Pyaar to hona hi tha- NEW FF- Part 40A- Pg 34!! - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww so sweet u r one talented person......i will write a detailed comment during eastern timezone night .... i am glad u decided to write the ff and share it with us
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Guys, I was just overwhelmed by looking at the responses to my FF, I never expected that I would get such appreciation. Well that makes my job more hard as I have to make my FF even better for you guys.

Thank you: Anizor
Anjana (And yes you can call me Amit, infact all my classmates in India used to call me Amit only so its cool with me)
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Sami01(Waiting for your detailed comment as well :))

Next part will be up in few hours, I am playing around with few ideas in my head, so will finalize something. If you guys have any suggestions or any scenes that you would like me to incorporate in this FF, please free to let me know and I can put those scenes in to make it even better. Thank you once again for your replies!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woow! thats an awesome start you have there, and you are definitely an amazing writer! please do continue soon!

hehe i loved how anmol immediately shut shivani up :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well, I am here with Part 2 hoping you guys would like it and I would see more comments this time. Here's the update, enjoy!

PART 2

Next morning, Ragini had waken up welcoming the new rays of sun in her room and in her life. She took shower and was getting ready in front of the mirror. The rays of sun had disturbed Anmol so he woke up srcrubbing his eyes. But the minute he saw Ragini, he was wide awake and couldn't take his eyes off her. He carefully noticed how she fixed her hair, filled her hair partition with sandoor, etc; she dignified beauty. Anmol was constantly gazing at her without knowing that Ragini saw him looking at her through the mirror. She smiled to herself and both Anmol's and Ragini's attention was diverted to the buzzer of an alarm clock which was signalling time being 7 AM. Anmol quickly turned it off.

Ragini: Good Morning. Waise aapne itni jaldi ka alarm kyun lagaya?

Anmol: Jee matlab, main kuch samjha nahi.

Ragini: Matlab ke aaj to saturday hai na, to phir aap kuch der aaur rest karlete.

Anmol quickly looked at his phone to check the date and he realized that it is in fact saturday today.

Anmol: Voh roz ki routine hai to isiliye dimaag se hi nikal gaya ki aaj sunday hai.

Just then Tammy and Khushi walked in and they both jumped on the bed to hug Anmol. He kissed both of his angels and Ragini just stood there admiring how he is a great father to her daughters.

Anmol: Bacha party, aap log itni subah subah kya kar rahe hain?

Tammy: Uffo papa, aap bhool gaye apne promise kiya tha ki hum sabh picnic par chalenge.

Khushi: Haan partner, aaj to saturday hai aur humne badi mummy se bhi permission le li hai.

Anmol: Ohh to yeh baat hai, picnic ki tayari ho rahi hai.

Khushi: Maasi maa, aap bhi jaldi se tayar ho jao.

Ragini: Lekin beta papa roz kaam karke thak gaye hain, unko aaj thoda rest karne dena chahiye.

Khushi: Partner, aap thak gaye ho?

Anmol: Ragini, aap fikar mat kijiye main bilkul theek hoon aur waise bhi hum sabh log kahin bahar nahi gaye aur bachon ka bhi dil behal jayega.

Ragini: Jee jaisa aapko theek lage.

Khushi & Tammy: Yay!!!!

Anmol: Acha bacho, abh jaldi se jaakar ready ho jao aur tab tak main bhi ready ho jaata hoon.

The kids left away running as they were really excited. Anmol got up and walked over to Ragini.

Anmol: Ragini, aap bhi chalengi na humare saath? Warna bache to apna enjoy karenge par main akela bore ho jaunga.

Ragini (smiles): Jee. Aap fresh ho jayiye tab tak main bachon ko dekh kar aati hoon.

Just then, Vasu knocked on their door.

Ragini: Are mummy ji aap, aayiye na.

Anmol: Good morning, mummy.

Vasu: Good morning, beta. Acha yeh bache kya picnic ka program bana rahe hain.

