Dil Ke Afsaane--prediction/scene writing corner - Page 7

Sam yaar...tera talent to "din doogni raat chaugni" baar rahee hain...😃...bidaai ke end taak kaha pouchhega yaheen soch kar hairaan hoon...

Originally posted by: shanti05

Wow sammy you got me having goose bumps
Daam you it is awesome !!!!!👏

This is my Apu's Isstyle

HE looked in her eyes then his expressions changed to longing and anguish as if silently saying .RAgini don't you know I love you ....he said softly in his heart. she looked at him with a melting look and he let her go and went to the pillar on side.Ragini ran from there . he turned to see her form disappearing in mist . he turned and just smashed his fist damn you ragini damn you..when will you listen when will you understand............

😍😍😍

sorry for delay shanti..thanks re..as u know i just closed my eyes and thought what would dev/armaan do loooooooooooooool and wrote it,it was my first try and am so happy that u liked it so much ..but yes i would love to see such scene in serial ..i tried to recreate my friend skeptical's magic..so uske ideas chori kiye besharmi se😉 but once again thank you for such sweet response I am overwhelmed🤗

Originally posted by: SanKi4eva

omg omg sami di reading ur scene gave me goosebumps.
I felt as if i really want to see. Just once. Seriously it was written so well.
U shld really really start an FF srsly i am reading it over and over again.
I just cnt get over it. I love it so much. Write more di srsly.

aww sanju thank you so much,tum khud ita acha likhti ho re..coming from u it feels great.I dont know if i could do Ff re but i was thinking i will make it about 5 part short story 2 part ho chuke😉 ek meri saheli ka likha hua 3 aur ..phir shayad words ka samander sookh jaye mere liye..but i am so thankful that u read it and liked it😳🤗

Originally posted by: poo_s

sami di:

aap to chupe rustam nikle........................

wow nice FF loved it. u just highlighted the best part .

"he turned and just smashed his fist damn you ragini damn you..when will you listen when will you understand............"😳😛
I can clearly imagine one day anmol saying this to ragini😍

poonam🤗 anmol ka jadoooooooooooooo arey tum to janti ho na.....ke i churaofied most of what i wrote from hsi few scenes😆😉 but mujhe tum ita credit diya i am greatful re.......aage bhi isi tarha mohabat dogi to aur dose dete rahenge😉

Originally posted by: Seebz

Sam, Anmol reminded of Dev....so much anger waiting to come out..You rocked the scene with your beautiful art of creativity👏😊

YES Sari Anmol's behaviour i penned in scene was what i want from creatives,in line of Armaan and Dev sir.Thanks so much for appreciating and taking time to comment😳

Originally posted by: narangi_77

@sami01...that was fantastic!!!

thanks my dear,its first time interacting with u , am so happy u took time to read the scene and comment too😳 so u r liking Anmol and Ragini's heart warming and touching story kya😳

Originally posted by: rekha03

Sam, Wow wow wow and more wows❤️👏👏. what a scene.😳😳😳😳😳😳 I could almost see it happening in front of my eyes and loved the damns.😍

he came forward and grabbed her arms and pulled her close.HE intently looked in her eyes. Anmol yeh kya kar rahe hain aap ..he kept looking gosh those eyes they were making her drown in them. suddenly he pushed her aside and she she was free. She took a step to run from him,run from her heart .....but he grabbed her hand from behind and pulled her.She bumped into his chest and listened to his racing heart for a second. he tilted her face up toward him with his finger.HE looked in her eyes then his expressions changed to longing and anguish as if silently saying .RAgini don't you know I love you ....he said softly in his heart. she looked at him with a melting look and he let her go and went to the pillar on side.Ragini ran from there . he turned to see her form disappearing in mist . he turned and just smashed his fist damn you ragini damn you..when will you listen when will you understand............

loved this part more.I didn't know you could write so well. I already love Angini and want to see more of them but such scenes will make us expect more from creatives.

Aww Rekha i am so overwhelmed by response from all my friends.....Even i did not expect so much love from u all ,Damns i used totaly for Kezia she demanded them so i had to put stapler scene too 😉 plus i know all dreamers..........and apurva deewanis love their guy little rude😉

Originally posted by: skeptical

Wow ............ wow

that was simply gr8............... sakhi aap ne bahut khoob likha hai

skepyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 thanks and its honour u commented here....tumhara style copy kiya 😉 thanks guruji🤗

Originally posted by: Ashrozia

Greatttttttttttttttttttttttttt Sam deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! 🤗
I've waited for your update since ever and boy! It's been worth it! 😳
I LOVVVVVVEDDDD it! Totally! Amazing!!!!
U are great, seriously toooooooo good!

Can't wait for the continuation..Don't keep us waiting for long this time though! 😳 😆

thanks re tumhara thanks jo mujhe yeh ehsaas diya ke i could try it dear , i promise abhi ita wait nahi karvaungi😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

sami i hope u cont this scene i really wanna see ragini confess

i will try dear, u also read michelle's ff na i saw ur comments.......there,so ite ache writers hain so get scared sometimes but i will try my best😉😳