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Posted: 13 years ago

very nicely written update..👏

the happy moments in the family continues with the arrival of pratham.
all going for a family dinnner and love the romantic scene of angini in their room..😳
anmol always all praise of his beautiful wife ragini..😊
thanks for the update..keep it up..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello Guys, here is part 34, hope you will like it and there will be more comments this time :) and i am planning to wrap this FF up soon maybe 6 more parts so make it like 40 parts even or even 50; depending on what ideas come to me. So, watch out for next few parts and this part is just a little filler as you may call it. Here goes, enjoy!

PART 34


Weekend had passed and everyone was back to their routine; Pratham joined office and accompanied Alekh in his car. Anmol took kids and Gunni along with him and he headed out as he quickly placed a kiss on Ragini's cheek as a goodbye. Ragini smiled to herself and goes inside to finish her errands. It was evening now and Gunni was busy in her work as she and Abhay were busy finishing deadlines for few projects.

Abhay: Gunni, humain aaj shaam ko der ho jayegi, I think you should inform at home.
Gunni: Haan main abhi ghar par phone kardeti hoon.

Gunni calls home and Ragini picks up the phone while she was preparing dinner in kitchen.
Ragini: Hello
Gunni: Hello Chachi
Ragini: Haan Gunni kahiye
Gunni: Chachi maine yeh bataane ke liye phone kiya hai ki mujhe aaj aane main thodi der ho jayegi; main aur Abhay ek project par kam kar rahe hain to uski deadline kal hai. Abhi 5 bajh rahe hain to humain takreeban 2 ghante aur lagenge
Ragini: Theek hai Gunni, kuch kha lijiyega office main
Gunni: Ji Chachi, okay bye Chachi
Ragini: Bye

She went back to her work after that phone call. Abhay wrapped up his files and stood up from his desk.

Abhay: Gunni, mujhe voh client ke saath meeting ke liye jana hai to tab tak tumhara kaam bhi ho jayega to main aakar tumhe pick karta hoon.
Gunni: Haan abhi to mujhe kafi time lagega; waise agar tum chaho to tum seedhe ghar ja sakte ho, I mean I can get Pratham to pick me up
Abhay: No its okay, main aa jaunga. I will call you so just come down then. Bye
Gunni: Sure, bye.

The office had closed at 6 and janitor had come to clean the office. Everyone else had gone except Gunni who was working in her cabin typing away and studying legal cases. She wanted to finish her work before Abhay came to pick her up. It was now 7 pm when Gunni finally turned off her computer; she rubbed her eyes and stretched her back as she had been sitting for a while. She went to washroom to freshen up leaving her stuff behind thinking she will come pick it up before she leaves. The entrance to washrooms had a main door and washroom stalls were inside; Gunni came out of the stall and washed her hands and was about to go out from main door but was surprised to find it locked. She knocked and yelled out loud for someone to hear her voice but no avail. The janitor had mistakenly thought that everyone had gone since Gunni was not in her cabin, all the lights were shut and doors were locked. Gunni cursed herself for leaving her cell phone in the cabin. It was almost 8 pm when Abhay rolled his car infront of the office and called Gunni to come down so they can go home but no one was answering. After few attempts, Abhay got worried and he steps outside of his car and approached the guard at the entrance.

Abhay: Kya, abhi thodi der pehle koi gaya yahan se?
Guard: No sahib, sabhi to office band hone par hi chale gaye the aur uske baad to sirf safayi karnewala aaya tha aur voh bhi ek thodi der pehle nikal gaya.
Abhay: Shit! Mujhe lagta hai Gunni andar hi hai; master keys kahan hai?

Guard gave him the key and he rushed inside and ran upstairs forgetting everything else; he was right that janitor had mistakenly locked Gunni inside when he saw the office lights all off. He turned them on and ran to the cabin but he didn't see Gunni there. He noticed her stuff inside and then he decided to check other rooms-photocopier room etc and then it struck him that she could be in the washroom. He ran to the washroom and quickly opened the door open and saw Gunni sitting there on the floor.

Abhay (breathing heavily): Gunni!

Gunni turned around and quickly got up and rushed to hug Abhay; she was crying as she had been stuck in the washroom for over an hour and had almost lost her voice screaming for help. Abhay held her in his arms as if he would never let her go; they stood there for few minutes till Gunni had calmed down a little. He slowly took her to the cabin and gave her water. He was carassing her hair which was now a mess.

Abhay: Gunni, tum theek to ho? Kaise ho gaya yeh sabh?
Gunni (huffing): Voh main washroom chali gayi thi... jab bahar aane lagi to door...lock...maine bahut awaazein di, knock kiya lekin...
Abhay: Shhh, its okay now. I am sorry, mujhe tumhe akele chod kar nahi jana chahiye tha; janitor ne lock kardiya sabh kuch begair dekhe ki andar koi hai. I am sorry.
Gunni: Tumhari koi galti nahi hai, Abhay. Its okay.
Abhay: Lets go, home!