Ragini: Jee mummy voh inhe aaj chutti hai to bache zid kar rahe the kahin bahar jaane ki.

Vasu: Achi baat hai, bache bhi khush ho jayenge aur tumhari bhi outing ho jayegi. Sara din ghar ke kaam main busy rehti ho aur Anmol office main. Balki hum to yeh kehne aaye the ki kyun na tum log humare farmhouse main picnic manaane jao aur kal to sunday hai isliye aaj raat wahi ruk jaana.

Anmol: Mummy, are you sure? Hum to sirf aaj ka hi plan bana rahe the.

Vasu: Are haan kyun nahi, aur haan Ragini... Malti, Vineet aur Kavya ko bhi bata do, sabh log saath jayenge to acha rahega.

Ragini: Jee mummy ji. Main unhe bata deti hoon.

Anmol: Aap to chal rahi hai na humare saath mummy ji?

Vasu: Nahi hum yahi rukenge, tum bache sabh ho aao aur waise bhi Sakshi ki tabiyat theek nahi hai aur hum usko paas hi rukenge. Abh tum log jaldi se tayar ho jao, main guddi se kehke naashta tayar karwa deti hoon.

Anmol & Ragini: Jee mummy.

Anmol went to take shower whereas Ragini was attending the kids and packing their clothes for overnight stay. She informed Vinu and Malti about their trip and they were on their way to Rajvansh House. Shlok and Shivani were coming along as well as Alekh insisted that Shlok must come and bring Shivani along. Shivani thought this would be great opportunity for her to get close with Anmol when she gets a chance during the trip. Ragini was feeding the kids downstairs when Anmol walked down the stairs; he was wearing t-shirt and jeans and looked different as compare to his daily look in formal suits. Ragini had to think twice as if it was the same Anmol as he looked rather young and muscular in tightly fitted shirt and jeans. It was now 10 AM, when they all left home. Anmol was driving and Ragini was on the front seat whereas kids were in the back accompanied with Alekh. In the other car, Vinu was driving with Malti in the passenger whereas Kavya was accompanied by Shlok and Shivani. They drove to the farmhouse and it was roughly 3-4 hours of drive. Kids and Alekh had gone to sleep whereas Ragini had her head tilted next to the window as she was fixing her hair which were covering her face due to the wind. Anmol was driving and once in a while he would gaze at Ragini and smile to himself. He thought maybe this trip could bring them somewhat closer.

**** Will this trip be successful in terms of bringing Anmol and Ragini together or will Shivani be successful with her plans to do the opposite.****** More on Part 3, will update soon! Thank you!

Edited by Amitoz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Amit fantastic Part yaar👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

KBH shivani will come to know what is her place in Anmol's life😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow dear the second part is also sooo interesting !!
Me greedy for more

I loved the way you bring in the kids and they interact with Anmol

Please continue soon !~!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read both part and its so interesting and beautiful..😊
loved all angini's cute moments and so well described scenes..
the kids with anmol toooooooo cute..
so well written..👏👏.
please do continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here you guys, part 3. It is little longer than usual so I hope you enjoy reading it and sorry for the delay. Will look forward to your comments and suggestions.

PART 3

Anmol had been driving and he decided to make a stop to have some refreshments from the roadside dhaba since he was tired. Ragini who had been sitting there with her eyes closed, got up and fixed her hair. She looked at kids who were still sleeping with Alekh.

Anmol: Ragini, maine Vinu bhaiya ko bhi bhol diya hai ki hum yahan ruke huye hain. Voh bhi bas abhi pahunchte hi honge.

Ragini: Main bachon aur Jija Ji ko utha deti hoon. Voh bhi fresh ho jayenge.

Anmol: Jee tab tak main dekh kar aata hoon ki kuch arrangements hain baithne ke liye ki nahi.

Vinu guys, who were following Anmol's car, reached at the dhaba after a short while. Ragini woke up the kids and Aleh; they all went to the dhaba. They were all sitting on a table together and ordered food. They were having aloo paranthas and kids had sanwiches.

