FF: I HATE LUV STORIES: chapter-13 pg 34 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunny-Malik


awwwwwwwww priya my dear.. plzz tc alot of urself



thanks sana😉
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CHAPTER- 6


Alekh and sadhana stare at each other and slowly sadhana falls asleep . Alekh still stares at her and sees her shivering , so he takes out his jacket and puts it on sadhana. The moon is shining bright on both of them and alekh sings " chand mera dil ,chandini ho tum" and he also slowly falls into sleep. Then after some time he sees himself in his room with his laptop and hears sadhana's voice. He gets up and goes searching for her. He can hear her giggles, all over but he can't see hear. he says i will find u and then he keeps chasing the voice and finally reaches to the garden where he sees sadhana waiting for him wearing a white sari and carrying red roses in her hand. She says i wanted to say something to you but i don't know how. Alekh says mee too and then sadhana comes close to him and alekh also comes close to him then sadhana holds alekh's hand and says will u become bother in law to my brother. Alekh doesn't understand it at first and says i love u sadhana but what u r asking me is not possible it is difficult . sadhana gives a irrritated look and says think again then alekh recollects what she told him and kneels down and says i woul love to sorry i was a tube light. Sadhana starts giggling again and alekh wakes up and sees sadhana giggling at him. he asks her why she is laughing then sadhana says he is speaking truth in his sleep and whatever he said is absolutely true. Then alekh holds sadi's hand and says really? and saalekh share one more major eyelock.
LONDON:
Ragini is in her room thinking how to express her love to ranvir. She goes out and buys a big card,a new guitar and gets it wrapped. She keeps all of them in her room's ward robe when payal comes there and says to ragini to get ready as they are going to pammi uncle's birthday party. ragini asks her who is pammi uncle then payal tells her that pammi uncle and shoba aunty are their neighbors and both of them are extremely cool and happy and of all the things they are alone cause they lost their only son in an accident last year. Ragini says k i am coming.
she gets ready and comes down when ranvir smiles at her and says she is looking very hot in that black saree , ragini also complements ranvir saying he is also not bad in that black suite. Ragvir are going inside the house when ragini trips and is about to fall ranvir holds her and says i will never let you get hurt oh my precious one😉. ragini smiles and says thanks .
Ranvir hugs both pami uncle and shoba aunty and says i have a small surprise for u guys. He takes the mike and says "Ladies and gentlemen the most wonderful couple of this entire community are celebrating their anniversary and of course the charming man pammi uncle's birthday together. so i thought of doing something special for them so i want all of you to cheer and enjoy and make this day for this lovely couple the best ". thanks everyone. He says this is a small stint from pammi's uncles youthful days only ,and i think he is the best and the greatest when it comes to romance so get ready to groove to the tunes of the gods of romance.
Ranvir says lights off and then he says music. Slowly song starts playing and the light falls on a guy wearing a hat an umbrella and a folded pants. Then he turns around and the light falls on him. He lifts his head and sings pyaar hua iqraar hua song along with some other girl. Then he sings Na mangoo sona chandi song and comes behind ragini who is standing with shoba aunty and he comes so close that ragini thinks he will take her hand but he takes shoba aunty's hand and kisses it. Ragini looks down all blushing and ranvir winks at her. He then changes his clothes and come there wearing a white shirt and sings Tuje dekha toh yeh jana sanam . song and says brings all to the dance floor ,he goes again and comes back wearing his suite and he dances there with gayatri dadi.
Ragini stares at ranvir and ranvir also stares at her. Then ranvir comes to ragini and says care for a dance. ragini agrees and they both start dancing to khuda jaane. while dancing he lifts her up and then moves her round and round and says u r really good in salsa. ragini says thanks .They both dance passionately after some time she leaves ranvir's hands and says i want to take a break now ,ranvir says fine. But when she is about to leave he holds her hand gives her a rose and says this for u sweet heart and ragini smiles and just looks down. ranvir says when u blush u look more beautiful and this makes to do something. Ragini asks what then ragini closes her eyes and he kisses her😳. Ragini gets lost when payal comes and shakes ragini and says i have been asking you to come and dance with us but no you are so busy in your dreams . ragini then holds payal and says that was all a dream, then payal says yes cause i have been trying to snap you out the dream. What's wrong with ragini these days then ragini tells payal i am so sorry . i was thinking about something anyways lets go i am so hungry then payal says thanks atleast you remembered then both go to the garden and she sees a pani puri counter and there a girl feeds ranvir pani puri. she gets really angry and her face turns all red and she is curious to know about this girl .
Edited by Angkidiwani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys new chapter is posted . waiting for your comments.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Luved Salekh proposing each other... Ragini's dream was hot n romantic.. wish it was true.. wanna c more of the jealous Ragini.. whoz tht girl with ranvir?? do continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely FF 😉😉
😳😳😳SALEKH😳😳😳 were sOOOOooooOo adorable
ragini😍😍😍 ranvir
contiue sOOoOOOOOOn.....................
eagerly waiting😉😉😉😉😉
👍🏼👍🏼⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Luved Salekh proposing each other... Ragini's dream was hot n romantic.. wish it was true.. wanna c more of the jealous Ragini.. whoz tht girl with ranvir?? do continue soon..



thanks swetha . that girl with ranvir is some one special related to the story if the jealousy part works then i will extend it few more chapters.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aroradaks

lovely FF 😉😉

😳😳😳SALEKH😳😳😳 were sOOOOooooOo adorable
ragini😍😍😍 ranvir
contiue sOOoOOOOOOn.....................
eagerly waiting😉
⭐️



thanks yaar.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys in 10 days i have my final xamz so i may not be able surf the net as i am studying so please be patient . After my xams get finished i will update all my ff's regularly.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Just read all the chapters in one go.They are so well written.The ragvir scenes in the ff fill the void of them in Bidaai.

Love Ranvir's flirting and Ragini's blushes and dreams.
Please do continue.Thanks for your effort. Salekh scenes were cute and awesome too.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Angkidiwani

hey guys in 10 days i have my final xamz so i may not be able surf the net as i am studying so please be patient . After my xams get finished i will update all my ff's regularly.



No problem.We will wait, though impatiently:-) Best of luck for exams.

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