FF: I HATE LUV STORIES: chapter-13 pg 34

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Hearts Glitters









My new ff i hate luv stories is a romantic comedy of alekh ,ranvir, sadhana and ragini. In this ff they are not related and they have different lives and views but how they come together is the basic plot. Characterizations of the leads will be revealed soon.









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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow yupieeee name se hi jhakkas ff lgta hai wowow son reveal kar all must be diff na full f attitudeee and plzz yaar kya tu aisa kar skti hai ki rv allu ko bhiaya na bulaye aur na hi sadi rgi ko jiji bulyaee bt cnt wait for thisssss😳😳😳
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Originally posted by: simransalekh

wow yupieeee name se hi jhakkas ff lgta hai wowow son reveal kar all must be diff na full f attitudeee and plzz yaar kya tu aisa kar skti hai ki rv allu ko bhiaya na bulaye aur na hi sadi rgi ko jiji bulyaee bt cnt wait for thisssss😳😳😳




yup 😆😆😆😆 simran i am gonna do this ,just wait and see and the characters will be after my short narration of the story and then the characterizations😉. All four of them are going to rock !!!!!
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Originally posted by: Angkidiwani




yup 😆😆😆😆 simran i am gonna do this ,just wait and see and the characters will be after my short narration of the story and then the characterizations😉. All four of them are going to rock !!!!!

oh ho yaar dnt mk me so much exciteddd yaaarEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed tere ff ko dekh kar ye song gane ko mann kr raha hai-milte hai chora chori hui masti thodi thodi par pyaar ka naam na lena i hate luv storys😉
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Originally posted by: simransalekh

oh ho yaar dnt mk me so much exciteddd yaaar😳 tere ff ko dekh kar ye song gane ko mann kr raha hai-milte hai chora chori hui masti thodi thodi par pyaar ka naam na lena i hate luv storys😉



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First chapter to be posted tomorrow
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yup characterization also will be out soon. But need more support guys.
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wow priya luved the intro funny and romantic....hmmm..can't wait yaar..
update soon swthrt..luking forward to reading it 😃
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Originally posted by: SanKi4eva

wow priya luved the intro funny and romantic....hmmm..can't wait yaar..

update soon swthrt..luking forward to reading it 😃




Thanks . u r profile pic of allu and ranvir is just awesome.
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Hey guys sorry for the late update of my new ff. From next time i will make sure everything is done properly ( i have a bad habit of not keeping track of time in things i do ). Anyways thank you all for the support till now for all my ff's and i hope i will be appreciated for this new ff too. Thank you all and love u 😉
~CHAPTER - 1~
" Love is a special feeling that just changes the life . It is a great feeling to be felt . There is no language or a barrier for love because whatever the language is it can be felt all you need to know is the language of hearts and for knowing that you need to meet the write person in life" .says alekh to his friends . Then his best friend rahul says yaar alekh why are you going back to india then i mean in U.S you have everything nice life, wonderful job and also you are able to do whatever you want . Alekh says i know i have everything but not the love and care i wanted i mean my parents had love marriage which was opposed by both their families so my mom and dad ran away and settled here but when they passed after my 5th birthday since then your mom and dad took great care of me and i am grateful to them till the end of life but right now i have an emptiness in my heart which i want to clear that's why i am going. Then rahul hugs him and says i am going to miss bro i mean you are my life, i respect you and your decision but come back soon and one more thing please find your soul mate ,i mean bhabi there too . Alekh says sure and goes to board his flight from New york to Delhi.
DELHI :
Sadhana is at the delhi airport and says to herself why is my life so boring, i mean why is mom so interested in getting me married and that too so soon. i know this sounds ridiculous but for her the best place is airport . Some nearby people hear her talking to herself and laugh she sees them and says now i became joke too everyone. Then she hears the flight announcement and gets up and goes towards the gate when her phone starts ringing. She answers it and says Ha ma tell me , ya flight arrived and i am waiting near the gate only then sadi's mom says did u bring the garland ? then sadi says ma is my jai mala happening here . sadi's mom shouts at her and says how will i ever get this married she always ridiculous then sadi says mom chill ok, people are coming now tell me how does this person look like ,her mother gets even more hysteric and says you don't know how he looks then sadi says i forgot to see his picture now please tell me otherwise i am coming straight home. Her mother says his name is "alekh". He is wearing a blue shirt and black jeans. then sadi says fine i think he is coming.
Alekh passes by when sadi says hey alekh please wait. Alekh turns around and sees a girl wearing a pink and yellow salwar with hair open . He smiles and is stunned at her beauty. She comes forward and says hi i am sadhana i am Prakash Mehra's daughter my father asked me to pick you up as he is busy with some meeting so i came. He keeps staring at her with a smile on his face. She shakes him and says why did you freeze? then alekh corrects his throat and says it is nice to meet you thank you and it is pleasure meeting u,sadi says the pleasur:e is mine actually come i will take you home . She says then i will get my scooty . Alekh asks her what is scooty then she smiles and says it is a two wheeler. Alekh says will all my luggage fit in it . sadi smiles mischievously and says who is taking all that luggage i am just taking you that's all . alekh says but then sadi smiles and says arey baba i was kidding now will come with me and she brings her black toyota carolla car . Alekh smiles and puts all his luggage in the trunk and is about to sit next to her when she scares with a vampire mask. He gets scared. Seeing him sweat she removes the mask and starts laughing loudly. She says sorry now sit lets go . She then drives him home.
ROME:
Ragini is taking a train to london . She is wearing a white shirt and black skirt with white flowers on it and is writing in her dairy. she then hears the announcement that train has come to london. She is goes to the doors when she sees ranvir there with red roses. He smiles and says hey jaan why are you so late? ragini is so surprised as she has never seen him before. ragini says i am sorry but i don't know you. Ranvir looks at ragini and says will please come down and gives her a hand. She gets down and that is their first eye-lock.Then ranvir smiles and says sorry i didn't call you jaan it is her and points a sixty year old women who is also coming down. Well she is my wife ,isn't she beautiful. Ragini looks at him with "IS HE OK" ka look and says she is gorgeous. Ranvir then goes and hugs his wife a.k.a gayatri and says i missed u darling so much then she says i missed you too but why are you not in office tell me now and she holds his ear and says did u do something weird again ? then ranvir says dadi sorry actually ahmm i broke dad's car so please help me . ragini hears this and starts laughing. Both ranvir and gayatri look at her and say what is so funny? ragini says i am so sorry but your grandson is really funny , i am ragini . Gayatri smiles and introduces herself and ranvir. She asks ragini what she does? ragini says she came here for a vacation with her parents but her father had to leave soon so she is stayed few days and is going home now. she tells gayatri that she is a charted account in delhi and assists her father running the family business. Gayatri says this is great!!!!!!! and she winks looking at ranvir . She asks ragini to come to their house but ragini says she has to leave soon as her flight to india is in 5hrs and takes gayatri's blesssings and leavrs from there.




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