Malti: Jhooth to main bolti nahi, par maine isse ache paranthe kabhi naa khaye.

Vinu: Malti main to kehta hoon tum do din yahan hi ruk jao.

Malti: Haye kyun vinu ji?

Vinu: Bhai tum paranthe banane ki training le lena aur phir ghar pe hum sabh ko bana kar khilaana.

Everyone laughed at Vinu's comment; suddenly Ragini started coughing as the parantha had green chilly in it. Anmol quickly got up and gave her water. Shivani, on the other hand, was getting jelous at Anmol's gesture towards Ragini.


Anmol: Ragini, aap theek to hain?

Ragini: Jee voh bas mirch thodi teekhi thi isliye.

Vinu: Acha bhai agar sabh ki pet pooja ho gayi ho to chalein? Anmol Ji, abh humain chalna chahiye.

They all left the premise and continued with their trip. After another 2 hours of drive, they finally reached at the farmhouse by 3pm. The farmhouse was more like a resort with staff in placed to take care of it. It had been located in open surrounded fields and one could enjoy the background the mountains. On the back side of the farmhouse, there was a beach with blue aqua water and the green lush plants and trees made the location even more exotic. After getting settled in and freshen up, kids had gone to the park to enjoy the rides whereas all the guys were playing volleyball on the beach. Shivani, Ragini and Malti were just sitting by side and watching their game.

Anmol got a call and he was surprised to hear the voice on the other side. He quickly got up and only thing he uttered was " main abhi aaya". Ragini wondered who was he talking to.

Ragini: Kiska phone tha aur aap kahan jaane ki baat kar rahe hain.
Anmol: Ragini,voh Gunni ka phone tha. Voh apne hostel se ghar wapis ja rahi thi aur mummy ne use bataya ki hum sabh yahan hain to woh directly yahan aa gayi. Voh andar lobby main wait kar rahi hai, main usse lekar aata hoon.
Ragini: Are yeh to bahut achi baat hai, aap jayiye aur tabh tak hum khana laga dete hain.
Anmol: Jee main abhi aaya.

Anmol went inside and Gunni hugged her Chachu. He was equally happy that she was able to join them. Anmol told her that everyone is sitting by the beach and are about to have dinner so they should join them. Gunni and Anmol walked out of the lobby and suddenly Anmol noticed something. There was a construction going on the top floor and the worker had accidently dropped the metal basket filled with cement and it was about to land on Gunni's head when Anmol pushed her and he fell on the ground injuring his right wrist whereas Gunni just had minor scratches as she landed on Anmol. Gunni panicked and Anmol signalled to call Ragini pointing at the direction. She quickly ran and Ragini was elated to see her. She hugged Gunni and asked where is Anmol. She saw Gunni sweating and panicking and questioned her what is the matter. Everyone else also saw Gunni's condition and gathered around.


Ragini: Gunni aap batayiye kya hua aur aapke chachu kahan hain?
Gunni: Chachi, chachu ko bahut chot lagi hai.

Ragini and everyone else were shocked and moreover Ragini was surprised that how could it all happen in just few minutes. She quickly ran to the scene where Anmol was struggling to get up. Vineet and Shlok helped Anmol get up and Malti told he resort manager to call a doctor. Kids were also worrying and Alekh had been with them. They had been sitting at the same spot by the beach as waited for the doctor to come. Doctor came and put a plaster along his arm and neck as Anmol' right wrist has suffered a bone injury as he hit the wrist on the floor with such pressure. He gave him medicines assuring that he would be fine in few days.

Gunni: I am sorry Chachu aapko meri wajah se chot lag gayi.
Anmol: Gunni tum jaanti ho tumhari wajah se kuch nahi hua aur main aisa nahi karta to voh metal basket aapke sir par gir jaati. I am fine now.

Later everyone started having dinner but Anmol was struggling to eat with his left hand. Ragini noticed this and first she felt little shy to feed him in front of everyone else but later she sat next to Anmol and offered to help.

