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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Wow sammy you got me having goose bumps
Daam you it is awesome !!!!!👏

This is my Apu's Isstyle

HE looked in her eyes then his expressions changed to longing and anguish as if silently saying .RAgini don't you know I love you ....he said softly in his heart. she looked at him with a melting look and he let her go and went to the pillar on side.Ragini ran from there . he turned to see her form disappearing in mist . he turned and just smashed his fist damn you ragini damn you..when will you listen when will you understand............

😍😍😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
omg omg sami di reading ur scene gave me goosebumps.
I felt as if i really want to see. Just once. Seriously it was written so well.
U shld really really start an FF srsly i am reading it over and over again.
I just cnt get over it. I love it so much. Write more di srsly.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
sami di:
aap to chupe rustam nikle........................
wow nice FF loved it. u just highlighted the best part .
"he turned and just smashed his fist damn you ragini damn you..when will you listen when will you understand............"😳😛
I can clearly imagine one day anmol saying this to ragini😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sami01

Damn that woman. He almost threw his plate aside.
The frustration in him has no limitataion now.He is disturbingly upset and Wants her to not just notice but be honest to those feelings that are growing inside her..Sam 👍🏼..You are amazing👏
Suddenly she pushed hi m away and couldn't meet his eyes and opened her mouth .. wo main...Anmol interrupted her You have some thing important to do. Of course i know.She was stunned by his reply. That pent up anger was surprise.
kya hua aap ko sab theek to hai na
He very well knows her comeback sentences and they have started to irrtate him now. What would happen when this really happens she would break down in his arm. I tell you😆 Those eyes with Angst in them...She can't help but notice her behavior is bothereing him
Anmol couldn't believe his ears . This woman was un believable she was just a conflicting soul one moment she was hugging him,next moment she behaved as if he did not matter.
Anmol is just confused how to deal with her sometimes..She is extremely worried for him but when he is around it seems like 'concerning' never happened 😕aww..I can imagine Sam How they both feel at the moment.
. he turned and just smashed his fist damn you ragini damn you..when will you listen when will you understand............
It doesn't seem like that calm and composed Anmol we know whose sentences have 2 meaning to convey at times😉 but here he is really angry her ignorance is killing him and he doesn't want that. I hope Ragini just listen him someday

Sam, Anmol reminded of Dev....so much anger waiting to come out..You rocked the scene with your beautiful art of creativity👏😊
Edited by Seebz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Sam, Wow wow wow and more wows❤️👏👏. what a scene.😳😳😳😳😳😳 I could almost see it happening in front of my eyes and loved the damns.😍

he came forward and grabbed her arms and pulled her close.HE intently looked in her eyes. Anmol yeh kya kar rahe hain aap ..he kept looking gosh those eyes they were making her drown in them. suddenly he pushed her aside and she she was free. She took a step to run from him,run from her heart .....but he grabbed her hand from behind and pulled her.She bumped into his chest and listened to his racing heart for a second. he tilted her face up toward him with his finger.HE looked in her eyes then his expressions changed to longing and anguish as if silently saying .RAgini don't you know I love you ....he said softly in his heart. she looked at him with a melting look and he let her go and went to the pillar on side.Ragini ran from there . he turned to see her form disappearing in mist . he turned and just smashed his fist damn you ragini damn you..when will you listen when will you understand............

loved this part more.I didn't know you could write so well. I already love Angini and want to see more of them but such scenes will make us expect more from creatives.
Edited by rekha03 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Wow ............ wow
that was simply gr8............... sakhi aap ne bahut khoob likha hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Greatttttttttttttttttttttttttt Sam deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! 🤗
I've waited for your update since ever and boy! It's been worth it! 😳
I LOVVVVVVEDDDD it! Totally! Amazing!!!!
U are great, seriously toooooooo good!

Can't wait for the continuation..Don't keep us waiting for long this time though! 😳 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
sami i hope u cont this scene i really wanna see ragini confess
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
@ Sam:

Sammy!😲...Tum Toh Chupa Rustam Nikli yaar!😳😉😃...OMG!! What An Amazing scene that was yaar!👏👏👏👏....left me completely speechless..😳...felt like i was reading a romantic novel!👏😳...You're so good at this stuff yaar...i think you should write more often!👍🏼...Glad Kezia forced you into writing this!👏👏👏...I'll Hug Kezia for this!🤗...n you were hiding this amazing talent!?😕

Hun...do write more n am waiting for the continuation of this one..😳...don't keep us waiting for too long!😍
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Sam Mindblowingggggggg 👏

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