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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sam waiting for the Conclusion Part
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If you missed the first part then please check the link below


Anmol Ragini Toofan aur diya....

In continuation


Morning brought beautiful sunshine, chirping birds and smiling face of his little daughter. How I wish Shivani disappear in darkness of last night he felt.


He came into his angles room; saw their sad faces and broken doll house; after pledging to fix it for them he decided to ask Ragini for a date.


Shivani had her own plans and realized Tammy was not even Anmol's daughter, maybe there is a chance, selfish person in her failed to see a man whose face lights up with his daughter's voice even.


A confrontation with Shivani left him very confused, frustrated and very angry. How can a woman come out of his dark cold cruel past and torment his future, his happiness, his everything.


Anmol had a bad headache coming by the time it was evening, he had planned a lunch date with Ragini which turned into a disaster when shivani decided to join them.


His sweet Ragini had welcomed Shivani with open arms.


Ragini was getting ready for small get together at home; vasundhra had arranged for an intimate evening with few close friends and family.


She was confused about what to wear ,she had worn her favorite green Sari at lunch but unexpectedly shivani came there too,as she was rehearsing in same hotel ,so to her disappointment they were forced to eat together;


She thought uff I have no good sari at all and frustrated she decided to first get Anmol's stuff ready for party she had been looking forward to their quiet time together but instead it was too overcrowded.


Shivani had talked about Anmol's younger days, somehow she had felt at disadvantage that someone else was telling her all this, in her mind she had felt little ashamed too for taking this guy so taken for granted. But anmol had been edgy and jumpy whole afternoon, he was in fact almost rude with shivani,to her horror he had cut short Shivani's conversation more than once.


So he liked strolls in moonlit nights..She thought, suddenly her hands were still...


How did shivani know such a intimate thing; same unease swept through her mind once again.


She decided to make a fresh start and discard all doubts about Anmol and started to sort her Sari's one more time.


. She was looking around in drawers, when suddenly her hand touched something soft, she pulled the tucked away dress and her eyes widened in appreciation. It was a cream crepe sari with golden and red embroidery, she always wore net saris so this material was new to her, she was shocked to see a blouse stitched for her own size


She had a matching petticoat and she decided to wear this and surprise Anmol.

Ah chachi chachu yeh aap ke liye Bombay se laye the..

I had never seen you wearing this sari so I though t may be you did not like crepes'

Nahi nahi I was waiting for a special occasion Ragini said sweetly.

Once guni left she reflected on this new information, a wave of happiness went though her,she wanted to dress up for him,she wanted to sing for him,she wanted to see his face when he saw her in this attire.

She wore the sari and differently designed blouse ,blouse was fully covering her back but had very dee p square neck,its lower part was embroided with matching design from sari,its dark red color was making Ragini;s complexion glow;she went on to apply makeup and suddenly she heard Anmol come in..


She ran to balcony and hid.

Why did I do this she thought'

Almost giggling like a little girl she hid and saw him from afar.

Even from far way she could tell he was tense, stressed out and very very angry. He got into the Armani suit she had pulled out for him,He looked like a Greek tycoon, she had to stop herself from going forward and staring at him, she wanted to hold him, comfort him, hug him, she wanted to reassure him, she wanted to ''

Suddenly she stopped and asked herself.

Main kab se yeh sab sochne lagi,wo mere man mein hamsha se the,magar

Tan aur man pe cha kyun raha hai'..

Anmol se apne dil ki baat aaj raat ko zaroor keh doongi..she thought..


Anmol was frustrated, he had tried fixing plastic doll house but in vain, kids were heartbroken as it was special one, he told them he will finish one in Nari niketan'

Kids being kids agreed and were suddenly very excited about this.

He was going downstairs to ask mom if she needed help; on stairs he saw shivani in a pink outfit looking lovely yet so artificial'h e wondered how he could not see underneath her well made exterior'


Looking stunning darling she said..

Just mind your language lady and please do not disturb me

He ignored her and continued downstairs

Vasu was watching this brief conversation, she couldn't hear what was being said,as she was very far but she could make out from body language of two,had Shivani tried to make pass on Anmol she thought.


Ragini decided to go in a simple look, way Anmol liked ,her hair swept to side ,a simple lipstick and small tear drop earrings with rubies and diamonds ,her simple pendent with matching design completed her attire ,Crepe gave her a very simple yet very elegant look, while enhancing her perfect figure most beautifully.


She was delighted to see her family and few good friends joining them. Anmol had seen her walking down stairs and he just stopped '''''..unable to move he stood with a open bottle of coke and glass. His eyes reflected his delight and slight touch of moisture was noticed by both kausi and vasu, delighted they exchanged looks and prayed in their minds.

Are jhoot to main bolti nahi magar glass to kab ka bhar gaya,ab to neeche table bhi '..