Ragini: Main aapki kuch madad karu?

Anmol was first taken aback at her offer as he wasn't expecting her to say his infront of everyone else. But later he smiled and nodded saying yes. Ragini fed him whereas Gunni made a comment saying that he is very lucky to have her chachi as his wife whos so caring. Shivani on the other hand had been jealous enough seeing Ragini feeding Anmol but Gunni's comment made her even more mad. Gunni and Alekh decided to play the game with everyone as they were all getting bored as kids had gone to sleep. Gunni introduced the game of truth and dare; if person choses truth they will have to answer the question honestly and if they chose the option of dare, they would have to do what others say. Vinu chose the option of truth and told everyone how he said I Love you to Malti on their honeymoon and she responded the next day by giving him a kiss. Gunni, then, asked Malti if she had anything to disclose to Vinu if she hadn't already done so but Vinu replied saying that its impossible for Malti to keep anything to herself; therefore she didn't hide anything from him. Shlok had been asked to tell Shivani her one habit that annoys him and he replied saying that she is little hot tempered. It was then Shivani's turn and Alekh asked her whether Shlok is the first love of her life. Shivani gazed at Anmol and replied "Nahi". No one was expecting that response especially Anmol who was now giving her angry looks and Shlok was on the other was surprised to hear that. After few minutes of silence, Shivani changed her statement by stating that she meant to say that Shlok is not only her first love but also her last love. Shlok smiled at her witty comment and everyone breathed a sigh of relief but Anmol knew her tactics. He somehow mangaged to control his anger and indulged in the game.

Gunni: Acha, chachi abh aapki baari. Batayiye truth aur dare.

Ragini: Umm truth.

Gunni: Okay to aap Chachu ki achi aur ek buri adaat batayiye.

Ragini knew that Gunni would ask her something like this and was feeling awkward but Anmol was anxious to hear her reply; atleast now Ragini would reveal something about him that she likes and dislikes.

Alekh: Ragini jaldi answer karo na warna tumhe voh karna hoga jo hum kahenge.

Ragini: Yeh hamesha doosron ke baare main sochte hain aur yeh achi bhi hai aur buri bhi; hamesha doosron ke baare main sochna theek hai lekin inhe apna bhi khayal rakhna chahiye.

Gunni: Dekha Chachu, chachi ki apki kitni fikar hai aur apko apne baare main bhi sochne chahiye.

Alekh: Acha abh last Tammy ke papa, abh aapki baari. Truth aur dare?

Anmol: Bhai sabne truth chose kiya main soch raha hoon ki main kuch alag karu, so dare.

Gunni: Soch lijiye chachu, jo humne keh diya aapko karna padega. Ready?

Anmol: Haan ready.

Gunni: To aapko chachi ke liye ek gaana gana padega, koi bhi acha sa romantic song.

Anmol looked at Ragini who had lowered her eyes as she couln't face him and others had been clapping to cheer Anmol. Shivani was waiting to see if Anmol really sings or not. Anmol cleared his throat and started singing; his eyes were constantly gazing at Ragini whose cheeks had turned red due to blushing.

Anmol (sang): Tu meri zindagi hai, tu meri har khushi hai

tuhi pyaar, uhi chahat, tuhi aashiqui hai

Pehli mohabbat ka ehsaas hai tu, bujhke jo bujh naa paayi, voh pyaas hai tu

Tu hi meri pehli khwaaish, tu hi aakhri hai
Tu meri zindagi hai, tu meri har khushi hai
Everyone clapped and Anmol had been smiling looking at Ragini who was blushing. He was happy that he had managed to convey atleast some of his feelings through a song and he was hoping that Ragini would understand his feelings soon.Continued soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow so sweet ,Truth or dare ,Wow Fantastic part Yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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enjoy reading this part..😊
loving how angini's romance is getting shivani really jealous..
love the game part.truth or dare..
anmol choosing to do "dare"..well he is daring and love the song chosen..
good job..keep it up...👍🏼

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