Abhay had slowly walked her to the car and drove towards Rajvansh mansion; after few minutes the car came to halt. Abhay took the keys out of ignition and turned towards Gunni and was shocked to see her unconscious. He shook her and quickly called the doctor to reach Rajvansh mansion; he came around the other side and opened the door to lift her up. He lifted her inside and walked inside Rajanvansh mansion. Everyone got up and were shocked to see the sight in front of them; Anmol guided him to the room where he placed Gunni on the bed. Before Abhay could explain what happened, the doctor walked in and did the checkup.

Dr: Thodi si thakaan ki wajah se chakar aa gaya hai, BP bhi low hai. Aur inhone kuch khaya bhi nahi hai shayad. But its okay, maine injection de diya aur yeh much medicines hain aap de dijiyega.

Pratham escorted the doctor out while Abhay sat and recalled that they didn't have lunch today due to excessive amount of work and later she was locked in the washroom for hours. They all walked outside the room and went downstairs.

Inderjeet: Beta, kya hua Gunni ko achanak?

Abhay explained how they were busy all day finishing the deadlines and infact they both didn't have lunch and later the washroom incident when he left to meet a client. They were all shocked but happy that Abhay was with her all this while.

Abhay: Aate waqt tak Gunni theek thi bas jab ghar ke bahar pahunche to behosh ho gayi. I am sorry, mujhe Gunni ko akele office main chod kar nahi jana chahiye tha
Alekh: Abhay tumhara koi kasoor nahi hai, voh to peon ki galti se yeh sabh ho gaya aur acha hua ki tum wahan pahunch gaye warna kisi ko pata hi nahi chalta
Anmol: I am sure Gunni thoda rest karegi to theek ho jayegi, no worries
Ragini: Abhay, aapne bhi kuch nahi khaya, main khana laga deti hoon aap aa jayiye humare saath khaana kha lijiye
Abhay: Nahi, ummm mujhe khas bhookh nahi hai aur waise bhi ghar par mom dad wait kar rahe honge. Main chalta hoon, Namaste.

Abhay quickly left from there while Ragini and Anmol stood there watching Abhay leave and his vivid concern for Gunnni in his eyes. Abhay reached home and told his parents about Gunni and they were really concerned as well. Abhay refused to eat and headed to his room to freshen up. Next morning, Ram and Gautami were at breakfast table when Abhay joined them.
Abhay: Good morning mom, good morning dad!
Gautami: Good morning beta, aao baitho naashta karo tumne kal raat ko bhi kuch nahi khaya
Ram: Tumhari Gunni se baat huyi?
Abhay: Nahi dad, maine socha voh araam kar rahi ho gayi to isliye...
Ram: Hmm...main abhi ghar par phone karke pooch leta hoon.

Ram called Inderjeet to ask about Gunni's condition now.

Inderjeet: Namaste bhai sahib
Ram: Namaste bhai sahib, kal Gunni ke baare main pata chala, abh kaisi tabiyat hai uski?
Inderjeet: Abh behtar hai, abhi Ragini usse naashta karwaane gayi hai. Aaj araam karegi to theek ho jayegi jaldi.
Ram: Oh thats good then, shukar hai bhagwaan ka. Chaliye main Abhay ko bata deta hoon aut aapse phir baat hogi, Namaste
Inderjeet: Jee Namaste.
Abhay: Kya kaha unhone, Dad?
Ram: She is fine now, she won't be coming to work today but should be okay by tomorrow
Gautami: Chaliye acha hua.

Abhay was relieved now and smiled to himself and ate breakfast full heartdly.


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...

such a sweet update...loved abhays's concern for guni...

continue soon..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear Amitoz..
Just finished reading part 33 , Sorry been so tied up with things and I apologize for teh delay ..
It was exteremey beautiful and loved Pratham Gunni teasing Anmol and Ragini..
ANd they all going for a picnic .. and bumping into the kapoors..

And the soft romance between Anmol and Ragini is s beautiful it takes me to paradise !!😳

Happy Diwali to you too
Lovely part will read teh next and comment
You make you visiualze it right infornt of our eyes !!👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
read part 34..nice update..😊
love how abhay was so concerned for gunni..
their relationship seems to be going on the right way and both do make a cute couple.😊
abhay smile and relieved hearing gunni is fine..so sweet..
continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it😉
plz continue soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
I had to catch p with so much thanks for wonderful updates,,
Loving Gunni and Pratham and their sweet tease,

And Gunni's love story also moving
and Anmol and Ragini are like newly weds👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello guys, thanks for comments on previous part! Sorry took a while to get back, was little busy! But anyways heres the next update, hopefully you will like it and watchout for next parts, little fast paced. Will look forward to your comments so please comment! Thank You! Enjoy!