Anmol jolted from his trance and everyone clapped.

Ragini 7 saal baad bhi tum anmol ji k ehosh uda sakti ho'..yeh hui na baat ,veenu laughed

Ragini's cheeks were buring and Anmol did not know where to look.Suddenly he felt a buring gaze and saw angry shivani looking at him with venagance,he simply ignored her and smiled ,determinded to enjoy himself.

Ragini itni simple sari pehni hai,you seem to be very simple person Shivani said in a double meaning tone'anmol's eyes turned jet black from brown ''

In all this fun shivani told everyone Anmol sang very well'

So he was provided with a small mini electroic piano'papa yeh lo aur sunao said excited tammy

He smiled and looked up to see Shivani watching closely..

He decided to teach her a lesson'.

Bahut saalon se gaya nahi'

Infact jab se plane crash mein sab chale gaye tab se nahi he blurred out before he could stop himself,

Ragini and vasu were stunned hearing his inner pain,but he had said so slowly not everyone understood full sentence'

He started to glide his fingers on pian and sang few lines'..looking at shivani..

Yeh kaagzi phool jaise chehre

Mazaak udate hain aadmi ka

Inhein koi kaash yeh bata de

Makaam uncha hai saadgi ka


Everyone started to praise his deep and expressive voice but Ragini,shivani and Vasu were all thoughtful .Vasu had seen the eye lock and deep anger in Anmol's eyes ,surprise and anger in Shivani's eyes.

Ragini was shocked to see her husband being so subtly insulting to Shivani ,she was now certain there was more to see.



Everyone started to sing and enjoy

Suddenly it was Ragini's turn but she was feeling shy '

Alekh came forward and said sweetly

Ragini Tammy ke Papa tumhare liye ek gana gayenge phir tum gana theek hai

Jijaji main'

Nahi ragini tum kitni pyaari lori sunati ho,magar pehle tammy ke papa'


He looked deeply in her eyes,looked at vasu who gave a teary eyed thumbs up'.

Again his hands glided on mini piano as perfectly as if he was siting in a concert'

Maine'he smiled sweetly '

Papa ab shuru karo na'.

Yes yes sweetheart suno..

Maine' he pulled little girls cheeks and took to piano keys once more..

Tere liye hi saat rang ke sapne chune..

Sapne sureele sapne..

Ragini looked up ,he caught her gaze and smiled'..

Maine tere liye hi saat rang ke sapne chune..


Kuch hanste kuch gham ke ..teri aankhon ke saye churaye sureeli yaadon ne'


Sapne sureele sapne..

Ruthi raatein

Ruthi hui raaton ko manaya kabhi


Tere liye meethi subha ko bulaya kabhi

She smiled with tears..

Tere bina bhi tere liye hi diye jalaye raahon nei.


Maine tere liye'.

There was loud applause ,Shivani saw the look of pure devotion pass between anmol and Ragini

She was very worried

Kuch karna hoga she thought'.

Ok ragini teri baari ''..

Jiajji


Dekh sadhna kehti hai ke wada kar ke todte nahi

Everyone smiled and she said theek hai jijai but sirf 2 lines..

She looked at Anmol and sang..

Gaa rahi dharti geet pyaar ke

Suhaane geet pyaar ke

Din guzar chuke hain

Intezaar ke

O tere intezaar ke

Chup na reh papihe man ko maar ke

Her smile deepend her eyes promising Anmol'

Aaynege piya pukaar kar ke dekh'.

Her voice pitch went few notches up taking everyone with flight of her mind'..

Aayenge piya pukaar kar ke dekh

Nayi zindagi se pyaar kar ke dekh'


To be concluded soon''.



Friends please let me know if it was interesting .

Love to hear your feedback



Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yeh kaagzi phool jaise chehre

Mazaak udate hain aadmi ka

Inhein koi kaash yeh bata de

Makaam uncha hai saadgi ka

WAH WAH WAH WAH......kya line use ki hai aapne. I had to comment on this. I loved the story but these lines just left me speechless. Fitted very well with the situation of the story; how Anmol indirectly insulted Shivani and complimented Ragini's simplicity! Well written lines! Plz continue!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow sam it was really wonderful but sad part is CT's won't show us this type of Maturity & eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sam really good please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well written Sammy , please continue. 👏For the present, Iam hopping mad at Bidaai's suspense.
Edited by rekha03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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guys updated the second part with soem photos please do read and comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome Sammy👏

I love the take and it really interesting

The creatives should look at the flow of events here and make use of such ideas

I loved teh way Anmol sings Hila Apu would sing na it wud be really good !!
Remembering Say Shava Shava !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haan shanti he sings in all hsi shows for heroines so yaahan bhi ek gana to banta hai boss
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Sammy with the pictures its even more interesting to read !!

We should start our own FF club what say !!

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