Anmol Ragini OS toofaan aur diya.updated pg 5

Friends this is my attempt at writing one shot....on this how I would love to see the track.. progress to its conclusion.I would psot it in 2 parts which i wil conclude today itself and wil take some of parts from my previous ff ..rest it will be with new storyline with shivani.

Toofaan aur diya..

It was howling torrential winds outside, Sky was pitching dark and from time to time nature lit it with a lightening and thunder. Soon the pleasant October evening had turned into dark devil dance outside.

Anmol was sitting on his bed, the inner turmoil in his life was even Darker than outside. The lightening kept striking deep inside his soul and showed him glimpses with thundering clarity.

The images of flashing news cast, fateful airplane crash and ultimate rejection from the only person he could have turned to. The Past was standing in front of him, it was time to bring it out of closet and bring it in open, face it, deal with it and hopefully move on.

He bent down and kissed the sweet forehead, there were few strands of hair escaping, he moved them to side and gently said meri beti.

So jayiye

Haan a lot happened today and then this storm, he looked towards window, his eyes bleak...I hope it passes without touching anything precious; his hands went automatically to protectively touch his sleeping daughter, as if trying to reassure himself.

Are you ok came a concerned question, bringing her close to him, she bent over and tried to arrange pillow under Tammy's head ,her feminine fragrance soothing his senses he closed his eyes and inhaled deeply ,she stumbled, over reaching ,he stabilized her sambhalke ,

Normally he would be aware of her, he should have been giving me my gift, instead he is sitting here all lost Ragini thought ,while moving away to go to washroom and change, is he the same guy who was lifting my chin up, challenging me to look in his eyes, ready to confess his feelings.

What happened, suddenly she stilled while washing her face, looked up in mirror and said to herself, he has been quiet ever since he was introduced to Shivani, and she felt shivers down her spine. What was it a 6^th sense, why she felt there were undercurrents between two, was Shivani someone important from past.

Should I ask him she thought'.

She went back to bedroom and saw him sleeping, hugging Tammy close, there were glimpse of tears on his lashes and he had curled up as if trying to protect the little girl with his warmth. She covered both of them with a blanket and smiled to herself, forgetting the gut feeling about unease for a moment.

Shivani was fuming, he has a child, on her casual inquiry she realized the girl was born 6 months after she left for London. He cheated me with this woman kya, she was biting her nails and suddenly she thought, something is wrong, this math is not right, something sure is missing from the puzzle.

She decided to find out'''

part 2 of one shot

please leave you thoughts and inputs...😳

Diiiiiiiii ithan chottu sa??????😭 I was enjoyinggggg the whole thing and sudden ending. Dii tadpao math plzzzzz.

App kaise karthe ho? aap to super human hai 😆Mai to ek dum flatttttt.
As usual i loved it. The anmol tammy bonding is the besttttttttttttt. I just love the way anmol treats her daughter. SAch mai, i just want to read the whole thing. Time hai to jaldi karna.

Originally posted by: SukuluvsParul

Diiiiiiiii ithan chottu sa??????😭 I was enjoyinggggg the whole thing and sudden ending. Dii tadpao math plzzzzz.

App kaise karthe ho? aap to super human hai 😆Mai to ek dum flatttttt.
As usual i loved it. The anmol tammy bonding is the besttttttttttttt. I just love the way anmol treats her daughter. SAch mai, i just want to read the whole thing. Time hai to jaldi karna.

i just started my dear will end it with big part and conclusion ...hope everyone can give inputs...

Fantastic Sammy

The flashback causing volcanoes in his life and now he cannot think beyond his family but with Shivani stepping back into jis life

Excellent Sammy
The fear of loosing his Ragini will definatly make him roar back at Shivani !!

Sam di fantastic !!

@ Sammy:

WOW! Loved reading it Sammy👏👏👏👏...the scene was so well written😳...i could feel Anmol's turmoil!😭...wish this was a nice long FF instead of a shot!😳...got over so soon!😕...eagerly waiting for the next part!😉😊

Wow Sami very nice .👏Anmol is a very nice person .Can not wait to see next update .

very nice sam,please continue soon.looks like you will have to give angini a dhamakar ending, the cvs wont have time,so please make us happy with your os

Sam fantastic Yaar ,you should submit all your FF to Rajan Sir & he will definitely hire as story writter for his new show 😉👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

@sami...really beautiful..😊