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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Fab post Sam👏👏..looks very good😳...Sticked it now😳...will come with my comments soon😳

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@sami01

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: shanti05
Sammy beautifully return I loved the scenes and the way
you wrote

He held her sweetly silently and promising.Suddenly a sound came in her mind... a blast from few days ago....You Are very beautiful...Anmol's slip of tongue,his coverup....and her own uninhibited and natural response. Her heart had sang for a moment after hearing his words.Her heart was telling her he was falling for her...but the tight door locked her own heart and today it was threatening to break.....

O I wish they show her feelings for this wonderful man !!!

Ragini he is always there for you open the doors of your heart and see !!

thank you shanti story was written by mine and jyoti's good friend skeptical ,so i am sure she will be very happy to read ur words......i wish they show such scene shaanti as this is something they can shwop in present situation na😳

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rabees011

@rabees011

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Hey guys, I just wanted to know if we will be allowed to post hilarious scenes on Vasundhara and Indrajeet in this thread, because I just came up with one! please do let me know.

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apus fan

@sami01

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rabees011
Hey guys, I just wanted to know if we will be allowed to post hilarious scenes on Vasundhara and Indrajeet in this thread, because I just came up with one! please do let me know.

zareen ofcourse u r allowed jaldi se post karo....😉

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rabees011

@rabees011

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Guys, these scenes are whacky ones. Basically they have no logic in them as I came up with them using my wild imaginations!!😆😆Here goes the first scene:

Let's imagine a scene in which Vasu is trying to manaofy Indu to give her a hug as it is Valentines Day, but Indu is angry at Vasu...and then he starts climbing down the stairs and Vasu starts following him. All of a sudden, Vasu's feet slip off the stairs, but Indu quickly grabs her by the waist before she falls....and there we have an eye lock session.😍😍

Ragini is coming up the stairs and notices Vasundhara and Indrajeet immersed in each other's naina and the song, "Jabse tere naina mere naino se laage re" plays in the background, which reminds Vasu-Indu of their romance in their jawani, their wedding ceremonies, Indu's desperate attempts to meet Vasu the night before their marriage, their suhaag raat, Vasu's first good news for Indu (the good news of Alekh's entry in their life), Vasu's second good news (the good news of Ranveer's entry in their lives), how indu fed Vasu ice-cream to satisfy her cravings, Vasu's god bharai, and then Alekh and Ranveer's birth. Indu slowly begins to collect Vasu in his arms without noticing Ragini....Ragini feels embarrassed and clears her throat, which causes Vasundhara and Indrajeet to move apart with blushy blushy smiles on their faces.

Indu begins, "Woh ragini mai to bass aise hi tumhaari saasu maa ke saath practice kar raha tha....wo kya hai ki bohot dino se hum dono ne gul mile to phool khile game nahi khela na...to isi liye hum....Ragini cuts his words and says with an embarrassed smile on her face, "Koi baat nahi papa ji....Maalti bhabhi ki tara jhoot to mai bolti nahi, lekin ek baat zaroor kehna chaahungi aap dono se aur wo ye hai ki burhaape mei aisa romance aksar ho hi jaata hai, kyu ki zindagi ki iss mor per aake hamaare dilo ko betaabi mehsoos hoti hai... aur ye maine apne maa, bauji, aur mere priya Ranveer ji se suna hai..haa!" Indrajeet passes his hand through his hair with a shy smile while Vasu looks up with a cheeky grin and says, "Umm....Ragini aaj tumhe apne papaji ke favourite dishes banaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Unke man pasand dishes mai bana doongi....."