PART 35

Its been almost 3months since Pratham had came back home and had joined office. They would all go to office together and Pratham had been handling export business. It is evening when Anmol was in his room after office and Ragini walks in with tea for him.

Ragini: Yeh lijiye aapki chai
Anmol: Thank You
Ragini: Mujhe abhi tammy ki uniform lene jana hai, order ki huyi thi aur market se kuch aur bhi cheezein leni hain, aap chalenge?
Anmol: Ragini you know I would love to par trust me main aaj bahut thak gaya hoon, aap kisi aur ko le jayiye aur agar itna zaroori nahi hai to main kal chalunga aapke saath
Ragini: Zaroori to hai lekin koi baat nahi aap araam kijiye main dekhti hoon.

Just then Pratham came knocking on the door and walked inside.

Pratham: Chachu yeh lijiye voh file, main office main dena bhool gaya tha. Aur chachi kya chal raha hai?
Ragini: Main bas market tak jaa rahi hoon aur apke Chachu mere saath nahi aa rahe
Pratham: To main chalta hoon na aapke saath, main bhi apne liye kuch shopping karlunga
Ragini: Chaliye yeh bhi theek hai, main aati hoon neeche tayar hokar
Pratham: Allright then I will see you downstairs.

Anmol smiled at their conversation and Ragini joined Pratham shortly after while Anmol went to take a shower. Ragini picked up Tammy's new uniform from the store and later they went to the mall where Pratham picked few clothes for himself. Meanwhile Gunni and Abhay were driving back from work and Abhay had been glancing at her when Gunni wasn't looking.

Abhay: Gunni, tumse ek baat karni thi
Gunni: Haan kaho, kya baat hai
Abhay: Well, ek advise chahiye tumse...um...mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe kisi se pyaar ho gaya hai

Right then Gunni's reactions changed and for some reason she felt something in her heart and Abhay had noticed that. He knew that she also shared same feelings for him but they both didnt disclose them to each other and finally he had to take a step.

Gunni: lagta hai matlab, tum sure nahi ho?
Abhay: Well kuch mahino se soch raha hoon aur mujhe lagta ki main to pyaar karta hoon use par abh yeh nahi pata ki voh mujhe pyaar karti hai yaa nahi aur mujhe use baat karne se dar lag raha ke kahin usne naa kardi to aur main uske saath apni dosti bhi nahi khona chahta
Gunni: Well in that case, umm tumhe zaroor baat karni chahiye aur waise bhi tumhe koi ladki mana kyun karegi? Padhe likhe ho, well career oriented ho, aur dikhne main bhi theek thak ho.
Abhay: Oh thanks to well ummm theek hai kal valentines day hai to main soch raha hoon ki use propose kardu, aur tumhe mere saath kal chalna hai.
Gunni: Main? Lekin mera wahan kya kaam... tum dono ke beech main kya karungi?
Abhay: Nahi main chahta hoon ki tum bhi saath chalo aur isi bahane tum use mil bhi lena aur haan mujhe ring select karni hai to tumhe saath chalna hai size dene ke liye. She's almost same size and height as yours, tumhari fitting sahi rahegi. Abh main use to nahi le ja sakta kyunki surprise hai.

Gunni just sat there and she didn't know why she felt like crying. Did she love him? Well she thought its too late to think about such things since Abhay had obviously made his decision.

Abhay: Gunni? Kahan kho gayi? To teh raha ki kal tum mere saath chalogi, main tumhe shaam 7 baje karunga aur hum ring pick karne ke baad chalenge dinner par jahan tum bhi use mil lena
Gunni: Hmm theek hai... ummm kya main jaanti hoon use, I mean uska naam kya hai?
Abhay (smiled to himself): umm jaanti to ho par tumhare liye bhi surprise hai, tum kal mil lena usse.

Just then they reached home and Gunni was still sitting at her spot and Abhay reminded her that they are home. Gunni silently wished him bye and headed inside. She quickly walked to her room and went to freshen up and process what had just happen in few minutes. On the other hand, Ragini and Pratham had finished their shopping and walked towards their car when Pratham realized he forgot his keys inside the showroom.

Pratahm: Chachi aap bas 2 min rukiye, main apni keys wahan andar bhool aaya. Be back.

Meanwhile Ragini stood there holding shopping bags in one hand and holding her phone in the other hand to text Anmol that she will be home shortly. Right then, some goons came around her and she became attentive. They slowly approached her and were teasing and laughing while making cheap remarks about her and body. One of them came close to her and had just touched her when Pratham punched him sideways which shocked Ragini. Others ran away while Pratham snatched that one goon and continously punched him and kicked him. Ragini was shocked to see Pratham in such rage and she tried to stop him but Pratham wasn't listening.

