site on cough. But Anmol go to his room to talk to Ragini. Who waiting for Anmol. When Anmol reach in her room he saw Ragini who Waiting for them he go near to Ragini ans ask. Any think important that u want to talk to me he say yes then he say what u want to say tell me. She say something before that. Guddi come there and tell that everyone call them. they said they come in five minte but guni come there and take them down stares and everyone buys too talk with each other but Anmol and Ragini looking each other after one finish there talk and go there rooms Anmol and Ragini Also go to there room but before they go in her room Khushi and Tammy come there and tell them they want too sleep with but Ragini say u have too sleep in there room but they say no they want too sleep with them Anmol get ready and take them to in room and they go to sleep Ragini looking Anmol and Anmol looking them what they want to talk with me. she say she can't tell front of kids and Ragini Also go for Sleep but Anmol Whole night think that what that thing that Ragini want to talk me. I never see her eyes like that who want to tell me and ask me soo many question and what that i was think rite or not when she tell me. Then i get too no that i am rite or wrong. Bye me i am rite she is in love and she want to Confession hid felling. Then he saw the watch its time to eat sahragi he go out to see that her mom wake up or not when he go he saw Vasu in kitchen ho is ready to perparig sahragi for every lady in the how he go near Vasu and tell them he help her to paper sahragi. She saw her and ask her u wake up so early. he tell he didn't sleep. Vasu ask why. He said i don't no but that way i come out for to see that u or any one get up to paper sahragi when i come out i saw u that way i come her too help u then he help Vasu too paper sahragi. After that Ragini wake up and he saw that Anmol was not in room she go to in washroom then hi go down stares. She saw Anmol whit Vasu and she ask Anmol what r u doing whit mamji, He tell i am helping mama. And also Nandani join them and Vasu tell Anmol to. he has to feed Ragini sahragi. He say why this is parpara of are house u r father do this and ur grand father and also Alekh do when sadhna whit us now its now ur turn to feed sahragi to Ragini. Both look at each other then Anmol feed sahragi to Ragini and then they go in there room and Anmol get ready to go office but he can;t find his walate and his car key he was look for that Ragini come there and ask them what are u look hi said that i can't find my walate and car key then she give her. Anmol say what can i do whit u i was so much depend on u. she didn't tell any thing and smile and both go form there. now its 6:00 pm and now every one start com in rajvansh house. And Ragini ready she wear golden colour sari on that sari work whit red colour and she look like bride and Anmol where red colour sharvani on that sharvani little golden work both wear matching dress. and Ragini wear red and golden colour bangle and earing both looking gorges and mindblowing. And now everyone waiting for moon. There is so much time what can we do thay said guni give the idea and they do dance on chand chupa badal mai. Vasu say that a good idea every one make copule Anmol make copule whit Ragini, Alkeh make whit his beautiful daughter, Karan make whit Nandani, every one is ready now Khushi and Tammy start playing a song when song start Anmol and Ragini lost in each other and dance beautiful they lost in each other in this part Anmol was think that he and Ragini too much closed and he is kissing Ragini on her forehead the is that.
--MALE--


Chand chupa badal mei.n,


Sharmake meri janaa,


Chand chupa badal mei.n,


Sharmake meri janaa,


Seene se lagaja tu,


Balkhake meri janaa,


Ghumsum sa hai,


Gupchup sa hai,


Madhosh hai,


Khamosh hai,


Ye samaa haa ye samaa,


Kuch aur hai,


O oh oh


Chand chupa badal mei.n,


Sharmake meri janaa,


Seene se lagaja tu,


Balkhake meri janaa,


Nazdekiya badjaane de

THEN Ragini think that he put her one hand no Anmol shoulder and Anmol put one his
hand on Ragini Qamar and both take there other hand and go back and come front
and go round and this wording playing.

-FEMALE--


Are nahi Babara nahi abhi nahi nahi,

Then Again Anmol.

--MALE--


Ye duriya mith jaane de

Then Ragini thinking.

--FEMALE--


Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,


Dur se hi tum,


Jee bhar ke dekho

Anmol

--MALE--


Tum he kho kaise dur se dekhu

Ragini

--FEMALE--


Chand ko jaise dekhta chakor hai,


--MALE--


Ghumsum sa hai,


Gupchup sa hai,


Madhosh hai,


Khamosh hai,


Ye sama ha ye sama,


Kuch aur hai,


--FEMALE--


O ohoh


Chand chupa badal mei.n,


Sharmake jaane janaa,

--MALE--


Seene se lagaja tu,


Balkhake meri janaa,

--Chorus--


Aaja re aaja chanda


Ki jabatak tu na aaye ga


Sajanaa ke chehre.n ko dekhne


Ye mantersa jayega,


--MALE--


Na na chanda tu nahi aana,


Tu jo aaya to,


Sanam sharma ke kahi chala jayena,


--Chorus--


Aaja re aaja chanda


Tu lakh duya ye painga,

--MALE--


Na na chanda tu nahi aana,


Varna sanam chalaa jayegaa


Achal mei.n tu chup ja ne de


-FEMALE--


Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,


--MALE--


Zulfo mei.n tu kho jaane de


--FEMALE--


Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,


--FEMALE--


Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,


Pyar to naam hai,


Sabar ka hamdum,

--MALE--


Wohi bhalaa bolo kaise kare hum,
And After that Ragini think that she put her head on Anmol and he was kissing his neck then
his lips and that wording going on.

--FEMALE--


Sawan ki rah jese dekh morr hai,


Ae,rehene bhi do jaane bhi do ab chudo na


Yo modo na


Ye sama ha ye sama kuch aur hai,


--Chorus--


Aaya re aaya chanda,


Ab har khwayish puri hogi,


Chandani raat mei.n har sajani apne,


Sajanaa ko dekhe ki. -- (3)

And song finish and now every one start clapping to Anmol and Ragini dance, They come out from there dream and feel awkward and give smile too every one than Guddi come there and tell that moon is her everyone go up stares on tarace.


next part: Ragini see Anmol whit Nandani and she feel jealous and go from there in her car.







Edited by Hafsa12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well written Hafsa!👏👏👏 Waiting to read the next part...so do post soon!😉

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