Vasu brings her mouth closer to Ragini's ears and whispers, "Woh kya hai naa...mujhe tumhaare papaji ko manaana hai mujhse ek baar gale milne ke liye kyu ki aaj Valentines Day hai...... wo kya hai ki hum to sadiyo se gale nahi mile unse....to isi liye mai sab kuch banaa doongi aur iss bahaane wo khush hojaayenge aur baad mei mai unhe manaa loongi. Aur suno, tum Tamanna aur Khushi ko school se pick up kar lena. Wo kya hai ki, aaj tumhaare papaji nahi jaa paayenge school un dono ko pick up karne...aakhir unhe mere saath thora waqt jo bitaana hai...to tum samajh gayi naa Ragini?" Ragini replies, "Haa mummy ji mai sab kuch samajh gayi. Mera wada hai aapse Tamanna aur Khushi ko mai hi lene jaaoongi aur aap dono prem panchiyo ke beech mei koi bhi banda iss waqt disturbance bankar nahi aa paayega....iss ghar ke naukar bhi nahi. Mai naukro ko sab samjhaa doongi aur aap dono thore time ke liye ek dooje ke saath busy ho jayiyye. Aur chinta mat kijiye...school se Tamanna aur Khushi ko pick karke mai unhe McDonald's leke jaaoongi unhe lunch karaane, taki aap dono nishchint ho kar romance kar sake."

Vasu then gets shy and hits Ragini lovingly on her shoulder and says, "Uff ragini...tum bhi naa..bahu ho kar bhi kitna taang kheechte ho apni saasu maa ki" Indrajeet echoes the same. He pats vasu's shoulder and says in a husky tone, "Uff Vasu tumhaari in aadao per ho jaaoo mai fanaa...tum bhi naa Vasu, kabhie nahi sudhroge. Anyways, chale?" They both leave while Ragini goes down the stairs with a great big funny smile on her face.😆😆😆😆

Scene Change...

Vasundhara and Indrajeet are sitting face to face at a small candle-lit table that has a vase containing red roses in it. The background music is,"Marjawa, tere ishq mei marjawa."Indu begins, "Vasu, yakeen hi nahi aata ki hum apne burhaape mei kabhie aise candle-light dinner karenge......aaj to tum iss night gown mei bilkul apsara lag rahi ho...bilkul meri college wali girlfriend Tina ki tara."

Vasu gets angry and asks, "Kya Indu? Tumhaari koi girlfriend bhi thi? Aur aaj ke din tum usse yaad karke usse humaare romance mei kabaab mei haddi banaa rahe ho? Tumhaari himmat kaisi hui usse mujhse compare karne ki? Kya mai itni buri hu Indu? Dekhna, aapki shikaayat mai apne Ranveer se karungi..haa! (let's just imagine Ranveer is still alive)" Vasu starts sobbing.

Indu then sings to manaofy Vasu: "Mai kabhie batlaata nahi, per tumse darta hu meri jaan. Yu to mai dikhlaata nahi teri parwa karta hu mai jaan. Tujhe sab hai pata hai na jaan? Tujhe sab hai pata......meri jaan." Vasu ab to muskuraado na meri jaanu.

Vasu: Muskuraaoongi, per ek shart pe. Mujhe apna taufa chahiyye. Kahaa hai mera taufa?

Indu: He is lost and doesn't know what to say as he didn't buy a gift for Vasu. He gets scared and starts sweating. Tiny beads of sweat form on his forehead and finally he gets an idea. He takes out his wallet and from there he takes out two anklets (of his girlfriend Tina who he had a crush on during college days) and gifts those to Vasu.

Vasu gets excited upon seeing them as they look very antique but mesmerizing. She tries to grab them, but Indu grabs them and says:

Indu: Nahi merii jaan ye ishq nahi aasaan bass itna samajh lijiye. Ek aag ka dariya hai aur usmei doobke jaana hai. Meri bholi bhaali Vasu ye gift tumhe itni aasaanise nahi milega.

Vasu:Shows her fake gussa and says:To batayiyye pati dev ji, iss taufe ko haasil karneke liye hum aapki kya khidmat kar sakte hai?

Indu: Smiles devilishly and pulls Vasu in his arms. He tells her:"Pehle mujhe mera taufa chahiyye."

Vasu:Matlab?

Indu: Uff Vasu tum bhi naa, kuch nahi samajhti. Mera kehne ka matlab ye hai ki pehle mujhe puppy do...phir milega tumhe meri taraf se ye gift aur ek jaadoo ki jhappi.

Vasu: Shyly moves out of Indu's arms and says, "Chalo hato ji....tum bhi naa kahi per bhi shuroo ho jaate ho."