Pratham: Chal uth abhi tujhe police ke haawale karta hoon, teri himmat kaise huyi meri maa smaan Chachi ke saath aisi harkat karne ki. Ainda kisi aur ke saath aisa karne ki sochna bhi mat
The goon apologized and Pratham hit him once again before he let him run away. He turned to Ragini who lifted the bags from the floor and walked near him.

Pratham: Chachi aap theek to hain na
Ragini: Haan main bilkul theek hoon
Pratham: Agar main sahi mauke pe nahi aata to pata nahi voh...

Without hearing much, he sat in the driver seat and drove home fuming in anger. How could someone do that any woman, he thought and that too with a woman who was like a mother to him. Ragini, sensing that he is too angry, decided to not talk to him for now and they drove home silently. They reached home and everyone was waiting for them at the dinner table, Pratham kept the bags on the couch and just when Inderjeet told him to have a seat, he walked away quickly to his room and slammed his door which was heard by everyone. They were all surprised what had happened to him.

Vasu: Are ise kya ho gaya? Ragini, kya hua?
Inderjeet: Haan beta kya hua, itne gusse main kyun hai?

Ragini lowered her head and told them what happened in the market and how Pratham beat that goon up, and this enraged Anmol and everyone else at the table. Anmol quickly got up from his chair.

Anmol: Ragini, tum theek to ho?
Ragini: Haan Anmol main bilkul theek hoon, Pratham sahi mauke par aa gaya tha. Maine use bhi kaha ki main theek hoon par uska gussa abhi thanda nahi hua.
Alekh: Pratham ne theek kiya Ragini aur uska gussa jayaz bhi hai

After few minutes, Ragini freshened up and came downstairs to have dinner.

Sakshi: didi aap yeh khana Pratham ko uske kamre main de aayiye, main tab tak kitchen sambhaal leti hoon.
Ragini: Haan Sakshi, layiye mujhe dijiye.

Anmol and Ragini walked to his room where Pratham was sitting on his head. Ragini sat next to Pratham whereas Anmol sat on the other side. Ragini noticed a wound on his hand and she started tying a bandage to him and he just sat there silently.

Ragini: Pratham, main theek hoon aur aap the na wahan pe mere saath, mujhe kya ho sakta tha. Chaliye chodiye aur abh aap khana kha lijiye.
Anmol: I am proud of you Pratham, main to nahi tha wahan par par mujhe khushi hai ki tumne apni Chachi ke liya itna kuch kiya.

Ragini was feeding Pratham and he ate quietly. After finishing dinner, Ragini placed the plate aside.

Pratham: Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha, jaise hi maine use Chachi ke paas dekha aur usne Chachi ko choohne ki koshish ki to mera khoon khaul utha. Apne aap ko main kaabu nahi kar saka.

Ragini: Thank you, Pratham.
Pratham: Chachi aap thank you kehkar mujhe kyun sharminda kar rahi hain, wahan koi aur bhi hota to main aise hi react karta aur aap to phir meri maa smaan Chachi hain.

Ragini and Pratham both had tears in their eyes and Pratham hugged her. Anmol also sat there with teary eyes and witnessed the scene. They wished Pratham goodnight and walked out of the room together. While they were heading back, Gunni was heading upstairs to her room and Ragini noticed her being little lost.

Ragini: Gunni? Kya hua aap theek to hain?
Gunni: Ji... jee chachi bas thoda tired.
Anmol: Well then goodnight Gunni.
Gunni: Goodnight Chachu, Goodnight Chachi.
Ragini: Goodnight

Now Ragini and Anmol were in bed and Ragini placed her head on Anmol's arm and had other hand on his chest.

Ragini: Kuch waqt ke liye to main dar hi gayi thi par Pratham ne sahi mauke par aakar sabh kuch sambhaal liya. Lekin uska gussa maine aaj tak aise nahi dekha.
Anmol: Voh apki izzat karta hai Ragini aur koi bhi aisa kuch dekhkar apno aap ko rok nahi pata aur main to khush hoon ke aap akeli nahi gayi, main te nahi tha par Pratham tha wahan aur usne wahi kiya jo main us halaat main karta. Khair aap uske baare main sochna band kijiye aur so jayiye.

He kisses her forehead and they both slept in each other's arms; place where Ragini felt most secure.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice part Loved it !!...

Loved teh way Pratham took initiative and at the right time saved Ragini from the goons, He respects her as and he did his duty..

And the later Anmol and Ragini's conversation
Gunni and Abhay's conversation was good and I am sure Gunni will be a little surprised about the way Abhay is planning to do😳

Wished they had continued Bidaaii till atleast 6 more momths we would have got so much and a good storyline on plate

Please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
very well written update..

continue soon..:)

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