Indu: Arre jaan...yehi to khaasiyat hai aapke pati dev ki....mai aapke khaatir kahi per bhi shuroo ho jaata hu...ab zyada bahaane mat banaao aur jaldi se mujhe wo taufa de do jiska haqdaar sirf mai hu.

Vasu: Are you sure ki iska haqdaar tum ho? Koi aur bhi to ho sakta hai iss taufe ka haqdaar."

Indu: Kya???? Vasu ye mai kya sun raha hu? Tumhaara koi aashiq bhi tha, college ke zamaane mei? Aur tum mujhe choarke usse iss lazeezdaar taufe ka haqdaar maante ho? Aisi bewafayi tum kaise kar sakti ho Vasu? Maine tumhaare iss ghar mei bahu banke aaneke baad kya kya nahi kiya tumhaare liye? Maine tumhe English mei baat karna sikhaaya, gorgeous silk and chifon sarees khareed ke di, tumhe pasta banaana sikhaaya apne Ranveer ke khaatir, tumhaare liye beauty parlours jaaneka bandobast kiya, tumhaare liye humesha red roses laaya, tumhaare liye duniya ke saare mehenge mehenge make-up kits khareede the maine, tumhe high heels pehenna sikhaaya...champagne peena sikhaaya....humaare male clients ke saath handshake karna sikhaaya...aur kal to maine tumhaare liye naya bathtub bhi khareeda....aur tum ho ke mujhe dhoka de rahi ho? Chee Vasu chee! Laanat hai tum par!

Vasu: Immediately turns the table and says: "Mere pyare dharam pati dev....mera ladla swami...aap mujh per bewafaayi ka ilzaam laga rahe ho? Thori der pehle aap jo Tina ka naam le rahe the...wo sab kya tha? Koi safayi hai aapke paas mujhe sunaaneke liye? Nahi naa? Agar aap mujhse aisi baatei kar sakte hai, to kya mera itna haq nahi banta ki mai aapke saath aisa mazaak karke aapko tease kar saku?

Indu: Oh thank God wo sab mazaak tha...mai to dar hi gaya...aur dar ke maare mai to wo akshay kumaar wala gaana "tu bewafa hai" bhi man hi man mei gaane laga Vasu. Vasu then takes out a handkerchief and wipes his forehead that had tiny beads of sweat some moments ago.

Indu then pulls Vasu in his arms and Vasu understands his ishaara this time. She quickly pecks him on his cheek and runs out to their garden. Indu follows her and they play chupa-chupi ka khel behind the bushes in their garden.😆😆😆😆

Edited by rabees011 - 15 years ago

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rabees011

@rabees011

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

How about another scene in which Indrajeet sings the song, "My dil goes mmmm...mmmm...mmmm...mmmm" (from the movie Salaam Namaste) to manaofy Vasu and while singing the song, he does some latke jhatke with his kamar and comes near Vasu and lifts her chin with two of his fingers??😛😛😆😆Here goes the scene:

Part 1:

Vasu barges in to her room with anger like a super model😆😆😆😆

(Indu sings: Aati hai wo aise chalke)

Vasu then pushes her hair back and turns on the Ac immediately by closing the door and Indrajeet sings

(jaise jannat mei rehti hai)

Vasu instantly glares at Indu as he sings

(Dekhti hai sabko aise jaise sabko wo sehti hai)

Indu then comes near her and lifts her chin with two of his fingers, looks deeply into her shiny eyes shimmering with anger and sings with a smile on his face😆😆

(Per gusse mei jab aaye aur aankhe wo dikhlaaye)

Vasu then finally smiles and hits Indu with a pillow lovingly and they both start having a cute pillow fight with each other😆😆Vasu starts laughing and indrajeet sings:

(larte larte galti se muskaaye...)

Indu gets up from the bed and Vasu starts chasing him around their room while giggling and Indrajeet sings:

(My dil goes mmmm...mmm....mmm....mmm....mmm...mmm...)

Part 2:

Vasu sings dreamily while looking at the full moon

(karti hu jab usse baatei)

Indrajeet changes into his pyjamas and yawns to go to bed as he feels sleepy and vasu upon seeing this, sings

(lagta hai sone wala hai)

Indu lies down on the bed, but gets up all of a sudden with a really sad expression on his face as he suddenly remembers his and Vasundhara's intense fights during the rift track and Vasu sings

(soke jab jab bhi wo jaage lagta hai rone wala hai)

Vasu then goes and lies down too, but Indrajeet is in a romantic mood, so he makes her sit up and Vasu sings

(Per chupke se wo aaye bina neend se mujhe jagaaye)

Indrajeet gets naughty and collects her in his arms and falls backwards with her in his arms😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉and Vasundhara sings

(Le baaho mei aur khud hi gir jaaye...e...e..)

Vasundhara starts tickling Indrajeet😳😳😆😆and sings

(my dil goes mm..mm...mm...mmmm...mmm...mmm...)

Edited by rabees011 - 15 years ago

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rabees011

@rabees011

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sami01
zareen ofcourse u r allowed jaldi se post karo....😉

Thanks. Maine post kar diya. check karo.😉😆Aur bataao ki kaisa hai.😆😆Aakhir maine Vasu-Indu ko aged couple se newly-wed couple jo banaa diya hai!😛😛😉😉😳😳😆😆

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: rabees011
How about another scene in which Indrajeet sings the song, "My dil goes mmmm...mmmm...mmmm...mmmm" (from the movie Salaam Namaste) to manaofy Vasu and while singing the song, he does some latke jhatke with his kamar and comes near Vasu and lifts her chin with two of his fingers??😆Here goes the scene:

Part 1:

Vasu barges in to her room with anger like a super model😆

(Indu sings: Aati hai wo aise chalke)

Vasu then pushes her hair back and turns on the Ac immediately by closing the door and Indrajeet sings

(jaise jannat mei rehti hai)

Vasu instantly glares at Indu as he sings

(Dekhti hai sabko aise jaise sabko wo sehti hai)

Indu then comes near her and lifts her chin with two of his fingers, looks deeply into her shiny eyes shimmering with anger and sings with a smile on his face😆😆

(Per gusse mei jab aaye aur aankhe wo dikhlaaye)

Vasu then finally smiles and hits Indu with a pillow lovingly and they both start having a cute pillow fight with each other😆😆Vasu starts laughing and indrajeet sings:

(larte larte galti se muskaaye...)

Indu gets up from the bed and Vasu starts chasing him around their room while giggling and Indrajeet sings:

(My dil goes mmmm...mmm....mmm....mmm....mmm...mmm...)

(My dil goes mmmm...mmm....mmm....mmm....mmm...mmm...)

Part 2:

Vasu sings dreamily while looking at the full moon

(karti hu jab usse baatei)

Indrajeet changes into his pyjamas and yawns to go to bed as he feels sleepy and vasu upon seeing this, sings

(lagta hai sone wala hai)

Indu lies down on the bed, but gets up all of a sudden with a really sad expression on his face as he suddenly remembers his and Vasundhara's intense fights during the rift track and Vasu sings

(soke jab jab bhi wo jaage lagta hai rone wala hai)

Vasu then goes and lies down too, but Indrajeet is in a romantic mood, so he makes her sit up and Vasu sings

(Per chupke se wo aaye bina neend se mujhe jagaaye)

Indrajeet gets naughty and collects her in his arms and falls backwards with her in his arms😉and Vasundhara sings

(Le baaho mei aur khud hi gir jaaye...e...e..)

Vasundhara starts tickling Indrajeet😆and sings

(my dil goes mm..mm...mm...mmmm...mmm...mmm...)

(my dil goes mm..mm...mm...mmmm...mmm...mmm...)

🤣 what a scene 🤣🤣 I just loved it.

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luv_sakshi

@luv_sakshi

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

@ Sammy:
WOW! your friend Skeptikal is such an Amazing writer!👏...love the whole 6 yar pehle ki baat that she brought out till the present day emotions..😳...hope she'll write some more Amazing stuff for us like this!😃